Hiiiiiii friends,..Thank you for all your encouragement and I hope you all will enjoy this chapter,..Excuse My Grammatical errors,…
Chapter 2:
In Conference Hall,Birdsong Head Office,…
Today,The office is less like a workplace All because of Radhika’s chirpy face,…Neil and Sam were happy to see their Chasni Back in form,..The whole team functions like a Well-oiled machine,…Everyone there felt a new spirit in their works,…
Sam:Neil,We did almost everything we can in this Ad and now just needed to be present before Arjun,..I knew , He will give this order to us,..But,I hope he will be satisfied,…Cox I knew him quite long yaar,..It’s really hard to satisfy him,..
Radz:Don’t think about his Satisfaction Sam,..We are satisfied with our effort na,..that’s enough for us. He likes or not,…That’s his problem,..If he didn’t,..Then,It’s too good that we have greatest source of learning further,..
Neil:Wow!Chasni,…What line yaar,…Satisfaction,..Effort,…Superb,…
Right then,Piyali entered inside holding Ansh with Arjun,…
Piyali:That’s Why She got consecutively two years Best copywriter award Neil,…And If she got this year too,..Then,It will be a hat trick ,….Am I right Radhika?,..good to see you back in normal,…Happy for you guys,…
All smiled hearing this,..Ansh Ran towards his mom,..
Ansh:Mumma,…Today,I ate full without disturbing nani,…
Radz hugged him and began,
Radz:I knew,..My Ansh is a good boy and
Ansh:Spider man,….Mumma,I’m very strong like Dad,…
Neil tooks him lovingly and began,
Neil:My Spider man looks so handsome today,…And Where’s my kiss?,…
Ansh:Dad,…I gave all kisses to mumma in morning,….
Sam patted his head and began,
Sam:So,No kisses for your Neil Dad now,..
Ansh:Ok,then,..You give my kisses to Dad,…What Dad?,…
Sam and all burst out in laugher,…But,Arjun was irritated seeing these,…
Radz:Ansh ,..Get down,..Dont disturb Dad,…come here,..Sit silently,…
Piyali :Ok,…Let’s start the presentation,…Arjun,Please take your seat man and Arjun,This is the overall Ad concept for your New Resort,..I hope you will like it cox The entire work in this Ad was done by our Radhika,..So,No doubt,..You will like,…Radhika,… Shall we,…
Arjun controlled himself to behave normal by offering a fake smile to Piyali and throwing some Angry stares on Radz at the same time,..Whereas,Radz smiled at him vengefully and began,
Radz:This is A place, where We Enjoy our Special person’s presence,World’s Delicious food with all comforts in a high qualified interior built on our promises,…Your wish are really matter to us,We always make time for you,Here No excuses,No lies and No broken promises,…
Arjun fumed in anger hearing Radz words,..His temper eats his brain and he wanna burn her at that moment with his eyes,..And Neil’s words further Added fuel into it,…
Neil:Wow chasni,…Superb yaar,….Arjun,..What man,..You forgot yourself in this lovely presentation,..Shall we finalise,….
Arjun gets up in anger puzzled everyone,..But,He pretends to be normal and began,…
Arjun:Sorry Piyali,..I din satisfied with this concept but,I don’t want to waste my time,..So,I’m finalizing this,…Don’t mistake me,..
Sam:Arjun,..It’s ok yaar,…We knew about you well,…But,M glad atleast you are finalizing this concept cox It really worth it yaar,..See,You gonna thank chasni in future for giving this,….What mom?,..
Piyali:Ya,I agree with sam,…Definitely,You will Arjun,…And Guys,Prepare contract papers and further proceedings within few hours,..Arjun said that he has some important works,..So,Don’t waste time,….Rithvik,…I want all the papers soon,…Get to work,…
Saying so,Piyali excused herself with RIthvik,….Arjun too went out of the Hall in anger,…
Ansh:Mumma,…I want to go to bathroom,…
Radz:Ok,…Come,…Neil,Sam,..You guys carry on,…I’ll come,…
Sam:It’s ok Chasni,..We will look after the remaining works,…You take care of Ansh,..Common Neil,…Help me yaar,…
Radz:Thanx sam,…
Ansh:Dad,..Bye,…
Neil:Bye Ansh,…
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In Radz Cabin,…
Radz made Ansh wear his Dress,..Meanwhile,she was lost in some thoughts,….
Radz innervoice:I still cant decide Meeting you again in my life was the saddest thing or Greatest after what you have done to me Arjun,…Because,My heart is already split into two pieces Made up of love and hatred,…And In both sides,I hold your name Arjun Mehra,…. An UnKnown tears of some known pain welled up her beautiful eyes,…
Ansh holds Radz chin and began,…
Ansh:Mumma,…Mumma,..why are you crying?
Radz:nothing Ansh,…Some dust went into eyes,..
Saying so,Radz wiped her tears,…
Ansh:Mumma,…Why that Uncle scolded you?
Radz:Which Uncle Ansh?
Ansh:woh,…That new uncle,…
Right then,Arjun entered Radz cabin and Began,..
Arjun:Me Ansh,…
Ansh: Haan Mumma,..This uncle,…
Radz turned back was shocked to see Arjun in her cabin,…
Arjun’s smirk increased Radz temper further,…Ansh saw both of them and began,…
Ansh:Uncle,..I’m so strong,…If you scold my mumma again,I’ll bite you,…….
Radz chided ansh,…
Radz:Ansh,…Your mumma taught you this only,…hmmm,…How to behave with Big people,..Ask Sorry,…
Ansh make his face crabby by keeping his hands on his waist,..
Radz:Ansh,…Ask Sorry,…
Arjun:Leave Radhika,…Your child na,..So,He will be like you?,…
Ansh:sorry,..and I din like you…
Saying so,Ansh ran away from there leaving Arjun and Radhika alone,…
Radz:Ansh,..Ansh,…
Arjun let out an evil smile seeing this and closed her cabin’s door,…Radz was puzzled and began,
Radzz:What are you doing?,..Why are you closing the door?
Arjun:What Radhika,..You dunno,..Why I close the door?,…sounds funny,…
Saying so, Arjun started walking towards Radhika,….
Radz:Arjun,..Stop,…Open the Door,…Or else,..I’ll call Neil,…
Saying So,Radz tried to call neil from Office phone,…Arjun in a jiffy,Disconnected the wire,…Then,Radz tried to call from her mobile ,..He grabbed that too from her and threw it away,..
Arjun:What Radhika,…You are behaving like I gonna misbehave with you?,…Or you want me to do so?,…
Saying so, Arjun flips her hands Back and holds her Hair tightly,…He din leave air too to enter between them and taunted her badly,..Whereas Radz struggles to free his clasping hold on her,…
Arjun:You are behaving like that I’m touching you for the first time,…Shall I tell you How many moles you have in your body ?,…Or,…
Saying so,Arjun let his finger to wander on her face and Their Lips were barely few inches apart,….
Radz couldn’t Bottle up her anger and annoyed hearing Arjun’s meaningless words and his activities began,..
Radz:What do you want now?,..Leave me Arjun,…
Arjun smirked again and tightened his clasp on her hair,..
Arjun:What I want?,…hmm,..How dare you let another man to,…
Radz was shocked and before he could utter any,..She stopped him in mid,…
Radz:Arjun,..Hold your tongue,…If you dare to speak any about neil,..Then You never imagine in your dream too that you have to suffer a lot,…
Arjun:Oh!,..You love him that much,…Then What about your first love,…It’s all a lie????,…
Radz:Yes, It is a lie,…And You have no status to talk about love ,Arjun,…I hate you more than I love you Arjun mehra,….And listen, I still love The Arjun,whom I saw was humble,Respects my feelings,Dreams and my happiness,…My wishes,…saves my soul,my dignity,…But,He was no more today,..He was dead three years back on the day you betrayed me,..On the day, you killed our love,..on the day, you killed my trust on you,..But,I wanna express my heartfelt gratitude to you,…You know why?,…Today I was successful cox of you,..You gave me thorns but I made it as Bed of roses with help of my friends,…And You also gave me world’s precious gift,..’My Ansh’,…So,I forgive you,…But,I never forget your deeds,Mr.Arjun,… Mind it,…
Arjun was shattered hearing this and loosened his hold on her,..Radz pulled him away in anger
A sudden pain of guilty gulped his throat,..
Arjun:Ansh is My child!!,…
Radz:No,..Never,..Ansh,…My child,…My soul,…Meaning for my life to live,…and His father name is Neil Malhotra,…you heard na,..Neil Malhotra,….You know Arjun,..I don’t want even your name too to touch my son’s shadow,…Why, what happened?,..You are remembering your past deeds?,..If you do so,..You will start to hate yourself Arjun,…I will never take avenge on you for your deeds,…And I will never ask Why You left me or why you crushed my life or why you fake me in the name of love or whatever,…Because You was dead already,..Now,…You are no one to me and There’s nothing between us,…If there is something between us,then,It’s my hatred for you Arjun,…You hear me na,…My hatred,..I hate you completely Arjun,…
Saying so,Radz walked past arjun to open the door and turned back after opening it began,
Radz:And listen,My Hatred for you is my strength Mr.Arjun Mehra,…Also Remember,…You wont be punished for your deeds but you will be punished by the same,…
Saying so,Radz left the cabin,…Till then, Arjun never believe something could shake his Strong heart like this,….But,Now Everything changes,..Arjun slipped for the first time,..His guilty for what he does to Radhika just stole his sleep till date but The truth which He heard a few minutes back made him completely shattered,..His head starts hitting like a thunderstorm,..Even his sister’s pain too never had this effect on him,,,,As Radhika said,He started to hate himself for his deeds for the first time in his life,…He understood the sound of real shattering of his heart is the loudest quiet in this whole world,…For a minute, He wants to live a happy normal life with his Radhika and Ansh,….But Reality stuck him,….He couldn’t hold control on himself,…
59 Comments
PLEASE try to update daily. I love ur ff.
thanx yaar,..Sorry couldnt give daily updates,..I hope you will enjoy the future chapters too,..
Thats the spirit guys girls need to be like that fight with their self respect….. awesome lines yaar
Yes dear,..Here you gonna See Radz as sherni and arjun gonna suffer more,…I enjoy torturing him
Finally….Arjun knws dat ansh is his own son….i also say dat radhika shouldn’t forgive him sooon….. Arjun should regret 4 his deeds…update soon…love u n tc
No,she wont forgive him soon,….Now only game starts yaar,..
This is lovely renu. Am glad d truth has come out . Can u update this one soon… I loved d way u have shaped d story… Plz plz update this one if possible tmr or by Wednesday plz plz…
Will try Ramya,..But cant promise deary,…these days I can tcome online too ver often dear,..
OMG!! renu what are you made up of? I’m sure you are not a normal human being…seriously I hate you cuz I love you so much….you just stole my heart…y do u have to do that every time? Pls do that every time….I mean I want u to do that…
Coming to the update….omg rads so much hatred for arjun and this hatred will be their way back to love….arjun u must regret now for deeds….omg I just can’t control my feelings right now…so arjun realized that ansh is his child….this lead to first step of love I guess….pls pls pls udate the next part soon…
I want to thank angel for this wonderful plot…and a big thanks to u for continuing it….seriously this story makin me go crazy…I’m so much attracted to it now that I can’t focus on other things….see this is cuz of u…now don’t say that u r feeling shy…it’s totally worth it
Ur missing pieces is superb…it’s totally opposite so this one….but it’s amazing…you are a very brilliant writer…I wonder y ur mom don’t allow u to write….maybe she don’t know much about ur talent….
Pls pls pls update asap…I’m waiting but I can’t wait anymore…tc…luv u????
And yes pls update missing pieces asap…I’m also waiting for that one also…luv u
definitely will try to update soon,…My sweet don,…But again couldnt promise,…
Ammeena,..My sweet don,…Where were you?,.Yday I asked sree,….
This is too much,..You are making me more shy,…Not good,….Dont talk about mom,…That day she checked my lap while writing Missing pieces,…What i’m doing,….I was panic,…YOu must see this Renu’s terror face then,..I swear,..YOu might end up laughing full day,…Lol,..
Yes,..her encouragement and her wish of seeing the end of this story made me continue this story,…I hope she too will like it,…Afterall,I started it for her na,…One strange thing is,..I dinn have chance to start afresh story,..See,Missing pieces too after Lonovla accident in original series and here too same thing,…
But,Really Writting Exact opposite stories is really an interesting thing dear,…While writting missing pieces,I should forget this for two days and to write this,I should do the same by forgetting Missing pieces,…
will try to update bit earlier dear atleast weekly once or twice,…
Sorry dear, I couldn’t comment….I was not busy…I was tooo lazy…but from now on I will comment and eat ur head also…
Yes I should seee your face….lol but I think god don’t want me 2…by reading ur comment I am already laughing so much… I will pray from god that your mom never know about your this…cuz in the end we both will be in big loss….
No problem if u can’t a story from beginning….but still ur all stories are fabulous…I just go crazy in them…and maybe in future you have again some amazing idea then you can start a fresh brand new story…
So I think next update will be on missing pieces…hmmm…very excited…ok so update when you have time…till the love you ????
It’s ok Ameena,….Just felt missing you,…That’s why asked?,….Whenever you are free,You comment,….
You are right,….I hope it wont happen cox I already put GOd as my guard to maintain this secret,….
A strange thing is I dinn plan to write both the FF,…I started both accidently,….Ya,Next Missing pieces,….I hope you will like Arjun-Neil confrontation there,…Not yet started,….thought to start by tomorrow or tonight,…
pls update regularly very nice
thanx deary,…Ofcourse will do,..
Renu awesome. Everything was too gud. radz-sam-neil convo superb. N then ansh, he is such a cute baby. His talks n antics too cute. yep arjun is true, radz ka beta hai toh radz ki tarah hi toh hoga. sweeet n cute. lol.
Arjun ko toh sab se prblm hai yaar. khushi se prblm hai, gusse se prblm, gham se prblm hai, ufff he has so many prblms yaar. I thought arjun ko itni jaldi nahi pata chalega. If neil’s talk didn’t came in between then radz would hav never told him abt ansh.
Now what will arjun do ? Renu u really hav made this story completely different. I think u hav analysed it well. waiting for the next update eagerly.
Manha,..I said you once,..I wanna torture him na,…So,..Arjun gonna plead me badly from now,…I myself enjoy more while writing these scenes,…
Yes pls torture him a lot…I LOVE TORTURING…renh btw this is 7th time I’m reading ur story…see I’m so much obessed with ur story…I can’t control my feelings..
Omg…u r an amazing writer
thanx yaar,…will try
Waiting for ur nxt episode eagerly
Hey….nice……even lovely……please show radhika as a brave and confident lady…,mean to say continue her attitude lyk this and yes…,.update daily
thanx yaar,…and ofcourse, will see radz attitude dear,…
Awesome episode renu… Waiting 4 next…
thanx saran,…I miss your comments in missing pieces ff these days
please….please update daily yaar……….
sorry dear,…but,will try to give earlier updates,…Now busy with some personal works dear,..so,had really less time to come online,..and to spend time for writing,..Infact I wrote this update in early morning while everyone sleeping in my home dear,…I hope,..Next update will be a bit earlier dear
OMG Renu.. what are you made of? This update is a masterpiece!! Loved each and every line of it!! Can’t wait for the next update. Just keep writing and smiling! And update soon!!
Loads of love :-*
Thanx dear,…M glad you liked this chappy and will try to update sooner,…
Omg omg omg!! Renu enna di panna? What are you made of? Ivalo mulai … Hats off di.. I loved it…
That’s my Radhika… She moved on… Never waited for him or cried… We need girls like this… On he whole, I loved it di…. Seekrama update pannu…
Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??
Sree,…Hundred years for you,…I thought you and next min,I saw your comment,..Thanx deary,…
Its not good,..YOu always join hands with my sweet don,…Please Renu pavam,….
Love you too chellam,…Tc,…
Awesome
thanx dear,…
OMG..Its such heart touching love it <3 🙂
Thanx yaar
A common note of appology to all
Hiiiiiiiiiii friends,…Sorry for not replying to all your comments in first chapter,…I really had less time to come online,…So,Couldnt reply,…But again,..I was overwhelmed by all your comments there,..Thank you so much friends,…I hope,I’ll do some justice to this story,….Continue reading and I hope,I’ll maintain the same spirit till end of this short story,….
@devga:Devga,..I froze after reading your comment,…Even,I dinn believe myself that I will write book n all,…But,Your comments made me emotional dear,…I saw your comment after a loong time and that too you made me emotional,…
If suppose i scribble sth in future as you said,…Then,Ill definitely use My name Renu in that book for you dear,..I promise,…
Hey renu I understand u will b busy but plz don’t stop either of ur stories… It’s mind blowing dear. Will wait as Long as it takes
Ramya,..I will never stop writing till updating last piece in both stories,…Cox I dinn like leaving any incomplete,…And thank you so much sweety for understanding me,….Love you too,..Tc,…
You are 100 %right you made me remember my Friend that time she don’t had that much strength do she died she died by fell in well I wish all girls should guts like radhika I wish ?
Oh my god,…How she thought to kill herslef yaar,…Then she indirectly made that person to win by killing herself,…No,We are not week to bent before them,…We should be strong,…Who ate salt has to drink water compulsorily yaar,…
And A girl can do anything she wish in this world,…there is one sayings “This whole world can be built by women and it alos will be destroyed by the same feminine”,…So,We are not week,..The real fact is we underestimate ourself,…
Nice touch similar to badthameez dil but different I love it try to make arjun play with rad senses too at times or vice versa to show girls power
I dinn watch badameez dil yaar,..So,dunno anything about it,….I hope you will like this story,…Ofcourse,Radz will be strong enough to give back to arjun,….
Good to see that now Arjun knows the truth about Ansh !! Love Radhika’s boldness. Waiting for next update. Keep writing. Take care 🙂 🙂
Thanx yaar
Nice story line. Keep going on renu.
Thanx yaar
Superb renu keep gng……I lke tis strong rads ……every girl should b strong lke hr…….finally he knew tat bitter truth ansh s hs child……..cn u describe ansh…..i know he s all sweet….yeah he s strong as a super man………niel always adds fire to fuel….n Arjun s ready to attack at te slightest provocation……….I lvd ardhika scene where rads pushes hm apart n says te truth to hm……btt I
hate hs sentence
“hw many moles u …
…….”……..bt happy tat he hs heart ♥ broke……i enjoyed tat sound………bt plzz renu Tel me wat hppnd to nandini di????????plzzz reveal tat past…….n i knoww u won’t mke arjuns dream f hvng a lfe wth rads n ansh……n is rads hs????he lves hr?????bt watevr it s I HATE ARJUN …….
Aastha,…You gonna see ansh’s presence more in the future episodes,…Now,Ansh and Arjun encounter starts with a fight,….He dinn like arjun as of now cox his mom chided him ly cox of arjun na,…Let’s see,What happens next and how ansh made both of his parents to reunite,…
Seriously speaking,I too dinn like to write that dialogue but wanna made arjun to express his frustration to radz and we all knew,He never mean what he say,…So,go with it without giving any second thought,….
See,Now,You are saying “You hate Arjun”,…But,I doubt after few chapters,You shouldnt ask me to dont torture him like this,….Lol,…
For your other questions,…You will get answer in upcoming chapters
Renu i assume u r preparing to bomb on him with torture yaar. Arjun ko sataana aur torture karna sab ko pasand hai. Aur uski jealousy aur possessiveness toh sab fida hai. But how much extent we hate him in the end we all will be like why is he suffering so much. plzzz dont make him suffer more. I think this is the strength of character. Why is it like this??!!! But for now i’m happy with arjun’s suffering n torture him more n more.
Manha,…Dont worry more,…As you said,He is Arjun,….He will handle everything,….But,For Radz pain,He must have to pay some,….So,Here Radz sherni’s turn to play the cards,….SHe is so sweet,..She wont ask reason for arjun deeds,….But,Who knows that itself torture arjun a lot,….To enjoy the story,I started to reveal their suspense past sooner,….So,As story unfolds I hope,you will get to enjoy more,…
Heyyyyyy Renu…just dunno how to describe about this story……out of words…..!!
Hats off for u dear…
Keep updating nd b happy alwayz ..
Love u loadZz
thanx yaar
Hey very nice… I waiting for the next….:)
Thanx yaar
Hai renu, sorry pa konjam busyaga irundhadhala story kaana cmt kodukka late aaiduthu.
OMG.. enna sollradhuney therialla. Superb. 2nd chapterliye reveal pannitiye arjunukku thaan pilla ansh ingradhunu.Good. Inithaan iruukku nama payapullaikku. Ivalavu aasai vachindu irukkaven enn andraikku vitutu poitaan. Neil indha storylum romba nalla frienda irukkappla. Adutha updatekaaga wait panren.
Naomi,…Dont be sorry and all,..What’s this new habit of saying sorry,…Whenever you get free time,…you may read,….
And ya,..MAny things will be revealed as the story unfolds and Arjun’s past Plays a crucial role in this story,…Let’s see what it is and how it made arjun insane
Wowwww, wowwww, wowwww, what a blasting episode. ..renuuuuuuu my sweeeeeet friend it’s mind blowing…arjun never satisfied with anything…rads words were awesome on his satisfaction…ansh our spiderman was superbbbb, cute n smart…loved his words n attachment with Neil n sam…ansh rads convo with arjun was fantastic…wowwww…arjun very possessive for rads n rads extreme hatred crushed him with reality of ansh revealed….whoaoo….such a heart touching, emotional yet blasting scene…rads each n every word shattered him totally n he is now in deep guilt n grief regretting his deeds for the first time in life…so sad for rads pain….but loved her confidence n attitude in this story…this is totally opposite of missing part of mmz…
totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your both stories my sweeeeeet friend. …it’s really superb storyline n plot, I want to see arjun suffer more for hurting rads n now knowing ansh is his son, it will torture him more as he will have to pay for his dirty deeds n my renuuuuuuu knows very well how to play with his emotions n bring him back to the real good arjun for our chashni n ansh….loving this story very much, plz continue and post the next episode soon. ..love you loads and very tight bear hug, muaaaaahhhhhh
wow renu, hartzzz of to u…… what a story……….!!! awesome yaaar…. now arjun suffer for his deeds……. good…… plss torture him a lot…… he deserve it……………..
keep updating…… i’m eagerly waiting 4 ur update……….. lov u…………..