Hello everyone! I'm back with a new TS. Which is based on current track of swaragini.. Love-hate track! I hope u guys will enjoy.. Here's a short promo/teaser of my TS..
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Scene 1 :
Sanskar : Mrs. Swara Sanskar Maheshwari. Where are you going? Don't you remember what I told you?
Swara looks at Sanskar with teary & painful eyes..
Sanskar : Aa aa.. Ye jo aapke aansu hai.. bachake rakhna.. keep it very safe.. You'll need it in future.. Now pack your bags & cm back to ur 'home sweet home'.. ( winks )
Swara : ( with determination ) I will..
Scene 2 :
Swara was looking at Sanskar with horrified expression.
Swara : Sanskar! You are drunk!
Sanskar : yes sweetheart. M drunk.. pichle 6 mahino se yahi to hai.. jo mere saath hai.. Liver kharab kar deti hai sharaab par dil ke repairing ke liye achchi hai.. Main to kahunga agr kisiko heart problem ho to bypass mat karo bas thodi whisky pass karo.. ( stumbles holding whisky bottle )
Swara : ( cries ) Sanskar! Leave that bottle.. give it to me..
Sanskar : Naa.. I won't. Tumhe pata hai.. tumse mohobbat karke maine meri zindagi ki sabse badi galti ki hai.. ye toh uske samne kuch bhi nahi.. Ye toh sirf whisky hai.. Mohabbat se kum risky hai.. cmon.. let's go to our bed.. ( holds her hand tightly )
Swara : Sanskar! Leave me.. you r nt in ur senses..Ye kya paagalpan hai.. I said leave me..
Sanskar : ( laughs ) Paagal pan!! Hmm.. you knw wat swara.. Jab zindagi mein mohobbat ya nafrat saare intehaan paar kar de toh paagalpan bann jati hai.. ( chuckles ) Mohobbat toh main tumse karta nahi hoon.. par toot ke nafrat karne par tumne majboor kar diya.. Welcome to the sanskar's hell, Mrs. Maheshwari! ( pushes her on bed )
Scene 3 :
Ragini : ( angry ) Swara! What's this? Why are you bearing all this tortures? You are not the swara I knw.. My swara was brave & used to fight back..
Swara : No Ragini.. m old swara only.. bt m bearing this all fr him .. He wanna punish me.. He wanna break me.. He can punish me as much as he want.. bt he can't break me.. I have full faith on my love.. I'll get my old sanskar back.. (smiles with teary eyes )
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Tadaa..
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66 Comments
nice..continue soon..tc..
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awesom
Thanks Rosey
Nice awesome please update soon
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Ohho!
That was superb! Well I know the story??
Write soon…love u?
Thanks kiddo.. love u too..???
Shalu where were u
U know i was so scared when u said those words in IWL
I am happy that u re fine
Good to see u back
Simin.. m very sry dear.. I made all of u worried n scared.. sry.. n m perfectly fine. Thank you ?
Nyc
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Superb…….. Sharab toh sanky ko shayar bana diya…………….
Thanks dear.. ya.. sanky shayar bann gaya
Nice
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Hey.. Continue soon
Thanks..
Wow, it’s awsm….loved it… Keep it up dear…..your dialogues are amazing….Waiting for nxt…
Take care
Keep smiling?
Thank you so much fr your lovely cmnt dear..
Loved it a lot. Upload soon.
Thank u dear
Nyc
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But dear when will u upload SwaSan happy ending?
Very soon.. m ill dear..
Ohh..get well soon fast n post it
Nice continue yrr…. & post long part’s ☺☺☺
Thanks dear. N will post very long parts.. dnt wry
huhhhh !!! *no comment…
Very good kakali keep it up
she scared us na now we wont comment good
Simin! You too.. m sry na guys.. bt situation was like.. thats y I blabbered anything.. sry! Pz plz plz plz plz..
Kaku…. sholly na.. y r u angry? If u dont talk den hw will I get to knw.. ? Plz talk with me na..
Hmm fine but if u repeat it again i wont spare u got it
Till then take care of yourself and be happy and watch swasan ka tashan
love u…
i dont know what kakali will do
i think u should bribe her by giving chocolates
M talking to d author “Swarmayii !! love it dear… it seens soo interesting..continue soon… thnk u.. ”
now with my friend Shalu….”huhhhh m not angry with u,,take care,,”…
huhhhh !!! Simin badii ayyi mujhe chocolate dekar kharidne walii.. kangal kar dukhi pure desh kooo…*hungry angry pout…
waaiseee u can doo it.. i don’t mind… *blush.
Ohh myy.. Kakali! U r blushing? ?
Kuch toh hua hai.. kuch hoo gaya haiiii.. lala la la la.. ????
nice
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Looks interesting
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Awsm yr …
Thanks dear
Swarmayi u really scared me I was so tensed that as of sudden wat happened to u … But now m relieved that u r fine…. Achha continue soon
Aur mujhko Happy ending aur Ishq wala love aur yeh wala sab ke updates chahiye … Tc dr
Sorry shreeyu! But I was passing through a bad phase of my life.. thats y.. aah.. leave it.. I’ll post my all ffs parts very soon..
Its Oky Dr … Just take care of urself… these all things come afterwards the main priority is u n urself …. So stop worrying abt us we’ll b angry just for a short tym … U know na how can someone get angry after reading ur cute ff’s so stay calm … Bubyee
Aww.. thats so sweet of you shreeyu.. Thank u sooo much fr understanding me.. bye.. love uh.. ?
Nice
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Awesome
Thank you
Wow plz continue ❤️
Thanks dear
Super awesome
Thanks tani
Superb
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Nice,,,
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awesome…loved it…!!
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Haaa !!! bohot kuch huwa hai.. bukh laggi haii,,, parhai karte karte saar phata jaa raha hai.. mom is not even permitting to watch Tv..
Papa is out of town.. koy meri baat nehi sun raha.. maii puri ki puriii chocolateless ho gayi hoon… *crying in footpath..
Awww.. sho shad.. dont wry.. I’ll give u chocolates
Loved it dear… Continue soon
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Woww awesome..continue soon