Hiii friends,…I resumed writing after two weeks of rest,…I updated this chappy for you all,..I hope you all will like it,…As usual ignore my grammatical errors here and there,…
Chapter 6:
Arjun:Radhika,..Sorry,..I,..I,..dinn,..
Before Arjun completing his phrase,…Radhika slapped him hard,…
“Whack,…”
The resulting sound of the slap wasn’t quite a squawk, wasn’t quite a yelp, wasn’t quite a gasp,… As best one could describe it as sound of a wounded duck,…Yes, it sounded like an angry chicken slapping a puppy with a fish,…An intense fire raged in their eyes,…It may be named as their Hatred or Anger or whatever,…But the intensity of the fire in their stare has the real power to burn one alive,…
One second, Radhika tried to keep in mind how angered and hurt Arjun was,..This welled up her eyes for a moment,…But the next second,She decided to let him have that one,… Now her heart wants to give him the benefit of his deeds and not to take it personal anymore,…
Whereas Arjun,who din expect this from Radz tried to give the taste of her’s,..Within a jiffy, He grabbed her bare arm forcefully and fills her closer with his burning eyes,…He even din cared much that his fingers are now tasting the flesh of Radhika’s,…Radz,who felt pain in her arm tried to free herself from his clasping hold,..
Arjun murmured,…
Arjun:Your time is over Radhika,…Now,Its my turn,…I will never leave you from now,…How hard you try,..No one can save you from me,…Ansh is mine,Radhika,…
Radz frowningly began,
Radz:Let’s see that too Mr.Arjun Mehra,…
Whereas Nandhini who was standing idle at the entrance of the room was extremely shocked seeing Radz slapping Arjun and Arjun manhandling Radz in that situation,…She couldn’t hear their heated convo,…But,she tried to become normal and puts her mobile down knowingly and pretends to be busy in mantling it’s parts,..
Nandhu:Shut,…This mobile is always slipping from my hand,…
Hearing Nandhini’s sound made arjun to loosen his grip on Radz arm and Radz freed herself from him and took her dupatta from the floor hurriedly just to wrap her before nandhini could find her in that state,…Arjun was also froze seeing Nandhu there,…One second his heart secretly prays that nandhini shouldn’t witness their private encounter a few seconds back,..Before Nandhini see radz in that state,Arjun tried to help nandhu and also tried to take her away from the room,…
Arjun:Nandhu,..Why you came here?,…Come lets move nandhu,…
Saying so Arjun dragged nandhu out of the room,…
Nandhu:Arjun,…I came here to meet Radhika,…Why are you rushing me out?,…Leave me,…
Both Arjun and Radhika were shocked hearing this from Nandhu,…
Arjun:Nandhu,..You know Raa,..Radhika???,..
Nandhu:Yes,..I think you too knew her more than I do,…
Arjun swallowed hard,… Nandhu smilingly began,..
Nandhu:I mean,.. you two already knew each other through this Ad na,…
Arjun smilingly nodded yes,…
Nandhu:And Arjun,..what are you doing here in radhika’s room?,…
Arjun remained silent and a wave of tension starts glowing on his face,…Radz,who witnessed this began,…
Radz:Woooh,…Nothing,…Arjun,..Sorry Mr.Arjun Mehra,…Came here mistakenly,…I just telling him the right way to go,…What Mr.Arjun,Am I right?,…
Saying so Radz smirked on Arjun,…Nandhini noticed the angry glares of the two and began,
Nandhu:Oh!,…So nice of You both,…I think,..I came to the right place and also at right time,…
Saying so Nandhini smilingly walked towards Radhika,who stood silently hiding her hands in her dupatta,…Nandhini patted Radz’s cheeks affectionately puzzled radz more and she looked at Arjun questioningly,…
Nandhu:I know you might be confused,..I’m Nandhini Mehra,..Arjun’s sister,…I’m your big Fan Radhika,…I used to read all your articles published in “Times Plus” Magazine and Your novels “Beautiful Disaster- both parts” are always first in my library,…You have magic in your writing Radhika,…When piyali said you are the one whom I longed to meet,…I wondered,…How you wrote these articles and novels with such a deep insight and that too in this young age,…Really, God gave you gifted talent Radhika,…I’m really impressed,…I will never forget this day in my life,…God bless you,…
Radz:Thank you so much,…But,I didn’t do anything big to get your appreciation,…Anyways,I’m glad you liked my work,…
Nandhu:You are more positive than I imagined Radhika,…We really did some good in our previous birth that’s why you came in Arjun’s life,…
Hearing this,Radz was shocked for a minute,..
Nandhu:I mean,…you only gonna direct our New Resort Ad for Arjun na,…
Radz:Oh!,…But Nandhiniji,…I dinn,..
Before Radz completing her phrase,..
Nandhu:I know radhika,…You no need to worry about any,..I will arrange everything for you and your son stay in our mansion till completing this ad,..Please,..Dont say no,..Thi s is your biggest fan’s hearty request,..If you accept our proposition, it will be equal to accepting a pure love from your ardent fan,…Will you?,…Please,…
Radz holds nandhu’s hand and began,…
Radz:This is second time in my life,..I dunno how to say No’ Nandhini di,…Shall I call you as such,…
Nandhini nodded yes and hugged radhika lovingly,…Radz stared Arjun angrily while hugging,…
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In Arjun’s Mansion,..
Arjun sitting in the balcony and seeing the moon was lost in some deep thoughts ,,…Nandhini entered his room with milk found him sitting in the balcony,…
Nandhu:Arjun,…still,You din sleep,…Have this milk,…
Arjun:No Nandhu,…I don’t like to have any,…Please,..
Nandhini sits besides him and began,…
Nandhu:Hmmm,..Good,…Arjun,…Tell me one thing,..What is meant by true love?,…
Arjun was puzzled hearing this and began,…
Arjun:Nandhu,..Why are you asking this now?,..Are you alright?,…Shall I ask Ramu kaka to get any medicine,…
Nandhini laughed at him and began,…
Nandhu:Arjun Relax,..Relax,…I’m alright,…I asked this because I heard about Radhika’s life today,…
Arjun was terribly shocked hearing this from Nandhini,..but he pretends to be unaffected,…
Arjun:Why,..What happened Nandhu?,…
Nandhu:Nothing,.. I was just comparing the one who cheated Radhika with Abhinav,…
Hearing this, Arjun had some unknown tears of guilty in his eyes,…
Arjun:No Nandhu,… Never,…You shouldn’t do this,…Please,…Take rest Nandhu and Doctor said na,You shouldn’t think about the past,..It will hurt you only nandhu,…Please Nandhu,…I cant see you being hurt again Nandhu,…
Nandhu:Harre,..Arjun,..I knew,..you cant see me in tears,..But what hurts me is I failed to know that you can see tears in other’s eyes,…
Tears started rolling down nandhu’s cheeks,…Arjun wiped her tears and began,…
Arjun:Nandhu,..you trust your Bhai na,…I will never do any wrong to you nandhu,…I always living this life for you nandhu,…If other’s tears is the only medicine for the burning fire in my heart while seeing the tears in your eyes,..Then I have to made my heart strong to grab that medicine forever for you Nandhu,…
Nandhu:No Arjun,…That’s not the permanent medicine for me,…your smile is the medicine,…
Hearing this, Arjun smiled lightly and hugged Nandhini with strong heart,…After breaking their hug,Nandhu began,…
Nandhu:Ok,…It’s time for sleep now,..I promised piyali that Tomorrow I too will accompany you to take Radhika and her son,..what his name,…Arun,.No,…Ann,…
Arjun:Ansh,..
NAndhu:Ya correct,..Seems you already be friendlier with him,…
Arjun smilingly began,..
Arjun:Hmmm,…Cute and smart child,…
Nandhu:like you,..Ok,.Don’t stay here for long,…Climate is already chill,…you will catch cold,…Go to bed soon…and haan,..drink the milk,…Good night,…
Arjun:Hmmm,..Good night Nandhu,…
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In Radz room,…
Radz was standing near the window in sleeveless night dress was lost in some thoughts,..Hearing Neil’s footsteps, she came back to present and covered herself with a shawl to hide Arjun’s fingerprints on her arm from Neil,…
Neil :Chasni,…you are here,..still awake,…What yaar,..Having fever???,…
Saying so Neil checked her temperature by placing his hand on her forehead,…
Neil:But,..It’s normal,…Hmmm,..Wait yaar,…Let’s check it with a thermometer ,…
Saying so,Neil tries to move was stopped by radz,…
Radz:Neil,…I’m fine,..I just felt cold,…No need to worry yaar,…I’m absolutely fine,…And Neil,..I have something to tell you,…
Neil understood what she gonna say and began,
Neil:Regarding Arjun na,…I mean you accepted to stay in his mansion na,…
Radz:Neil,..You know already!!!,..
Neil smilingly holds Radz’s shoulder and began,..
Neil:Hmmm,…And I also knew,..you are doing this unwillingly,…Chasni,one thing which disturbs me is that what makes you to say Ok to this,…Don’t try to convince me chasni,..I know whatever you do there will be some reason behind it,..But,I cant see you hurt always yaar,…
Radz with teary eyes began,
Radz:Neil,…Without pain there will be no gain yaar,…When you are with me,I can win this whole world alone yaar,…
Neil:But,I’m not with you this time chasni,..If you are hurt there,how can I,..
Radz:No Neil,…Nothing will happen to me,…And you are with me as my friend in my heart forever Neil,…
Neil:But,Chasni,…Last time too you convinced me to go alone to goa,…But,…
Neil had tears in his eyes,…Radz noticed it and holds his hands and began,…
Radz:No neil,…Life taught us many things in our every stage,..Whenever we try to find a solution to a problem, It teases us that we dinn understand the problem yet,…The light of our friendship in my heart will evade all the darkness reaching me Neil,…So if you are disturbed,then it’s indirectly saying to the world that we our self doubt the light in our heart yaar,…
Neil:Hmmm,..I hope,..Everything happens is only for good,…Take rest yaar,…I will see you tomorrow,…
Saying so Neil tried to move,…Radz stopped him again and began,…
Radz:Neil,…
Neil:What chasni?,…You need anything,…
Radz:No Neil,…Tell me one thing,..Why you din ask me the reason for any Neil?,..
Neil smilingly began,…
Neil:Answer for your question is with you itself yaar,…Our Friendship,…If you want me to ask any,…Don’t worry,…One day or one day,..I’ll ask you for sure,..Not questioning you,..But will ask you something for real and that too only if it’s needed for your well being chasni,…Good night,…Ansh already slept in sam’s room,…Don’t think about any,…
Radz smilingly nodded yes,…After Neil went,Radz removed the shawl and touched her arm where arjun’s fingerprints placed with some deep thoughts,…whereas Arjun in his mansion too touched his cheek where Radz slapped him with some deep thoughts,…
25 Comments
nice
Ooohhoo…..i waited for this renu dear….u r too perfect in ur writing….that’s why u n gauri are my inspiration…..that slap for Arjun….he needs more slaps from rads for his deeds….anyway it was fantastic…fab
I wrote down my thoughts ….pls kindly do see it n tell me how it’s….thank u
Renu!!!! Eppadi yiruka?! Long time di… Happy to see you alright…. I loved the update… Nandini saw?! She saw her slapping Arjun…. Enna ma idhu… Oru kelvi kuda kekala… No ansh today ??… That’s k.. Next update you bring him… Loved raneil… I hope how Nandini will react when she finds out about Arjun…
Take care di…. Post soon… I’m waiting
Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??
Nice
Renu pls make it regular or at least longer like drawn together
Hai renu….. thank u for such a wonerful update….. radhus slap was first class i wish radhu give 2 more to him…..? neil…. superb .. lovely frnd…. is nandhu make them together or separate…..? Plss bring ardhika close… ansh deserve both his mom and dad……
love u dear…… update fast…. tc
So sad for radz
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,….
Thanx for liking all my updates,….I hope you all will like this update too,…Really It’s hard for me to find leisure time these days,…I hope you all will understand my situation,..I’m fine,…Now My wounds are perfectly cured just had some little scars on my hand,….So,couldnt come online often and sit before my lap,..My mom gives me Just few minutes to spend time before my lap and while updating I steal few hours from her,..that’s it,…So,I hope my work will never go waste as I wanna make you all feel what I felt,..Miss you all buddies,…
I hope you all enjoyed reading Ardhika-Dori scene Explanation or my POV in the last update too,…I tried to update asap,…I swear I wont leave any of these two FF hanged without giving a proper end as Renu wont leave any incomplete,…
I’m scared of missing pieces too as it has ways to go,..I dunno how could I end it sooner as I dont like rushing the things,…So,whenever I get time,I will update both these FF guys,…Please Bear with this crazy girl na,…And I apologize,..I couldnt give long updates in ‘tale of hatred into love’,…Its Short story type,…So,please Excuse me na,…
@ Rosie,..Oh my girl,…just now I read your comment in last update,…and why dont you post the name of your FF yaar,…I searched your story,..lol,…And seriously,I loved the first chapter girl,..Superb starting,….Really feeling bad that I miss all the good stories here,…
your comment here made me to share some of my personal experience here,…Please yaar,…I also not a professional writer or bla,..bla,….I start this FF accidently for my friend and missing pieces is also another weird thought stuck my mind while analysing our ardhika,…Cox of the buddies here,I continued it,…
See,I started it after lonovla and planned to end it before Sam-Arjun Engagement as in original series,….Ameena started after radz left arjun post marriage,I think so…And many completed FF has started after ardhika love confession,…I too loved many such FFs…I just loved analysing their characters,…You all knew how deeply I was in love with our ardhika,…Your thought of starting it after slap scene is really unique,…Seriously Renu discussed about that scene many times,…So,Please dont give up my sweet heart,…Sorry for not posting it in your page,…My mobile battery down,..So after reading I posted it here,…hope you dont mind,…
Ok Take care friends,…Love you all buddies,…
Regards with love
Renu
So sorry renu dear for late reply….no need to say sorry to me…wherever u comment it’s ok for me…u replied…that’s enough for me…m speechless on ur appreciation…thanks for encouraging n supporting…comments getting from one of ma fav writer is feeling so awesome….thanks again
Awesome episode. 🙂
reallly nice..please do continue..waiting to see more of your work…really you are a fabulous writer..you portray the persons feelings too aptly..the friendship of radhika and neil is too pure..i have a doubt..it seems both radhika and arjun are tough on themselves..will they ever unite..because they both seem to be stubborn..uncompromising…really want to see ardhika cute moments in your awesome narration..sorry if i had spoken too much..
awesome update. going nice. ur imagination is really great. i love to read ur ff. waiting for ur next update..
awesome update. going nice. ur imagination is really great. update soon next part…
hey renu thats good ur wounds are recovering.. take care dear…update is super…rads did good slapping arjun….bt arjun still hurting rads…hope that in upcoming update he would give happiness to rads…n hey pls update missing pieces too
..waiting for it so much….love u dear
Renu…..
How r u?. Its really nice ma.
And unna paarata varathaiye illa adhanaala innikku
…. u have magic in ur writing renu, ..i wondered, …how u wrote these story with such a deep insight & that too in this young age. Really, god gave u gifted talent renu. Im impressed. I will never forget in my life. God bless u.
Eppadiii, dosaiya appadiye thirippi poattomla.
…nijamavey renu romba nalla irundhadhu.
And precap yenna aachu?.
Waiting 4 next update.
Ok bye….
It’s superb wonderful…..actu I’m running short of words to describe this…….1 doubt: were bth f tem touching te place te other touched lovingly or something else??????
I also ve a request: ll u update hatred to love ❤ on march 6 th f possible????its my birthday ? n also Monica sehgal’s bday…….soo plzzz?????
hi…renu how r u? .this epi.. awesome ya….tc
love your stories.
Hi renu glad to read ur comments today. Thanks for pm. I just saw ur above explanation now… Hi yes am also glad to c soooo many ffs on ardhika.. Especially one connected to d shows r really special to me… So ur missing pieces r real spl … As it fills d gap btw sam engagement and ardhikas budding relationship… Not tat hatred to love is in any way less special… That too is very touching and close to my heart….I appreciate tat despite ur accident u still come and update. Am so glad to c ur update… To be frank renu I really missed not just for ur special little lovely ffs but as a superb analyst…. Truthfully I loved both urs FFS to d core. It’s OK if u update this one as mini chapters it’s still intriguing and flows at a steady pace…. Am waiting eagerly to for u to update missing pieces.. if ur time or health permits plz do…. Am happy u won’t end any if ur FFS in a midway… And hope to c renus mmz… In full … ??? yes renu u read it right… If possible I want d whole series… (From whr u started upto d end) Though I have read many beautiful versions here… I want to read urs too… I loved and enjoyed ur ffs so far. I know am too demanding and pestering u… But can’t help it dear… Ur ff cheers me up… It’s just like watching mmz all over again… Bcoz of u I don’t miss it much as whn ever I miss it I come here to read…. As I get to visualize all ur episodes.. Thanks renu… . Be happy… U r a special and smashing writer. Take care.
Where r u yaar ….n where is manha,Roma,ameena as u all are my energy boosters…seems like everyone is busy….just tc…n visit when free
Hello! I’m here. Just got caught up in some work. Well yeah, whatever. Tell me about. How are you?
Oh.
My.
God.
Renu! That was superb. I swear you should really try wrting a book. I wait for your updates so impatiently. And I literally jump out of happiness when you update. Your single update can make my whole day.
So the chapter was mind blowing. I think next time I should google up “How to praise renu?” cause I literally don’t have words to say right now.
I just hope that nandini takes some action for this issue. I hope she helps them to sort out this matter(I know it’s hard and it’s more hard cuz renu is writing their destiny?…) Pls torture Arjun more. ?…Loved it.
Bye! Take care. ❤❤❤
Tysm for the update dear. Take care 🙂 🙂
Hi Renu my dear, how are u? Episode very nice .. .tc….
Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode my dearyyy renuuuuuuu. …loved it very very muchhhh. …I hope you’re feeling much better now…take care sweetie. …today’s update was so heart touching….ardhika hatred n anger very well written. ..you nailed it my honeyyy. ….nandini di heard everything nandini also saw rads slapped arjun but still pretending of not knowing anything….I hope she play positively and try to reduce misunderstandings btw ardhika. …nandoandu claimed her to be rads biggest fan n convinced her to a cept the project…wow…now rads will stay in arjun’s house with ansh…that will be interesting…n O’Reilly n rads convo was really awesome. ..neil is very serious n concerned for rads..loved their convo …missed ansh …nandini n arjun’s convo was quite interesting. ..looks like she wants to make arjun realize his mistake but did good job covering herself that she knows ardhika’s relationship….wowwww renuuuuuuu. …It’s too deeply written n I’m totally crazyyyyy for you n your writing…very very beautiful narration…so powerful skills n talent you have my sweeeeeet friend…just keep it up…take very good care of yourself n also your studies. …update when you get free time ….love you soooooooo muchhhhhh, muaaaaahhhhhh