again its ur salluzz with a new one shot…its about trust and mistrust…lets see what happens to our swara when the most important persons in her life mistrust her just by hearing a girls words….so here begins the tale of trust and mistrust…..
im not at all giving any character sketch, there is no raglak in it…
gadodia is a very big family, and note the point that swara is the only girl in it…..
and one more thing:im using brackets ()for making u understand that, its their point of view, and for past, i will be using full capital letters…..
at gadodia mansion
shekar:whats this laddo…we didn’t expect this frm u
swara:baba..i havt done anything….plz trust me
sumi:trust..that too u…never
swara:maa
sumi:(joing both hands) stop calling me maa…the day, when u break our trust, u lost this
swara cries
laksh:laddo…y did this…we didn’t exept this…
all started to allegn swara….
swara:(shouting) stop it……u all are mistrusting me, just because of this blo*dy b*t*h kavitha naa
“thupppp”
yes, swara receives a slap frm her baba…
shekar:if u speak a word against kavitha, i will not spare u…
swara( holding jer cheeks)baba…
dada:she deserves this slap long ago….
dadi:its all because of our affection she broken our trust
swara:i didn’t break ur trust…believe me…
kavitha:believe…that too u…how can u do swara…..if u say me, i would have moved na…bt u stoop too law….
swara:dont interfear in my family matters
shekar:whose family..u r no longer our family…
swara:baba…
sumi:just shut up swara…
shekar:u r just swara…no longer u r gadodia…im hating my self for giving birth to such girl……
swara:u all dont trust me naa
gadodia:no never….
shekar:bt we will never make u out of house..just because of society..
all goes inside
swara:why baba…y maa..why are u doing all this…i havny done anything…
some one keeps hand on her shoulder
swara:kavitha…
kavitha smirks
swara:u won kavitha
kavitha:i knw that baby…slowly i will enter to their heart too…and will throw u out of house
swara goes to her room
next morning
all are at dining table
kavitha comes there and wishes everyone
she is about to sit at a chair…
swara comes there
swara:hiw dare u to sit at this chair…its mine
shekar:behave with kavitha..atleast learn something frm her…
swara:i want my seat…
sumi:u r no longer our part swara…so plz…kavitha beta u sit there, let me see who is going to my daughter
swara; so im not ur daughter
sumi:no..my daughter died…..
shekar:laksh…make kavitha as ur pa..she needs to take responsibility naa
laksh:haa papa..
swara thinks something
swara:bhai…today u r going to become ceo naa…
laksh:after ur studies u will join me naa
swara:ofcouse bhai
laksh:u will be my pa…no one else have that ryt
swara:so sweet of u bhai…..
swara looks at her family, who is happily having dinner, she without uttering a word goes and have food with servants…..
at night:
swara gets a phone, (its a land line)
she takes the phone:
swara:hello
caller:hii shona…
there is two phone, so to here what swara is speakinh, gadodia took the phone and keeps in speaker…
kavitha (wiw….my plan has worked…this much i didn’t expect)
swara:kavyaa…
kavya:what happened shona…are u kk
swara:im perfectly alright….
kavya:i knw what happened with u is not good..bt im helpless
swara:i dont have any cimplains kavya…its all my fate, the people who treated me as princess is now treating me as servant….
kavya:dont loss hope…
by time swara hears some noise
swara:kavya..whats that
kavya:actually, my family friends house, they are searching for a maid..that discussion is going on…
swara thinks something
swara:kk kavya..i will call u….
there is a party going on….
all were very much happy exept our swara…
shekar:hello jii…its a pleasant day naa
raj:shekar, i haven’t seen ur daughter were is she
shekar:betaa…
swara feela very happy
she goes to him..bt
just then kavitha comea there
shekr avoids swara
shekar:this is my daughter kavitha…
raj:and this…
sumi:she is just a guest……
swara was taken aback….she understands that, how much they hate her
someone goes and misbehave with swara..
swara slaps him
shekar:swaraaa…
swara:dont shout..he misbehave with me
boy:u were the one who comes to me naa
swara:what
shekar:every one knws ur truth
raj:these type if girls are always behind money….
a tear fell frm her eyes…..
she goes to kavya
swara:kavya…give me that adress
kavya:which one
swara:ur family friend naa…they need servant
kavya:shonaa
swara:i have think a lot
gadodia feels bad..bt by recalling her breaking trust they keep quite….
kavya gives her adress……
swara goes and packs her dress….
she comes out…
kavitha stops her
kavitha:stop swara…we need to search ur bag..maybe u theft something
swara opens her bag and just takes a photo frame….
kavitha:whats that
swara:this ia just a family photo….
she shows it…
swara:dont think that, im takinh lthis to remember u…u knw what relationship are made by trust…u mistrust me and believe this girl naa (she wipes her tears) mm fine…im taking this photo, only to remember ur deeds….how u mistrust ur princess…
she turns and finds the diya with lighted candle
swara blow it off
swara:from here own words,i will never pray for u neither light up the diya..u r a lie..there us no god exist in the whole world….and u all,remember one thing one day u will regret for ur deeds..bt i will be not there with u at that moment…this is my words….
she goes out the house
shekar and sumi sits there in shock…
sumi:my daughter
shekar:she is no longer our daughter…she died…
kavitha(this people can again trust swara..i should do something)
kavitha comes to sumi
kavitha: maa see this..i have got this from swara room
sumi reads it out
“kavitha…i will kill u…what u said was all right…and i will make them mistrust u..”
shekar was furious
shekar:this was her so called drama…she will come back naa…that time i will sew her
outside…
she bids bye to everyone and moves….
she have just 100 rupees in her hand….
she walks some times and reaches main road..
she waves hand to stop a vehicle…
a vehicle stop near her
swara:sir..can u plz help me to find this address…
man looks at her with lust
swara feels uncomfortable with his gaze…
man:where u should go
swara:(reads the address)maheswary mansion
man was shocked
man:excuse me
swara:yes sir….i need to reach there….
man:bt how can u trust me..after all i’m a man..and this night…
swara:i don’t know sir, bt my heart says to trust u..if u could help me..it will be thank full to u..
man:get in
swara gets inside the car
swara feels that he is drunk
swara:sir u have drank naa
man:my weakness is alcohol and women
swara was scared to listen that…
swara:sir..
man:don’t call me sir,call me sanskar…my name is sanskar…sanskar maheswary..
swara shocked hearing that
swara:sir u
sanskar:yes… i’m the son of mahwswary…one and only one child…by the way, u lool so hot..
swara:u drop me here…i wll go alone…
sanskar breaks into laughing…
sanskar:dont get scared…i simply said that….im coming from a party..so little drank..dont worry i will not do anything…
saying he winks…
there was a pin drop silence in car….
they reach a bunglow..
sanskar:u..get down..i will come after some time
swara gets down and moves inside….
sanskar drives the car back
sanskar:ohh god…she is irresistible…bt y i feel bad, when i find out her fear…any ways…leave it…
at gadodia mansion
security comes inside
security:sir..im resigning my job
shekar:y so soon
security:without shona..i cant work here sir…
shekar:dont utter her name
security:u knw sir..she was ur princess by when i find out askinh a 100 rupee note to me..i feel pity sir…not on her, bt on u…
shekar:just get out
security:one day u will realise her importance sir…..
saying the security leaves…
at maheswary mansion
swara knocks the door
ap comes and opens the door…
swara:madom…kavya sent me here
ap:beta…u servant
swara:haa madom..
ap; ur name
swara:swa..
(she recalls shekar insult saying u r not swara neither their daughter)
a tear fell frm her eyes…
ap notices this
swara:my name is shona…..
ap:shona…
swara nodes….
ap instruct her about duties and all….
swara goes to servants room
ap calls someone
ap:she is safe..dont worry…..
ap turns and finds dp there
dp:annapoorna…get me a cup of cofee…and sanskar informed me that he will come today
ap:shonaa…get us coffee
dp:she reached….
ap nodes
ap:i dont understand jii..whats wrong with them…how can they do it…they didnt evn give a chance naa
dp:i wish to knw more about it….so my dear wify…will u join me…
ap:ofcourse pati dev..
meanwhile swara brings the cofee
dp and ap drinks that
dp:wow…nice coffe beta
swara smiles
sumi:my laddo…im sure that ur sasural will nevr bad mouth about us..see how tasty is ciffee prepared by my laddo
swara:thats ur princess…now give me my gift..
sumi kisses her forehead
swara comes out of thoughts….
ap:nice coffee beta…i think ur maa too is expert in it
a tear fall frm her eyes….
swara excuses and leaves…
she goes to her room and takes out the photo…she cares it…and recalled their mistrust
swara:no swara…u must be very strong…u should prove ur side….be strong swara…only truth wins at last….
ap hears this and feels bad for her…..
dp and ap goes out…now only swara was left there with ither servants…..
ap:shona..we are going out…prepare lunch
swara:jii madom
dp and ap were going through footpath, when they notices a protrait…obviously its our swara…
dp and ap goes to there..
dp:canu give me that painting…i can give u more money
ramu:sorry sir….i cant sell it
dp:we are offering u more money naa
ramu:bt that money is very much lesser than our shona love
dp and ap feels happy hearing shona name
dp:shona
ramu:our daughter…our princess…
meanwhile many people gathered there…
ramu stands up
ramu:i knw many of u r busy with their shedule…and if u have time listen to us…we, whom u all cal as colony people is going to present a drama…its not a drama bt its a live story…story of our princess..our shona….the beautifull, swara gadodia…
here begins the story of our swara
swaraaaaaa
a sound comes from outside…we can see a girl wearing jeans and a long kurtha runninh towards outside, where she can here her name being called
swara:im ready…
she going to school….our swara is just 17 years old, who is attending her last exam physics……
she goes and attend the exam well…on returning back…
swara:kaka…gaadi rukho….
swara gets out of the car..she finds a man being hitted badly with some vehicle..no one is helpinh him…
swara ask her driver kaka to lift him up..and takes to car
people:beta…u will suffer if u take him to hospital…police will be after u
swara:i dont care…i have studied that humanity is more important for everyone..bt what u doing is pity…
she gets in car and drives to hospital…
at hospiatal..
the man was recovered…
man:thanku beta…
swara:its okk….kaka…by the way where u stay…ur family
man:my name is sethu…i was a security before bt now i lost my job..i have a wife and a son..i dont knw what to do…
swara thinks something
swara:u r appointed as the security of gadodia mansion..u will have a outhouse, where u can stay with ur family..ur son’s education will be sponsored by gadodia company….
sethu was crying..his eyes were moist
sethu:beta..
swara:call me shona….so when u will join….
she smiles and left
2 nurses listens this
nurse:is she mad..paru
paru:dont say that..see evn this hospital belongs to her
nurse:what
paru:yes…she is swara..swara gadodia..the only girl chilf of gadodia family…and dont get confused wuth this, its her habit..whenever she finds anyone like this, she will appoint him or her in gadodia mansion…
nurse:strange
paru:actually, they dont need any security..bt just to help that man, she takes his family’s redponsibility
nurse:does her family never reject her doings
paru:no infact, they are proud of her..their ladddo
bith nurse left…
after somedays…
all are busy with their works…
swara is looking at laptop continuesly
dadi:laddo
swara:dont disturb…..
dada:parvati…tiday is her result naaa
swara:dada….im scared..what if i didnt get much marks…
dadi:we trust u beta…dont worry
just then shekar comes there with laksh….
swara:baba..how is the result…..
shrkar:go outside and watch…
swara goes outside and finds all badi people gathered there…..
kaka:hamari shona..state meim first he….
swara was jumbimg in happiness….
swara:suchch..
shekar nodes..
the people comes forward and takes her in arms….
all were celebrating the victory of their shona
even gadodia felt proud of their daughter…..
shekar gifts her a payal (anklet) laksh gives her some money…dada dadi blesses her and sumi kisses her
where as whole badi people give her a new model phone
swara was having tears….she very well knws that this phone is brought by their hardwork..
all blesses her….
shekar:so which college u r choosing
swara:my friend kavya maa..i will join with her
laksh:are u taking business management
swara:aree budhu…i have taken science scheme and u r asking me to take commerce subject
laksh:opps sorry…then whats ur option
swara:macro biology
laksh:so u prefer to study about this bacteria
swara:of course…and i will discover some thing new in it and ofcourse i will be success in it…and u all will prise me
sumi:wow…nice beta…im sure u will do that…..im proud of u beta….
after somedays she joins well reputed college…..there she encouter with that chudail kavitha……after that everything went upside down…because of her shona was thrown out…..
the man who tells the story wipes his tears…evn the people who were the listeners of it was crying…..
ap:do u knw, what exactly happen
ramu:no madom…and u knw even im standing here only because of her….she sponsered my children future….bt now
dp:what happened
ramu:she is working as a servant….we all wish to see her…..bt we cant see her in that contition…after she is more than anything to us….
dp says something to him
ramu:sure sir…we will come there tomorrow
dp and ap leaves
ap:i feels sad for her…
they buys some dresses and leaves to mansion
at maheswary mansion
sanskar reaches there and finds swara sitting there and watching tv
as soon as swara sees him she gets up
swara:sir…mein
sanskar:i have alredy said..dony call me sir, just call me sanskar and i love to hear it frm u…
swara:u r my boss..its u who gives me salary…so
sanskar:so what…if i pay more money, will u do anythinh….
saying sanskar comes closer to swara …..
just then dp and ap comes back….
(sanskar is behind all girls….hr loves to spend time with them..bt no one knws about this)
ap:sanskar
sanskar goes and hugs ap and dp
sanskar:i miss u maa…
ap:now u start ur business here….dont go anywhere
sanskar:then how can i have fun maa
saying he winks at swara
swara feela irritated…
at night:
ap and dp says these things to sanskar, sanskar feels bad for her
sanskar:im with u two
dp:first we should find out what happen with kavitha and shona…
sanskar:what if we ask to shona…
ap:she will feel bad naa
sanskar:lets see….
next day…
swara was sweeping the frnt..when she finds all her colony people coming there….
she was having all feelings….
tears were continuesly flowing frm her beautiful eyes
swara hugs them…
kaka:shona…what is this beta
swara:im very much hapoy here
dadi:we feel like throwing stone over that gadodia…bt every time ur face comes…
kaki:come with us beta..u will be a princedd there….we dont have any costly dree or big mansions…bt we have a big heart, where we will love u….come beta….
swara:(controlling her emotions) i..knw u..u all love me…bt..i cccant c..come ryt now….u all leave…and d..dont lose ur j..job for me…
she was hardly controling her tears….
once they left she breaks down…..she falls in the embrace of ap…
ap hugs there
swara:maa…..why this happens with me…d..did i dooo any..anything wwr..wronh….
ap:beta…look….u didnt do anything…its their mistake that..they mistrust their princess..
swara breaks the hug
swara:sorry madom (she wipes her tears)
ap:why are u seeing me as a stranger beta…im also like ur maa only naa….
swara hugs her…..
ap:come beta…come inside…..
swara:madom..i cant tell my problems to u..bt one day i will
dp:who ask u beta..we trust u…..
swara recalls how her family mistrust her…
sanskar:i donr knw what to say, bt forget about the past and look forward for a better future…..
swara nodes…
swara:how u knw about me
i informed them
swara turns back and finds kavyaa
swara goes and hugs her
kavya:dont worry…i knw u will not accept anything..so i inform them about ur arrival and all….at least i should keep my shona happy naa
swara smiles…
kavya:shona..im really hungry…get me something
swara:lunch is alredy ready…everyone wash ur hands and come
all goes inside….
kavya spents sometime there….and left
after somedays…
at maheswsey mansion
dp:anaapoorna…today shekar and his family a. re coming
ap:ohh bagwan..what will be shona reaction…
dp:i hope everything goes nicely
after sometimes…
swara was going to kitchen when sanskar stops her by pulling dupatta
swara:sir….leave
sanskar:what is this shona….i was just helping u naa…
swara:is this ur help…in our place, it have other name….
just then she heara a car sound…
she happily runs out saying maa baba…she left her dupatta down in excitement…
bt once she reaches door, she remembers about their mistrust and runs upstairs…
sanskar understand whats the matter…
kavitha too comes inside and she drips bt sanskar holds her
kavith:thanku…
sanskar left her..he was continuely searching for swara…
dp and ap welcome them
swara watches them frm upstairs
dp:shona…bring tea beta…
by hearing that name, dp and ap can understand their love to her….
swara comes slowly and moves to kitchn without anyones notice
sanskar too follows her which irked kavitha
swara:my dupataa
sanskar:its here
swara cimes her frnt with hands…
sanskar draps it around swara head like churni..and covers herself with it….
sanskar:now come
swara comes and serves them tea and snacks…
all of them failed to understand her since she was covering her face….
kavitha was stairing at sanskar….
shekar:dp jii….we invite u all for my dad’s 70th birthday
dp:that nice…i will surely come with my family….
sumi:who is this annapoorna jii
kavitha; maa she is servant….
by seeing kavitha like that swara was controlling her anger..she holds her fist, sanskar notices this and stand by her side and holds her hand tightly
kavitha notices and gets angry….
sumi comes to them
sumi:u too come beta..
by hearing that word swara eyes were filled with tears and it drops on sanskar hand
sanskar:shona…y r u crying….
kavitha:sanskar…what are u doing there….
sanskar feels irritated
sanskar:miss kavitha…im doing what im supposed to do….
just then some men comes to mansion
man:dp jii….a girl has fallen in river…call anyone and help us…
all rushes to there including swara and gadodia
sumi:kavitha, u are champion naa…rescue her….
kavitha:bt maa..its much deep….
sanskar decided to jumb bt some other jumbs instead…he finds that its swara…
sanskar:shonaaa (shouts)
swara while jumbing:hara hara maha devaaa……
all gadodia hears this..they remember about swara….how she used to say this, whenever anyone is in danger
she swims and takes the child….
all were relieved….
all takes care of the girl, where as sanskar dp and ap takes swara and immediately left to mansion…
gadodia looks on confused…..
bt they neglected it and goes to their house
swara; maa..im okk..what this
sanskar:who said u r kk..i will jumb naa…who said u to become jhaasi raani
swara pouts…
sanskar:now seat here…2 days u r under my observations
swara:its wrong…im kk..and i will..
before she could say further, sanskar keeps his finger on her lips
sanskar:warna…
sanskar goes…
ap and dp
ap:i can see love in sanskar eyes
dp:bt shona wont aguree…and she is also ryt at her place….first let us help her to united with her family….
ap nodes….
at gadodia…party was going on full swing…
maheswary reaches there…swara too was presented in car
swara:maa..u all go…i cant come here…
sanskar:u two go..we will join u….
ap and dp goes there…and was shocked to find swara pic witj garland..
ap:jii..look naa..how can they do this….
just them sumi invites them inside….
swasan comes frm backyard and peeps inside….both were standing on a bench..so sanskar have hold swara by waist, bt she didnt even bothered about it..
they can see all the preparation frm inside..
dada comes to cut the cake…
swara:u knw sanskar, everytime naa..it will ne me who will get first bite..nt now see…
sanskar:chill swara..
dada cuts the cake…kavitha comes to take first bite bt due to push frm further side, the cake piece slipped and fall on the lips of swara and remaining on swaras pic….
swara was shocked seeing that…ap and dp notices it
she was crying due to happiness
swara:see sir..
meanwhile all otherd where shocked to see picture having cake piece…
all ignore that, next piece dada gives to laksh since he was very close to him…
kavitha geta irked seeing on this…
swara:sir…u go..i will ne in car….
sanskar lefts his hand and leaves…
he goes inside and geta angry to find swara photo with garland…
at that time due to some current flow electricity, bulbs start to vibrate and some lights moves violently..meantime; something fall on sanskar pocket…
party werr over
dp ap sanskar comes outside and finds swara sitting there…
they were about to go when thet here something
boy:maa..i can feel shona dii presence..she is somewhere here
maheswary were shocked hearing that..
boy calls evryone
boy:do find anything different in smell
all smells
all:shona dii…..
swara:maa..we can go..else they will find me..
dp:go to them beta..they are innocent
meanwhile the children reaches there
they were happy seeing swara…all jumps in happiness…they hugs her…
swara also smiles whole heartedly
maheswary gets happy seeind it….
they bid bye to them and leaves….
in car
swara:sir..please stop the car…
sanskar stops the car
swara walks….and stop when she reaches near icecream vendor
maheswary can hear them
vendor:shonaa….where were u beta…we all are missing u
swara:thats why i came naa
vendor:i knw wht happens with u…come to my home beta..i will lool after u as my daughter
swara:no kaka….i knw u all loves me…bt trust me, now im very much happy….
vendor:here is ur favt ice cream….
vendor hands over a chocolate ice cream..
she gives the money and comes back…
sanskar:its not fair shona…evej we are here
swara:i really dont knw that even u will like it
they spend time there
at maheswary mansion
swara is having fever at night…
ap:who told u to have ice cream at night…
swara smiles
swara:even, my maa used to say this..
sumi:how many times i dont u not to eat ice cream at night
dada:my laddo..u eat beta…we should enjoy all sorts of life…
sumi:u all are pampering her naa
swara smiles…
she lays down there
sanskar:maa i will sleep here….
ap:what
sanskar:dont u trust me
dp:we trust shona..u sleep here only…
(its a couch, two couches keeps adjacent to each other)
swara was sleeping on one and sanskar on other…
in between their hands comes in contact…swaras one hand was above sanskar hand (as we are promising something)
next morning
ap comes there and finds it
ap:i think even god doent want to separate them…..
ap waks up sanskar and swara
both gets up
ap:shona..are u kk now…
swara nodes….
sanskar was going to remove hia shirt…
swara notices a chain in his pocket..
swara:sir…show that chain in ur pocket..
sanskar takes that chain…
swara was jumping in happiness….
all comes there…
swara:maa…see my chain…
sanskar:whats there in it..how it comes to me
swara:i think accidently it reaches ur pocket….i got it..
she goes to the house temple and rings the bell continuesly..
swara (wuth tears) now i beleive that…u r there..else i wont get it…..hara hara mahadeva…
she does the aarti…
all were lost in her melodious song…
ap:whats there in beta
swara:maa..it was my maa chain..she used to say that it should be my mangalsootr..
dp:thats y u become so happy
swara; noo papa..actually in it i have hidden a memmory card..which can prove that every thing was done by kavitha…that day she took this and throws it…bt see naa..it reached me naa….
dp:god will test us..bt at last only truth wins..
just then the chain falls from sanskar hand and it rotates…
both swasan ran behind it….and accidently it was stuck in a rabbit neck….they follow the rabbit…after a encounter they got the rabbit and takes the chain…
swara face was having dust, so sanskar wipes it away….
ap and dp sees something and gets shocked as well as happy…..
after a week….
at 11:45
sanskar comes to swara room and takes her in arms….swara shouts bt
no one comes to help her
he drop her in floor..and lights on…
she is shocked to see the decorations…and a board
“happy birthday shona”
she gets very happy…tears were flowing frm her eyes…
ap gifts her a saree and ask ber to wear it tomorrow….
dp:tomorrow we are going out and night party time
swara was feeling very happy….
that day they njoyed a lot with her friends colony people and all…
at party….
gadodia reaches there
shekar:dp jii..whose birthday is goinh on
dp:my shona…
kavitha:ohh that servant….
just then swara comes down with beautiful gown…she was lookinh stunnting..gadodia left shocked…..
swara cuts the cake and gives to ap dpa nd then sanskar…..
kavitua started to insult swara infrnt of all…..
just then
dp:dont dare raise a word against my daughter in law….
all guest including gadodias kavitha swara sanskar was shocked
swara:maa…app kya..
ap (interepted) mein sach bol thi he
sanskar:maa…when did i marry her
dp:do u remember, how u two run behind that rabbit
swasan nodes
ap:where where u got it
swara:temple
dp:did u noticed that all were staring at you two
swasan noded
ap&dp:thats because u two were getting married with all ritials…even though it was accidently done, u became our daughter in law our sanskar wife…
swasan:maa papa
swasan was runninh behind the rabbit..and it reaches to temple, there special pooja was going on for a couple….
swara dripped and was about to fall when sanskar holds her hand..they can runs around temple by sanskar at front and swara just behind him with holding hand..after 4 rounds swara came front and sanskar was back of her..like that way they completed saath phera..all people stair at them…
mean time sanskar accudently touches maata raani kumkum
swara face was full with dust, so sanskar wipes it off and his kumkum comes to her vermillion….
it was a shock to whole people..
swara takes the rabbit and removes memory card..as sanskar finds swara struggling to tie tje chain, sanskar helps her.. (marriage gets completed)
bt our swasan were completely unaware if this all..pandit comes and blesses them…
once they reaches back…swara accidently steps on broken glass and with that she enters inside..like that way foot prints also came..swara prepared food for everyone, thus that also get completed
swara falls down in shock…
swara:how can this happen
ap:this is truth..see even god doesn’t want to seperate u both..
dp:accept this beta…its our request
sanskar:maa
ap:sanskar beta…shonaa…..
sanskar helps swara to get up…now she was like a lifeless body….
swara:maa….
she cries and runs to her maa…
ap and sumi was standing together
sumi was happy somewhere that she is coming to her….bt swara goes and hugs ap which shocks everyone
swara:maa..i dont knw, whethr im ryt ir wrong..bt i trust u and baba…i..i accept this marriage maa….
shekar:swara…what are u speaking….how can u decide ur marriage…without our concert…
sanskar:who are u to ask that
shekar:im her dad…
sanskar:dad..wow…do u knw whats the meaninh of that…dont u have shame to call urself as her dad…when she needed u all the most, u mistrust her and throws her out…..and still u r claiming that she is ur daughter
dp:shekar…i cant understand u all…once we used to respect u all..bt when i find swara pic with garland, i hated myself..how can u do that with ur daughter, knwing she still alive, u people did her shraad..
ap:dp jii…they dont knw the value of relationship…else; they will trust shona whom they knw for 23 years other than beliving a girl whom they knew just for weeks….and sumi jii…im very much thankfull to u…if u have not thrown shona, i vould never get a daughter in law like this…she already fullfilled the responsibility as daughter and now daughter in law…..
kavitha:u r trusting this b*t*h…
sanskar slaps her
sanskar:how dare u to call my shona like that…not only u no one have the ryt to call her or insult her l…she is my wife swara..no no..she is not swara…she is shona..shona sanskar maheswary….
all this time swara was standing like a lifeless body…..
sanskar:its movie time naa…lets see the movie..
a recording is seen…….(i will tell it in breif )
kavitha:swara baby…how are u….
swara:kavitha…just leave…
kavitha:i will, bt promise me that u will leave away frm rajat
swara:which rajat
kavitha:come on swara…dont act
swara:i don’t have time to listen ur bakwaas….
kavitha:what the hell
swara ignors her talks and moves away….
kavitha comes and slaps swara
swara was shocked
swara:kavithaa..
kavitha:scream as much u can..no one will come…because of u my rajat left me naa..now i will make y feel the same pain, how it will be when ur loved once throw u…
swara:i havnt done anything to ur rajat
kavitha:u said him naa..im dating with other boy
swara:as a friend it was my responsiblity
kavitha:so u will only say truth na…now see with in 5 days..i will make ur life hell, ur family will throw u out
swara smiles
swara:my family. ..throwing me out…u will loss kavitha..because i know my family..theu will trust me…
kavitha:lets see…
(these all were recorded accidently)
next day….
kavitha comes to gadodia..and says that she is swara friend..so they invite her inside, they came to knw tbat she a orphan..so they asked her to stay here….
swara comes and finds kavitha there..she gets shocked….
kavitha:y do u get shocked swara…
swara:y should i be shocked
kavitha:may be because….
dadi:kavitha…whats going on
kavitha:u dont knw swara is dating a boy…
all looks shocked
swara:what..mee that too date…
kavitha:i knw u will not belive me..so i have proof..
she shows some photos that too w
ith different man..kavitha even brings them to mansion and they all say that all are in relationship with swara….
sumi:is this true
swara:what the hell maa….how can i date with many..if it is one or two..no problem….by see
kavitha:maa..u knw she have transferred 10crore ruppess….
swara:what are u saying
kavitha:see the details….
all sees her sign in it…..
man:actually..i want money to start a business..so swara helped me
swara:what..and when
man:dont u remember jaan…for my business on girls and even drugs
like this way all start to cross our swara….poor gadodia fall in it and mistrust swara….
sanskar:why are u sweating kavitha…see urself….
gadodia:means
ap:it was all prepanned one…to take ur property…at first 10 crore….and when she find out that, all properties wilp be on swara when she become 24, she planned to kill swara..bt shekar jii was get hitted inside…
dp:do u remember. .ur blood grp was raelre..when shona came to knw about accident, it was her who gives u blood
police comes and arrest kavitha….
gadodia ask forgiveness frm swara…bt she was still standing there….
shekar:laddo….
swara (in slow voice) who is ur laddo..she have died long ago…im shona..just shona
sumi:wilp u not forgive me beta…
swara remebers all their accusations and screams
swara:maaaa
swara falls down unconcious…..
shekar was about to take her
sanskar:dnt touch my wife…
sanskar lifts her in arms and goes to hospital….
gadoda remember how swara said that once u wilp regret for this by that time she will be not there…..
dr comes
sanskar:how is she….
dr:don’t worry…just due to tension and stress….take care..nothing to worry…..
sanskar enters inside
sanskar:will u forgive ur family…
swara:yes sir
sanskar:they did this much
swara:even if, in thier place it was u, u could have behaves same way…i cany hate them they are my family….without them im nothing….u knw sanskar the day in dada birthday, i could see the love in their eyes for me…more over, tbey didn’t allow kavitha to enter my room…they al love me sanskkar…for these days their heart was concord bt black and darkness…everything hapens for good only….
sanskkar looksat her lovingly….
al gadodia and maheswary hears this and feels proud of their swara/shona/laddo….
after smedays…
now sanskkar was totally fall for swara… (they didnt consumate their marriage)
sanskar comes and find swara standinh at the balcony….he goes and hugs her frm back..
swara was breathing heavily…
swara:sir…
sankr:cll me my name
swara:sa..sanskaar
he was very hapy to listen it frm her mouth
she was about to go bt sanskar stops her
sanskar:pz…dont stop me today..
saying he places kisses on het forhead nose eyes and last her pinky lips….
thy consumate their marriage…
the end…..
its all related to trust…never lose trust on ur loved once…
29 Comments
Awesome
it was awesome dear
No douby its true once trust is lost it cant be regained but shona forgive her family thats good very well done but dear when will u post ur ff will u post some day or not
emotional n heart touching
Awesome but i angry on u that u didn’t update ur ff plz update asap
nice one
Awesome saluzz….. No doubt its very very nice….
Amazing.
Awsm
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awsome dear
nice
Throughout I was weeping….I mean what a story….amazing….
Amazing dear?? trust is da most important im evry relationship…
Nice dear
Nice..
It’s great but plz upload the second part of ur last os which is still incomplete
Superb
Hey i won’t tell much but the truth is that it was really really superb.AWESOME YAAR.No words to describe……LOVED IT
awsome…….
gud
Awesome.
Nice dea…
Awesome??
Wow salluzz…..once again an awesome os…..
nice loved it
awesome dear