hi friends……..thanks for the support and i would to thanks vinni,star,kavya,komal,rashi,arush,gopika and all the commenters. oh!how can i forget my dear friends tara and rakhita (ananya) . thay are awsome.
for the first episode you can go to
http://www.tellyupdates.com/tashan-e-ishq-become-intro-episode-1/
for the second one
http://www.tellyupdates.com/tashan-e-ishq-become-episode-2/
so let’s start
@college
in the classsroom kunj and alisha are sitting in one place and twivraj (twinkle and yuvraj).
t: wow!they look cute together…right yuvi???(looking at kunj and alisha)
y: not like us……..
then he goes towards twinkle and going to kiss her
t: (pushing him) yuvi door hat..college hai..yaha to accha behave kar
y: accha (in a angry tune) chal thik hai college main main ab tuj se bat tak nahi karunga tab jana us kunj yani apne dost ke pass
t: nahi yuvi nahi please main..mera matla…..
yuvi went from there.tears came out from eyes of twinkle and then kunj come (he saw all the thinks from there )
k: twinkle please dont cry.he will come back.i promise you that i will take him.
twinkle sees him (sajna ve plays)
there yuvi starts flirting with alisha.
y: hi baby
a: hi yuvi my baby
they hugged
a: i am feeling bad when you are with twinkle.
y: me too feel when you are with kunj
yuvi was touching alisha (friends you can understand how)
alisha sees kunj coming and informed yuvi but yuvi starts doing it continuously. alisha was telling please leave me please leave.(acting in front of kunj)
kunj sees it and pulled yuvi by his collar and says
k: there twinkle is crying for you and here you are doing this….(in a angry tone)
y:she is criying so what can i do (in a laughing voice)
kunj starts beating yuvi and yuvi also going to start beating but he sees twinkle coming.
y: (crying)i have not done anything
k: (he is beating continously)
just then twinkle stops him .
t: what are you doing kunj???you told that that………(she stops and hold yuvi)
(yuvi smirks at kunj)
k: twinkle she is doing bad with alisha
t: he can not do this thing as he is not as other bad guys
k: he is just telling bad things on you also …twinkle please belive me
t: no kunj. i thought you ar good but you also like that
twinkle leave with yuvi and kunj feels bad.he also take alisha with him.
at night
twinj are feeling bad for each other
t: i should not talk o kunj like that….may i call him once???
k: yuhi had not done well. he wants to break our (twinkle and kunj) friendship
twinkle calles him
Precap:what will twinkle say to kunj in phone??
guys.hope u like this episode…please comment.
lets see what will twinkle say to kunj???will he accept the words and forgive her????how kunj will show yuvi’s trurth..
please comment your reviwes…
13 Comments
Awesome Tina…liked it a lot ….??????
Vryy nicc
Nice perspective tina it was just awesome an amzing line of story really different
Yeah liked it…plzzzz post the next part
Very good custom constructed story line.
N thank u to write in English ! I give you my word to support u throughout ur ff journey…
hey tina..m gr8ful that u took my name..cmng to ur ff..it was superb! very diff storyline…nd hope to see our twinj soon!
Awesome Tina ur ff is very very very..lol nice I liked a lot….waiting for the next episode what will happen….interesting???
nice epi tina…..loved it
awesome yaar tina…………….
Tina….. Ohh….thanku ……shooooo much…luv u Nd Nd ur ff…..itz just gonna kill me…….!!!! Wonderful splendid..awesome!!!!??
Wow! Amazing in fact wonderfull keep going on plz dear, tina give a longer update…. Nd daily update also……..make a twinkle forgive kunj. Tina ajj tu tunea mar hi dala mera heart ko….. Nice dear.
yhanks dear friends but sorry that i cannot post today.