Swasan : Two States Love Chapter 1 (family bonding + a couple meeting)
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guys this is my very first fan fiction and its my first try and today I’m not sure its good or not so I have given a small update and guys if you Don’t like please give suggestions and i have seen many fan fictions they are so good compare too mine.. and everyone please tell me should i only keep swasan romance or raglak and swasan romance..
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GUYS THE NEW ENTRIES ARE KAVITA – CUPID OF SWASAN
RIYA – CUPID FOR RAGLAK
SARIKA – CUPID FOR VIUTT
THEY ALL WILL ACT EVIL BUT THEY WILL ACT AS CUPIDS AS I DON’T WANT NEGATIVITY…
KAVITA – NNIKITA SHARMA
RIYA – ROOP DURGAPAL
SARIKA – KAACHI SINGH
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BEST FRIENDS OF SWASANRAGLAK:
SANSKAAR:
KARAN – SIDANT GUPTA
TWINKLE – JASMINE BHASIN
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SWARA FRIENDS
MEERA – TANYA SHARMA
SHIVANYA – MOUNI ROY
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RAGINI
PRITI – EKTA KAUL
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LAKSH
ABHI PRAGYA
BIHAAN THAPKI
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Guyzz I know this is a late update but I have exams and I only have free time during holidays so without wasting time lets start and my ff will be in English more than hindi..
It is a bright morning in kapoor mansion until..
Priya – swara, laksh wake up you guys are getting late and making me late..
Parineeta – bhabi let them sleep
Priya – no pari kafi chada diya unko (we pamper them too much)
Pakineeta – kk bhabi
Swara’s Room
Vihaan – swara kumkaran wake otherwise you’ll be dead by chichi
Swara – vihu let me sleep yaar
Vihaan get a evil idea and he smirks so he gets a bucket of water a pours on swara and says oops by mistakenly I did it… funny tune plays
Laksh room
Swara – bhai get up otherwise you’ll die by vihu
Laksh – what the hell swara let me sleep
Swara (in mind)- my sleep was disturbed and he is sleeping peacefully this will never happen
She takes hot tea and puts laksh hand in it.. laksh wakes up and starts running behind swara meanwhile raj and Priya come and stop them and after some family they had breakfast and left.. Vihaan for collage
Laksh ,Vihaan ,raj, adharsh for office and parineeta and Priya for fashion house … swara was left at home so she opened her friendsbook she kept her cute angel with a cute Barbie
Maheshwari mansion..
Everyone wakes up early in the morning and pray then they sit in dining table and discuss about business and the ladies stay mum..
Dp – so sankar and rp should we accept the deals from singhania
Sanskar – bade papa I think we should accept it
Rp – ya bhaisa but I think that kapoors are more financialy supported and they make really good deals
Dp – ya ram ur right but they are Punjabis and we are marwadis so.
Rp and sanskar don’t understand but they nod in yes as they know his anger
While leaving ragini and uttra touch feet of the elders as it is the respect and dp warn them to stay away from other culture boys.. they nod in yes they hug the ladies and go…
IN RAGLAK COLLEGE
Laksh and his gang abhi,pragya,bihaan and thapki and sitting and chit chatting when ragini passes by in blue anarkali (the one she wears in serial now days) lakshs friends see her and give a bet to laksh to flirt with her so laksh go and says
Laksh: hey beautiful.. wanna come over..
Ragini gives a disgust look and says – excude me I’m getting late leave me
Laksh – block her and says kiss me and leans towards her (he is really sanskaari he is only leaning and not kissing)
Ragini – gets angry and punches him and runs and says don’t repeat it or else youll be blacken
Laksh friends stay in shock and laksh gets angry and leaves to washroom and says miss you are going to pay for this.. “REVENGE STARTS” and leaves for office as he is a business man also…
ARTS AND SCIENCE COLLEGE
In a dark room we see Vihaan sitting a humming then a girl enters.
Vihaan – any information about sanskaar maheshwari
Girl – yes sir but not enough
Vihaan – what I gave you time already but you took enough I wat revenge from him what he did with my past (he stops) he will pay for it
Girl – but sir his sister is joining this collage so
Vihaan – wow awesome new youll be paide
Vihaan smirls and says get ready Mr maheshwari for ur destruction..
(GUYS THERE IS A LONG STORY BEHIND HIS BEHAVIOUR HE IS NOT BAD BUT BECAUSE OF PAST HE IS ACTIG LIKE THIS
PRECAP – SWASAN FIRST MEETING, KAPOORS AND MAHESHWARI MERGING UP PARTY..
Guys so I am done with my first part I know its not so good so please suggest ideas I also gave promo and sorry for no swasan next part is half swasan so keep reading and my next update is on 10 april 2016 and sorry for short update…. And guys I am not so good at hindi as I live in america so mostly there will be only English so guys please comment if you want hindi too I’ll try my best to put hindi too… next part will have new entry as evil cupid…
Vihaan is yuvi from tashan e ishq
10 Comments
Very nice plzz cintinue
Thanks bresh… 🙂
Awresome yaar…swara laksh .. Keep good bonding between them…waiting for next part swasan meeting.
Thank you Anusha , swasan meeting would be a bit arrogant.. 🙂
Nice dear…
thanks..
Awesome yaar plzzz keep both swasan nd raglak plzzzzzz nd try to make some negative character it will make them stronger
thanks and sure i will keep a negative player…..
thsnk for the suggestion.. 😉