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Next morning swara wake up and saw the two most important person of her life sleeping peacefully. she kissed on pari forehead and want to the same with sanskar but stop herself and left to take the bath.After coming from the bathroom she saw pari crying and sanskar was trying to stop her from crying. Swara take pari from his hands and pari stop crying. Seeing this sanskar frowned.
Sanskar: meri beti hoti huye bhi ye meri pass rone lag jati hai.lagta hai isse mein pasand nhi.(being my daughter , whenever she comes to me , she cries..i think she doesnt like me)
Swara:aisa kuch nhi hai sanskar bas pari apni maa ko miss krti hai aur isliye abhi wo sab ke pass jane se roti hai. Tum dekhna kuch dino me tumahre sath bhi comfortable ho jayegi. Afterall you are her father.(sanskar no nothing is like that…its coz pari misses her mom thats y whenever she goes to anyone she cries..u see after some dayzz she will be comfortable with u.afterall u r her dad )
Sanskar:hmm mene ye nhi socha jab mein ragini ko itna miss kr rha hu to pari bhi to usko miss kr rhi hogi. Akhir maa thi wo uski. Thank you swara meri beti ki jindagi mein uski maa ki kami puri krne ke liye.(i didnt thought that if i miss ragini then pari would be also missing her..after all she was her mom..thanks swara for coming in my daughter’s life n filling mom’s place)
Swara(in her mind):kash mein tumhari jindagi mein bhi ragini ki kami puri kr pati(i wish i could fill ragini’s place also in ur life sanskar)
Sanskar kept himself busy with office work to forget ragini and swara spent her day by taking care of pari and household. They never spent time with each other except when they are with pari. Infact they never talk anything else about pari.
Its 11’o clock in the night and sanskar has not returned from office. Swara was tensed and walking in the hall. She was continuously looking at the clock and then at door.
Sujata: kya hua swara abhi tak soyi nhi?(what happened swara?why r u not sleeping)
Swara: nhi maa wo sanskar abhi tak nhi aaye hai(no ma that sanskar didnt came na)
Sujata:kya par wo to 7 bje taka a jata hai…tune phone kiya?(yeah but he comes at 7:00 na ..didnt u call)
Swara: haa maa par wo phone nhi utha rha hai(yes ma bt he is not picking up the phone)
Sujata: acha tu preshan mat ho…kisi kaam mein fas gya hoga aa jayega(ok u dont worry he may be stuck in some work)
Saying this sujata left but swara was not convinced. Suddenly she heard sound of car and saw its sanskar car.
Swara: tum kaha reh gye the sanskar…itni raat ho gyi thi aur tum phone bhi nhi utha rhe the..pata hai mein kitna pareshan ho gyi thi.(where were u sanskar?its late night n u were not picking up my phone also..u know i was soo much tensed)
Sanskar: ha mein ek meeting mein busy tha…pr tum so kyu nhi gyi…tumhe itni der tak jagne ki koi jarurat nhi thi.(yeah i was stuck in a meeting.but why didnt u sleep?u dont need to wake up till late night)
Swara: agr meeting mein fas gye the to phone kar dete …kum se kum mein yaha pareshan to nhi hoti na(if u were stuck in a meeting so u would have called..at least i would not have been tensed)
Sanskar(shouting):mene to nhi kaha tha na mere wait krne k liye ya fir mere liye pareshan hone ke liye…biwi ki tarah kyu behave kr rhi ho tum…koi jarurat nhi hai meri fikar karne ki.(i didnt say u to wait for me..why are u behaving like a wife?)
Swara:thik kaha tumne biwi nhi hu mein tumhari…mujhe tumhare liye pareshan nhi hona chaiye tha…mujhe maaf krna(u r right..im not ur wife..i would not have been tensed for u..im sry)
Saying this she left from there and only then sanskar realized his mistake
Sanskar: dammit…office ki sari tension mene swara par nikal di…(dammit.,..i took out all tension of office on swara)
Servant: sahab aapka aur swara memsaab ka khan lga du kya?(sir may i arrange ur n madam’s dinner)
Sanskar:kya swara ne khana nhi khaya hai abhi tak?(what swara didnt eat food till now)
Servant: nhi shaab unhone kaha thaw o aapke sath kha lengi(no sir..she said that she will eat with u)
Sanskar:acha tum hum dono khana laga kar room mein le ao(ok u bring food in our room)
In the room,when sanskar entered with food he saw swara sleeping. He knew she was not sleeping instead she is pretending to sleep to avoid him. He didn’t tried to wake her because he do not have the courage to face her after shouting at her and also she slept hungry because of him. He changed his clothes and also lay down on the bed without eating food.
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