Hey guys no bakbak… lets get started wid episode 13…
Scene 1(TH)
Leela is sitting der again thinking bt now for the Luthra’s to come… n same again.. they come n she welcomes them n does their mehmaan-nawaaaazi… she greets them n asks if there was any particular reason for coming…(n again the same.. that is anita asks for uv n chinki’s marriage proposal n she asks for some time to think…)
Scene 2(coffee shop)
Twinkle n chinki r sitting full tired completed their lunch…
T- chinki I think now its time to b home…
C- yea twinkle.. bt let me check the time…(she sees) ohh its just 1:40pm..
T- oh wooww we completed it fast right??
C- yea right n also our lunch… its niceee… come lets go n surprise maa..
T- hmm.. good idea.. maa wld b totally shocked..
C- obviously… lets go..
They leave..
Scene 3(airport)
Kunj comes back… he feels as he is back home on the airport..
K- (self talk) ohh wow… finally m back… bt let me call uv.. n inform him.. ahh no no no.. I shld surprise him… I’ll go to his home… (bt uv is at TH.. lol..)
He leaves for luthra house…
Scene 4(TH)
Leela is busy talking to anita n uv keeps on listening to them…
A- u remember leela me n u were once for a year together at school…
L- yea obviously I remember I had to join the school just for a year n v’ld shifted again.. how I miss those days anita.. bt I dint recognize ur voice on the phne… m so sorry for that…
A- ohho leela.. wat sorry.. u don’t remember wat rules of friendship v’d made in school.. in friendship no thank u n no sorry…
L- yes I remember…
They go on talking n laughing remembering their childhood…. Meanwhile leela gets a call…
L- I’ll jus come in a minute…
A- ohh sure..
She goes n attends the call…
L- wat happened?? U did my work..???
Voice- yes mam I hve done it..
L- ohkk then speak up wat information u got??
Voice- he is truly a nice guy.. u can trust him.. n if he gives a marriage proposal.. he shall b accepted…
L- ohkk.. that’s good… n yea u’ve done a great job…
Voice- ohh thank u ma’am.. byee…
Call ends.. leela comes back to them..
L- ohh m sorry to make u wait..
A- again sorry?
L- ohhk baba.. no sorry no thank u… happy?
A- no…. happier… n laughs..
Suddenly there’s a voice… hey maa.. see v r back… all three turn to the door…it is none other than chinki… uv is mesmerized at her… twinkle n chinki come inside…
L- ohh… u both came early…
C- wat early maa only 5 mins r left to 2pm… (makes a pout face)
T- dr. uv u here.. btw hi..
C- ohh hi.. (whispers to twinkle) btw who is that lady??
T- (whispers back) idk.. bt I think she is his mom…
C- ohh..(in a low voice) maybe..
L- kya khusur-phusur kr rhe ho tum dono.. baitho yahan aakar..
T- ji maa..
A- hi chinki hello twinkle…
T&C- hi aunty… (fakes smile) hi uv..
Uv- hi u both…
A- I think u r not happy to see me…
C- sorry to say… actually v dint recognize u…
A- ohh…. I see.. actually m uv’s mom..
T- ohkk.. hi aunty.. I guessed that out but wasn’t sure..
A- ohh that’s ok.. btw chinki how r u.. u not speaking??
C- m fine aunty.. its jus that I was a bit tired due to this shopping…
Uv- ohh so u’d been for shopping??
C- umm.. I guess yea(teases him)
L- u talk like this to ur guests chinki??
C- oh m sorry maa.. bt I was making fun..
A- its ok leela… btw do they know the actual reason for which v’ve come…
T- wat reason maa..
L- wo actually twinkle…
Suddenly she stops as uv gets up n goes to chinki n sits on his knees…
U- chinki I n mom had come here for a marriage proposal to u wid me… will u marry me??
Chinki sits there stunned… she has no words.. she gets thinking… I like him n maybe wanna marry him.. so I wont say no.. bt if I say yes.. maa twinkle n all vl think as if I was just waiting for this proposal… so I think now I’ve to do something…
C- ohhk.. bt I need some time to think…n she stands up…
Uv- gets up… yea sure.. I wont force u…
C- oh thnx.. n maybe within 24 hrs I’ll reply to it.. will that b ohkk???
Uv- yea its ok wid me.. turns to anita… is that ok wid u???
A- ohh yes its ok.. n y do I hve a prblm u r gonna marry her.. if u don’t hve prblm y shld I hve??(teases him)
Uv- ohh mom.. now I think that…
A- yes that v should leave…
L- ohh.. bt anita..u cld hve sat for more…
A- ohh leela… I’ll now coming here evry now n then once I get chinki’s reply…(teases again).. till then u tell them our childhood stories… byee…
Uv- byee aunty.. byee u both..
T&C- byee aunty byee uv…
Anita n uv leave…
Scene 5
Kunj reaches luthra house to find it locked.. he thinks maybe they went out as it’s Sunday today.. n my dear brother uv gets time to go somewhere wid anita aunty only on Sunday.. its ok I’ll come later.. n I shld go to sarna mansion… I’ll surprise them…
Scene 6(TH)
T- maa wat childhood stories anita aunty was telling abt??
L- actually for a year I’d studied in the school wer anita studied n dat too in her class… n within the year v had bcome very good friends…..
C- ohhh.. ohhh… ohkkk maa.. I understood everything… n m goin to rest m very tired…
L- ha ha u go…
T- actually maa m sorry to disappoint u bt I also understood everything n wanna go n rest..
L- arre there is nothing to disappoint.. actually I only wanted to inform dat she is a very good friend of mine whom I met years later… n yes u go n rest u maybe tired bt in the evening show me also wat all u brought..
T- yea maa sure.. n yes u better hve lunch coz v both hve had it out only…
L- ohh meri maa.. jaake aaram kr.. mai khaa loongi….
T- ohhk then.. m goin….
She leaves…
Scene 7(SM)
Kunj reaches there… bebe n usha r talking… he overhears them n gets shocked dat instead of going inside he moves aback…
Screen freezes at kunj’s shocked face…
Recap- bebe n usha r excited on kunj’s return n kunj is not so happy…
hope u like it n plzzzzzzzz comment coz they r decreasing…
18 Comments
hiii aliza… i have been a silent writer bt u write amazing.. this update ws awesome
thanks yashu… m glad there r silent readers also of my ff…
Loved it can u do something that kunj will fall love in first sight with twinkle. Plz
thnx aaru.. bt actually i’ve planned one of the biggest twists wen they meet n maybe they vl meet in episode 15…
Nyc episode..
Awesome wonder when will twinkle know that kunj is his donor
thnk u so much sam.. bt as this ff name says tashan n twists r at almost everypoint…. n wen twinkle vl know is also another twist
Oh Aliza it ws jus amazing epi dear loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much do cont soon plzzzzz luv u
aww thnx zikra i’ll cot as soon as i get nice idea.. n maybe till 2moro morning ull get it…
Nyc wat did kunj hear lyk dat he gt shocked
oh dear cutie pie.. ull get to knw in the next part…
it was awesome….
thnx tamanna u guys comments r my strength….
this is awesome
thnx zyna
maybe kunj hear about his marriage and aliza episode was awesomeeeee…………..amazing……….wonderful…………superb……………
thnx fiona… n ull get to know abt it soon dear…
Nice yrr