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swasan raglak….a tale of pure love….chap 4

Hey frnds…hw r u all…thx fr ur views…but i think that u all are not liking my ff…as the no of comments are less…plz let me knw if it is such…ok….luv u all….

So here i go…

Recap
Maheshwari family forgives sanskar… Ragini confront sanskar..

Chap
Ragini is hugging laksh… Laksh is reciprocating back….ap and dp come there but stop outside cabin…seeing raglak embrace….
Ap: ragu has gone through much turmoil in her life…
Dp: i always wanted swara to marry sanskar… And ragini to laksh.. But…
Ap: i was thinking that ragini will never agree to marry laksh after that incident…
Dp: laksh and sanskar are two different books…ragini understand this…i dont think that we should disturb their privacy.. Let both of tjem cry….
Ap: u r right..we should leave from here now….

@ evening..
Ragini comes to check sanskar….
Sanskar: ra…sry dr ragini…
Ragini: yes mr.Maheshwari…
Sanskar: in how many days i ll be discharged….
Ragini: most probably tomorrow morning…
Sanskar: thx…I ve to see some imp works…
Ragini: but after that too u ve to take complete bad rest for nxt 2 days….
Sanskar: oh god…noo…
Ragini: yes mr.Maheshwari..
Sanskar: ragu..uu r a cheater…
Ragini: sanky.. I ll kill u if u call me cheater again…
Sanskar :,ragu
Ragini: sanky….
Suddenly she realised what she was doing… Talking to her biggest enemy in such a frank way…no…never…
Ragini : m sry mr.Maheshwari
SAnskar: i was just confirming it is my old ragu or not….
Ragini: m not mr.Maheshwari… I ve lost everything… My friendship.. My relationship… My swara di…u ve snatched…
Ragini goes from there….
Sanskar looks at her…he smiles… It seems that another book has opened in fr of his eyes…he can see ragini.. Laksh.. And him….around 17-18 yrs old…
Ragini was very happy… She got selected for medical… Sanskar was making her eat gulabjamun…
Ragini: sanky bhai no…plz…u ve made me eat 6 gulabjamun…. I ll become fat…
Sanskar: no…i ll nt stop…its a big achievement….
Ragini: no bhai plz…i ll get diabetes…
Sanskar: u ll get tthen i ll get u treated…. From ur swara di….now eat it….

Sanskar comes back to reality… Ragini was just like a little sister to him….he was always very kind to her… Swara.. Was sanskar good friend…. But after she got admitted in medical clg….they talked rarely…swara was busy in her studies… AnD sanskar… In his business….
Suddenly he hears a knock…he came back to reality…. He saw the door…it was lucky…

Sanskar: lucky…
Laksh: hw r u bhai…
Sanskar: physically fine…
Laksh: i know ragini’s words have affected u…she is really angry…
Sanskar: she should be…but laksh where is swara… Did she Get married again… M sure…Whoever her husband is…he must be very lucky…
Laksh get teary eyed….
Laksh: take rest bhai.. U need rest…
Sanskar: lucky but…
Laksh: u ll get to know everything at the right moment….
Sanskar : lucky but….
Laksh: plz sleep bhai…. Plz…
Sanskar: ok..if u dont want to tell me…i think that u want to give me surprise…
Laksh geTs teary eyed… He comes out of Thr room….he sits…some words echoed in his ears….NO…IT CANT HAPPENED…. NO…NOOOOOOOO……a voice of a girl….LUCKY..PLZ TELL HIM NOT TO SAY LIKE THIS….HE CANT DO THIS…

Laksh gets teary eyed… Swara was just like a guide to him…if sanky treats laksh with love…swara treated him with affection… It is due to swara only that he topped his all exams…it is due to swara only that laksh is so matured…. Swara taught him how to lead life….and then…she was gone….

Laksh came to ragini’s cabin…Ragini was doing some work….
Laksh: may i come in ragu…
Ragini : lucky… U dont need my permission… For anything…
Laksh: no ragu… I need ur permission for one thing….
Ragini: which thing….
Laksh: i want to confess….something…
Ragini: laksh….
LLak: yes….i want to take ur permission to make u my…..
Ragini: what…
Laksh: no…nothing….
Ragini: ok….its ok…
Laksh: so may i go…
Ragini: yupps… If u want to…
Laksh tyrns to door…..suddenly he feels him in some soft arms….he saw…it was ragini… His ragini….
Laksh: what happened…
Ragini: u r a big dumbo laksh…
Laksh: but y ragu…
Ragini: today also u were noy able to say….
Laksh: to say…what…
Ragini: to say….i love you ragu…..
Laksh: what…
Ragini: i know laksh u love me….
Laksh: but how…
Ragini: its written in ur eyes…
Laksh: ragu… U knw…
Ragini: yes.. Sincr the beginning…
Laksh: then what is ur answer
Ragini: my hug was the answer…
Laksh: but i want to hear…
Ragini: what. .
Laksh: that u r mine…
Ragini heart gave a jolt….her lips were trembling this time… She broke the hug… And turned away from him….she was smiling..suddenly she felt a pair of hands wrapping tightly around her waist…it was laksh…. She felt breathe on her neck… She felt a voice…. It was laksh
Laksh: plz say…
Ragini: i….i..
Laksh: yesss
Ragini: I love u laksh
And saying this she hugged him tightly…. Very tightly…. Laksh too hugged Her back…
They remain in each other for a long time…laksh lost in Rag… Ragu lost in laksh….

@ morning…
Sanskar is finally being discharged…
Ap: my son is coming home after 2 long years….
Dp: yes…make all his favourite dishes..
Ap: yess…but still a void is left…
Dp: i pray to god that the void should be filled up soon…

Laksh makes sanskar sit in the car…sanskar smiles ..
Sanskar: lets drive to home….
Laksh: sure bhai… We all missed u so much….
Sanskar: yeah…i know…
Laksh drives him to maheshwari mension…
Sanskar: where is ragini…
Laksh: she doesn’t live with us…now..
Sanskar: what…then where does shr live…
Laksh: in the flat provided by the hospital…
Sanskar: lucky.. M i that bad…
Laksh: no bhai… U were just on wrong path…
Sanskar: where is swara bhai… Y noone is telling me anything…
Laksh: frst reach home…u get well soon…then i ll tell u everything…
Sanskar: she is fine na….
Laksh looks on…unable to utter a word…

They reach mm…
Ap: my son has come after a long time…
Sanskar: i missed u ma…
Ap: now dont u dare to go…otherwise i ll die…
Sanskar: no ma..dont say…plz…
Ap: ok ok…now tell me…ur papA and me are ready for whosoever u want to get married…Hmmm wat was her name…yaa kavita na…
Sanskar gets teary eyes…a dagger pierced his heart….
Sanskar: ma….
Ap: what happened beta…
Sanskar: ma…she…. She is no more ma…
Sanskar breaks down…. HE want to let out all the guilt…. All thr burden in his mother’s lap….
Laksh holds him from behind… Sanskar hugs him and cries… Cries untill He feels dizzy…. Laksh takes him to his room…
Laksh: bhai… Dont cry plz…
Sanskar: i ve done so wrong with others… I snatched swara’s happiness… And god…hr snatched mine…
Laksh hugs him….
Laksh: bhai u remember… Swara always used to say that ehen a person feels guilt…we should forgive him…
Sanskar: that innocent girl…i ve done so wrong with her…god will never forgive me…
Laksh : no bhai…
Sanskar: where is swara… I want to talk to her….i want to say sorry…
Laksh: not now bhai…

Suddenly a girl…approx 1.5 year… Come to the room…running….
Laksh: shubhi…u here…
Shubhi: laksh chachu…m hiding from dadi..
Laksh: y betu…
Shubhi: because i ve eaten all the prasad she kept for puja…
Laksh: aww…no prb…u hide BRhind me…i ll manage….
Sanskar: so cute girl…whose daughter is this….
Laksh stammer for a while…He looks at sanskar…
Shubhi: chachu..whose this uncle….
Laksh hugs shubhi…
Laksh: he is not uncle….he is ur dad….
Sanskar: dad……
Laksh: sanskar… This is shubhi…ur and swara’s child….

Precap
Raglak engagement in a small function….

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