Hey Guysss …. I am not going to make this long. Firstly thanks for all the beautiful mails… All the mails were so gud that it made my day… So thanks a ton for them…. It made me realise dat there are many silent readers of the ff out there too…. Then there was again a dent in the comments for the previous post but I have decided to not let it affect me so ONLY COMMENT IF YOU WANT TO. But my heart felt thanks for my persistent comm-enters, they are – Sidmin78, SSK, Cheeni, Yashika, Msmahi, Presha, Ananya_DSK, Twinj2000 and Khushi Deshmani…. I also want to send my love and thanks to the 19 people who liked the update and 1 who disliked it for sharing their reaction towards the ff. Now lets head to the recap….
Recap – Viren – Jeevika, Twinkle wants to talk… let me hear her out once before we come to a conclusion…
Jeevika – Virenji (Viren tries to convince Jeevika signalling her and then she sighs a sigh of compulsion and they leave)
In the room…
Twinkle – Jiju, Yuvi wants to settle in life. He has moved on in life. He is love with someone and wants to marry her and give her the respect and honor she deserves. If we do this with Yuvi, we will not just do wrong him but also her … I just …
Viren – One minute, I get your point but we won’t do anything if we punish Yuvi…
Twinkle – I know that but he is guilty and everyone deserves a second chance…
Viren – Jeevika was right, you are just being too nice…
Twinkle – But Jiju, Love changes everyone…
Viren – Who knows that better than you(and smiles)… Your love had changed Kunj but its not necessary that it changes everyone… Moreover how do we know if he is lying?
Twinkle – No Jiju … I can see true loveand the pain of staying away from her in Yuvi’s eyes and also that it had changed him… Jiju I have seen him quite closely… And can see that he has changed.
Viren(sighs) – Fine … I can’t say no to you anymore…
Twinkle – That’s right… Reason 1 – I am make sense and I am right … Reason 2 – I am your favourite behan urf saali …
Viren(shakes his and and smiles) – The “urf” and “saali” is not needed. Your my sister before being my saali and on onne can ever change that…. (and they hug…)
Everyone waits in the lounge of Vadhera Mansion for Twinkle and Viren… And finally they make their entry…
Viren – Yuvraj (he nods attentively) Go back to London, convince your girl and make us meet her… Hum bhi tho tak Yuvi ko kisnay badal daalah(Everyone smiles except for Jeevika and Kunj)
Jeevika – Virenji, Aap kaisay
Viren – Mainnay faisla kar liya hai, Jeevika ….(Jeevika gets very furious and is about to leave when Kunj stops her)
Kunj(whispers) – Bhaabhi filhaal its better that we stay quite, hamara kehna and karna is of no use now…
Jeevika(whispers) – Virenji ka tho ab khair nahi … I wont spare him … Mere manna karnay ke bhawajood Virenji ne
Kunj(whispers) – I know Bhabhi, don’t spare him… Neither am I going to spare your sister…
Jeevika(whispers) – Deal, par meri behan ko zyada math sathana…
Kunj(whispers) – DEAL…(and they leave together…)
Yuvi (walks towards Twinkle) – Thank you so much… You have done a big favour on me… I am already guilty for what I did to you… And on top of that this favour… How will I repay for you for what you for me in this life???
Twinkle – By keeping however the girl is that you love, happy …
Yuvi – Your achaai just makes me guiltier …
Twinkle – You don’t have to be if you have changed and renewed your intentions …
Yuvi – BTW Twinkle… (just then Kunj interrupts them)
Kunj – Yuvraj, Can I steal my love for a while (they both look at kunj strangely)
Yuvi(with a confused face) – Sure you caaannn…(And Kunj pulls Twinkle to her room…)
Kunj’s room
Twinkle – Are you mad??? Leave my hand its hurting really badly… And I am not a kid that hold my hand and drag me…
Kunj – Oh well I am very sorry for disturbing your interesting conversation with your ex-boyfriend I mean ex-fiancée…
Twinkle – How cheap of you Kunj…
Kunj – yeah right…
Twinkle – Excuse me Kunj… Have you like lost it??
Kunj – Don’t tell me that you don’t have a soft corner for him, its quite evident BTW…
Twinkle – Just because I am hearing doesn’t mean that you can just say anything .. To hell with you and to hell with your insecurities!!!!!(she then storms out of the room leaving and angry teared and pareshan Kunj)
Vireeka’s Room
Jeevika is also pareshaan and is walking back and forth the room…
Just then Viren enters the room
Jeevika – VIRENJI!!!!!!!
Viren (revives his ear from the disaster that occurred to it …) – if you scream like this one day you and I, we both will need earing aids…
Jeevika – Virenji aapko mazak sooj raha hai… Woh sab jhoot tha naa jab apne kahan ki Twinkle aapke saali nahi behan hai and all or is it that brothers are more superior for you, or is it the you came under the influence of her naïve talks and thoughts… I need an answer Virenji!!
Viren – Jeevika, you need to calm! Otherwise don’t expect any explaination from me! Have even realised gussay mein tumnay kya kya keh diya hain?
Jeevika (realises) – Virenji, pata nahi mujhai kya … I am sorry… Virenji, Twinkle did all those for Kunj and the family but even Kunj doesn’t want this … Twinkle bohot masoom hai par I have seen how much she suffered… Virenji, her therapist said that she was on the verge of schizophrenia. Her therapies and our support pulled her back to life. How do see the one who had hurt my sister so much get away from his crimes so easily… I know that Twinkle has an extremely big heart, and proud of that but that doesn’t mean she…Virenji, Aap samaj rahe ho na?
Viren (nods) – I understand that Twinkle is forgiving him quite easily but she isn’t doing this for Yuvi…
Jeevika – Haan I know she is doing this for Kunj and our family…
Viren(shakes his head) – No, Twinkle she is doing this for the one Yuvi loves…
Jeeevika – Mathlab?
Viren – Mathlab, yeh ki Yuvraj has sincerely changed… that’s what twinkle thinks, but remember, Yuvi told us that he love someone? He wants to get married and settle down, he is wants to change. Now if he wants to get married and change, we will have to get him married to her with all rituals and we will have to give her due respect of being the bahu of Vadhera Khandan… And how will she get the respect and be happy here when her husband is not forgiven, hated and not rspected? Usspay kya guzaregi ? Twinkle bohot samajdar hai… Sab kuch soch kar apne sharpness aur bade dil ke jugaal bandi se ussnay phaisla kiya tha… Ab uske sath dena hai ya nahi yeh tumhari phaisala hai…. (and he leaves leaving a confused Jeevika behind…)
Precap – Twinkle – I Love You Kunj !
Kunj (smiles) – I love you too Twinkle …
Question of the day – Which is your favourite book? (Let me know through your comments and mails)
Hope you liked the update… If you did don’t forget to like it and comment your views … And if you didn’t, share it with me why you didn’t …
#keepingtashaneishqalive
Loads of love
~ Pooja Makawani
22 Comments
awesome episode…
so both bhabhi dever are anger with their respective partner…i have a question that did yuvi really changed or its his some new plz to separate twinj?
and plz dont feel bad about low comments
post the next part soon
bye….take care
Sidmin78 thank you so much, Ik but angers are there in all relationships and they are temporary… But abt Yuvi, you will have to wait and watch…
I will be posting ASAP…
bye …
you too take care…
Ya sidmin78 is right that you should not get sad of low comments be happy and write and ue a fabulous writer u write extremely well and the epiosde was awsm loved and my favorites book is fifty shades freed(naughty book )as u asked post soon
I know I am doing a fair job by writing and I have decided to not let the comments affect me… Thank so much, S
Thank you so much, Sia… and all who always have been supporting me… And thanks for answering the question… The question was an attempt to understand my readers better…
Awesome
Loved it
Thank you so much Presha…
Pooh !!! It was yet another amazing update!!!
Today….I loved their choice of words!
TwiNj scene ?? was nice too!
See you soon,
Cheeni! ??
Thank you Cheeni!!!! And your comments are something that always brings a smile to my face and makes my day… Thank you one again and see you soon…
loads of love…
It was awesome dear
Kunj & jeevika’s deal was too gud or uske bad pr meri bhen ko jyada mt dantna ??
My favourite book is my best wife & my best friend by ajay .k pandey
Post soon
Keep smiling always
Thanks a ton Yashika, I am glad you liked it… Thanks for responding to the question…
I will post really soon
Thanks dear
Take care…
amazing episode… Just loved it.. Plz post soon ?
Thanks SSK, I am glad you loved it … I will be posting really soon…
Super amazing ??
Loved it ❤️❤️
Twinkle ka dil wakahi mein bahut bada hai ??
Hope uv has really changed
Post soon??
Waiting ??
Thank you… I know, Twinkle hai he amazing… Yeah , hope has really changed ;p … I will be posting really soon…
Hello Pooja!! You’re doing a fantastic job… Don’t let the others make you believe anything else… Twinkle and Viren in one team, their partners in the other… That was such a fun scene… Kunj’s conversation was heading in some other direction looked like…. But your story telling skills are amazing! Absolutely loved it!
My another favourvite commenter, Ananya_DSK, You amoung the few people whose comment when I read I think “am I actually worth it?”. I am so glad you loved it. Thank you so much dear…
Of course you deserve all that and more dear… Loads of love ???
Superb fantastic episode dear
Plzzzz post soon
Luvvv u
Thank you Msmahi…. I am going to upload now….
Awesome Amazing
Twinkle is really kind hearted.
Thank you so much Ramya…
that she is….