SwaSan Readers!!
Happy New Year! God bless you all with happiness health n prosperity!❤️?
Hello People! Am back with the first shot! Thank youu so muchh for the overwhelming response! Means alot❤️❤️Maybe its a bit boring but it will get interesting in further epis Okay?
And yeah The Couple.. Well.. There were loads of votes for both RagSan and SwaSan.. So i thought of writing this story for both RagSan and SwaSan readers separately! Hope I won’t disappoint you all as some wanted RagSan and some wanted SwaSan so it was quite confusing for me so i decided to write for both separately!
“SWASAN READERS”
Am again giving the prologue in case anyone forgot to read that:
Prologue:
(A beautiful house is shown.. Not too big nor too small.. Beautifully painted with a lush green garden.. Scent of roses is all around.. Okay so lets peep inside the house.. A girl is shown.. She is wearing a white anarkali.. Long beautiful black hair.. Pink rosy lips.. Large doe eyes.. But but.. There is something in her beautiful eyes.. Well what is it? Oh my God! Its tears! Yes, her eyes are glassy.. Tears rolling down her cheeks.. She is seeing a photo on which a garland is there)
Girl(sniffs): Seven.. Seven years have passed Papa..
(The photo is of her father, Vansh Kapoor)
Girl(cries silently): Why? Papa.. Why you left me? Everyone left.. You.. Dadi.. Mrs Saxena aka My Mom.. Hahah.. My mom.. Huh.. She has no right to be called a Mom.. She is heartless creature.. But Papa.. You? You didn’t even think once about me before going?
(An old woman in late 50s come and place hand on her shoulder)
Old woman: Betaa..
(The girl turns and hugs her tightly)
Girl(cries): Nani.. It has been seven years but.. Still.. I.. I miss him Nani.. He was my Hero.. My Saviour.. My everything.. But.. Nani.. He left me..
Nani(tries to consile her): Beta.. Its all fate.. His time came so he went.. And (wipes her tears) Tell me how your Papa will feel seeing his princess crying.. hmm??
Girl(wipes her tears): Sorry Nani..
(Looks at photo) Sorry Papa.. I am sorry.. But your princess miss you Papa.. But (smiles with glassy eyes) i know you are always with me and will always be.. Watching me.. See i fulfilled your dream na.. You wanted me to be a doctor.. Here i am.. A proud and successful doctor ..
Nani(smiles): Yes.. Your papa must be very proud of you my dear..
Girl(smiles): I know Nani..
(Suddenly her eyes were full of hatred)
Girl(with hatred): Tum.. Tum sab.. Jinki wajah se Papa chalay gaye.. You all will never live happily.. Bhagwan tumhe kabhi khush nahi rakhay ga..
Nani: Beta..
Girl: I know Nani.. I know.. Papa always used to say “Forgiveness can save relations but Hatred will just break them apart” But i cant and i wont forgive those monsters.. Mai kya Nani.. Bhagwan bhi unhe kabhi Maaf nahi karay ga..
Nani: And me too..
Girl(wipes her tears): Anyways.. I am going.. Or else i will get late..
Nani(kisses her forehead): Be careful and take care
Girl(waves her): Yea Bye Nani!
Nani: Bye meri jaan
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(Another house is shown.. No no not a house.. Mansion.. Yes, a beautiful lavish Mansion.. Nameplate reads “Maheshwari’s” Lets see what’s happening inside)
(A man in mid 40s is shown having breakfast.. Woman of about same age is sitting beside him.. They are RamPrasad and Sujata Maheshwari.. Both are talking.. Meanwhile, Handsome young man descends the stairs wearing a police uniform.. Perfect features, Handsome and well built body.. He is Our Hero “Sanskar Maheshwari”)
Sanskar: Morning Mom and Dad
Ram: Good Morning Beta..
Sujata(smiles): Chotu.. Come..
Sanskar(irritated): Mom! Stop calling me Chotu! I am big now! What if my staff hears! Huh!
Sujata(laughs): Haha.. Okay okay.. Sanskar.. My dear son, come and have breakfast..
Sanskar(smiles and kisses her cheeks): Okay!
(He sits and starts having breakfast.. Just then a healthy man comes and salutes Sanskar)
Man(salutes Sanskar): Sir!
Sanskar(nods): Morning Pankaj..
Pankaj(sees the food and licks his tongue): Paratheeeee..
Sujata(smiles): Come Pankaj Beta.. Have breakfast..
Pankaj: Sure sure Aunty Ji!
(He was about to sit when Sanskar glares him.. Pankaj pouts)
Sanskar: Stop making faces! Kha kha k aur kitna mota hoga haan?
Sujata(hits Sanskar’s head): Sanskar!
Sanskar: huh what wrong i said! Anyways… Whats the news?
Pankaj: Sir.. ACP sir has called.. We have to leave immediately!
Sanskar: Okay, Let’s go
(Both leave)
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“SHOT 1”
~~~~~~~Police Station~~~~~~
(Sanskar and Pankaj reach Police Department as ACP has called them)
(Pankaj was walking very irritatingly with Sanskar making funny faces)
Sanskar(amused): Abbey Gaddhe! Joker ki tarah mu kyu bna rha hai?
Pankaj(irritatingly) : Sanskarrr Sirrrrrr?
Sanskar: Han i Know my name is Sanskar?
Pankaj: Sir please.. Already i am in a bad mood.. Now you don’t start?
Sanskar(gives a look): What happened?
Pankaj: Sir.. Firstly toh you didn’t let me eat those yummmyyy Parathe and now.. Huh..This Khadoos ACP!
Sanskar(raises his eyebrow): Khadoos ACP?
Pankaj: Yeah! Btw Sir..Why ACP Sir calls us so many times?
Sanskar: Huh?
Pankaj: I mean.. There are many other officers too but No! He always calls us (pouts)
Sanskar: So what problem you have?
Pankaj: Sirrr! Don’t you see? ACP sir ko dekh lu toh meri raaton ki neend urr jati hai
Sanskar(amusingly): Why so?
Pankaj: Sirr.. His eyes.. Aesa lgta hai abhi kha jayen gy mujhe?
Sanskar(laughs): Haha.. Pr tujhe khate khate bhi unhe 2 saal lag jayen gy??
(Pankaj is a healthy chubby and funny man just in case you forgot)
Pankaj: Sirrrrr!?
Sanskar: Now shut your mouth! If Sir hears na.. Then you are gone
(They both reach ACP cabin.. Nameplate reads “ ACP Rajesh Saxena”.. Sanskar knocks and both goes in)
(A man in late 40s is shown.. He is sitting on the chair in a bossy way.. His face is stern)
(Sanskar and Pankaj salutes him)
Sanskar: Sir!
ACP: Come Sanskar.. I was waiting for you both
Sanskar: Any special work Sir?
ACP: Oh yes.. Well there is a gang named “Kola” They are-
Pankaj(interrupts): Kola? Hahah! Coca Colaaaa ho jaye ga Sirr?
Sanskar(hits Pankaj’s elbow): Shut up Pankaj!
Pankaj: Sorry Sir
ACP: Shut your mouth Pankaj! Anyways, Sanskar.. This gang is very dangerous.. They smuggle drugs from foreign and are also involved in kidnapping especially kidnapping children but no one has seen them yet.. No one knows how many members are they, how they look, where they live.. You, Pankaj along with other officers will roam around the city in casuals to catch them.. Beware of them.. You all will hide your identity and immediately report if you find something fishy
Sanskar(nods): Sure Sir.. But if we don’t know who are they, how will we catch them?
ACP: Well Sanskar, you are intelligent enough to solve this problem
Sanskar: I will try my best Sir
Pankaj: Yes Sir, we will do our best
ACP(nods): I hope you will succeed in this mission
Sanskar: Yes Sir!
(Both salutes him and leaves)
~~~~~ City Hospital~~~~~~
(A girl parks scooty.. Takes out her helmet)
Girl(looks at the hospital and sighs): Back again (looks at the sky and says) Only for you Papa..
(She enters the hospital hopping here and there.. She is so pretty.. Her long hair are flowing in air and she is humming a song.. She was walking or rather jumping here and there but suddenly DUSHHHHH! She dashed with a wall as she wasn’t seeing front)
Girl(rubs her forehead): Ouchhhh!
(Yo! She is our Heroine “ Dr Swara Vansh Kapoor” Yes.. The same girl who was crying by seeing the photo of her father)
(A voice calls her from back)
Voice: Dr Swara
(Swara turns while still rubbing her forehead)
Swara: Good Morning Rohan Sir!
(Rohan is a doctor.. Specifically a cardiologist.. Senior to Swara.. He is a bit arrogant but sometimes sweet too.. Swara is also a cardiologist)
Dr Rohan: Dr Swara! Have you seen the time? You are late
Swara(sorry face): Really Sorry Sir.. Actually it was something personal..
Dr Rohan: Look Dr Swara.. Excuses won’t work.. You very well know what doctors should be like but I don’t understand why you behave so immature
Swara(frowns): No I don’t!?
Dr Rohan(raises his eyebrow): Really??
Swara(fumbles): No.. I.. me..an.. May.. b.e..
Dr Rohan: Anyways, its waste to tell you about all this.. Listen, there is a case of a child..He is only 5 years old.. I want you to handle it..
Swara: What? So small? But you are senior and you can handle it more efficiently
Dr Rohan: Maybe.. But you handle kids well as you are also a kid..
Swara: Huhhh!
Dr Rohan: Come with me to the cabin.. I will tell you full detail
Swara(nods): What his parents do?
Dr Rohan: His mother is a housewife and his Father is a police inspector..
Swara: Whatttt?!!?
Dr Rohan: What happened?
Swara:: Po.. Poli..ce Ins..pec..t.or?!?
Dr Rohan: Yes Why??
(She sees Flashes of a Police Man shooting a Man.. She sees that shot person breathing heavily drenched in blood while putting hand on heart.. Then she sees a doctor saying he was no more)
Dr Rohan(shakes Swara): Dr Swara! Hello? Are you there?
Swara(teary eyes) : Am sorry Sir.. I won’t handle this case
(She starts walking away from there)
Dr Rohan(bit shocked): What?! Whyy?! You love children!
Swara(teary eyes and shouts): I DO LOVE CHILDREN BUT I HATE POLICE AND EVERYONE IN POLICE AND EVERYONE RELATED TO THEM! I WONT HANDLE ANY SUCH CASE! I HATE POLICEEE! THEY ARE RUTHLESS MURDERERS! MY HATE FOR POLICE IS MUCH MORE THAN MY LOVE FOR CHILDREN!!?
(She cryingly ran away from there)
Dr Rohan(standing shocked at her outburst): What happened to her?
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Well I know its a bit boring but it will get more interesting in further epis Trust me guys.. For now sorry for making you bored and Thank you so much for your comments.. It means alot seriously ❤️
Now the question is Our Hero, Sanskar Maheshwari is a Police Inspector while Our Heroine, Swara Vansh Kapoor who is a doctor by profession hates Police people from the core of her heart.. What do you think? Will love blossom between them? If yes, then how come? When Swara rejected handling case of a small child inspite of her love for children just for the mere reason he was the son of a police inspector.. Do you think Love will Blossom between Our Prince and Princess?
Shoot your comments!
Thank you peeps! ❤️
Happy New Year!
31 Comments
soo cute
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Awesome dear.pls don’t using concept of voting dear.it hurting all swasan fandom.i know you write bharosa on rag-san.it feel so hurts.swasan fandom are already leave tu because of some wanted people taunt swasan fandom.so pls don’t use this or that pair.when you write a ff pls fix pair in mindblowing later proceed.one person using many id voting.sorry if hurting you dear.yesterday i only think your ff.,but feel so bad.becayse that ff not for my swasan.comment kiliye many people write other pair ff.byt swasanians only write ff for our fandom.sorry sorry i hurting you.happy new year dear.
Well , I didn’t know that SwaSan readers have left TU.. And about pair, i just wanted to give the pair which you all like so i asked.. I didn’t know this will hurt you all Swasan fans..And honestly i write RagSan stories only but many people personally messaged me to write on SwaSan also..
And the main imp things.. I am not giving this story for comments.. I wont feel bad even if hardly two or three ppl comment cause i write for satisfaction, cuz i love writing.. I don’t write for comments.. And am sorry if you guys felt bad about this.. You don’t worry.. I wont be writing SwaSan stories 🙂
thank you to make Swasan story coz some swasan fans message u personally, but i wish there is no more vote, coz comparing a hallucination and a real existing couple is hurting 🙂 , if you want to write A, do write, if u want to write B, do write… It’s OK..but pls no vote,..
maybe you are a writer who only to penned down your idea, but i wish you understand the couple fandom feeling toward their favorite..
i bet Devakshi fans will hurt if u make a vote to choose Dev-Rag or Devakshi, or Avneil fans will feel bad also if u asking ppl to choose between Rag-Neil or AvNeil ..
once upon a time, there was Ishveer fans who was so angry when a writer pairing rag with Ranveer and blamed Swasanian to let rag fans to steal other men for her, even sanskar…….so, i wish u understand our point, ty and sorry if it’s hurt u
Look Mica, You can’t just say that its a hallucination vs a real existing couple.. You people like SwaSan couple and we like RagSan couple.. Its our choice whom we like .. As you guys get hurt, same is the case with us too.. We don’t defame your fav couple or your choice and we expect the same.. RagSan fans also feel bad when they are defamed and told that its a mere hallucination.. Sorry if you felt bad that i asked to vote.. But basically the point is We don’t want such remarks.. If you want us to understand your feeling towards your fav couple, then i guess you all too have to understand our feelings towards our fav couple..
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Sorry dear if i hurting you.
No no not at all.. I didn’t mind.. Everyone has a right to share their own views?
Btw.. Dont mind me asking.. But.. What was the reason that forces Swasan fans to leave TU? Can you please tell
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Interesting…… Loved it.waiting for next part post soon and happy New Year.
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