Hey friend this is gunjan here…..
And this is my new TS, and it has only two parts… okkkk guys…
I hope you like it very much…..
Character Sketch: –
Sanskar Maheshwari (27): – a lovable bhai and son… love his sister ragini alot… and very possessive about her…because after his father and mother death she is the only her for him….. And he does anything for her sister… And famous business tycoon… but hate love an love marriages… because his girlfriend ditch he because of money… so he hate love marriages and ragini know about his bhai
Ragini Maheshwari (22): – love his brother alot… And have an only best friend swara…. but after graduation she didn’t contact with her… but she is like her sister… love laksh but he is a south Indian boy… so ragini have a fear about his bhai reaction,,,,,,
Swara gadodiya (22): – a middle class girl….. She is not rich like her friend ragini… but very happy and bubbly girl…. she is so talkative….. She is very upset she comes to know that ragini is not doing Post graduate…. she is in M.com (2nd year) and very intelligent and brilliant student
Toshit Gadodiya (15): – Brother of swara… A very naughty boy… Always irritate swara,,,,(guys.. it’s my brother name… in my mind I have no name regarding swara brother, so I use my brother name)
Sekhar Gadodiya: – Father of swara and Toshit… a service man… are doing service in an MNC company….. And had a lovely family
Sharmistha Gadodiya: – Mother of swara and Toshit.. wife of sekhar and a house wife..
Story start with
There is farewell party is going on a college… all girls are wearing a sari in retro style and boys are wear pant and shit like hero’s of 1980’s… this is the theme of party…
Here a girl is standing in angry and making pout face and second girl convincing her
Girl2: – please swara please forgive me… I promise next time I don’t hide anything from you… but please listen to me once…(yes guys the girl which are angry is swara and other girl is ragini)
Swara: – no ragini…. this time I not forgave you…. this is the second time you hide big news from me
Ragini: – please shona sorry Na…… See if I tell u then you start your lecture… that’s why I’m not told you anything…
Swara: – ohhh that’s why…. so what I say are lecturing for you… you know Na… If your bhai have a doubt on you Na then you are dead… one thing you are in relation from one year and you don’t tell me…? Hide this thing from me… And second thing you know about your bhai very much… he didn’t accept that relation….. And laksh is south Indian… Your bhai kill you… understand this thing
Ragini: – with anger… that’s why I’m not telling you… you are like my bhai… Think about family and all & all… I’m fed up of this… I love laksh very much… he also love me… and bhai… after we getting marry bhai accept our relation and please don’t gave me lectures…..
Swara: – okkk…. so now onwards don’t you dare to contact me… okk… And after that not say to me that I don’t warn you okkk (feeling very bad…)
Ragini: – okkkk fine… bye……
That time sanskar came saw both swara and ragini……. swara goes from there… swara never talk with sanskar so she left from here… here sanskar take ragini with him to SM…
One week gone… swara miss ragini badly… She thought that one day ragini call her.. because mistake was her… she hid that the matter from her… and now broke their friendship with her…swara share all her feeling with her mom Sharmistha…. and she tell her to give some time to ragini that one day she understand you are right… swara nodes silently… and concentrate on her study… she took admission in best college of Kolkata in M.com…And engross herself in study….. Like this one year passed but ragini never calls her… she miss Ragini and all her time spend with her……
Other side in MM……….. ragini took admission in m.com in Mumbai….but there she is not happy because laksh is not there… but sanskar wants that ragini complete her PG from Mumbai…..and one year passes…. in her relationship she totally forget about swara… and never miss her a single time… she hardly talk with her bhai in two times in a week… sanskar thought that she is busy in study… But their ragini always busy in talk with laksh…..
Laksh told her to migrate herself from Mumbai to Kolkata…. she convinces sanskar and says to him that she miss him badly… cannot live with her…. so he convince…. and here she took migrate from Mumbai to Kolkata in M.com (2nd year) in that college where laksh is study… he doing MBA…
Sanskar did all arrangements to ragini… And ragini admission gets confirmed… when they both are in college… Here sanskar is hit with a girl and all the file in sanskar hand is fall down… he look towards the girl but didn’t saw her face because of her hair….. She collects all the paper, and when she gave to him… ragini came to him and call sanskar….. Suddenly ragini see towards the girls who have sanskar file page… and said: – Swara (yes this girl who hit sanskar is swara) … sanskar immediately look towards swara… he see her after one year, and mesmerised to see her beauty… she wearing a simple green colour chudidar… look like an angel.. But sanskar jerked his thought….
Swara see ragini and hug her in happiness….. But ragini is less interested in hug her… but in front sanskar… she hug her..
Swara: – ragini you here…. what are you doing here
Ragini: – wo I took admission in M.Com (2nd year)… You tell why you here..
Swara: – with happy…. really…. I’m very happy,,,, you got admission in my college and in my class.. Yehh we read in same class… I’m also in second year….
Ragini didn’t know that swara is also on that college…. because laksh didn’t see swara and also swara didn’t see laksh… so they both don’t know that she is here in that college..
Sanskar: – swara you take ragini with her with class…. and ragini… now I’m going…you got your best friend…. so I leave…okkk… enjoy your first day in college…
After sanskar leave ragini jerked her hand from swara… and say to her that: – leave my hand swara… you are no one to me… in front of bhai I hug you…. but you… maintain a distance from me.. Okkk… now get lost…
Swara is badly hurt with ragini behaviour…. she left from there to class and attend all class….. But ragini not came to class because she was with laksh…… at the end of college time… sanskar came…. ragini come towards her happily… and hug her…..
Ragini: – bhai I’m very happy… college was so nice
Sanskar: – I’m also happy to see you happy… okkk… Come let’s go to home…..
Ragini: – okkkk… when they about to go… sanskar see swara was standing on auto stand waiting for an auto,,,,
Sanskar goes towards her with car… and stop his car in front of her….. Swara get confuse seeing a car stand in front of her…..sanskar down the mirror of car and say to swara to come inside the car…they drop her to their home…..swara denied but sanskar is sanskar… at last swara gave up and sit in back seat of the car… ragini fumes in anger to see swara but not say anything to her in front of her brother…..
Sanskar ask swara about her address… she tells her address and sit quietly in the seat….. Sanskar saw towards swara with mirror……. swara found the gaze of sanskar on her so side her seat and now she behind the ragini seat….. Because ragini sit in the passenger seat,,,, so swara alone sit on the back seat…. swara home came…. sanskar stop the car… and swara thank sanskar to drop her home and goes from here…..
Two month pass….. Ragini never talked with swara,,,, swara say sorry to her for her behaviour on farewell party but she didn’t pay attention to it…..swara badly hurt with Ragini behaviour….
Here in MM,,, when he came home after office always found that ragini is talking on phone… but always ragini told lie to him that she talk with swara sanskar didn’t pay any attention ………
But one day… ragini was in washroom… sanskar came to her room for calling ragini for dinner… he didn’t find her…. but suddenly he hear sound from washroom… and was about to go… suddenly ragini phone vibrate… and a call came from ragini phone… sanskar thought that swara call her… he took ragini phone but he became angry to see the caller id that a boy is call ragini…. but soon compose himself that might be class friend,… but at that time he is calling…….. (And the boy WO calling ragini is laksh….)
Sanskar pick up the call and about to say some something but stop by listening laksh talk
Laksh: – hello jaan… I know that abhi abhi hmne baat ki h… so why I call suddenly… that I really miss you… love you ragini… you know you are looking very hot in yellow patiyala suit… hye…. meri to jaan hi nikal gyi…. but suddenly stop by hearing sanskar voice…
Sanskar: – you blo*dy … who the hell you are….. And what you say… and about to say when laksh cut the call
Ragini come out from washroom sanskar look towards her angrily…Ragini notice her phone in sanskar hand…and shake in fear…he ask about ragini who was he….first ragini didn’t tell but second time in fear she said that… He is laksh… she loves him very much….. sanskar take his hand in air about to slap her but stop…. he ask….you said that when I ask you that whom you talk then you say that you talk with swara… why you lie to me (in anger and dangerous tone…… ragini shaken with fear… she thought that if she tell truth to bhai kill laksh… so she again tall him lie) that swara says her that if sanskar ask to say him that you talk with me….. sanskar boiled with anger while listening this…
He never imagined that swara can do that… ragini also told her that… laksh is swara friend… she also gave me his number… and say to talk with him… sanskar say to ragini and say call laksh here right now… ragini smile with evilly and call laksh and laksh reach there… sanskar ask him that the swara force you to talk with ragini or not…. laksh look confused towards ragini….. Ragini signal to laksh which is not noticed by sanskar and nodes in yes…… sanskar in anger pick up the phone about to call someone when ragini stop him… she ask: – where you going to call bhai….
Sanskar: – swara’s father, I told every deed of swara to him…. ragini shock listen that and she fear if his bhai know truth… So it dangerous to her… he stop her bhai and tell that…bhai..What is going on her parent if uncle know about her… you know na… how small they are… if society know about swara so there respect will be on stake…. on the other I don’t talk with laksh… now you know the truth na… so I’m burden free… after so many excuse sanskar understand ragini and tell her that that time she is not going to call swara and not talk with her…to which ragini nodes… and look towards laksh say that if I saw you with ragini and behind my sister than I himself kill you.. Understand… laksh gulp in fear and leave from there…….
Sanskar come to his room and through all thing in his room to remember what swara done with her ragini: – my lado always considerd her as her sister,,, That’s why ragini stop me to call your parents…..but you swara you not done right with ragini….. You have to punish….
In ragini room: – in ragini room ragini is sitting on her bed… Thinking about her bhai: – now Today I control bhai… but I have to do something … I cannot live without laksh…. what I do… What I do…. she remind something close the door and call laksh and discuss their plan and sleep…..
Next morning………
Swara open her eyes when sunrays fall on her…. she goes to the window and look outside…. Suddenly her bhai come from behind and scared her…
Toshit: – Bhooooo…… hahahahaha (swara sacred and run behind toshi… while toshi laughing….) ye … shona dar gayi…
Swara: – toshi stop…… you I don’t leave you…..
Toshi… first catch me…. you fat girl
Swara: – stand shock and says… what you call me… fat girl… now see. And through cushion him… now both fight with cushion… and tired and sat on bed and laugh… swara laugh whole heartedly (don’t know about what happen to her future)
Sekhar: – toshi, swara now get ready fast…. we getting late…..
Both reply…. coming papa…
Sekhar: – swara first I drop toshi to school then I drop you college okkk… swara nodes and trio left…. sekhar drop toshi and goes towards swara college……. drop swara to college… here he see ragini with sanskar….
Sekhar: – shona you didn’t tell me that ragini is in your college..
Swara: – WO papa… I forget to tell you… okkk papa bye… class is about to start… and sekhar goes towards his company….
Swara going towards her class when someone pull her to a empty room and lock the door…. its none other than sanskar…
Swara: – who the h…. stop seeing sanskar… while sanskar saw towards her evilly…… sanskar reach her nearly and pin her to the wall… while swara scared seeing anger in sanskar eyes…. sanskar held swara wrist tightly… swara mourn in pain…
Swara: – ahhh… you hurting me… please leave me….. what are you doing….having tears in her eyes… sanskar smirk and lean towards her and whisper in her ear: – that nothing swara…. you have to bear much while saying this he kiss on her lip hard and left…. swara was in shock state… don’t know what happens to him…. she touch her lips and cry hardly.. While thinking sanskar kisses her… she composes herself and goes to her class…. she want to tell all thing to ragini but ragini was not there….
After one week……
Sanskar came Bari and enter in sekhar house in anger… sekhar and all family was eating breakfast…. swara was in kitchen to bring food… sanskar ask sekhar about swara… sekhar says… what happen sanskar beta…say further but stop by seeing police enter in his house…
Sekhar to inspector: – what happen inspector… why you all came here… and sanskar why you ask about swara…..
Inspector: – we have an arrest warrant against swara…because she help ragini to escape with laksh…. suddenly they all hear a vessel falling sound and this none other than swara…..
Sanskar: – goes towards swara and grab her arm and take her to the police…police arrest her… while sekhar and Sharmistha pleading him to leave swara… she done nothing… toshi stand there and tear are came through her eyes….. Seeing her sister…. swara pleading to police to leave her…. but no one listen her… and sanskar and police took her force fully to police station…
In police station….
Swara: – why don’t you listen to me… I don’t know any laksh… And ragini… I didn’t talk with her since last 1.5 years… please leave me…
Sanskar came and slap her….. Swara shockingly look towards sanskar…. inspector stop him and says to swara that you are lying… and I have a call record which show that yesterday evening you called ragini…. swara denied…..and says that she didn’t call ragini since last 1.5 year and please you also check my call record… after 15 minutes police check her all call record it clearly mention that swara didn’t talk with her… but it clearly shown that yesterday she called her
Swara say: – yesterday me and my bhai fighting for my hone… in that process mistakenly ragini number press… I say truth please believe me… police leave swara because he have no proof against her…. sanskar burning with anger…. and shout on inspect why he leave her he says: – we have no proof against her….
Sanskar: – ok… you do nothing…. I handle it by my situation………
In Bari….. Swara enter in her house… but everyone in the Bari bad mouth her for her character and say that who will marry such a girl… who help girl for escaping with boys… how ill manner she is……. suddenly someone came and grab swara hand and took her to the mandir in Bari and fill her mang with vermillion….. that’s all done in less time that swara and all didn’t understand what is happing… but after marriage she see towards person and shock to see that it none other than sanskar……sekhar and Sharmistha are shock to see….
Sekhar angrily goes towards sanskar… and look towards him angrily…. sekhar saw towards swara with teary eyes… and held her arm…. and take her inside but stop by seeing that sanskar grip on swara hand…. sanskar point out his gun on sekhar forehead and about to shoot him.. Swara come in front on sanskar to stop him….. Swara turn towards sekhar and says: – Papa please…. he is my husband now…. and sanskar please leave my papa and my family.. I’m ready to come with you…..
Sanskar took swara with her while Toshit come forward and hug her and cry… swara release the hug and say toshi to take care of papa and ma… toshi nodes with teary eyes and sanskar leave with swara to MM
In MM
Sanskar grab swara hand and drag her to his room and push her to the bed… swara gulp in fear and look towards swara…
Sanskar: – you know what swara… you didn’t do the right… for using my ragini… what you think you I leave you… no…… Now your punishment starts….
24 Comments
Wooooooo
Awesome
Ragini and laksh r doing wrong with swara
But why they r doing so????
Poor swara suffering for the mistake she didn’t commit…….. devil ragini………..
Ragini very bad coz of u swara has to suffer so much huhhh
awesome. waiting 4r nxt part…….when u post nxt part
What’s this yar first you didn’t complete your previous Ts and now you start this one please complete then both
I loved your TS but please yar complete them I m not taunting you I just said what I feel don’t mind plz and sorry if you feel hurt with my wordd
Yeah I am also waiting for ur preview ts plzzz post it.
Superb
ohhhh poor swara
post asap….
Fabulous….
Nce plzz next part soon
Nice
Awesome…..
nice..continue soon..
Hate dis ragini…???
Loved it… its so amazing… cnt w8 to read nxt part plz post it ASAP
Stupendously interesting
Wow loved it ❤️
Awesome..
Poor swara. Hate this ragini..
Dear, plz complete your previous ts…
Superb
Loved it dear…..
Waiting for update plz plz complete it
Swasan mu must be cleared soon
awesome 🙂
superb
Omg such a wonderful part…loved it dear…waitng fr nxt post soon
Fabulous dear…