Hii everyone… this is sweetie thank u for all ur comments on my previous ff… im really speecless the love u gave me… i just love u all ?????
I couldnt stop myself from writing ff even though my school is started that is because of all ur love…!!!
Im really happy that i will be writing my third ff… I JUST LOVE U ALL…!!!
My ffs dialouge will mostly be in hindi… as they sound more funny hope u all dont mind…!!
I will be introducing the characters when needed nd i will just go with my episode… plzz do support me as always…!!
Introduction
Twinkle: a fat girl wearing spectacles very kind nd sweet her parents her very strict bestest friend of kunj, sister of uvi taneja
After the leap… a cute girl who is very sweet nd kind nd lovable always want to spread happiness can sacrifice her life for anyone she love… her parents died in a car crash
Kunj: a handsome boy who is loved by everyone he was an orphan nd used to stay with bebe bestest friend of twinkle… brother of mahi sarna
After the leap… a chocolaty boy who loves girls sweet kind caring lovable a little flirty
The episode
A school is shown then a class 10 C where one girl is sitting nd completing her notes she is wearing spectacles nd is very fat many of them hate her she is just into her world but is very sweet nd kind the others dont like her at all who is revealed to be twinkle then a guy enters the class all the girls r lost in him his loose tie his folded sleeves he is also a student he is revealed to be kunj he comes nd sits beside twinkle
Kunj: how r u merii jaan?
Twinkle: kunj stop it u know na i dont like this at all… nd what have u done to urself atleast in school wear ur uniform properly
Kunj: uffoo achaa merii maa (folding his hands)
Twinkle: good boy
Two girls come to kunj
Girl 1: hii kunj
Kunj: hey
Twinkle starts to complete her notes
Girl 2: kunj why do u sit with this chashmish behenjii… come with us nd sit
Twinkle just keeps her head down nd completes her notes her eyes full of tears she us hiding it from kunj he looks at twinkle tear drop falls down on her book she hurridely cleans it kunj looks on angry he stands up
Kunj: dont u dare tell anything to her… did u get it… nd this is my life i will decide with whom i will sit u got it
Girl 2: whatever we were just helping u to be away from this fatso
Kunj just pushes the girl
Kunj: DONT U DARE TELL ANYTHING ELSE
Twinkle is shocked she gets up nd rushes to the garden which is outside the school she falls down on her knees nd cries kunj comes running there he sits down with her nd keeps his hand on her shoulder twinkle hugs him tightly
Kunj: sshhh twinkle plzz dont cry u know right i cant see u crying
Twinkle: (still crying) k..kunj… wh…what is my fault.. if i… if im like this
Kunj breaks the hug nd cups her face
Kunj: sshhh… nothing… u dont have to cry for this stupid thing… u r perfect for me
Twinkle: dont joke kunj… u r just telling so that i wont feel bad… warna who will like a girl who is so fat nd wear spectacles
Kunj: thats what merii jaan… u r chubby i like u because of that
Twinkle smiles
Twinkle: im sooo lucky to have a friend like u
Kunj: nd im lucky to have a friend like u (pulling her cheek) i love u motii
Twinkle: i love u 2… do i have to mention as a friend??
Kunj: u know u dont have to
Twinkle smiles kunj nd twinkle goes to their class nd the school gets over they both go to their respective homes nd chat all day on facebook twinkle sleeps screen freezes on her face
Precape: leap of 10 years
Hey guyzz hope u liked the story line… plzz do comment…!!!
19 Comments
Nyc part waiting 4 d nxt part post soon n twinki ko itni moti mat banao yaar i cnt imagine her lyk dat all d bst cintinue soon
Sweetieeeee I m very happy that u r back….just luv u loads n ff it was osum as always n I hope u will update ur ff soon….??
Awesome beginning… Eager to see what’s up next…
Yr amazing pls post nxt asap i jst want 2 read it
So glad that you’re back.. I liked the story line..please continue soon.
Really really glad that u r back……☺ and ur ff is osm.. luvd it ♡. Plz post the nxt epi soon..
Hey glad u came back plz post as soon as possible…..
u r back. im really happy. n your ff its just amazing.
Sweetie m so glad tht u r bck ……. amazing beginning …… wtng fr d nxt one …… pls post it soon …….
Sweetie dats very amazing ur ff start is osmmmmmmmm loved it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont nxt update asap plzzzzzzzzz luv u
Sweetie dats very amazing ur ff start is osmmmmmmmm loved it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont nxt update asap plzzzzzzzzz luv u……
hey sweeti u remembered me i read both ur ff and was eagerly waiting for next and here it is
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as usual ..but sorry to say if you dont mind have u got this idea from ek duje ke vaste as they also shown leap and before leap tha heroine was fat so sorry if i hury u but i just thought ?btw u r awesome dear loved it??????????????????????????????????????
woowww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! twinkle ka new avatar motii… bt i think aft leap she would b perfect
Cute nice form of twinkle
Twinkle should not be fat she should be slim overall it’s good
Hey Sweetie, I am very happy that you are back with a new story…….Awesome Starting…….Plz dont make twinkle fat…….love u & ur ff
nice starting sweetie
Gud sweetie i loved the intro. Thnk u sooooo much for coming back with new ff…. Ur previous ff was outstanding dear i mean more than that dear …. i mean i m speechless …:*:*:*:*.. By the way wats ur real name
Gud sweetie i loved the intro. Thnk u sooooo much for coming back with new ff…. Ur previous ff was outstanding dear i mean more than that dear …. i mean i m speechless …:*:*:*:*.. By the way wats ur real name….