Hiii friends,…I hope you all will like this update,…As usual ignore my grammatical errors in this update,..Sorry for making you all wait,…Ready to go,….
Chapter 5:
It became true in Arjun’s life today that Remorse for his past deeds has became a violent Dyspepsia of his mind,…He dunno how to get relieve from this,…In fact, it is very difficult to treat as it cant even be defined,..Because everything which he saw was not gold that glisters and everything which he not seen so far is not a tear that glistens,…But,Still Arjun dinn realize that his remorse has now became Radz’s haunting reminiscence,…He was trying hard to justify his deeds,.. His intuition of He was wrong somewhere in this Revenge game overtook his justification,… So, every time his trials end up in a grand failure,..Now this time,His hounded thoughts were disturbed by Sam,…
Sam:Arjun,..Why are you standing here alone?,…You din like the Dinner,…Pa wants to talk with you,…He is in line,…Hold up man,…
Saying so,Sam handovers her mobile to Arjun,…
Telephonic convo,…
Arjun:Yes,…I’m fine uncle,…Ya,…Nandhu too enjoying this dinner,…How’s people there in Australia?
Samrat:Ya,…I’m fine with these Aussies,My boy…Just enjoying without your Aunt Piyali’s torture,…And Arjun,I heard you asked Radhika to direct your Ad by staying in your mansion,…
Arjun:Yes,,..Why,any problem?
Samrat:No,..No,…In fact,I personally wanna thank you my boy,..She is like Sam for me,..First I din like Radhika staying at our mansion but,after few days,..slowly, I adopted her as my another daughter,Arjun,…She deserves it,man…Piyali told me that she was upset these days,..So,it will be a nice change for her mood swing off,…So,please take care of my girl and my grandkid Arjun,…
Hearing this,Arjun don’t have any words to utter in reply,…
Samrat:Arjun,..Are you hearing me?,…
Arjun:Yes,..I do,…
Samrat:Good,..and thank you my boy,… Enjoy your dinner with Nandhini,..And take care of her too,…
Arjun:Ofcourse,…
Saying so,Samrat ends the call,…
Arjun gave the mobile back to sam and he wondered how Radhika got everyone’s love here,..He din get what makes Sam’s family to love Radz this much,…Sam shakes his arms and began,
Sam:Arjun,..Where were you?,…What pa said yaar?,..And you like my surprise gift na,…
Arjun:Nothing important sam,…Yes,..Nice watch,..Thank you sam,..And Sam,..If you don’t mind,..Tell me one thing,…Why you people care for Radhika so much?,…
Sam smiled at Arjun’s question and began,
Sam:Arjun,…Yes,We all care for Radhika,…Our Relationship with chasni is more than Blood Relationship yaar,…Friendship Arjun,…I also somewhere responsible for her miseries arjun,…
Arjun: You???,…How sam?,..How you held responsible for her miseries?,…
Sam:Yes Arjun,…I’m not directly responsible,…But,some guilty conscience makes me to think like that,…Three years back,If I din ask chasni to do her research about tourism alone in Goa,She would never end up her life in misery na,…We know,..she was laughing for us,..still she din came out of her dark past,Arjun…
Arjun:Means,..You knew Radhika earlier,…But,She din say any about you to me?,..
Sam: What?,…You talked with chasni earlier,…
Arjun:No,…I mean,..You din say any about her to me right?,..
Sam:Oh!!!,…It’s a big story Arjun,..Leave it yaar,…
Saying so sam tries to move,..Arjun stopped her and continued,…
Arjun:Sam,…Wait a minute,..I’m your friend right,..Then Tell me,..How do you know Radhika?,..What about her Dad?,…
Sam:Arjun,…Chasni is my friend,…Me and Neil care for her a lot,…We will do anything to bring smile on her face,…Neil’s only desire is to see chasni achieving her dreams and living happily with the one whom she loves,..But,God fulfilled his one dream at the cost of crushing the other one,…And Arjun, Remembering some bad memories will hurt us only yaar,…You came for dinner after a long time,..And,I don’t wanna share unwanted things in this sweet occasion,…, So,Please leave it yaar,…
Arjun:Sam,…I’m your friend,..your problem will be mine,…
Sam:Thanx Arjun,..If it so,please take care of chasni and Ansh,…We are sending her with you against her wish for the first time cox of your insistence,..I knew about you well,…So,I think,..I no need to say any about this again,…
Arjun nodded yes,…and hugged sam in assurance friendly,…He felt an incurable pain running over his nerves after hearing Neil’s bond with Radz from sam,…
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In Piyali’s Room,..
Piyali:Nandhini,…Have you seen this album,…
A lady with broad eyes turned towards piyali,…
Nandhu:Yes,..I saw,..And piyali, you din tell me who is that kid Ansh still,…
Piyali sat beside Nandhu and began,…
Piyali:Nandhini,..He is Radhika’s son,…
Nandhu remembered the same name from Arjun yesterday,…
Nandhu:What?,..Radhika,…Who is she?,…Why she staying here?,..Who is her husband?,…
Piyali:NAndhini,…She is Neil and Sam’s friend,…And she is unmarried,…
NAndhu:What,…She is Unmarried???,…Then,who is Ansh’s real father?,..
Piyali:We dunno Nandhini,…She din utter who betrayed her and crushed her life to anyone,…Even her dad abandoned her but still she was not ready to disclose that person’s name,…First,We gave shelter to her cox of Sam’s insistence but later We adopted her as our own daughter like sam,…
Nandhini was shocked hearing this,..
Nandhu:Piyali,..When it happened?,…
Piyali:Three years back in Goa,…Why,..You know anything about Ansh’s real father?,…
Nandhu:What,… In Goa?,…Nooo,…
Nandhini s head starts spinning lightly,…
Piyali:Nandhini,..What happened?,…
Nandhu’s innervoice:No,never,..It cant be my Arjun,… Why I’m thinking like this?,…
Piyali:Nandhini,..First,Have some water,…
Nandhu drank the water and began,
Nandhini:Piyali,I want to meet Radhika now,..Where is she?,…
Piyali:I think,she is in her room,…She was not feeling well,..So,she din attend the dinner with us,…Now,you are feeling better right,..
Nandhini:Yes,..I forgot to take my tablets,..Now,I’m alright,…Nothing to worry,..And you said,she is not willing to direct our Ad na,…I wanna talk with her,Piyali..Where is her room?,…
Piyali:Sure,..You can talk with her,…Radhika’s room is upstairs,…Left side,…
Nandhu:Thank you piyali,…
Piyali:Shall I accompany you?,…
Nandhu:No thanks,..I will go alone,…After all, its our mansion right,…
Piyali:Billkul,…
After ending her chat with piyali, Nandhini walked towards Radz room,…
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Meanwhile In balcony,…
Sam:Ansh,..See,today what your aunt has?…
Saying so,sam gave ansh a food item which made Ansh smile,..
Ansh:Wow,…Spinach cheese ball,…Mumma made it for me,..Hmmm,..Yummmy,…
Saying so,Ansh enjoyed eating,…
Sam:No,…My friend,..
Ansh:Who?,…
Sam showed Arjun,…Seeing Arjun,Ansh stopped eating,…
Ansh:I din like this,…
Sam:I dunno ,..I’m going,…You ate my friend’s food,…Now,It’s between you and your Arjun uncle,…Don’t take me into this,…
Ansh:Sam Aunt,…Ruko,…I’m also coming,…If you left me here alone,I will complain to dad,…
Sam:Do whatever you want,…I’m not afraid,…
Saying so, Sam left Arjun and Ansh alone,…Ansh turned left facing the wall and bent down slowly to watch what Arjun doing,…Arjun pretends to look outside,…Then,Ansh ate the remaining leftover snacks hiding from arjun,…Arjun loves his son’s antics which brought a huge smile on his face along with some unknown tears of joy,…After a while,…
Ansh:Thank you,..
Saying so,Ansh hides his face with hands,..Arjun smilingly took ansh in his arms and kissed him lovingly,…,
Arjun:Do you like these Cheese balls,..
Ansh:Hmmm,…Yummy,…How do you know that it’s my favorite,…It’s like mumma’s preparation,…
Arjun hiding his tears began,
Arjun:It’s my favorite too,…I only taught this dish to your mumma,…
Ansh:But mumma din say about you to me na,…
Arjun:Your mumma hided many things from you ansh,…
Right then radz in sky blue kurti,who was searching for Ansh was shocked seeing arjun holding Ansh in his arms,…Anger occupied her heart and mind completely,…She yelled Ansh’s name loudly,…
Radz:Ansh,…Ansh,..come here,…
Saying so Radz grabbed ansh from arjun furiously and took him to her room ignoring ansh and arjun’s repeated calling,..
Ansh:Mumma,..Mumma,What happened?,…Why are you angry mumma?,…Mumma,..That uncle is nice,…He told me that He wont scold you mumma,…Mumma,…Please,don’t cry na,…
Radz:Ansh,…You don’t want mumma to cry na,..
Ansh:Hmmm,..
Radz:Then go to your dad now,…And don’t talk with that uncle without my permission,…You dunno,..He is a Rakshas Ansh,…
Ansh:But,He din look like Rakshas hai na mumma,…
Radz:No Ansh,…Some Rakshas looks like Angel but they are not real angel ansh,…If we are friendlier with them,Then one day, they will eat you alive ansh,…
Ansh wiped radz tears and began,…
Ansh:Ok Mumma,… Hereafter, I wont talk with that uncle,…I love you mumma,…Please don’t cry mumma,..smile karo na,…
Hearing this Radz kissed Ansh on his cheeks lovingly,…Arjun,who listens everything from the window fumes in anger hearing Radz introducing him as Rakshas to Ansh,…His eyes reddened in anger,…
After Ansh left,Radz wiped her tears and about to go out was stopped by Arjun,…Arjun holds her arms tightly and pulled her inside the room,…
Radz:Arjun,…Everything has a limit,…Stop your misbehavior,…
Arjun:Misbehavior?,..Ok,..I’m here right before you,…Do whatever you want,…It’s between us,…But,How dare you say me Rakshas to Ansh,Radhika…He is our child Radhika,…
Radz:What! our child???,…No arjun,..Ansh is my child,…And listen,…Whatever I said to ansh is true,…
Arjun:Ok,…Then,tell him,..who I am to you,…and who is his real father, Radhika?,…
Radz:I know what to tell and what not?,..You don’t preach me Arjun,..Ansh is my son,…you hear me na,..Ansh is my son,…
Arjun:Stop it Radhika,…I’m tired of hearing this,…How could you forgot, what happened between us so easily,…If I din touch you that night, today you wont shout like this before me,…Understand,…
Hearing this,Radz was annoyed seeing arjun’s face,…she ignored him and tried to go out of the room,…
Arjun:Radhika,…I’m talking with you only,..Listen,..Radhikaa,…
Saying so,Arjun tried to stop Radz,..But,By mistake,..He tore Radz left hand sleeve exposing her neck , forearm and her back,…Her dupatta too fell down in this,…Radz was shocked by this sudden encounter,…Her anger was ready to burst out anytime,…Now,she couldn’t bottle up her anger anymore,…Whereas Arjun was also shocked seeing Radz like this,…He falter for a second and began,
Arjun:Radhika,..Sorry,…I,..I din,..
Before Arjun completing his phrase,…Radz slapped him hard on his face,…Arjun din expect this from Radz,…He was literally frowning in an extreme anger,..Radz too breathed heavily after extending her arm on his face while letting out her anger on him,…
Right then Nandhini,who entered Radz room was extremely shocked seeing arjun getting slap from Radz and Radz in that condition with her tore dress as well,…
P.S.:Friends,..thanks for liking and taking your time to comment on my both FF,which really means a lot for me to write next update,…I recently fell down from a Hillside road accidentally yaar,..By God’s grace,Nothing big happened to me,..I escaped with minor injuries,…So,now mom is not allowing me to come online,..Please excuse me friends,…I hope you all will enjoy this update,…Miss you all buddies,…
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hiiiiiiiii renu i sw te epi…n ten watched it..my!!!! hw wonderfully ve u writte….u certainly stole my heart………….tis time i ws able 2 ejoy te epi immensely…………i’m nt able 2 explai my hearts feelings at tis moment………good wrk renu………..always tat saral ll b tere 2 destroy a beautiful moment……..i thoughrouly despise hm………….hey renu we ll u b able 2 update…i know i shud nt ask a wounded girl 2 write an ff…..bt shud ask hr 2 take rest or she’ll b reprimanted……….bt i cud nt control my anxiety dearie………..so wen u update c u update “hatred into love” rather tha missing pieces??????????????plz?????????????
Omg renuuuuuuu dearyyyyyy plzzzzz be careful out there…tum me hum sabki jaan basti hai…so take a very good care of it for our sake…thank God that it was minor wounds…and you’re recovering…thx aunt for your scolding n making her rest….uncle you too be careful…we love u alllllll, please take care….
Coming to the story….omg renuuuuuuu my dearrrryyyy, it’s superbbbbb n awesoooooome episode. …rads neil n sam bonding is outstanding….Sam arjun scene was quite interesting. …arjun is very surprised to know the relationship between khannas n rads…he’s so jealous n fuming of neil’s bond with rads…and ansh my cutie pie so lovely boy…his cuteeeee talks n each action so adorable…cheese scene n ardhika convo was really very heart touching. …he’s rakshas …yes for sure…nandu knows ardhika’s past? Or she just know only one part of the story which was told by arjun…mind blowing dialogues. …the slap scene…wowwww. ..rads good job…he deserved it to batrayed you n for rads current situation. …just perfect everything. …renuuuuu you’re the best my sweeeeeetheart. …love you soooooooo muchhhhhh
the DORI scene….wowwww awesome, marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing analysis…renu my dearyyyy I’m just speechless n overwhelmed after reading this update. …wowwww what a blasting master mind you have…just loved it to the core. …ardhika’s convo n actions and the spice from renu’s lovelyyyyyy narration….just awesoooooome. ….each n every expression of arjun and rads in this intense n sensuous scene was commandable…on top of that renu’s lovelyyyyy comments made it more beautiful ….enjoyed it a lotttttttttt….keep it up my sweeeeeet friend. …take care sweetie n rest until you perfectly fine. …love you soooooooo muchhhhhh my sweeeeeethearttttt, muaaaaahhhhhh
Renu dear…i posted my ff ….new dimension.plz hav a look it…n do tell me hows it…whether I continue it or not….n giv me ur views n suggestions….waiting for ur reply
Once again thanks