I hope you all remember this ff.
PART 6…
Parineeta goes towards swara. Swara sees her.
Swara: Welcome Mrs Maheshwari. I hope you are comfortable.
Parineeta: Thank you. By the way, I must say you guys used that money very efficiently. I mean you bult a new business and then this mansion.
Swara: First of all, this mansion and business is my hard work. I am not like you who uses other’s hard work money.
Parineeta feels insulted.
Swara: Excuse me.
Saying this swara goes away.
Parineeta (monologue): You will definitely pay for this swara.
Just then arnav comes on the stage.
Arnav: Ladies and gentleman, thank you so much for coming to this party. This party for the success of my little sister. This is a celebration. So please enjoy and serve yourselves.
Maheshwari get shocked as they didn’t know that arnav is swara’s brother.
Arnav comes down the stage.
Swara: Bhai what was the need saying all that.
Arnav: What? That was all true.
Swara: First you organised this party without asking my permission and then now this.
Arnav (sadly): Why can’t I do this for my sister.
Swara hugs arnav and says, “Sorry woh actually, I am not used to this so.”
Arnav smiles and says, “I promise that from next time I will tell you.”
Swara: No bhai, you are elder than me. You have that right so you don’t have to take permission. Just order me.”
Arnav: Ok my chotu. Acha I have to go and meet other business associates. And han, ignore those people (signing towards maheshwaris)
Swara smiles and arnav goes away. Just then ragini comes.
Ragini: Swara.
Swara gets emotional seeing her but composes her self, “Yes”
Ragini: How are you?
Swara chuckles hearing that as after 3 years her sister is remembering her.
Swara: hmm…what do you think that I will be alright after what happened 3 years ago?
Ragini: But swara, it was sanskar’s mistake. He..
Swara (sternly): Sanskar was not at fault. I am warning you ragini, you can accuse me as much as you want I won’t mind. But don’t dare to say anything about my sanskar. Sanskar was and is innocent.
Just then ayush comes running.
Ayush: Didi, didi
Swara sees him and a cute smile appears on her face. She takes ayush in his arms.
Ayush (Cutely): Didi, ma shaid that you came firshth in youl wok (you came first in your work). So, I bought chocolates for you to celebrate.
Saying this forwards eclairs chocolates (yummy, my favourite).
Swara smiles seeing his brother’s cuteness and also remembers the time when she sanskar used to celebrate by sharing these chocolates.
Ragini: Chotu. Swara is this our chotu.
Swara: He is my chotu… not yours.
She then puts ayush down.
Swara: Chotu, you go to ma.
Ayush nods and goes away.
Ragini: Swara, he…
Swara: I think you forgot but let me remind you, you broke relations with me and your father also broke relations with me and ma. If there is no relation between us then chotu is not related to you.
Saying this she goes away. Ragini kept looking at the retreating figure of swara.
Rp to sujata, “Sujata, I am going to my room.”
Sujata: Ji, are you okay?
Rp sighs, “It’s just that the day comes in front of my eyes and when my sanskar was accused by bhaisa and bhabhisa. I want some time alone for my self.
Sujata: Ji don’t worry, everything will be okay.
Ram goes away.
Swara was standing in a corner and drinking water just then she hears a voice which she never wanted to hear.
A manly voice says, “congratulations Mrs Swara Sanskar.”
Swara puts the glass on the table beside her and turns around and sees a man with an evil smirk and lustful gaze.
Swara (professionally): Thank you Mr, Khanna.
The man is Ashok Khanna, who is behind swara.
Ashok: By the way, I must say, you are looking divine.
Swara gets angry but controls herself. She starts to go but ashok again says something.
Ashok: Waise, my deal is still on.
Swara stops and turns around.
Ashok: Till when will you wait for your husband. I am still giving you a chance. You can come to me. I will give you everything which your lifeless husband can’t give. I will satisfy…
Just then swara slaps him tightly and its echo could be heard in the whole hall. Everyone turns around and sees swara looking at ashok angrily while ashok has his hand on his cheek.
Swara (shouts): Don’t you dare say that Mr Khanna. I am can wait for whole damn life for my husband because he is my life, my world my everything. No one can take his place in my heart and my life, not just in this birth but in every birth.
Swasan’s room.
Sanskar’s POV: 3 years, 3 damn years I am lying on this bed, lifelessly. I am feeling so helpless. My mom, dad and sister. They cry seeing me in this condition and I can’t do anything. I should be taking care of my parents but my parents have to take care of me at this age. And my swara. She is suffering so much without me. She can’t live without me for a minute but she lived for 3 years in a hope that I will wake up. Every day I feel her pain, her sadness. I always try to move my body but I can’t. I want to hug her, wipe her tears and soothe her pain but I can’t. Why God Why? Why did you make me so helpless? She is bearing so much. Please give me strength god. I can’t see my life suffering like this. Don’t know but why I am feeling very restless today. I feel as if my swara is in some danger.
Third person’s pov…
In hall…
Ashok: This slap will cost you a lot
Saying this he goes away angrily. Parineeta smirks and signs to a group of ladies.
Lady1: Why did she slap such a big businessman?
Lady2: You don’t know, her husband does not live with her. She meets with so many men every day. I heard that she gains the attention of rich businessman by wearing cheap clothes.
Lady1: True, maybe she was seducing that ashok khanna. He didn’t respond so she slapped him
Lady3: Such a characterless girl she is. Her husband might be feeling ashamed. I think due to her character her husband is not with her.
Swara started to get weak. She couldn’t stop the tears from flowing. She only wanted sanskar that time.
Just then they hear a shout: ENOUGH!
At the same time, Rp though to check on sanskar once. He went into swasan’s room but he saw something which made him shocked. He saw sanskar, moving his fingers. Rp ran and sat on the bed. He tapped sanskar’s cheek
Rp: Sanskar….beta, sanskar.
Sanskar groans a little due to weakness in his body.
Rp (monologue): Hey bhagwan, is sanskar out of coma? I hope he is because he is responding.
Rp rubs sanskar’s hand and says, “Sanskar, I am your dad. Sanskar can you hear me.”
Sanskar slowly opens his eyes, at first his vision was blurred. He blinked few times, making his vision clear. He sees his father sitting with moist eyes
Rp (teary eyes): Sanskar, my son. You…you woke up. You are out of the coma.
Sanskar (faint voice): D…a…d
Rp: Sanskar, you don’t how happy I am? Everyone was waiting for this day only. Beta are you okay.
Rp helps sanskar to sit and then he hugs him tightly. Sanskar reciprocates to the hug. Sanskar feels his shoulders getting wet.
Sanskar (faintly): D..ad, stop crying. O…h god, I didn’t know that you are a crybaby.
Rp broke the hug and was going to say something but just then they hear someone shouting, “enough”
Hall…
It was khushi who shouted.
Khushi: Don’t you dare say anything about swara. What you all ladies know han. Just blabbering rubbish. If you daughter would be in her place, would you have said the say same thing.
Shomi and sujata were supporting swara by holding her shoulders.
Arnav (sternly and angrily): How can you even point finger at her character? She is pure like ganga. She is a pure soul who loves her husband immensely.
The ladies get scared of his voice. But parineeta, who just wanted swara insult.
Parineeta: really, where is sanskar? how come we didn’t see him for 3 years?
Parineeta attacked swara’s weak point that is where is sanskar. In these 3 years swara never let the outer world know about sanskar. Only a few close people knew about sanskar. Even maheshwaris didn’t know that sanskar is in coma.
Just the hear a voice which shocked everyone, specially swara.
Voice: I am here parineeta BHABHI (emphasises on it)
Swara’s POV: I couldn’t listen further and I slapped Mr Khanna. How can he say to me to leave my sanskar? The love, the warmth that my sanskar gives, no one can give me. I am only of sanskar for all the births. He is my world. He is my everything. Mr Khanna went away angrily. I didn’t care about him. Just then ladies started to point fingers at my character, my weakest point. They were pointing at my love for sanskar. Why god? Why always me? I only needed sanskar that time. And bhabhi, she also started accusing me. She attacked on my weak point that is where is sanskar. No one knows that sanskar is in coma because I know that if this world gets to know then they will take advantage. I was getting weaker and weaker. I wanted to die that moment. I can’t tolerate the pain any more. I was totally broken now. Just then I heard a voice, which shocked me to the core. The voice which I wanted to hear and for which I craved for three years. I slowly turned around and saw him standing with the support of papa. He..he..was there…standing….infront of me. He is awake. I couldn’t believe my eyes. My sanskar is out of coma. He was back. Aisa maano jaise mera rab mujhe mil gaya. I forgot all those accusations because when sanskar is around me, I forget all the sorrows and pain. I couldn’t describe my emotions.
Third person POV.
(Yes the person was sanskar)
Whole family was happy to see sanskar. Swara was just staring him with teary eyes. Sanskar slowly desceneded the stairs while swara’s eyes were following him. Sanskar looked at swara emotionally and lovingly. They shared an emotional eyelock. Sanskar slowly walked and stood between parineeta and swara, as if protecting swara.
Sanskar: What happened bhabhi? Shocked. (shouts) Ladies and gentleman, I am swara’s husband, I was in coma for 3 years (dangerous tone) now who dares to point at my wife’s character?
Ragini (monologue): Does it means that whatever swara said 3 years ago was correct. Sanskar really met with an accident.
Adarsh and parineeta were shivering and sweating.
Arnav: Party is over, you all can go now.
All guests went away except maheshwaris. They were shocked to listen that sanskar was in coma, except adarsh and parineeta.
Dida: Didn’t you guys hear, party is over so all GUESTS can go now.
Maheshwaris didn’t want to create any drama, therefore, went away.
Swara was only staring sanskar with teary eyes, still trying to believe that it’s true, trying to believe that it’s not a dream which will break soon.
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