Episode 6
Blue Whale hotel ??
Sanskaar: “Tu apun ko yaha kaiko leke aya. (Y u bring me here?)”
Lucky: “Bhai, u r going to kiss her like this.”
Sanskaar: “What do u mean?? Apun is looking fine. See today apun wore decent.”
Lucky pulls his cheeks: “Bhai u r too innocent. Dress is OK but girls like dinner date.”
Sanskaar: “Which date my Shona like?”
Lucky: “?HaHa Bhai, not that date. When girl and boy goes for dinner alone then it’s called a date.”
Sanskaar: “Sala yeh agrezo k kya locha h. Apun k dimag mai locha ho rela h. Ek kiss k lie pata nahi apun ko kya karna pdh raha h. (Can’t translate ?.)”
Lucky: “Bhai, what is this? U don’t love bhabhi can’t u adopt little change for her.”
Sanskaar: “Apun Shona k lie kuch bhi karega. (I can’t do anything for my Swara.)”
Lucky: “OK Bhai u stay here. I’ll talk to manager about all the arrangements. When tomorrow u will come with bhabhi everything will be perfect.”
Lucky leaves.
Here Sahil is trying to steal Swara’s attention.
Sahil: “Swara ji. U r so beautiful… U always wear Indian dress or sometimes prefer Western too.”
Swara: “I wear those clothes in which I feel comfortable.”
Sahil: “Same here. See we are like similar. Our choice and thinking same same.”
Swara: “Hmm?.”
Sahil holds her hand and starts caressing her ring finger: “See this rings perfectly suits u.”
Swara is not even a percent interested in his talks. Then her eyes falls on Sanskaar who is standing near a flower pot.
Sanskaar (smells the flowers): “Kaisa fool h khushboo he nahi h. (What kind of flowers is this without fragrance.)”
Sanskaar matches his height with flowers pot.
Sanskaar: “Yeh to apun se bahut lamba h. (It’s taller than me.) Apun will gift same flower to my Shona.”
Swara smiles seeing him playing with flowers. He seems as if a little boy saw something new and he is searching it.
Sahil( thinks): “Wah Swara is liking it. I can’t wait for kiss.”
Sanskaar: “Apun yeh fool chura leta h. Raat ko pani me dal dega to kal tk kharab bhi nahi hoga phir kal kiss se pehle yeh gift apni Shona ko dega. (I’ll steal this flower and kept it in water so that it wouldn’t lost its fragrance and freshness and tomorrow before kiss I’ll present this to My Shona.)”
Sanskaar tries to pluck it but it’s and artificial flowers when he pulls it pot starts shaking.
Sanskaar: “Bahut mazbut fool h. (It’s too strong.)”
A man comes there.
Man: “Hey what r u doing?”
Sanskaar: “Apun wants this flower.”
Man: “So buy this from shop. If hotel staff will see u stealing they will through u out.”
Sanskaar about to take his gun but the remembers Lucky’s word. “Bhai don’t use gun in hotel because this will create mess try to be cool.”
Man leaves.
Sanskaar becomes sad?.
Swara smiles seeing his puppy face. Sanskaar is continuously staring the flowers…
Sahil kisses on Swara’s hand. She comes in sense with jerk. She takes her hand back.
Sahil: “Swara ji. I love u.”
Swara: “Hmm.”
Sahil: “U too say.”
Swara: “Sahil, it’s too late I think we should leave.”
Sahil: “Why so hurry. See u even didn’t finished it coffee.”
Swara takes coffee. Because she wants to go out of his cage.
Swara: “See I finished.”
Sahil looks towards her lips where some coffee’s drops left.
Sahil: “Swara ji ur lips.”
Swara is about to wipe them but he holds her hand.
Sahil: “Let me do it.”
Swara: “No it’s alright.”
Sahil: “Please. (Now I’ll touch her lips.)”
He extends his hand to touch her lips.
Waiter: “Sir ur bill.”
Swara is like thank God? and Sahil is like ‘Oh Shit.’
Sahil see the bill.
Sahil: “100 rupees?? but u said it’s 80 Rupees. (He looks towards Swara.) I mean u go I’ll pay bill in counter.”
Waiter: “OK sir.”
Sahil: “Swara ji u stay here I’ll just come.”
He leaves.
Swara: “Thank God he left… But Swara u should not say like this he is going to ur husband.”
Swra again looks towards Sanskaar.
Swara: “He is still here. Don’t know when his illusion will leave me. Since the time waiter bought coffee I’m just seeing him. Who else day dream like me.”
Sanskaar is searching around the hotel.
Sanskaar: “It’s too big hotel.”
Hotel counter.
Sahil: “What is this? U said 80 then in bill u r taking 100 rupees.”
Staff: “Sir it’s GST all have to pay it.”
Sahil (thinks): “Oh God my 100 rupees got wasted for a coffee and I even didn’t got a kiss.”
Staff: “Sir bill.”
Sahil: “What u do if someone forgot his purse.”
Staff: “Simple her he have to pay amount by washing utensils.”
Sahil (It’s great by this I can save 100 rupess yepi clever Sahil.): “Woh I forgot my purse. U please don’t tell anything to my fiance… I’m ready to wash utensils…”
Staff: “OK as u wish.”
Sahil enters inside the kitchen.
Sahil: “Oh my God????. This much utensils I’ll die. But money… Sahil u cam do it.”
Sahil becomes busy in work. Meantime Sanskaar is busy in exploring the hotel.
Waiter: “Sir ur order.”
Sanskaar: “Apun’s order is give that flowers to me.”
Waiter: “Not that order sir. See the menu.”
Sanskaar(in little loud voice) “Y to see Meenu. Apun loves Shona not any Meenu?.”
Swara laughs: “Haha?. Now his illusion started shouting.”
Sanskaar looks towards Swara and mesmerises seeing her smile.
Sanskaar (to waiter): “U go…”
He sits besides Swara.
Sanskaar: “Swara u r here.”
Swara: “U again came.”
Sanskaar: “But Apun came first time here.”
Swara: “No, last time u came and… Nothing now go.”
Sanskaar: “No, Shona apun yaha tere ko kiss karne aya h. Lucky bola kal kiss karne k. (Shona I came here to kiss u. Lucky said to kiss u tomorrow.”
Sanskaar holds her hand.
Sanskaar: “Apun tere ko bahut love karta h. (I love u.)”
Swara jerks his hand: “What u think about yourself!!! Whenever u want u will come kiss me and the leave me. Can’t u understand this not love. And how dare u to tease me. And to drink that water drop. Do u have any idea what I’m going through… Mr Sanskaar one thing fit in ur littel mind stop coming in my dreams. Who else saw day dream like me. I became so stupid… (She shows him ring.) Do u know what is this?”
Sanskaar: “It’s a ring.”
Swara: “Shut up… U told u to speak…”
Sanskaar: “Tu he to apun se puchi yeh kya h? (But u asked me, what’s this?”
Swara: “U r very stubborn… Do whatever u want I’ll not stop… Come on do it…”
He reminds Lucky’s words “See when bhabhi will talk in English and if u r not understanding then apply this formula.”
Here Lucky comes after talking with manager… He see towards Sanskaar but before he could say anything.
Sanskaar pulls her chair, holds her hairs from back. And immediately captures her lips… Swara widens her eyes? in shock… Sanskaar gently suckes her lips.
Sanskaar: “I love u.”
He pulls and she lands on his lap. He again kissed her. He is rough guy and she is soft like dew. But she losses herself and tends to response with equal passion. Her hands automatically shifts onnhis hairs and his hand is on her waist. Both of them has no knowledge what they r doing. Their first kiss would be like this they haven’t thought. They won’t stop but people started whistling… They stops.
Swara looks around all the people are staring them. Some of them are whistling and some one are smiling and some shouting. Then she looks towards Sanskaar.
Swara: “R u real?”
Sanskaar nodes his head in yes. She see herself in his lap. His hand is on her waist. She is so close to him.
Sanskaar: “Shona…”
Swara: “This is wrong…”
She runs from there. Sanskaar goes behind her but Lucky stops him. And takes him outside.
Lucky: “Bhai what u did?”
Sanskaar: “U said to kiss her. Par woh Apun se pyar nahi karti?. (She doesn’t love me.) She said it’s wrong.”
Lucky: “Bhai, u r too much. She is a girl. Girls are very shy. U kissed her publicly. Before whole world.”
Sanskaar: “But Y don’t u tell me not to kiss publicly.”
Lucky: “Bhai, after marriage u will love her publicly like this.”
Sanskaar: “What will happen after marriage.”
Lucky: “Oh God Bhai u r too innocent. I’ll teach u everything. There is something… Which we should do alone.”
Sanskaar: “But in movie that boy kiss the girl publicly.”
Lucky: “Bhai that’s, America. Where u can show ur love u need not to afraid of society.”
Sanskaar: “Apun kisi se nahi darta. Shona mere h. Aur apun k jab man chahe jaise chahe apun usey kiss karega. (I’m not afraid of anyone. I’ll kiss her whenever I want..)
Lucky: “OK Bhai us u want.”
Sanskaar: “Apun want to kiss her again. Apun ko acha laga kiss karke. (I like kissing her.)”
Lucky: “Control Bhai, control. (Bhai can’t able to control his emotions not he have any knowledge. I’m afraid if he did something.)”
Sanskaar: “Where u lost?”
Lucky: “Let’s go home Bhai.”
Sanskaar: “Shona.”
Lucky: “Other things I’ll tell u later.”
Ragini enters Sanskaar’s colony.
Ragini: “Oh dad this place is so yuk.”
Ram: “Only few days Ragu.”
Ragini: “OK Dad. Oye Taklu Uncle.”
Ram giggles.
DP: “Ji Malkin.”
Ragini: “I want a fresh lemon juice. And bring all belongings to my room.”
DP: “Ji Malkin.”
Sanskaar comes with Lucky. He is telling Lucky how happy is he.
Sanskaar: “Apun k Shona bahut bolti. Gudia k tarah lgti h. (My Shona speaks too much. She looks like a doll.”
Ragini: “It’s good chance.”
She see Ram is busy in phone. She goes towards Sanskar.
Ragini (thinks): “I’ll collide with my Sanskaar. And then he will catch me in his arms.”
She is ready to execute her plan but on the way a stone comes under her legs and slips and falls on Lucky.
Lucky: “Oh Miss blind.”
Ragini: “What u said?”
Lucky rubs his finger on her cheeks: “Still too much make-up can’t u give us honor to see ur real face.”
Ragini: “What do u mean?”
Ragini and Lucky gets up.
Lucky: “I think u looks horrible without make-up.”
Ragini: “U…???.”
Sanskaar: “Apun ghar ja raha h. (I’m going to home.)”
He leaves and Raglak keeps on fighting.
Blue Whales hotel ??
Sahil comes out of kitchen.
Sahil: “Oh God my hands are paining. (He looks towards clock.) Oh god it’s two hour.”
He searches Swara.
Sahil: “Where is Swara?”
Staff (thinks): “Oh, so that lady is his wife. Stupid guy.”
Staff: “Sir she went away.”
Sahil: “Oh God. How I forgot about her. Shit out kiss is left incomplete.”
He leaves.
Night.
Swara cries. She is sitting on the bed holding her knees.
Swara: “What I did? I kissed him. No no it’s wrong. I can’t cheat Sahil.”
She looks towards mirror and touches her lips. It reminds her whole scene of their first kiss. It’s true his lips touched her.
Sanskaar: “Shona apun yaha tere ko kiss karne aya h. (Shona I came here to kiss u.”
She threw jar towards mirror. It breaks mirror.
Swara (shouts): “Go… I said leave…”
Dida comes inside the room. She hugs her.
Dida: “Shona…”
Swara (cries): “Dida please tell him to leave. Y he coming here?”
Dida: “Shona, Y r u crying?”
Swara: “Dida, he kissed me. Who could he?”
Dida: “Who? Sahil.”
Swara: “Sanskaar.”
Dida: “Who is Sanskaar? Shona did he forced u. We will complain against him.”
Swara: “No Dida, he is innocent. Do know what is happening to me. (She tells her everything about their meetings, her dreams.) Dida when Sahil said he wants to kiss me. I didn’t felt good. But Sanskaar, he even didn’t asked any permission. Dida tell me what happened to me?”
Dida: “U love him?”
Swara: “No it’s wrong Dida. I’m engaged to Sahil. Dida I can’t cheat him.”
Dida: “Shona, we fall for most unexpected person. U r not cheating Sahil. If after knowing ur feelings for Sanskaar u stays with Sahil then it’s a cheating.”
Swara: “Dida, ma baba. What they will say?”
Dida: “I’ll talk to them. Shona listen to ur heart. Accept the truth.”
Swara hugs her: “Dida u r too good. Sanskaar is mine. Tomorrow I’ll tell everything to Sahil.”
Dida: “OK Shona, but I also want to meet that Sanskaar who stole my Shona’s heart.”
Swara (blushes?): “Dida…”
Dida: “Oh someone is blushing.”
Swara: “Dida stop teasing me. U go I’m feeling sleepy.”
Dida: “Or u r going to meeting ur Sanskaar in dream?.”
Swara covers her face in sheet.
Swara: “Dida go please.”
Dida leaves.
Ram’s room.
Ram is talking in phone.
Ram: “U r sure u saw Sujata in this colony.”
Man: “Yes sir. I think she is very rich Lady. I saw her with a boy.”
Ram: “OK, tomorrow I’m going to check each and every house.”
He disconnects the call.
Ram: “Sujju, so u r here with my son. U stole my son but soon he will be with me.”
DP is sleeping.
Ram (shouts): “Durga… Durga…”
He wakes up.
DP: “Ji Malik.”
Ram: “I need a coffee.”
DP: “Ram it’s too late. I’m feeling sleepy.”
Ram slaps him: “It’s Malik not Ram. I’m ur owner follow my order.”
DP: “I’m ur brother. Till how long u will punish me.”
Ram: “Life time punishment. Do my work and prepare it asper my taste else I’ll splash coffee on ur face.”
DP leaves.
Old age home.
Sujata: “Oh God these hiccups?. I’m tried of all the solution.”
Anu: “Sujata r u OK?”
Sujata: “I can’t able to sleep due to these hiccups.”
Anu: “May be ur Ram ji is missing u.”
Sujata: “Don’t take his name?. He is dead for me that day… I don’t want to remember anything.”
Anu: “Sujata u love him.”
Sujata: “Yes, I love him. But now these words doesn’t matter for me. He is happy in his world.”
Anu: “OK Good Night. Tomorrow we have to wake up early.”
Suajta: “Yes, OK Good Night.”
Sujata closes her eyes…
Flashback.
Ram is beating the door.
Ram: “Sujju, anything serious please come out… I’m panicking.”
Sujata comes out. Ram cups her face.
Ram: “R u OK? Y r u silent?”
Suajta: “It’s true. Ram we r going to become parents.”
Ram lifts her in arms…
Ram: “I’m soo happy Sujju. Love u. I can’t tell u how happy am I?”
Sujata: “Ram, DP Bhai is watching us.”
Ram looks towards DP. He places her on bed.
DP: “Congratulations Ram.”
Ram: “Bhai, I’m going to celebrate it should be great party. U tell Y u came here?
DP: “Woh I need money for my cycle repair shop.”
Ram gives him money. DP stares Sujata. Sujata doesn’t like it.
Flashback ends.
Midnight.
Sanskaar’s Room.
Romeo can’t able to sleep only their first kiss is coming before his eyes.
Sanskaar: “What u did Shona? Apun Tera deewana ho gaya h. (I became mad for u.)”
Sanskaar goes down. He looks towards Lucky.
Sanskaar: “Lucky get up.”
Lucky: “Bhai I’m feeling sleepy.”
Sanskaar: “Get up fast we r going to Shona’s home.”
Lucky immediately gets up: “Bhai this time.”
Sanskaar: “Apum want to meet her else Apun will die.”
Lucky: “But Bhai.”
Sanskaar: “Apun ko Swara chaheyeh to chaheyeh.”
Lucky: “OK I’m coming.”
Sanskaar goes to take car from garage.
Lucky: “Bhai, is going too fast. I know this feeling is new for him. Hope for good now this ur destiny Lucky wake for lovers…”
Precap: Sanskaar in Swara’s room ?.
24 Comments
OMG I loved it so much dear
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Awesome..tc..
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ohh god apun to mar hi jayega aise Sanskar ko dekhke
i will die too innocent rowdy sanky
??? don’t die… More innocence of this Sanku is left????
Superbbb…amzng…. Plzzz update nxt part soon… Waiting
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Outstanding
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Awesome n mindblowing epi dr
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Omg Sanskar is so innocent ?
Amazing update.. Swasan’s first kiss ??
??? soon rowdy one will come… Thanks?
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Awesome epii depuuuu dear sanskar is so innocent how swara will handle him after marriage Superb epi loved it.
Continue soon
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Thanks????? marsu don’t fear apun is here Swara will handle him
Awesome and excellent dear
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Lol…..Sanskaar is too innocent rowdy! But now I m thinking, once he get to know that Sahil is engaged(yuckkkk) with Swara…..then what will happen…hehehe! Yaar this Sahil, what a man he is na? Such a intelligent(my foot)…. As far as I remember u told that Suju is Sahil’s mother…..right! So he is Ram’s son n Nagini’s bro??? And Luxji did Nagini’s Oh my maata! Very funny dialogues dear.. Finally our Swasan…..awwwwwwwwww! Swara realised her love….thanks to dida n author!!
Let’s see what will happen… Sahil is no 1 kanjus????????? stupid boy…????
Soon Ram and Sujata will meet each other Let’s see…?????? Thanks??????