Hello guys, hii i am here with my first episode of first fan fiction…!! hope you all like it My spcl thanks to keira, zayn, aamu,tara,aarush,sunaina,gopu,komal,naira,Minnie, and shumi….!!!
Scene 1: taneja mansion
A lady is shown talking to her husband. The couple is Mrs.and Mr.taneja. They both are enjoying coffee…..just then the clock strikes 8:00 am.
Leela: aaye wahe guruji….inladkiyon ke college jaane ka vakt ho gaya aur ye soyi padi hongi…
Rt: arre leela,college to bas mahi jaayegi….hamari twinkle to aaj apna audition ke liye jaane waali hai na…
Leela:arre haan mai to bhul hi gayi….itni nanhi si kudi kab itni vaddi ho gayi pata hi nahi chala….acha mai zara in dono ko utha kar aati hun…
Rt nodesin agreement. A beautiful room is shown with shreya ghoshal’s posters on wall……leela sees those posters and smiles…..
L: uth ja na puttar…dekh college jaane ka time ho gaya hai… MAHI zid mat kar uth jaa….
Mahi: kya mom, fir se itni jaldi nahi uthna….plss….mujhse nhi hoga
L: uthja beta aur twinkle…twinkle kahan hai???
M: aap to jante ho na di abhi kahn hogi…..gurudware mai…..
L: aaj 14 saal hogaye, par uss ladki ki gurudware which langar baatne ki aadat vaise ki vaise hai….
A girl comes enters taneja mansion in white kurta and pink churidar and duppata….
Girl: hello papa, aap kaise ho….ye lijiye langar ka Prasad…
Rt: twinkle,tu aa gayi….leela dekho twinkle aa gayi
Leela and mahi comes….both hug her…
T: maa,mahi ye Prasad lelo…..aur ramu kaka ye aaokeaur baaki servants ke liye… acha maaaaj mera audition haito mai taiyar hone jaa rahi hun…!!
M:maa,mai bhi college ke liye nikalne ki taiyari karti hun…
Scene 2: Sarna mansion
A very huge room with shaan’s pics everywhere….. a lady in blue saree comes and sits on bed and removes blanket…..a handsome guy is shown. He is none other than yuvraj…..
U: uth jaa uv….aj tere college ka pehla din hai…..aur kunj ki dream job ka sapna pura hone jaa raha hai….
Y: haan mom, aaj bhai aapne sapne ki or badh rahe hain…..
U: haan….vaise kunj kahn h??
Y: mom….aap to jaanti ho vo kahan honge……
U: arre haan….vo to naina sangeet vidyalaya mai hoga……
Scene 3: taneja mansion
Leela, mahi,twinkle and Rt are eating breakfast when there is some noise outside……they come outside a van of naina sangeet vidyalaya[NSV] in road….twinkle goes out. She sees a guy [with his back] towards twinkle singing a song. And all the people gathered there are giving money to small child in a cap…….
He sings: swaragini…..swaragini……
Swaron ki raagon se …… swaragini…swaragini….
Dilse dilon ki dor bandhi…dorrr….bandhi…..
Swaragini…..swaragini…..[and he suddenly stops]
All the people are cheering for him.
One boy of the NSV: bhaiya gaao na…varna kaise chalega…plss
But he is not able to sing….nd just when everyone is ready to go…..a voice comes……
Nanana…nanana….nananana….[x2]
Swaaron ko raagon se….ekdhun hai….jo jodti hai…
Ragon se swaron tak bas vo hi hai jo odti hai….
Swaragini….swaragini….do beheno ki dastan…..
Ek hai lafz to ek zubaan……ek hai ruh to ek hai jaan……
Swaragini…swaragini…swaragini….
By this time that guy was amazed listening her voice…..that guy is none other than kunj sarna while the bful singer is twinkle …… they both look at each other ,smile and nod and sing in chorus…
T&k: Swaragini……Swaragini……
T: swaron ki….
K: ye taal hai….
T: ragini jiski…
K:dhaal hai….
T&k: vo hai swaragini….swaragini…..andher on mai hai khadi….roshni ko dhundhti….swaragini…swaragini…swaragini…..swaragini……[song ends]
By this time,that boy has collected much money and given to the NSV head. everyone claps for them…they smile at each other faintly….just then the boy comes, take twinkle’s hands and puts it on kunj…..thank u bhaiya-didi…..
They look at each other and take off their hands….
K: chotu, dekh milgaya na paisa…..bola tha na sab theekho jaayega….dekh bhagwaan ji ne ye didi ko farishte ki tarah bheja hai……
T: to aap chotu ho…..mujhe aapki madad karke bahut acha laga……jaao ab aap van mai betho….
As twinkle is about to leave….
K: excuseme, thank you!!
T: thank you…..kis liye??
K:aapne meri madad kari isliye….
T: koi baat nahi…mai aapkinahi in bechaare bachon ki madad karna chahte hai jo andhe hone ke baad bhi sangeet seekhne ki iccha rakhte hai…
K: btw, i am kunj…kunj sarna !![ and he gives his hand for shaking]
T: i am sorry par mai anjanon se na baat karti hoon or na haath milati hun….
K[in his mind]: kitna tashan dikhati hai ye…..khair…..attitude to mera bhi kam nahi hai…
K: aapne meri madad ki isliye aapkothank you keh raha tha varna gairon se haath milane ya baat karne ke liye main a marta hoon or na mere paas wakt hai…..
T:what….??
But By this time manager of NSV approaches them and thanks them profusely for helping them…
Mngr: thank you sir and mam foryour help…only because of people like you we are able to educate these children in stream of music…!!
Twinkle and kunj [together]: it was my pleasure..!!
They then eye each other amazingly but then ignore it…… they both leave to their respective houses….!!
Scene 4: Sarna Mansion
K: maa,uv ,papa,bebe,tauji,cherry bhai,anand bhai ,bhabhi and my chotu ishu…..kahan ho aap sab…..dekho mai aa gaya…..
Everyone comes and kunj takes blessings of all the elders …all the three brothers have an emotional hug….
A voice comes “uv chachu, kunj chachu and papa…u forgot me”…..its ishaan…..kunj says: awww…uv ,bhai aapmereishu ko bhul gaye…par mai nahi bhula …..chalo dekhe agar aaj kunj chachu ke jadui pitaare mai kuch hai…hmm….[he takes out dairy milksilk] haan kuch to hai….[and shows to eshaan]
E: thank u chachu…[and they give a hi-fies to each other]….they all have a family moment…
Uv: chalo kunj bhai…lets capture this moment and they all take the selfie….!!
Scene 5: taneja Mansion
Twinkle and mahi are having breakfast…..
T: mahi,mera ho gaya….chal jaldi…college ke liye late ho jaayega…..
M: ohk di…..maa hum jaa rahe hain…
L: arre ruko…ye lo dahi shakkar….shubh kaam se pehle kuch mitha ho jaye…. the trio smiles and hugs….they leave!!
L[toherself]: babaji, meri kudiyon ki khushiyon ko kisi ki nazar na lage…..and she smiles!!
Scene 6: on road; outside sarna mansion
Kunj is sitting in his car and blowing horn….uv jaldi aa college aaj hi jaana hai….. barson baad nahi…
Uv comes and smiles and sits in the car
Uv: kya aap bhi bahi….subah subah aise joke kaise mar leteho???
K: arre tu tomera talent jaanta hi hai…..
They both smile…..[and episode ends]
PLEASE NOTE THIS IS A FANFICTION AND NOT A REAL EPISODE!!!
PRECAP: guys as this is first episode of my new fanfiction….there is no official precap today….. today as far as my ff is concerned the fans and readers can use their creativity and imagination to guess what can happen next!!! U all can use ur imagination and give ur suggestions and even critics are welcomed today……i have no objections…..twinj as well twraj fans are welcomed …..u r free to give ur comments- be it positive or negative…!!
One more thing guys, i thought i should clarify this ……that the writer of this ff i.e. me is RAKSHITA…… i do not know how many of u are aware about this fact but i felt i should make u aware so that u do not have any confusion in mind. I just changed my name i.e. NOBODY…..but now i will be changing my name on spcl request of aarush…..i will be writing this ff under name of Ananya……so u can call me Ananya or Rakshita for this ff…!!! and for all other purposes…..i am RAKSHITA…..lol..!!
39 Comments
rakshanya…haha lol..may i cal u this??? just joking..
u know what u should leave everything else in the world and just keep writing..coz u are extremely good in that…and m sure u gonna make me mad soon..by ur ffs..love u a lot..
sorry that was me…
Awww…Tara…..so sweet of u….Nd u can call me by my any name…..its ohk….??
Amazing sweetie
Thnx keira….
Rakshita….nice plot…..but I want twinj forever ff ka part 14 …..pls suspense main maarne ka irada hai kya…..eagerly waiting for it….
Yes
thanks sababna and rahi…..but suspense makes a plot more interesting!!
Ananya looks like rakshhita likes joking haan cmmon dear write ur real name.. btw coming to ur ff its awesome ur how do u manage writing so purely.. nd for the precap i guess kunj nd twinkle goes to the same institute for interview nd then they meet each other nd show some tashan but became friends later on
and komal…u are my inspiration and thnx for ur suggestions!!
Anytime dear.. u always treat me more den a friend love u both
Love u alot*
Please do not write in Hindi I can’t understand
awesome….but can u write it in english…
thanks gopika. and riya…and i will surely take in account the request of u both but actually the plotis better in english…but still i will try!!
Original Swaragini song ka band baja diya tumne…Please Swaragini song ka band mat bajao…Otherwise the ff was good…I didn’t mean to hurt you…Please understand my feelings…
Hey Riddhi….I am sorry to say but u really hurt me…..I mean I did not wanted to copy swaragini song as it is composed by some one else….I m sorry if I am rude but u will understand this when u get such a comment when you have put all ur efforts into it…..btw thnx for ur appreciation…..!!!
Jeevan yeh suro se sajati
Rishtey yeh suro se banati
Bajti hai to pyar ki dhun
Ek dhup[ chanchal hai
Ek chandani
Phir bhi hai ek duje ke liye bani
Dilo mein hai pyar bhara
Suro se saji hai swara
Rago se rachi hai ragini
Swaragini swaragini
Swaragini swaragini
Swaragini swaragini…
Ohh…rakshita loved it ….waiting for next part…n also for ur twinj forever next part
thanks mahira for boosting me up for both my ffs
yar plz twiraj
i am sorry arav as i am afraidthat it would be twinj…..but still i will show all tashan between yuhi!!! and ovio twinj!!! looks like u r a twiraj fan but i have to also consider public demand….i am extremely sorry if i hurt u …i didnot intend to!!
hai RAKSHITA…..
Nyzz Ff… keep it
I Love Twinkle and kunjjjjj…am big fan @twinjjj
my smoll reqst rakshi plz write ENGLISH idnt uderstnd hindii…
thnx lifna navaz!!!
Awesum twinj and mavi couple plss.
Show sum tashan btw twinj..and a cute lovestory of mahi n uv
thanks rohini!!
I hope I’m gonna b reading these ffs 4ever cz each of them r soo.. amazing & coming to u rakshita…u r splendid
thank you so much praptindi hope u dontmindme calling prapti even after u being elder than me!!
not at all…in fact I lyk it…:)
Guys i have a news. Another negative character is entering in tei serial…..
Phle e itne villains hain n now one more…..not fair… Twinj ki love story chahye hmein……plzzz cv’s focus on twinj love story
This ff is so awesome
And for the Precap I think they will meet at the same studio and will fight for the position
Maybe
thanks a lot saibo and ur ff is also very interesting…i luv it dear and thanks for ur suggestions!!!
nooooo…..no more villains…..now it should be ranjish-e-ishq or villian-e-ishq
nice episode ananya I just love your ff…but plz update it regularly
oh thanks…..naira btw u can call me rakshita too….
ok fine….rakshita
Vry nic epi Rakshita!! Loved itt!
hey rakshita gud start dear n awesome concept of musical love story…i lyk it..n plz update ur previous ff soon that one is also going nyc…love u loads dear