Hi Friends,
Sorry I have not posted ff for last two days..Thodi zyada busy ho gayi thi… Will try to post it regularly or at least on alternate days from now onwards…And yes, I couldn’t comment on ffs too…But I have read them.
Most of my readers have asked me whether it is my story in personal chats… I am happy that you all feel this story to be real. But this is not my story. I got the thread of the story from a gossip of a celebrity’s love story… So thought of sharing how this story came to my mind.
I am not sure whether this is a gossip or a true story. It is about Dilipkumar sahab and Madhubala ji. I have heard in news that they had a solid relationship and were engaged too. Later some legal issues aroused in which Dilipkumar sahib had to go against her father. She wanted him to apologize to her father. He denied doing that. She chose her family over him. Both were right at their own positions. Both of them kept their ego ahead than love. Thus it ended tragically.
I heard it in news or fb. I thought what if this happens with our generation and how they will react. So that was the basic idea of story. Twinkle’s parent getting insulted and how Twinj handles their ego and love. Rest everything is my imagination…But I promise this story ends at a happy note…
Kunj and Twinkle are at Rocky’s farm house.
Kunj: Vaise baat toh Yuvi ne sahi keri…Sochne wali baat hai… (I think he has a point. We need to think about it.)
Twinkle: Ek baar to jeetna banta hai uss se… Per ye kerna… ( I also want to give her a tight slap at least once. But doing this is like…)
Twinkle is thinking.
After sometime..
Twinkle: Vaise…Me 2 aur hafton ke liye Amritsar me reh sakti hun…Abhi tak maine office me inform nahi kiya hai ki me iss hafte jaa rehi hun…
(I think I can stay back for 2 more weeks as I have not yet informed the office that I am thinking of leaving job this week.)
Kunj has a smile on his face as he already knew that Twinkle is not gonna leave Amritsar. He hides it from Twinkle.
Kunj thinks. “Muje pata hai meri do dhari talwaar… Tum muje chod ke kahi nahi ja paogi…” (I know my love… You can’t leave me like that…)
Twinkle: Oo..Hello…Kahan khoye ho?
Kunj: Nothing.
Twinkle: I think Yuvi is right. I am ready to stay back and be nice to you..Just for 2 more weeks. What about you?
Kunj: You are right. We should do this.
Kunj has a smile on his face as his plan has worked. This time he couldn’t hide it from Twinkle although he tried to.
Twinkle: Ye daath kyu dikha rehe ho tum? (Why are you smiling?)
Kunj: Me? Nahin toh?
Twinkle: Dekho… Zyada khush mat ho…Me sirf Alisha ki vajah se yahaan rehne ke liye taiyaar huyi hoon. (Don’t think too much. I am staying back only for Alisha.)
Kunj: Haan toh me kahan kuch keh reha hun? (I didn’t say anything?)
Twinkle: Aur in do hafton me muje line marne ki toh..try bhi na keriyo… (Don’t try to be oversmart with me in these two weeks.)
Kunj: Toh Alisha ke samne kya kerna hai? Manager or team lead ki tarah behave kerna hai kya? (Then what do you wanna show to Alisha? How strong is our Manager team lead bond?)
Twinkle: Alisha ke samne tikh hai..Per akele me ho toh chance marne ka sochna bhi mat… (That’s fine if it is to show Alisha. But don’t try your tricks on me while we are alone.)
Kunj (Keeping eyebrows raised): Wait…Yeh tum muje warn ker rehi ho ki ideas de rehi ho? (Are you warning me or giving me ideas?)
Twinkle gives him a pathetic look. Kunj makes a sign of his lips are zipped.
Yuvi came back.
Yuvi: Chalo…Tumhara decision to change hua nahi hoga…Kam se kam iss baat ki tasalli hain ki yeh ghar sahi salamat hain…Me toh soch reha tha iss baar akele chodne ke baad ghar baki hi nahi rahega…
(I am sure your decision is the same and won’t get changed. I am happy with the fact that rocky’s house is intact. I was expecting something else.)
Kunj laughs. Twinkle gives a tough look to both.
Kunj informs him that they have changed their mind. Twinkle leaves.
Yuvi: Kya yaar? Maan gaye tumko… (Salute to you sir…)
Kunj gives a witty smile.
Yuvi: Kya plan tha boss…Muje toh laga tha ki ye work out nahi hone wala…Per tum toh master nikle…Pehle kidnapping aur ab yeh… ? (Awesome plan…At first I thought it won’t work out. But you are master in this. First the kidnapping and now this..)
Kunj: Aage aage dekho hota hai kya…
Yuvi: Aur Alisha ka kya scene hai? Kuch socha hai? (What about Alisha? What’s your plan?)
Kunj: Don’t worry. I have convinced Mummy about the difficulties of a girl staying in hotel and as a friend it is her duty to help Anita Aunty. I have told her that Anita aunty will have this in her mind, but will be hesitant to ask her help. As a friend, it is her duty to offer help and let Alisha stay here.
Yuvi: Hmm
Kunj: Mummy has called her up and she has convinced her. Alisha will reach on Saturday and will be staying with us.
Yuvi: Wow… It is going smooth… Everything is in place.
Kunj: Ek problem abhi bhi hai…Mummy papa…Unko kya kahun? Acting vacting unse digest nahi hoga… Ulta laath padegi aisa kuch bolne gaya toh…
(One problem is there. What about Mummy Papa? How to make them understand? They will slap me if I tell them about this drama.)
Yuvi: Vo to hain…
Yuvi and Kunj are in thoughts for sometime.
Yuvi: Bhai, tu tension na le…Unko me mana lunga… (Don’t worry… I will get them convinced.)
Evening
Yuvi is at home and helping Usha in kitchen.
Usha: Zyada makhan na laga…Seedha mudhe pe aao…Kya chahiye? (Why are you buttering me? Tell me what you need?)
Yuvi (Scratching his head): Vo kya hai na…Twinkle aur Kunj ne decide kiya hai ki agle 2 hafte vo purani saare baatein bhul ke unke pyaar ko ek aur mauka dena chahte hain… Agar in do hafton me, Kunj Twinkle ko apna pyaar realize kera paaya toh vo rukh jayegi…Verna vaapas chali jaayegi…
(The thing is…Kunj and Twinkle have decided to give another chance to their love for 2 weeks forgetting what all happened in past. If Kunj could make her realize their love within this time, she will stay back. Or else she will leave us forever.)
Usha: Yeh toh achi baat hain…Isme me kya ker sakti hun? (Happy to hear that. What do you want me to do on this?)
Yuvi: Nothing much. Don’t mention anything of past in front of her or anyone. And treat her like as you did earlier.
Usha: Tikh hai…Itni si baat ke liye tum kitchen me muje help kerne aaya…Ye to me aise hi ker deti…
(Fine.I will do it. But I feel like there is something else. )
Yuvi: Aap toh man jaoge…Per vo Hitler hain na…Unhe zara mana lena please…Kuch gadbad na kerde…
(I know you will…I want you to convince our Hitler. Please take care of him…)
Usha: Unka tension mat le…Me mana lungi… (Don’t worry. I will convince him.)
Yuvi: You are the best…
Usha: Aur haan…Unhe…
Yuvi: Hitler na bulana…Yehi na…
Both of them start laughing…
Precap: Alisha is back
Jisha 🙂
28 Comments
Hloo di…missed uh…hw r uh now…hope btr….n chappy wz amazing….kunj wt a plan yr n d whole credit goes to jisha di….
It was such a sweet epi…
Luvd it di ???
Precap is very interesting…
CNT soon..
hii jisha diii
myself nish a silent reader of twinj ff and a huge fan of your ff
i love your ff to the core the way your story flows is just amazing……
i hve nvr missed any of yours ff episide i just love your writing..
usually i nvr use to comment bt hv started recently
ok coming to the todays episode it ws short n cute
desperately waiting for the nxt part….
sry agr zada ho gya ho toh
tc
bie…..
Wow….Di awesome episode…..lovely…..
I MISSED YOU SO MUCH! Infact, I was just thinking about your ff and when I refresh the page I find your ff. I am so glad, seriously happiness is on peak. Anyway, back to the ff, I loved this one as usual. Well, I am so excited for the next episode now, can’t really wait. Hope you will be able to post the next one soon. Love you ? and keep taking care! xx
Awesome epi jishu di!!!!!….sorry for not commenting in the prev two epis..my exams r going on so i am busy studying…anyways..u know di i missed ur ff soooo muccchh!!!!…i hope ur fine now..take care di❤…btw i enjoyed this epi..it was awesome..i cant wait to know what happens next..
Hi..Jisha di I’m sooooo happy to see you back n todays epi was superb as always n funny too n ya it was totaly kunjs epi wowww I just loved it n u too….
Well di mujhe bhi ye apki hi love story lagi thi ….waise di ek baat batau pls gussa mat hona ….actually maine apka ff shuru se nahi padha hai I mean jab maine padhna shuru kiya tab aap 35 epi likh chuki thi …. ek din mai bore rahi thi to maine apka 28 epi open kiye to usme apne prev epi ka link diya tha jisse mai saare epi save karti gayi but 3rd epi mein link nahi tha to mujhe phir se pura page serch karna pada then I found 1 epi n start to read but u know what I was very angry bcz I did not like 1st epi n was cursing my self for doing so much hard work in searching 1st epi but socha jab mehnat ki hai to ab padh hi leti hu n trust me di after reading each epi I was angry on me for curshing my hard work bcz I sarted to loving ur ff n now I’m soooooo happy that I did read ur epi that day……sorry di for not liking ur 1st epi….so this was my journey with ur ff…how was it ???? pls gussa mat hona…
Ok ab bahut bol liya so babyeeee n tc yourself n ur baby too..
Love u soooooooooooo much
You biggest fan “Shalini/Neha”
Hiii jishaaa diiiiii
Hw r u? di n episode is amazing as usual n loving twinj day by day yr to core itna pyaara loved it
Aur dii can i ask u one thing
Hmmmm
When is ur bday diii plsss tell me
N episode was amazing bata hai na
Love u take care.
Byeeee diiiii
Ahem..ahem.. mujhe kuch nahi bolna. Hamesha disappointing me. What’s this? This isn’t fair, okay? After reading your fan fiction mujhe toh yahi lagta hai ki why am I even writing! I should just leave writing and sit back to read ffs like before…Bolo kya Karun? Reply karna, okay? My writing depends on you.?
Well, try posting soon. Greedy me‼?
Loads of love.?
Keep taking care of yourself.?
Jisha di as always Amazing epi….eagerly looking forward to Alisha’s entry
Continue soon
Love u….take care?
Hey Jisha Dii
I’m a silent reader…sry 4 not cmntng in ur ff…but i always read it and also wait for it…epi was awsm…pls post next epi soon…luv uh
Amazing di
woowww di…what an epi… I was waiting for ur epi..n Alisha I m waiting for her…ur dialogues are mind blowing…loved it…
love u di…
Uffff ff yrrrrr Jisha di……..mtlb why do u write soooooo nyyycccc yrrr……..Vaise to apka episode padhne ke Baad bada Maza aata h…..bt yrr di, hmara apke samne Kya aukat hnnn???
I don’t have words to describe it……. gungi bana Diya h apne…….u rock yrr di. Mujhe apse spcl classes chahiye……plssssss de do n……plssssss plssssss Achha leave it….di yrrrrr I miss u sooo much …di last thing…
I AM THE CRAZIEST FAN OF URS…….. CRAZIEST SE BHI CRAZIEST……..
Luvvvv. Uuuuuuuu
Awesome ????????
Di u write amazingly
Finally u cleared my doubt about this love story. U explain it soo well. I am ur fan really. ……. cant even think of expressing the way u do really……..loved it
Plz teach me to explain so well
Lovely
Plz post soon??
Love u take care??
Loved it too good Di even I thought it is your story silly me 🙂
Di I am your jabra fan even bigger than that 🙂
I love the way you write and your story line too 🙂
Take care 🙂
Love you 🙂
Wow awesome awesome awesome ……loved it pls post soon
Hey jisha api epi was amazing….fantastic and plzzzzz post it regularly like before and plz tc ur health and u dont that u mean alot to me to us so plzzzz tc of ur health last request plzzzz post nxt asap
Amazing epi di.. wow kunj knows his do dhari talwar so well ???.. di hope u r doing fine n u r in good health.. n I also thought this to be your storyline.. but u have added ur elements so it’s more than amazing ??.. take care di.. love u??
What do I even say anymore? Jisha di, u are absolutely amazing. I just love ur dialogues and the plot the story is going on. Ur literally an inspiration to all. Take care and I’ll be eagerly waiting. ?
Wow. Dii wow.
This was sooo Good.
Yrr.
Jaldi call Alisha.
Want TwiNj together.
The story is amazing from wherever you have taken the idea.
Next soon.
Loves.
Xx
Loved it di…..
Jisha di jisha di…….yay
I read ur ff…after a month….
Actually m not readin ff….today i thought to read urs so…i visit ur page n got u….
Ur epi was awesome….i read ur previous also…love it….
Do cont asap…
N yaa if i will not cmnt…maaf kardena…i m busy with my studies…..so…i will surely rea wen i will get time n cmnt tooo…
Take care…
Love u diiiiii….
N how r u…
Its Aamu only…i u remember me…..i had reax dis from my sissy phone so had not login…
🙂 Aamu
Jishu do..actually mujhe bhi laga tha ki ye aapki story hai…sorry ha…really sorry…..but aapka epi….kya bolu…..its superb…..luv u di
Tc
Omg Jisha Di
Reading ur ff after 1 long month was a bliss
Seriously aaj maine 1 month ke baad TU visit kiya n seeing ur ff I was so happy….
Pahle batao Di ki aap kaise ho??
Theek ho na?
N r u taking good care of urself?
U know u look ditto same….the way I thought????
Love u Di
I have many ffs to read??
Byee
Love u Di❤❤
Nice waiting for twinj scenes ahead
di plzz update next episode waiting for it despirately. di plzz do it fast i can’t wait
di plzz update next episode waiting for it despirately.