Hi guys!! Thanks for the comments…as you all know this is my first FF hope you like this…. and SWASAN AND RAGLAK fans …u will find many sweet and bitter surprises and of courses twists !! in my story ….
The story takes a skip of two years … where the scene starts from sanskaar’s office
SCENE 1
Tring tring…
A handsome , hunky,gorgeous ,man picks up the call and says “hello, ragini tum??kya hua … sab log tik hai na … tum gabrahi hui si lagti ho ..”when he says these words his thoughts drifts to his smart,beautiful,caring,lovely wife “swara”.
Ragini:- sanskar ji… woh …woh…woh..
sanskaar:- woh… kya? Ragini … bolo… kya swara tik to hai???
Ragini:- woh… swara… aap plz chaldi se ghar ayiey … mein aapko sab kuch bataungi… chalti kariyega
Sanskaar cuts the call and rushes towards the “maheshwari house”.he is super tensed and at the same he is worried about swara ..he is damn scared like how ragini was, when she called him ,he suddenly remembers all the sweet moments with her… how he used to pamper her … their first kiss … how he proposed her (again)…and then he says to himself that “ sanskaar … tu kya soch raha hai … use kuch nahi hua hoga …”as soon as tell that …he reaches home…
SCENE 2
Sanskaar :- ragini,swara kaha hai ???
Ragini:woh…swra aai subhe chakar kage ghir padi …to isltye hum logone doctor saabh ko buliya …to unhine kaha ki….
Sanakaar:-unhone kya kaha…bolo ragini…bolo… swra ko kya hua hai???? BOLO RAGINI BOLO
As sanskar says this …he is very worried …you can feel that tensionin his tone …it’s that type of tension which only developes when your loved one is in danger …,but smthing’s fishy …ragini on the other seems to be cool and calm …her voice seems to have 100% confidence … even though swara is her own sister and she loves her to the core …..hmm… daal me kuch kala hai…
Ragini:- unhone kaha ki
Sanskar:- kaha ki??
Ragini:- KI AAP BAAP BANE WALE HO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As ragini says this ,she starts laughing and sanskaar is just stunned …he doesn’t react for sec… because he is confused …he doesn’t know whether to BE ANGRY AS ragini played foul play on him or whether he should be happy as he is gonna be daddy!!…so ignores her laughter and he rushes past her saying “Mai tumhe baad me dekhlunga “
SCENE 3
AP,sujata,parineetha,uttara are in swara’s room …swara is lying onthe her bed
Sujata comes towards sanskaar and says “badai…ho tu baap bane wala hai aur main dadi …mare ko to na pata …mare ko sirf aur sirf ek ladki chahiye … jo swara ge thara samchdaar aur tare ke tharah sundar… ha agar chora bhi ho to … mare koi problem nahi hai … main to bol di hai “
Sanskaar gets emotional and hugs his mom
AP:- sanskaar…ja beta swara se baat karle …hum log chalet hai …
And everyone leaves by saying “badai”;now there’s only swara and him……….
Sanskaar slowly moves towards her …she is still sleeping …but she wakes up as soon as he touches her …she is too happy to see him…,she was actually waiting for him…,she wanted to see his face …when he hears this news …his happiness…she slowly sits up and he helps her sit …
Swara:- sanskaar?
Sanskaar:- swara?
And then they both laugh …
Sanskaar:- i am so happy…mai itna kush hu…ki mai bata nahi saktha …swara…hum maa-baap banne wale…sachme … it’s just like a dream
Swara:- haa sanskaar! Mai bhi bhut kush hu …par mujhe daar bhi lag raha hai…
Sanskaar:- jab main tuma hare saat hu to daar kis baat ka? Tum daro mat…mai tumahare saat hamesha rahunga…
Swara:- sachi…promise
Sanskaar:- muchi…promise
Just as they were talking raglak enter the room laksh says “kya yaar tum log to humse bhi fast nikale “everyone laughs and ragini blushes …and lightly punches him …
Ragini hugs swara and says congrats…
Suddenly someone calls them from down …”swara… ragini… kaha hai mare dono lado … chaldi aao… pahachano kuan aayi hai “
Swara and ragini in union say “ maa…. dadi maa”
And walk downstarirs…
SCENE 4
In the kitchen sujata and AP are making sweets while parineetha, uttara are making snacks for guest …they exit from the kitchen carrying trays loaded with snacks
Suddenly tears start rolling down from sujata ‘s eyes …AP notices it and says “ sujata …kya hua tum ro kyu rahi ho …itni kushi ka waqt hai aur tum ro rahi ho …kya hua “
Sujata:- jiji , ye dukh ke nahi kushi ke aasu hai … yeh do sallo mein kitna kuch badalgaye hai na … ragini badal gayi, aur kavitha ka janam lena, uttara bhi badal gayi … aur to aur lakash aur ragini ki phir se shaadhi karna … aur aab yeh …to isleye tode aasu bheh gaye…
AP:- haa ye to hai …aur ye sabh swara ke wajah se ho raha hai … uss ladki ko hamne kitna galat samcha tana …par wo to is garah ki bhakyalakshmi nikili… sachme uss chori me kuch to baat hai …
Sujata :- hmm …ab jaleye jiji …sabhko mitayi dete hai … aayey
They go to the hall… where everyone is celebrating swara … dadi maa is just overjoyed …and sumi is happy for her daughter …then DP ,RP and adarash enter …even they greet sanskaar and swara ….
Everyone is happy …but they have all forgotten that how much ever happy u are …u will have to repay the same amount by crying … let’s see what happens in the next episode
Precap:- a unknown call
Guys … if you feel that my story is good … plz do tell me …because it inspires me to write or if you feel it’s bad …then i will stay ready for the gaalias and tamatrs and ya eggs too …
But plz do tell … thx for reading 😀 (and i hope that u won’t throw tamatars at me…fingers crossed)
12 Comments
Gooooood
stop writting in hindu. I didn’t understand a thing
Pls write in eng…its awesome..
I like f.f it is amazing……but who is kavitha in this story???is she parish`s daughter
Nice
No raglak scenes:-(
suupeer 🙂
good starting…
tamatar coming ap never uses tare,chori language,dadi and sujata use that language
good
Good episd bt plz write in eng..
Nice