Next day Manohar has gone outside. Kunj thinks it to be the right time to talk to Twinkle. He pulls Twinkle inside her room and closes the door.
Twinkle: Have you gone mad? Aunty will find us and we will be in big trouble.
Kunj (Keeping hand on her lips, whispers): Don’t make noise. Mummy is on phone and I saw her walking towards terrace.
By then Kunj hears someone’s footsteps coming towards her room. Usha knocks the door.
Usha: Twinkle, you are okay? I heard some noise. That’s why I came back.
Frustrated Kunj sits in bed leaving Twinkle.
Kunj looks towards up and murmurs.. “Kyu ker rehe ho mere saath aisa… Acha nai lagta me.. Hmm? (Ohh..God…Not again..Why are you doing this to me?)
Twinkle: Ji aunty…I am fine…My bag fell down. That’s it.
Usha leaves talking to her friend on phone. “Arrey wah…Acha ladka hai…Ghar bar bhi acha hai…Chalo phir…Alisha ko bhi jaldi hi bulalo…Aur bata ladke ke bare me…”
(Groom is well mannered…And the family is also good..Wow…Then call Alishato India and let’s fix the marriage. Tell me more about groom.)
Kunj and Twinkle could hear Usha’s voice getting reduced as she is moving towards terrace.
Kunj sighs… “Uff…Ab ek ghante tak mummy Anita aunty se groom ke details mangegi aur mere paas time hi time hai…baat kerne ke liye…”
(Thank god…Now at least for an hour she is not gonna come back. She will be busy discussing about Alisha’s groom. I will get enough time to talk to you.)
Twinkle: Now tell me. I have seen you struggling to talk to me from yesterday. What’s the matter? Anything serious? You could have messaged me, if it was urgent.
Kunj gets up from the bed and walks towards Twinkle in a naughty way…
Kunj (with a wink): Agar message kerta toh, ab jo me dekhne jaa reha hun, vo nazaraa miss ho jaata…Or vaise bhi kuch cheesey aise hote hain, jinhe sirf face to face bola jaata hai.
(I could have messaged it, but I would have missed these upcoming moments. Some special talks are to be done face to face, and not on phone.)
Twinkle looks at him as she has no clue what is going on. Kunj reaches close to Twinkle and pulls her by waist and hugs her. Twinkle didn’t expect it at all…
Twinkle: Tum paagal ho gaye ho kya? Koi aa jayega…Aur waise bhi hum ne uss din decide kiya tha ki hum ek dusre se jitna ho sake door rahenge…
(What are you upto? Someone will find us…Besides that we have promised each other that day, that we would stay away from each other in every possible manner.)
Kunj hugs her more tightly and cares her hair. He gets closer to her.
Kunj: Ab inn dooriyon ki koi zarrorat hi nahi hai meri do dhari talwaar…Uff…Maine ye sab kitna miss kiya…Meri sherni, meri do dhari talwaar…Zubaan tak aate aate rok na padta ta…Har nazar tumhe hi dhoondta tha…Phir bhi yun dikhana padta ta jaise tumhare hone se fark hi nahi padta ho…
(My love, Now we don’t have to be in barriers…Meri do dhari talwaar, Meri sherni…I only know how hard I have controlled myself from calling you those names. Every time my eyes would long for a glance of you. But still I could never show it to you that I want you to be around me…I had to pretend as if your presence doesn’t matter to me.)
Twinkle breaks his embrace and sits in chair.
Twinkle: Relax… You are talking on and on for the last 10 minutes. Have water… And then tell me what happend.
Kunj (with a beautiful smile): I know… But I can’t control myself…I feel like screaming at the roof top. Kunj to himself (Twinkle too can hear): Okay..All excitements aside..Let me come to the point…
But Kunj can’t control his excitement and he still has an immese pleasure in his face. He tries to calm down for a second and take a breath and is ready to break the good news to Twinkle.Kunj explains his talks with Manohar.
Kunj: Papa has realized that we are made for each other and he wants us to be together. He asked me to call you and know your take on it so that we can come to your home with marriage proposal…Everything is sorted….It feels so good na…
Twinkle: It’s so nice to hear that Uncle has realized his mistake and is regretting.And about my take…It will be the same…We have broken up and it is over… So there is no question of marriage at all…
Kunj: What?
Twinkle: Hmm
Kunj: See, Twinkle..I am in good mood..But that doesn’t mean you crack a joke at this time…
Twinkle: Joke..Who said it is a joke? For me, it is over and that’s what I said.
Kunj: But why? Everything is sorted so well. You still have grudges against Papa, coz he denied our relationship earlier. That’s why you are behaving like this?
Twinkle: No, I don’t have anything against Uncle and Aunty. They denied our relationship once and now they have agreed. I only have issues with you, the person whom I loved the most…whom I trusted the most…
Kunj (perplexed): But what have I done?
Twinkle: Exactly…What have you done… You have done nothing to save our relationship…You just said fine Papa when he denied our relation and sat back as if it doesn’t matter to you at all… You never tried to convince them.
Kunj: Who said I didn’t try to save our love? I fought like anything…
Twinkle: Don’t lie..Forget it Kunj…You won’t be able to explain it..
Kunj: You didn’t know what happened that day…Actually that’s my fault only… I never explained you about that day…In fact Yuvi also asked me to clear it. But I deliberately chose not to. I am sorry.
Twinkle: Don’t be. I expected an explanation from you…that night, that week or at least within that month…I waited for you. You didn’t turn up. Now I don’t need an explanation. That’s over.
Kunj: Twinkle, listen to me first…That day…
Twinkle: And one more thing…I know what happened that day…Don’t bother to explain… Anyways what are you gonna tell. I am sure you will hide whatever Uncle has talked about me and my parents. Just because I love you, Uncle doesn’t have any right to talk ill about my parents.
Kunj: How do you know that? Yuvi?
Twinkle (smirks): Alisha…Have you forgotten? Alisha was also there at that time. After resigning the job and before leaving Mumbai, Alisha came to me and told everything. You just stood calm and heard all the blames which Uncle was showering on me…Wow..Proud of you, my love… You didn’t stand up once against Uncle. Now you are talking about our marriage.
Kunj: Ohh..So she is the one…Listen Twinkle…She is trying to make misunderstandings…She is lying…I have fought with Papa and that’s when…
Twinkle: Ohh..Now you will say she is a lier..Fine…So Uncle didn’t talk anything ill about me and my family?
Kunj holds his head with both hands as he understood that this is going on another track…
Kunj: I agree… I agree that Papa talked bad about you and your family. But…
Twinkle: That’s it Kunj. End of discussion…
Twinkle: Let me conclude it this way….We had a break up because your parents didn’t agree to our relationship. I was fine with that…We both agreed to each other at the beginning of our relationship itself that we won’t go against our parents. And now that they are okay with our relationship, there is technically no problems left. But why should I trust you who don’t have this much guts to stand up and say that she is my girl and you can’t talk rubbish about her?
Kunj (hitting his fist hard on the wall): You are getting it all wrong… Twinkle…
Kunj tries to compose himself and then.
Kunj: And what about the love with which we are connected? You can’t hide that from me? I have seen you feel for me, cry for me and care for me…Damn it…Admit it.. That you still love me….
Twinkle: I do…Yes, I love you….From the bottom of my heart, till the last breath of my life…I love you Kunj Sarna… But I don’t trust you anymore…I will prefer to be single forever and stay away from you….It is better than being married to you and still have a fear in mind that at any point of time you will leave me for your father, mother or say for your brother…
Kunj: I love you Twinkle…Don’t do this to our relation…
Twinkle: You love me…Fine… Tell me…What have you done for our love? You came and talked to Uncle. Uncle said no and you sat back giving up. I came here and made him realize that you can’t have generic opinions about people and take decisions based on that… I made him think. Now after one year, Uncle understood it and has agreed to our relationship..So your love is back… At least I tried to change his concept and make him realize his mistake.. What’s your role in saving our love? Sitting back and grieving… That is not what I expect from my man…
Kunj: Twinkle, I fought with him for your respect and our love. I tried my level best…And that’s when Papa got heart attack…That’s when I stopped trying.
Twinkle: Don’t give me that crap, Kunj Sarna…I have been here for almost 10 months. I am taking care of Uncle and Aunty. I know his health condition and medical history more than you…
Kunj is deeply hurt to hear that from Twinkle.
Kunj: You think I lied… I can’t believe this.
Twinkle: I am sure you lied. You understood that you can’t convince him. So this is the easiest option to get rid of me. Uncle had a heart attack. I also can’t force you anymore.
Kunj: You don’t trust me?
Twinkle: That’s what I said. I don’t trust you anymore… Kunj Sarna…I am done with you… It’s over…
Kunj was in a shock that Twinkle believes that Kunj could lie to her about Manohar’s health…
Kunj: Fine… If you really feel so, then I am sorry, you never understood me. And yes, there is no point in discussion…It’s over….
Kunj leaves the room banging the door…
Precap: – Kunj telling Manohar his reply about marriage and Twinj argument
Hi Friends,
I am so so so…sorry….I know you all expected something good and a beautiful surprise…And I gave you this terrific shock…Not to all of them, I think 3 of you guessed it right in comments…
Trust me guys, this is a scene which I have written and scripted in mind way earlier…I mean when I started this ff itself, I wanted this to happen.
Twinkle is not an ordinary girl…She is do dhari talwaar of Kunj…A girl with attitude, ego and pride… When it comes to her pride and self respect, she doesn’t give a damn, whether the other person is Kunj, her in laws or her manager…To make you understand her strong character, I have portrayed Sherni Twinkle at the office parts.
Kunj can’t just apologise and get her back in his life… She is fire…He can’t get her so easily…Kunj has to win his sherni back…Hope you all understood.
Love you all..And sorry if I hurted you…
Jisha 🙂
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You are right di…a girl should never compromise her self respect against anything in this world…good going di!! Amazing!! Love you di?
Thanks Ayu
Agree.
Jisha di Loved the episode the way Twinkle took a stand for herself and her family Loved it
A girl can’t always compromise her self respect for everyone and Jisha di I would have been hurt if Twinkle would have accepted it easily
Loved it and Twinkle’s dialogues just awesome but please unite Twinj fast
Love you and take care 🙂
Thanks sidmin… could not post episode today..I will try to post it on Sunday…
Mujhe pata tha mujhe pata tha ki aisa hi kuch hoga di …. Wah wah maja aagya epi me ajj
Ku ki excitment ka rocket fusu bomb nikla
Tw sach me do dahri tlwar hai
Kya tashan hai
Kya pyar hai
Kya chemistry hai
Kya trust
I am in love with this ff …..I love this ff a lot
I can’t think tu without ur fff loved it to the core and plz answer my previous cmnt
And this twinj jodi of ur ff is killing me di
Man kar RHA hai ki lijhti jaun bas but aapko or nahi tgakati bbbye and take ur immense care
Thanks bulbul.. thank you for the sweet words dears…
Ur previous question I guess was whether ff is imagination or reaI…it is a complete imagination…
I couldn’t write ff today..I will post it on Sunday
Jisha si it was a bolt from blue… Pplz di twinj ko jaldi sath lana… But superb epi
Thanks Aaru
Jisha di……wowwww
Superb epi…..what an heated argument it was…..loved it
I just love this sherni Twinkle??
Love u …….take care??
Thanks Kruti… couldn’t write ff today.. will post it on Sunday
n dis is wat i love abt ur ff….sherni twinkle who can stand fr herself….fr her respect…n her love…..waiting to see hw kunj woos his girl again….i knw thts gonna b vry difficult bt he wl do it…..love u jisha di
Thanks loveleen.. will post next episode on Sunday
Jisha di apne suna about sad news i requesting you to don’t finish this ff for at least 2 or 3 years because i think that this ff is best then real story so tai go off air from 16 September i m so sad because of this news and also sid exit from jahalk i m very depressed at this time but i requesting all writer and reader not leave tu plz we are family now m i right?
Thanks dharti…yes..I know…but what to do…we can be with tei by reading ff and imagining them…I won’t leave tu page for sure…will be in touch with you all…
Hi jisha di…how are you di? How’s your health? Hope it’s good…di I’m really sorry for not commenting on your previous 2 episodes I was not in a mood to comment so dint do it…di u nail it in your very episode…how you manage to write so well di…your dialogues toh ?????????Di your a dialogue queen of tei ffs I always want to say you this and finally today I said it…now coming to today’s episode it was awwwwwesome di loved the way how twinkle took stand for her self-respect and her family…you have portrait twinkle’s character so well di every girl has to be like twinkle of your ff…feeling bad for kunj poor kunj first manohar was not ready for their relationship and now when manohar has said yes twinkle is not trusting kunj…di I’m damn excited for your further story I’m damn sure it’s gonna be very very interesting…di your ff is one of my favorite ffs and it’s in the 1st place…love you and your ff to the core di…
Di can you please tell me your daughter name?
Take care di…
Love you di???
Thanks twinj sidmin…love you dear…I am better now.. usual check ups n injections going on..
Thank you dear for that title…it means a lot…I was blushing reading ur comments… happy to hear u enjoyed ff…
Her name is anusha…we call her ammu at home…
Hmmm in a way i didn’t mind .. But yeah Twinkle is now … Bad .. In my book ? … But still awesome and good!!! Loved it !! Hope she trusts Kunj soon and let’s see what’s he’s gonna do … 🙂
Thanks romaisah..will post next episode on Sunday
Awsm epi di….twinj argyement was unexpctd BT it was so real…..ur ryt do she can’t forget what ol she went through in a split second….the way she stood for her self respect and her parents was shown perfectly….. Waiting eagerly for next epi….very curious 2 know what kunj vl tell to his dad…..updt sooooon
Thanks Maggi.. will post next episode on Sunday.. could not write it today…
jisha the episode was awsm… loved it…
plz plzz plzz unite them as fast as u can….
Thanks dear
The epi was superb.. somewhere I had a feeling that twinkle won’t accept so easily and am glad she didn’t do so.. kunj will have to work really hard to win twinkle’s trust back.. how I wish I could watch this epi in real.. as in in videos.. but that’s nt possible.. and I love the character of twinkle in ur ff.. I should say every girl must be like her.. do cont soon ?
Thanks sidvee…I couldn’t have asked for more…u wished my ff to be seen in video..wow.. I am blessed…love you dear…
I will post next episode on Sunday…today I couldn’t write it..
Uffff hav to wait stilll its k bt plzzz jaldi karna awsme part
Thanks cutie pie
Wonderfull
Thanks sidmin love
No u never hurt us.. Baaki ka to nahi keh sakti but never mee.. I just luv ur ff. N mail much ESA h expect kr rhi thi.. Good going dear.. Post next asap
Thanks Amii… sorry yaar…aaj likh näi payi… tomorrow I have some work at home…so I will post next episode on Sunday
Yrrr wese wait nhi ho rha next part me lye.. Plssssss jaldi kr Dena.. Time ho to aaj h kr do..
Di first of all hats off to u… I bow my head down as my gratitude for u..
The way u proved that girls are no less…. They can love their partner to any extent but when it comes to their self respect they can fight back…..
I really agree with u that you can’t let Twinkle forgive kunj so easily as when she wanted his support he never supported her back……
Each nd every dialogues made me have goosebumps…. I can sense the pain through which Twinkle has gone through ur writing..
I’m speechless… Amazing episode…. Love u sooooooooo much for giving us wonderful ff….
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Thanks Sayu… love you dear…I wait for your comments..it feels do good to read ur comments…
Will post the next episode on Sunday…I couldn’t write it today
Jisha di
I was right I was also expecting this only
N u described all the conversation so well n kunj anger but still controlling it
Loved it di
Muuaaahhh
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Take care
Thanks daamini…
hey jishadi first of all i loved d epi….
der talk was too good…means painful but d words were hearttouching….
n u did it right..tw should not b convience so easily…..aakhir kuch uski b respect hai yaar…
evrytime girl only hav to compromise? …huh …sometime other person should also compromise naaa?
u know my mumma tell me dat girls life is not so easy…..v hav to compromise n sarifice…….sometimes its k….but everytime…….NO……..
pataa ai meri or mere chote bro ki fighting hoti hai…like for double chocolate..den he only eat double i hav to eat single….haa its not big deal but fir bhi…mere or mere chocolate ke bich koi nahi aasakta…hehe
sorry for my bakwas….but my point is tw had done very good…now kunj will go on mission”tw d sherni manao” or he may left amritsar den tw willcome to know about d truth…jo b hai..me to bohot excited hu…..
do cont….
Thanks aamu dear… that’s true…n I love to listen to your talks…do comment…will post next episode on Sunday
wow what a shocking twist di
and i loved it ??????
twinkle’s new avtar amazing amazing????
Thanks Srija
Hi jisha di, superb
never expected something like this..
loved this sherni…
felt like an original life story.. their confrontation was so good
i was imagining happening in front of me..
waiting for the next part
take care
Thanks Priya…It feels so good to hear that u felt it real .. I could not write ff today…I will post it on Sunday…
Amazing epi..the twist is just soo gud..luved the convo btwn twinj…twinkle ko to manna parega humari Kunj ke do bhari talwaar..overall the epi was fantastic 🙂
Thanks aksa
Hey Jisha di,
You need not be sorry. I feel that Twinkle is 100% correct. In fact, I can relate a lot to Twinkle’s character. Even I believe that no one has the right to point at my self respect and my parents. Anyways, I just loved the episode. It would be interesting to see how he gets his lady love back.
Loads of love.?
Keep taking care.?
Thanks Ria…I could not write ff today.. will post it on Sunday
awesome amazing fabulous
Thanks purnima
I expected this from dho dhaari talwar!!
But she is right and at the same time she is also misunderstanding kunj
But diiii episode was fabuolus I was really scared while reading each dialogue but what I thought happened
Its awesome diiii
Loved it each and Avery word…
Love u dii
Thanks thanmy… love you too.. couldn’t write ff today..will post it on Sunday
Amazing
Thanks aayushi
Awesome epi di!!..i knew twinkle will not forgive him easily..
Thanks fan
Nicee
Thanks anshika
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Jisha di hats off 2 u….d way u make tw stand 4 her selfrespect…u make ur ff flow so beautifully tht i m fan of urs…tw is do dhaari talwar so its sure kunj get hurt coz he cudnt stand 4 their reln n gave up…bt tw made herself fi8 2 get justice..kunj has 2 show him trustworthy 2 gain tws trust…n hope u’ll show nokjhok moment n they can go 4 wed…take good care…n love u di
Thanks sujina