Swara’s heart sank and sank but she didn’t want to lose and she knew God would be with her. She mustered all her courage and spoke..
SWARA- girls.. Why are you all so silent? Why aren’t you fighting back? Please say something.. It looks as if you all are dead..
A girl gave reply..
GIRL- yes.. We all are dead.. Though our bodies are there but our soul is log lost dead.. I am speaking , no one else will speak here… All are victims of this cruel world.. Fighting back.. You mean to say escaping from here (she gave a sarcastic laugh).. Nobody has been able to escape from this hell, whoever tried to , has escaped from this world.. The leader, raja kills him.. All these men are like robots to him.. Whatever he says they will do.. And same we are becoming like them and slowly you will also become one of us..
SWARA- no never.. What will one man can do to us? If all stay together then will the 1 man be able to overpower all of us.. Impossible..
GIRL- don’t keep your hopes so high.. May be they never get true..
SWARA- may be they get true..
GIRL- you have never faced the miseries, the real hell of this place that’s why you are so confident..
SWARA- but you have seen the problems here then why are you so diffident? You should try more hard to leave the place.. To be away from here.. To be safe from here.. I have a plan but I need your all’s help
GIRL- ok.. Even if you are right then who will assist you at your plan.. These girls who are not even talking to you..
SWARA grew mum.. The girl was right at her place.. The others were not even responding.. Her hopes were shattering but then there were given wings to fly.. All girls stood up and we’re giving their help to her..
GIRL2- we will help you.. You are right..
GIRL3 – yes …may be we can escape from here..
SWARA hesitantly yet with pleaful eyes looked at the first girl (the one who was replying to her)..
GIRL- if all are ok with this then I will also help..
The girls smiled , cheered nd shared a group hug..
Meanwhile, SANSKAAR reached asla mandi in disguise of a famous man who has come here to buy girls. He came to know that their leader is just now missing from the place and he would come little later. The men showed him the way where the girls were kept..
Don’t know why but suddenly sanskaar’s heartbeats started to plunge faster and faster.. He felt a strange sensation in him.. He didn’t knew why suddenly he was getting eager to see the girl’s face with a Krishna idol pendant.. He felt a strange attraction budding inside him.. He wanted to save every girl but this girl …….. Unknowingly, His mind grew more fervid to see her..
He silently gazed at every face in the cell where the goons took him.. Meanwhile, SWARA was explaining her strategy to all the girls.. SANSKAAR reached SWARA’S cell but her back was facing him.. Sanskaar looked at all the girl’s neck but he didn’t find any of then wearing a pendant.. He looked at SWARA from back and the piercing attraction grew wider and wider and he mouthed some words which made himself shocked..
SANSKAAR- I want her..
SWARA listening to the voice turned to face him.. SHE was shocked to see him.. Tears dropped from her eyes..
SWARA(monologue)- chii.. I thought, he is a very good man.. An honest officer but no, he is also same like others.. He is a womaniser and look he has come here to …….. Chii…
SANSKAAR was mesmerised to see her and then noticed the pendant in her neck..
SANSKAAR(monologue)- She is so pretty.. Selfless and kind hearted … She didn’t care for herself and saved those girls and now she is trapped here.. Her inner beauty is being reflected at her face making her look different from others here .. Her dark eyes are so soothing which could calm anyone but wait, why is she crying.. why is she crying?? O fish SANSKAAR.. What did you say?? Arghh.. What must she be thinking about me?? Koi baat NAHI.. I’ll talk to her now..
SANSKAAR (to the man)- I’ll pay the amount but I need a room here.. Get me now..
SWARA looked at him in disbelief.. She couldn’t believe her ears.. She couldn’t believe her eyes that this is the same man whom she admired and unexpectedly even loved before.. (:p.. Heheh.. Shocked na.. SWARA loves sanskaar par kaise, Kahan, read further.. Ho sakta hai pata chal jaye)
Some men dragged her to the room and after few minutes, sanskaar came in..
SWARA- look.. I am saying stay away from me..
SANSKAAR- listen..
SWARA- don’t try to come close to me..
SANSKAAR (advancing his steps towards her)- listen to me ..
SWARA – I am saying stay away from me…
SANSKAAR was irritated by her for not listening to him.. Her constant shouts would evoke attention towards them and he knew he wouldn’t be able to save any one of them so he rushed towards her and pinned her arms with his one hand and with another closed her mouth..
SANSKAAR- PLS listen to me and stop shouting… (Swara furrowed her burrows).. I am SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI.. I am a raw Agent and I have gone undercover to save you all and stop this racket.. Please don’t shout and cooperate .. I really need your help.. Will you help me?
He again asked and SWARA signaled him to remove his hand..
SANSKAAR- o.. M sorry..
SWARA- I know who you are .. I am really sorry.. I thought………
SWARA was really happy that her love was not what she thought.. But she was guilty for misunderstanding him and his good deeds.
SANSKAAR- it’s ok .. I understand.. Anyone will actually think that only.. Your name?
SWARA- SWARA.. SWARA gadodia.. How can I help you?
SANSKAAR- I have a plan.. First of all, we need to take out all the girls from that cell.. For That we need to distract the guards.. Then slowly we will take them to exit way and from there, our force will handle..
SWARA- but how will you distract the guards..
SANSKAAR- that only I am thinking..
SWARA- that I can do..
SANSKAAR- how ?
SWARA shared her plan but SANSKAAR wasn’t permitting her to do so.. But after many attempts of SWARA, though not heartedly but sanskaar allowed her.. Suddenly, they heard the clicking of the Door knob and in fraction of seconds, SANSKAAR pulled SWARA over him and kissed her.. SWARA was shocked by his actions but then noticed the man peeping from the Door and she immediately knew why he did this..
SANSKAAR- did the man go?
SWARA- yes he went..
SANSKAAR- I am sorry.. Wo
SWARA (chuckling)- This time I understand.. So no sorry.. Are you ready for the plan? (He nodded). Don’t take tension.. We will do it..
SANSKAAR- hmm .. You pull over the veil..
SANSKAAR stared at SWARA.. He placed his hand over his lips.. He could feel her flavour.. So sweet .. So enticing..
SANSKAAR- SWARA.. You said you know me from before .. How do you know me??
SWARA- umm.. I’ll tell you.. Actually …………
#PRECAP- SANSKAAR : I love you SWARA ; SWARA- I love you too SANSKAAR and then B.O.O.M and blast..
What is this? Boom and blast??¿¿.. Guess guess.. Right guess would get a virtual chocolate ??????
I know this one was too a lot boring because I am in not a mood to write and when I have no good mood to write, I really write junk.. So please, a big sorry.. Really sorry
41 Comments
Awesome…. Please update next one soon
Thank u dear.. I’ll see if I can post today.. If not I’ll write a little part today and next tomorrow, I will post
mind blowing
tysm tani.. ??
Mindblowing awesome ?????
Thank u hina..
Just amazing dr ????
Again thank u hina..
Interesting
Tq tani.. ??
nice
Thank u s
No soory u write very well.
Aww… Tysm..
Superb part anu. Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.
I will try to post the next chapter soon.. ???
it was superrb di…
plzz dont call it junk… we can feel tht it requires a lot of hard work..
Glad that you liked it.. Ok chotu.. Look I have sealed my mouth.. No calling it junk
Nice superb
Thaxx priya.. ??
Aww Gosh..Awsum ..Precap is damn awsum..continue soon
Thank you a lot.. I’ll try to post the next chapter today
Nice chapter n concept update next one soon
Sure dear.. Will try to post soon.. ☺️☺️
awesome..!! May be laksh came with police force..!!
Thank u .. No no .. Laksh isn’t involved in the blasts
nice update soon
K dear.. ??
Mind blowing Di…Waiting for next part…Sorry for short comment…Reason you know
I’ll try to post soon and I know the reason.. I don’t mind at all.. Seriously.. Important is that you are there at least with a small comment..
First of all i went out of town for 2 days.so much has happend.. thnk u for writing twi shot dr.. and i saw ur reply nd one prsn commenting in ur ss nd new ts and came here for reading… new concept is happening in this world nd as u said in india.. i live animals nd i wanted to becom IFS officer becoz of animal trafficking and to protect them. Bt never thought of human trafficking so deep bt nw i feel ashamed bcoz i hav thought abt this thing bt never took it so deep.After 1st 2nd part i felt y is this world so cruel nd y are mens behaving like this( not all men). Ur really suprb dr.. wt an ts!!! U amazed me.. awesome tremendous lovly ts.. swara d brave lioness.. ok i hv no idea how both knw eachother.. may b swara is a cop/journalist..
luv dr.. tc nd ur frnds are really awesom nd true caring.. i read their comments in part 1.. 😀 😀 😀
Bubye tc no stress..
Wil b expecting reply nd a wide open teeth smile..
My cheeks are paining.. You know why because I am continuously giving such big smile.. You are so spectators yaar.. I don’t have appreciatable words to describe you .. You are such damn awesome navi.. And you don’t need to be feel ashamed.. It tells so much good and kind you are.. We being humans are supposed to be depended on us.. We are much much much capable of being able to save us but those poor creatures cannot fight for themselves.. Your thoughts show how good you are.. I could never think like you.. And about human trafficking.. It’s such a vast vast topic such a big social backwardness in India which can’t be discussed.. It’s a black hole in the fait name of humanity.. I don’t know what led me to write on this topic but When prakriti said . Ijust wanted to and I did and I am happy that I did..
SWARA is neither a cop not a journalist.. And my friends they are too good.. But they are you know overprotective towards me .. Kahte hai ki if they will not feed me I will suffer malnutrition.. Lol..
Arey if ur bro nd parents wil like u nd be happy if they watch u crying?? Stupid dont cry.. i cn undrstnd ur situation.away frm home wil make us more strong dr.. so u take this us experience.. u should not cry. Ok dr then i wil feel bad dat my frnd is away frm home nd she is homesick 🙁 :'( :'(
I will sing u song…
soft kitty cute kitty lil ball of fur ……..
happy kitty sleep kitty
purr purr…
sleep nd dnt worry my dr anu..
i wrote long para msg.. beyond max wrds.. i got irritated.. so posted here.. remaining msg visit private msg..
Oh my dr stop smiling… dhn im not grt mahaan so dont need of appreciation…. finally im eager to knw d nxt part of ss nd ts…
bye tc ..
hav nice day..
throat pain – mix 1 teaspoon ginger and pepper powder in honey.hav ot twice day. Say bubye to sore throat..
I am crying more because they made me drink kadha na .. It’s so bitter (read my private message).. I am missing Di but I won’t cry.. I need to adjust.. This experience would help me..
You are very nice and great too.. Love you and I’ll try the remedy.. Pls get well soon my throat..
Amazing dear…both da part ws awesome…loved it…..post nat part soon..
Sure.. I’ll just post in an hour.. The next chapter
ahahaha… even if there wasn’t a man peeping them, sanskar still want to kiss her, rite ?
yeah, it’s golden opportunity sanskar !
luv it Anu…
Lol mica.. ??? amazing joke.. But don’t say anything to Sanskaar… Like his name he is very SANSKAARI.. Vaise lage rahi SANSKAAR.. Lage raho.. ??..
Awesome dear
Thank u di