This is only few shots guys…. It will be of 10-15 episodes only…. Actually many times my mind said to start this but i was already writing a ff so i thought to start this after i finish that ff…. But now i can’t stop from posting this…. Hope u guys like this…. U can also tell me to stop if u didn’t like it…. And guys this one will start from Raglak doing shrad of Swasan….
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Episode 1
Ragini and laksh were doing the shrad and swasan are standing there in shock seeing their siblings doing shrad of them…. Dadi is smiling winningly….. At that time shekar came there…. Seeing him swara had little hope that he will stop this…. But instead he too came and sat with them…. After raglak finished their shrad shekar did shrad of sharmistha… Seeing it swara got more shock….
“Baba what r u doing???? How can u do this to ma???”Swara asked….
“Eiii chori my son is doing right…. U go that side otherwise i do no what i will do….” saying this she pushed swara…. Swara stumbled and before she fell down sharmistha hold her…. Seeing her swara hugged shomi….
“Ma see what baba is doing…. Y he is doing this ma??? Tell him not to do ma….”Swara cried…. Sharmistha didn’t said anything…. She just went to her house….
All the rituals are finished…. At that time Annapurna came there…. Seeing her both swasan went to get blessings but ap stopped them…. Swasan got shocked….
“Ragini,laksh u both come to our house…. And u know even adarsh asked sorry from us and he did all this to show who is our enemy….”
“Ma what u r saying???”laksh asked in shock….
“Yes laksh…. Actually the man who is standing here(Pointing to sanskar) is a betrayer…. U know he didn’t forget his revenge…. He still wants to destroy us…. Even he made contract with some of our enemies to sell every property of us….. U know few days before he tried to get sign from ur papa for transferring all the property to his name…. Thank god adarsh saw it…. Adrash wanted to prove us that sanskar is betryaing so that only he did all this…. And the goon to whom u worked is also sanskar’s men…. He told every truth to us….” hearing it ragini,laksh and swasan are shocked….
“Ma this is all lie…. Don’t u believe me???” sanskar asked…
“Shut up sanskar…. Don’t even call me ma from ur mouth…. U r not my son…. And i don’t want to see ur face….”ap said angrily…
“Badi ma if u believe adarsh bhai that much then y did he transferred all the property to bade papa’s name????”swara asked angrily….
“Swara lawyer is already there in our house…. And adarsh is ready to change the property to his papa name….” hearing it all are shocked…. Then dadi came with raglak bags and all went from there…. Raglak gave an angry glare to swasan and went from there…. Dadi smirked seeing swasan and went from there….
Swasan went inside…. They saw sharmistha sitting lifelessly…. Swasan went near them….
“Ma what happened at the hospital???? Y is baba angry at u???”swara asked…
“Swara ur baba blamed me that i am the reason for ayush’s this state…. He cut all ties with me…. Even he snatched the mangalsutra swara….”saying this she cried…. Swasan consoled shomi and made her sleep in the coach…. Sanskar went to his room…. Swara went to hospital and brought ayush from there….
Swara came to badi…. She went to her house…. She made ayush lay in the crib and went to the room…. There sanskar is sitting lifelessly…. She went near him and kept her hand on his shoulder….
“Sanskar….”hearing her voice he hugged her….
“Swara how can badi ma blame me??? Yes i accept i did wrong but i am changed now swara…. Y badi ma didn’t believe me??? Y swara y????” he cried and kept his head in her lap…. Swara caressed his hair and said,”Sanskar they have some misunderstanding…. May be adarsh bhai did it knowingly or he might have mistaken…. Don’t know we will talk to them sanskar…. We will make them understand….”
“Yes swara…. Even have to talk with mom….” saying this sanskar called sujatha and asked her to come to badi soon…. Then the day passed…. Sharmsitha and sanskar are sleeping…. Swara is looking after Ayush….
In the evening Sujatha,Ramprasad and Uttara came to badi…. Sharmistha and swasan are sitting in the sofa…. Sujatha went to sanskar and asked,”Sanskar what happened??? Y u called us urgently???”
“Mom tell me did u get money from Adarsh bhai???”
“No Sanskar i didn’t get money from him…. He only said he will give 10 crores to me and ask me to keep with us as he said some enemies are eyeing on our money…. So that only he did drama of taking property on his name…. But he didn’t give till now….”sujatha said innocently….
“Ma he cheated you…. Not only u he cheated us fully…. He made us an enemy of bade papa…. He named us as betrayer….”
“What r u saying sanskar???” ramprasad asked sanskar….
“Papa adarsh bhai fooled mom and played a game with us….”telling this he told everything that happened…. All three are shocked….
“Sanskar did bhaisa also believed???”
“Yes papa…. He believed…. So that only ma blamed me and told i am not her son….” all shocked to hear it….
“Sanskar,mom,papa don’t worry everything will be changed and it will be proved that we are innocent…. Don’t worry….”
“No swara…. I didn’t expect even bhaisa will doubt us…. It’s finished…. They said us we betrayed them na let it be…. Now i am saying we don’t have any relation with them…. Everything is over between us and them…. Tomorrow i will show who Ramprasad Maheswari is….”saying this rp went inside…. All looked shock seeing rp in angry avatar….
“He is saying right…. Everytime only we have to prove them we are correct…. Y this happens swara??? Enough…. As they told now everything is finished between us….”saying this sharmistha went inside to see Ayush….
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Hope u like this… If u like it i will continue this guys…. I am sure u will like it…..☺
Waiting for all ur comments….☺
As this is the first episode it’s short guys…. From next epi it will be big….☺
Babye….☺?
84 Comments
ooooo mmmmmm gggggg shannnnn its awesomeee woww rp will be stronger woww interestinggg ??? next epi post soonnn ??
He he thank you di…. Yup will post soon….??
Awesomeneeeeeeeeeee didoo…Loved it..Ram uncle will not be on silent mode here not bad…..
U know I was abt to disturb you to write something on this track and see u did.. Ahaan fulfilling my wishes.. Hehe
Love uh Didoo… Post next one soooooon????
Awww thank you sweeto…. He he yes we have heart to heart connection na…. He he…??
Gajab!; full of tashan?
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Loved it shan
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Awesome Shan…loved it..really eager to see what rp will do now..post next one soon dear
Yup will post soon dr and thank you….☺
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seriously shan “RAM PRASAD MAHESHWERY IN ANGRY AVATHAR” !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow loved it
Yup rp is in angry mode…. And thanks dr….☺
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awesome…!! loved it…!! I hope raglak won’t be negitive in this ff…!!
Thanks dr…. Don’t worry raglak won’t be negative….☺
Yaarupa idhu shanu akka dhana???????semmaiya irukku …..
Plz continue pannunga…..nxt one soon…..
He he thank you yazz…. Yup sekiram post panidren…..??
Wowww di go for it
Those idiots deserve punishment for not trusting swasan
Thank you sooo much dr….☺
wow shan amazing yaar its too good
please post next sooner
Thank you dr…. Yup will post soon dr….☺
Awesome Shan Di.loved it..i still can’t believe,what SR had showed us.. it was so cheap..totally ruined the show n we had to loose our SwaSan.. sorry for blabbering.. !!bdw continue soon.. Thnk u.. ;-*
Yup sr cvs spoiled…. Hope i also don’t spoil it….?? no need of sorry dr and thank you….??
Nice Concept
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Nicee…shaan u know I just wanted to see rp avtar now u will Show who is rp wah I am happy to See rp more then sanskar
Yup rp had been silent in the show…. But in my ff he will be strong…. Thanks dr….☺
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Loved it❤
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It is awesome dear …… The way you are portraying ram character is nice …… Loved the concept
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Awesome shan n i am almost in shock to see rp maheswari in angry wow i liked it a lot bcoz u made rp maheswari angry and upload nxt part soon dear
Thank you sooo much dr…. Will upload next soon dr….☺
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Superb.. like rp.. lets see…
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Hey it’s a request pls update the next part soon.
Sure will post next soon….☺
Loved it yaar n u r sooooooooooo good n ya even i loved rp uncle in ur ff
N thanx for making rp character a bold one
O a secret thing I read it after seeing ur name in “recent comments” area
Omg thank you soooo much dr…. Yup rp is bold only dr…. I am very happy seeing ur comment dr….☺
Awsm Dr…???
I can’t believe ram as a strong character ???
Update soon next part☺☺☺
Thank you Sooo much dr….☺