First of thank u to all of u fr the great response on my os……. I m nt mentioning any one because i don’t want to miss anyone….. But really thank u so much……….nw let’s go to the shot ……..it is a small one guys…….
As u all knw sanlakrag has decided something…….as they have planned next day Maheswaris reach gaddodia mansion to talk about swasan
Shekhar- welcome dp ji….welcome
Shekhar nd dp hugs each other…… Sanskar came nd takes blessings from mr.nd mrs.gaddodia…..
Ap- sumi….where is swara….
Sumi- she is in her room….i will call her
Sumi ask Ragini to bring swara…….swara comes nd takes blessings from dp,ap nd sujata nd sits beside ap
Dp- shekhar we have come here to talk about their marriage…. Sanskar is rready……nd i knw swara also likes sanskar ……m i right shekhar
Shekar- yesss …..yesss
Swara gets shocked by hearing about ” their marriage ” on the other hand sanlakrag were smiling seeing swara……because she is seeing everyone with wide open eyes….nd open mouth…..
Sumi- sanskar….. Why r u standing there?? Come sit with swara ….don’t be shy
Sanskar- no…no aunty…i m okkk
Sumi- call me maaa….nd its nt okkk….come…
Sanskar like a good boy goes nd sits with swara…..nd….closes her mouth by saying” close ur mouth jjaan, here r many fly……
Swara gets shocked by sanskars behavior nd open her eyes more widely which brings a big smile On sanskar face………
Dp- pandit ji…..we can’t wait ….please tell us a good mauhrat
Pandit- there is a very good maurat of marriage after one month….
Shekar- nd engagement…
Pandit ji- after 2 days….
Swara Shout’s in shock- what 2 days.. .
Sumi- swara…..what happen ahy r u shouting
swara- nothing mom( nd sits back)
Sumi- congrats ap ji
Ap- u to sumi ji
Swara in shock nd anger went to her room.. Sanlakrag were enjoying her state( hwww hw bad they r)
Ragini- I should go nd check her( nd goes fr there)
Ragini goes to swara’s room nd sees our angry swara is walking here nd there in the room……..throwing everything…… Murmuring something….
Swara- what is this…..kya haal bana diya hai tumne kamre ka( what u have done with this room) nd why u come here….ur in laws r going come with me…
Swara-( holds ragini)ragu,what is this how he can marry me?
Ragini-(iinterrupts) why ?? Why he can’t marry u???
Swara- he can marry me…..but….i can’t
Ragini- okkk….why u can’t marry him
Swara( innocently) dream boy
Ragini-( irritated) swara. …enough of this dream boy…….sanskar is a nice boy….forgot about this dream boy…
Swara- ( teasingly) ragu……sanskar is a nice boy
Ragini- yesss
Swara- okkk……( nd runs from there shouting mom…mom)
Ragini- swara….wait…. What hhappen
Swara- ( teasingly) ragu…u like sanskar na..,..
Ragini- yesss…..he is a gentleman
Swara- yess gentleman ( while making faces) ragu( teasingly) i m going to tell ma u like sanskar….. So….that she can fix ur marriage with him
Ragini- what…..swara..wait….i will kill u today
swara is running …….behind him Ragini is running nd bang….swara bumped with someone….. She was about to fall when two small arms held him………swara has closed her eyes due to fear……but ghe person who was holding him…….continuously keep staring him lovingly…… Swara open her eyes nd sees sanskar was holding him from waist….tightly…. They share a cute lovely eye lock which is disturbed by ragini( kabbab mein haddi)
Ragini- ahem….ahem……what u both r doing
Swasan compose themselves
Sanskar- woh…..bade papa forgots his phone…..i just came to take it…..
Ragini- swara…..r u okkk!!!
Swara who was standing besides sanskar…… Bending her eyes down- yess ragu….i stumbled…… Sanskar save me from falling
Ragini- okkkkk……but now u can leave ssanskar’s hand
Swara held sanskar’s hand when she was falling……swara immediately leave his hand
Sanskar smiles at him…..nd bids bye to them
SSwara- sanskar… Wait…i have to talk to u
Ragini-( teasingly) swara……let him go na…..tum baad mein bhi romance kar sakti ho
Swara gave him a death glare nd takes sanskar to the garden…… Nd glares him angrily
Sanskar- what???why r u looking at me like this
SSwara- u don’t knw……why u say yes fr this marriage???
Sanskar- hmmmm…….look
Swara-( interrupt’s) no….first listen to me… .i rejected u….nd…u…u accept me….why….look i m nt interested in u…….what u want haan….why r u doing this marriage????…..i knw i m beautiful………intelligent….. So…..
Sanskar-( interrupt him) look miss swara gaddodia…i m nt interested in uu…..i don’t want anything. ……..my parents likes u…..they want this marriage…. Nd i can’t hurt them………
So let me clear u…..i don’t like u….i m nt interested in u……..i don’t want to marry u……..what u think u r……..look at urself…….u r nt so beautiful…… What u think urself…..angle…..huuuu….u looks like a lizard……
Sanskar goes from there……. Swara gets shocked by his answer
swara-( in anger) hw dare he. …..he is nt interested in me…….he don’t like swara gaddodia……he dumbo…..call me lizard…. How can he…..jis ladki ke piche pura college para tha use isne lizard bola………nw see mr.sanskar maheswari……u will see real me
Recap- swara’s bold avtar…….
A small msg to all of u regarding my os….
Thank u to all u…..who liked it nd supported me………nd thank u to all of them also…..who didn’t liked it…..fr telling me ur views about it……………
Nw main thing. ……..someone has said hw a girl can be so characterless to love her own rapist……….
Its true no one can love her rapist……but it is true….yes it is true…. ….i will tell u hw but first of let me clear….. Swara never forgive him………usne bus uska pure heart dekha…..usne dekha ki usne yeh mistake apne senses mein nahi ki thi uski mistake maafi ke layak nahi hai …..par uski yeh mistake usse characterless nahi bana deti…………
Nw someone has also said………maine rape victim ka mazak bana diya…….no….maine nahi banaya……bana bhi nahi sakti………
U all has said…..i can’t understand how a rape victim feels……..i can feel it…..why…..tell u later…….
But before it….i just want to say i dont feel bad after reading ur comments….. I m nt hurt if u don’t like the story…….i m hurt…because hw can u say that…… maine rape victim ka mazak bana diya……..mein ek ladki ho kar aisa kaise kar sakti huin……apne bolne se pehle socha……….it hurts me most……
Hw can u say that its nt true…..a girl can’t marry her rapist……fr ur kind information a girl can marry a rapist according to law…..if here is a lawyer she can tell u…….if nt then take this small information………….. According to our law…….
Ek rrapist……agar…uski pehli mistake…… Ho ya…….usne mistake unintentionally ki ho toh use saza ke taur par do choices di jati hai…..first…..jail fine nd death…….second he have to marry that girl…………
Bt its nt the topic…….the topic is…..is it true or not…….its true…….huuuu……..my frnd married to his rapist……nw please don’t start…. Bashing my frnd i can’t tolerate it………..u all r saying i don’t know hw a rape victim feel…..i feel it the most….. i have seen her crying……i have seen her wounds….when she screams at night……when someone touches him how she scream i knw…………
She was rapped…. Only her parents nd few people knws about this……my parents don’t knw about this…….
she doesn’t fell fr my jiju…..i say him jiju nd proudly…… Why…..kunki woh sudhar gaye unhone mistake unintentionally……drunken state mein…..apne frnds ke baaton mein aakar ki but he rectify it……he come to my frnds house nd tell everything to her parents…… He was ready to go jail also…….but after seeing him….my frnds parents decided to end this matter ………they don’t forgive him………my frnd nd her parents took 6 month’s…….to knw him……to knw his goodness……….. Nd then they decided to marry both of them….
My frnd never forgive him fr his deeds……..but accepted hhim as his husband…….. Nw she has forgiven him……u all must be thinking why…..because nw they r blessed with a 1 year old cute princess…….. When she was born my jiju was crying bitterly………woh bus yahi keh rahe they maine kitna galat kiya iska ahsaas apni beti ko god mein lekar ho raha hai…….agar iske saath aisa kuch ho toh main mar jaunga…….unhone meri frnd ke parents se fir se maafi mangi……..
Ap logo mein se koi rapist se mila hai nahi na …..main mili huin…..milti huin….apne jijj se…..unke ghar jati huin…..unse miti huin….
SSocho mujhe kaisa lagta hoga yeh jante huye yeh wahi insaan hai jisne meri frnd ka rape kiya……dar lagta tha pehle…..kahi yeh mere saath kuch kar na de…..par dheere dheere samajh mein aa gya……..he is nt bad the situation was bad……..
Yeh toh ek example hai i can give thousands……… I m a researchers by hobby nt by profession……….school time se different topics par research karti huin …….after this incident…….i feel so restless…..why my frnd nd her parents frgive him……maine rape cases aur rapist par research ki apne bhaiya ke saath milkar…..after lots of research mujhe pata chala….50% cases mein rapist crime unintentionally karte hai……..unki situation unhe criminal…. Rapist banati hai….they r nt born criminal…………jab hamara law unhe maaf kar sakta hai toh swara kyun nahi……….
Maine toh os isi concept se likha ttha……..that a criminal also deserve a chance to rectify his mistake………i just want to say this……..
Rabia apii…main aapko farewell gift dena chahti thi….bt i just….. Look i ruined it……mere ek bhaiya they wo hamesha mujhse kehte the social or religious topic par kabhi baat mat karna……they will hurt u back……mein unki yeh baat bhul gayi thi…………
I m sry fr all this…………ignore this msg…………
30 Comments
nice
Thank u
Dear i am proud of u the message and the os amazing
When i read it i was in dilemma ki what should i say but after reading your this msg i am soo proud of u
Stay blessed dear
Thank u Simin diiii…….ur comment means a lot fr me….
Awesome chappy dear…
Hey..Don’t feel bad for those yaar..It was a nice story..
Love ur writing..Go on with ur thoughts and write..
Thank u Dharshini…….I m not feeling bad☺☺
Dear I don’t have any problem regarding your os that was good enough
If people are so much value then think about those girl who love the boys and they leave them after using them
Main concept is like all boys are not same similarly all girls are not same
Yesss u right….swasan…..
I want to say that no one can fall love with rapist but rectifying any mistake is a good thing you showed the same thing through your story
Thank u tejasvi…☺☺
Hey don’t fees like that ur previous os comments……I like ur story seriously……..if some except mistake it’s good….I like ur story plz again write also
I m nt feeling bad…thank u
Awesomee epii aliyaaa andd giving info to others is not named as ruining of the storyy.. sooo relax u gave infoo and its the best info especially for those u didnt knew about it ???? and im proud of u that u say evryting after having the complete info ???
Than k u apiiii…..u knw i was giving this msg on that day…..bt because of my laziness it gets late.
U gave its more thn enough sweety ??
Awesome…?
Thanks soujanya……
nice..
Thank u
Superb…!! Seems like sanskar is following reverse route…to make her come into his route…!! waiting for next part…!!
Coming to Os…I till now didn’t know…it was you…!! It’s your first os…and you did a great job…!! When you write such things…you should also prepare yourself for mixed reviews dude…!! Don’t get hurt buddy…!! It’s just they expressed their opinions…!! May you could have given a little bit more good detailed descriptions of sanskar…to make overall os good…!! When I read it..even I felt like what was that…!! But I felt it ok…because it’s just an os…and there are many stories where characters are grey too…!!
You know what…negitive comments may hurt…but it was those comments only which helps you improve more…!! You will try to justify and convince them…with your opinions…!! Next time…you will try to rectify the mistakes you have done… write more better in order to impress them…!!
I am pretty sure…next time when you write such ff/os…you will give a great performance…learning from those comments…!!
All the best dude…!! Be chill and cool…!! Keep writing…!! 😀
Hwwwww……hayeeee chandu how can u type this much yaar…… Thank u……i m nt hurt…..thank u fr ur great advice
Awesome epi ?
And coming to your note….I must say your friend is a very strong girl…I have no words for her truly she is awsome ❤???
You said right we never forgive when someone hurts us badly but When the person try rectify we should try to give Chance….
But I have question too all Girls when you Got married and Come to know your husband is a drunk er and he use u everynight dont you think him as rapist…?? Because even he is using you without you permission soo whats the diffrent between rapist and husband who using u every night only for his desire????
Yes u r right rabia…..my frnd is really strong……nd about ur question……kai aise ladies hai jinhe sikaya jata jai husband kuch bhi kare…..hai toh wo tumhara husband…. Thats why they never oppose him…..
Nyc
Thank u ☺☺
Ep awesome tha…and i liked ur os…Now that i know that ur friend is the inspiration od the os, i will say ur friend is very brave. May god bless her with happiness
Nooo…vyshu…….my frnd is nt my inspiration….. The concept is my inspiration… Thank u so much fr commenting
oh sorry….anyways nice concept
Super amazing
Amazing alia?