HELLO ALL…… This is Moonlight_luver back with another creaky part.. Thank you all sooooo much for all the love and support you’re showering on me….really means a lot my friends.. seems like the number of readers are decreasing… but am happy there are still who reads.. Please guys I think I need a little more support to pen down the coming parts.. it’s all quite difficult to write down all the emotions actually… but the supporters please don’t stop them… I really need those.. Thank you for all the likers and commenters.. I know, that I’m bit late in replying back… but please don’t stop coz of that.. I’m trying my best to reply back… I can’t time up my schedules properly now a days… OK, I’m not starting with my blabberings… let’s enter to the next part!
Please side the mistakes as I’m typing quite fastly, so the chances of mistakes are high… forgive me buddies… Enjoy the part!!!!!
——- Next day———–*
The sun hit the sky soon today! It’s true! When we don’t have enough time with us, we feel like the time’s so small… how substantial… My eyes feel heavy today! May be because of the tough work I did last day on the laptop that Khanna brought… I walked to Anika’s house abscessed… I didn’t know why but I was feeling afraid… but why? For the first time in my life I’m getting startled.. I have done a lot many deals in my life… But I never startled in any of those… The thought of losing Anika rose in my mind just like an alarm.. All though I molded myself strong before her, but inside I’m dying… NO! I’ll never let anything happen to Anika… She’ll be mine! No matter what happens, I’ll win this auction… I entered the hall where agarbathi smell was spread.. I saw gauri in the corner where Lord Siva’s sculpture was built… she was praying or I should say crying.. and there in the right, Raja uncle and aunty were sitting with their heads down… Rohit descended from the stairs with a bag and on the other hand, car’s key!.. Rachana aunty was in the kitchen but wasn’t cooking instead, crying closing her mouth.. The house was no less than any death agony… I saw Raju giving water to uncle with his cute hands.. A small smile made my lips curve.. I felt a hand on my shoulder, and I sensed that it was Ramu kakka… he gazed me proudly while Rejini kakki on my left held my hand tightly assuring everything will be fine… A sudden power made me to move forward… I neared uncle and held his shoulder.. he looked me expressionlessly and stood up but what made me shocked was his sudden hug.. he hugged me tightly making few tears collapse with my shirt… He neither talked to me nor I did.. we spent few minutes mutely… the clock stroke @ 9… we have to leave to delhi.. gauri came to me with gentle legs along with the platter.. she rounded it over my face while the hotness of the fire hit my cheeks… her eyes truly showed that she didn’t sleep the last day…. How could she? Sometimes I feels jealous of Anika having such a cute and lovely sister… All though she ( Anika ) isn’t her own sister but she ( gauri ) loves her more than a own one.. I hugged her lovingly in a reliable manner.. No one talked to anyone.. it was hell silence.. I noticed Rohit nearing me after having a look at his watch.. It was time to leave.. I gazed the stair to have a look at Anika.. but she didn’t come…
“ It’s time to.. to leave.. “ Rohit said in a low voice which made me to look again to the stairs… Uncle, Rohit and I was leaving… Even though aunty wanted to come we didn’t allowed her to… Rohit & uncle turned to the door and took the first step forth… I turned but my eyes weren’t allowing me to turn without Anika’s sight..
“ C’mon Shivaay! “ Uncle’s voice made me to turn..
I think she won’t come…
Shivaay’s study ends…
Shivaay disappointedly took his first step forth but then…
“ Shivaay……. “ came the girly voice of Anika.. the very moment Shivaay turned back expectantly… Anika descended from the stairs and slowly walked aiming Shivaay.. he looked her painfully seeing her struggling to walk.. she stood in front of him looking into his deep sensational eyes.. She braided her fingers with his, looking down.. Shivaay spied her face through her hair strands.. She rested her forehead on his and stood there still… Shivaay closed his eyes inhaling her redolence..
“ I want to live with you Shivaay!!!…. “ she said in an airy voice making him look at her astonished..
“ Forever… “ she added.. she looked him whose eyes were already fixed in hers … Shivaay oscillated his eyes with hers and kissed her forehead gently..
“ you will.. “ he articulated… he slowly moved back loosening his fingers.. He turned back leaving a sigh of hope to her.. he walked out accompanied by Raja and Rohit…
——Meanwhile——-*
“ CHARLIE!!! Who told you to go there? You..you just broke everything… “ Sanjay screamed breaking all the pots..
“ Everything was going perfect… everything was according to our plotting.. but….but at the very time, you destroyed all…don’t you know that the Oberoi’s are highly rich than us.. don’t you? Phir kya sochkar thune Shivaay ko auction ke lie challenge kiya? You..you are mad! Manzil ki ithni kareeb pohunchkar peeche dekhna galthi nehi balki bevakufi hai.. aur mai, Sanjay Malhothra, bevakoof nehi hoo… did you get me? “ Sanjay roared no less than any lion.. suddenly he lost his balance and was about to fell over on a sharp knife when Charlie caught him on time..
“ Dad! Careful… ! “ said a concerned Charlie..
“ you should have.. you should have been careful.. don’t know what will happen next… “ Sanjay pushed apart Charlie’s hands..
“ Dad, relax… I know what I’m doing.. “
“ of course… Even I know, STUPIDITY!!.. “ Sanjay mocked him off angrily.. Charlie looked the roof being fed up..
“huff… Dad, listen, I know what I’m doing Ok? I know this is the only house we have to put ourselves in.. And.. and soon this is gonna be a product of people’s outcry.. But trust me Dad, whether it be hook or crook, I’ll win this auction and Anika will be mine… Shivaay will stand before me helplessly… I’ll crush him into such broken pieces which will never be joined again.. just wait and watch Dad… I’ll keep my word to you.. Shivaay will be dead for sure, for all the sins he has done to us…” They started plotting something big…
@ 10 am….
The mansion was quite big but not much as our OM is… Many business men have arrived there… All of them were looking the beauty of the Mansion… at the moment Shivaay entered the mansion along with Raja and Rohit… they were shocked seeing such a big crowd over there… but Shivaay courage and lead the way… he made Raja seated and went to corner to have few calls….
“ Hello, Khanna… hope you did what I said..! “ Shivaay urgently made a call to Khanna and the first line goes..
“ yes Sir, I’ve transferred all the money into your account as you said… “ Khanna informed…
“ did bade papa say anything? “ Shivaay was a little bit worried thinking what Tej’s reaction will be hearing that all the Shares and stocks of Oberoi’s have been transferred to Shivaay’s name..!
“ Shivaay, you don’t have to do all these through Khanna.. “ Tej snatched the phone from Khanna… “ if you need then you yourself could have asked me to do that.. “ Shivaay was shocked to hear such a response from him..
“ bade papa! Aap? “
“ kyu? Mei apne bete se baath nehi kar saktha? “ Tej immersed his hands into pocket..
“ No..No nothing like that…ok…uh, don’t worry Bade papa, I’ll make everything fine… “
“ I trust you Shivaay, but I don’t understand… you went to bring Anika back! Then why do you need all these shares and everything? And even if you needed so, then you have enough money with you to buy the entire world, then why all these? “ Tej wanted to clear his doubt..
“ I…I don’t know why I’m doing these, but… but if I don’t do this then.. then, I don’t know..what if…. Uhff.. bade papa, aap fikar math kijiye… everything will be alright! T..Thank you bade papa….“ Shivaay couldn’t talk more so he cut the phone soon..
“ He…hello! Shivaay! Damn I was going to say that Omru are coming there… but before he cut.. Ok! When Omru will reach there, Shivaay will definitely be surprised… “ Tej talked to himself smiling…
Shivaay walked slowly towards the hall while Charlie blocked his way…
“Whoa.. Whoa..Whoaho.. Shivaay… careful!!! Waise, how am I looking today? “ Charlie brushed is hair smiling… Shivaay looked him deadly…
“ Ohho, aise kya dekh rahe ho? Kya yaar, today is the day when I get my Anika back.. So, I should to look good, shouldn’t I? “
“ Don’t you dare to take my Anika’s name with your brutish and bl***y tongue.. “ Shivaay said in lower and bold voice.. Charlie’s smile vanished the moment he regained it the next sec..
“ Whatever…. I won’t say anything to you today.. talk whatever you have to… coz this is gonna be the biggest day in my life…. The day for which I craved for my childhood.. keep blabbering…. Blah blah blah..” he opened and closed his finger reflecting a mouth and went subordinating him..
“ Thank you.. Thank you… Thank you to all the men who have arrived here for the auction of this enormous mansion.. “ the voice of auctioneer hit Shivaay’s ears bringing him back…. It was no less than any matter of heart attack to Raja and Rohit… Shivaay neared the hall and stood next to Raja… he didn’t had the courage to sit down simply to make an outcry for his love…
“ we are pleased to have you all here… we have already delayed a bit so now let’s off to the purpose for which we all have gathered here… the man of the mansion, here we have Sanjay Malhothra….! “ Raja’s hands couldn’t control from hitting… the man who was responsible for all the mess was in his full teeth before him laughing seeing my gradate… Shivaay held Raja’s shoulder and calmed him down with raged face… the only thought in Shivaay’s mind was just to kill them… but he controlled
“ Let us start the auction!!! The lowest price owing this mansion is worth 150 crore.. “ proclaimed the auctioneer.. the gathered people started to discuss about the rate…
“ 160 crore!!! “ came the scream from a man sitting before Shivaay… Raja was on shuddering legs while Rohit was with closed eyes… Shivaay stood there still may be waiting for the fire to get..
“ 165 crore… “ the well-built man 2 rows behind them raised his hand..
“ 200 crore.. “ Charlie loaded his voice with pleasure..
“ 250 cr.. “ the voice of Mehta soon banded everyone’s ears…
“ 350 crore.. “ announced Ahartha’s…
“ 500 crore.. “ clamored Charlie… the people gathered started their murmurings… few of the crowd stood up and started to make their way out… their major talk was the rate.. how can 500 crore rate this mansion.. this never owe such an amount..
“ This is gonna be a tough fight… Mr. Malhothra has made the people bit worried… now I think the time has arrived… 500 crore for one.. 500 crore for two… “ the auctioneer raised his hands showing the numbers while Raja looked Shivaay who was standing still… but he didn’t lose his hope…
“ 1000 crore!!!! “ outcried Shivaay sticked to the place itself.. Sanjay closed his eyes tight sensing the smell of his failure.. he looked Charlie whose hands were on forehead wiping off the wetness.. Raja gazed Shivaay whose face didn’t tell anything but his eyes did… Rohit held Raja’s shoulder happily and they smiled each other… Sanjay signaled Charlie to do something for which HE nodded positively..
“ uh..1200 crore… “ cried Charlie unassured…
“ 1500 crore.. “ Shivaay’s line came the next moment itself…
“ 1550 crore.. “ Charlie didn’t had anything to speak of…
“ 2000 crore… “ Shivaay didn’t stop loudening his voice…
“ Whoah! Now this has come to an over… few lawyers entered the hall with their documents which frightened Charlie as well as Sanjay.. the amount was going to be fixed and at the very moment Charlie’s abominating mind came out… he signaled his men and he nodded him smirking… the man entered into the crowd and acted as a businessman…
“umm well, isn’t there any concealed tender? “ his question made everyone discuss the matter again..” the lawyers started thinking about the question…
“ yes! How can we forget about that? “ said one of the officer..
“ uh..yes..yes! Concealed tender is very important! “ added Sanjay understanding Charlie’s plan… HE smirked back leaving a smile… Shivaay face started showing some expressions…
“ let the concealed tender come” said the lawyer and at the very moment a man came with a basin in his hands in which a cover a kept… Raja’s face turned into a serious one.. the lawyer opened the cover which had the concealed tender!!
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So, how was the part? Really sorry I didn’t reply to any of the comments… so so so sorry fellas….
Prabha, Thank you so much for all the lines buddy…. I don’t know which all words I’ll use to show my gratitude towards you… Thank you so much…Well, I’m not saying sorry to you, for the delay… will that be an OKAY?
Niriha, so happy to witness your comment my friend… sorry I didn’t reply anything to you… forgive me yaar…
Nikki…. Hey my power ball! Thank you so much for the words my friend… keep reading..
Hola Nandu… c’mon don’t write such a big comment… Thank you so much it literally makes me sad that you all are commenting to me making use of your valuable time and I..I couldn’t reply to anyone of you… hopw you’ll forgive.. uhh.. well, I’m thinking of revealing my name… ok, so do you have any guesses? My bro’s name is Sanjay! And my name has a small similarity with his… any guesses? Don’t worry buddy, I’ll soon tell you.. love ya….
Haiiii Raji! How are you? Thank God, at least my fake name came to a use at last.. haa thank you Raji.. thank you so much… oops, no thanks and sorries btw chunks… kk… let me tell one last thanks to you! For trusting me and my story.. thank you for each and every line you commented…. It means a lot… hope I’ll get the same support in my next ff… take care chunk….
Ohhhkay…. This was quite boring one! I know…. But next one will make your eyes bulge out… uh, I guess so… next one onwards, every part will be good… I’ll try my best to make it good… really sorry for the delay my friends… I’m not assuring with fake hopes but next one will take a little bit time just like how much this one took…
I’ve to inform you all a good news..
I’ve started a new ff… ‘Will you be mine? ‘ that’s the title….
Guys, as you know, this ff is quite an emotional and risky one… but coming ones will be strange and weird… so I thought to pen down a humorous and fun loving ff…. it is a Shivika story… I’ve posted the intro… do read friends and pls tell me the reviews..
And yeah, don’t forget to comment on this one… bang on the thumbs up if you loved! And yeah drop your suggestions too! The end is not too far dears…
Till then this is Moonlight_luver bidding farewell…
Take care and stay cool….
Thaaaataaa…..
16 Comments
Don’t end it with tragedy plz…
We want khitikitod end…
Superb?…I hope everything goes well eagerly waiting for next part update soon
Haiii Charu!! Oh no! don’t worry dear.. I won’t disappoint you… definitely, i’ll give you all a good end.. well, it’s up to you guys to decide whether it’s a kidkithod one or not… Thank you so much for commenting…
Hey Nirihaa… soo happy to read your msg… keep your fingers crossed! everything will flow fine.. next one..uh, yeah I’ll try my best to post it…. keep loving dear!
It was superb yar.i am just waiting for the next part . I was silent reader till today and if I didn’t comment on this amazing part today then I will be the stupidest of all . I like the way u convey your fillings to us ,your writing is so amazing ,superb ,1 no.? plz don’t make us wait for so long this time .
Hello Pranu… that’s really a new name for me… so sorry for the delay in replying.. I am like that!.. sooo happy that you opened your mind… Thank you so much for all the words my friend.. uh, fillings?? did you mean, feelings? well, thank you… I don’t know is there any words rather than ‘Thank you ‘ so that I could express my gratitude towards you.. THANK YOU SO MUCH my friend… really means a lot.. O God, don’t push me high… Comparing to other writers, I’m just a little kid.. have to learn a lot more.. Thank you so much buddy… No worries, I’ll come up with a good part.. what you have to do is just wait a little bit longer… hope you’ll do that!! so happy to get a new friend through TU… keep reading dear…
Maybe u r just little kid but your thoughts are just amazing .and yes thank u for considering me as Ur friend , n I will be waiting for the next part.
The episode was khidkitod…
I really wish shivaay win this auction…because I don’t want a tragic end for this story…Please do end this story(not so soon) with happiness… but not with tragedy…
Cant wait for the next update…
Post it asap…
Halo Allu.. I think you have commented before, haven’t you? happy that you still read my story.. Even I want Shivaay to win the auction, but masala ko apna kaam karna chaahiye na? No dear, I’ll never make a tragical ending… but you HAVE to wait.. a little longer only..Next one will hit the page soon… wait a little more!!
Hai Buddy…Super,amazing Episode…the first half where everything went on so silently was so painful.. and that shivika scene over there …God,so beautifully written..and then came the auction…Nail biting….uff ab kya hoga ??Can’t really wait for the next..So Pls post ASAP…Till then Take care and Love you Buddy..and ha its absolutely okay ..but if you say sorry then meri thandav ho jayegi yaha.. hehehe….
Hey Hey Hey Prabhaa… whassup! so long buddy.. Thank you buddy for all the lines you commented…. Even I can’t wait to post the next part… I know I’m taking a bit long time in posting but what to do! I was out for few days.. but now I’m back… No worries.. I’m definitely make your nail come out…uh, I guess so.. Ok then buddy, take care and stay amazed.. Oh My Mata, Prabha Parvathy ban jayega kya?.. Whoahoo… Ok.. No more sorries.. but what I’ll do, I’m doing such things that I’m forced to ask forgiveness… now look, I’ve taken a long time in replying and much more longer time in posting the parts.. Nah, I know you’ll forgive..uh, won’t you? if the answer goes ‘NO’ then sorry!!
Hahaha Parvati?? shayad ban javoongi.. ??..I’ll definitely forgive you..coz i know you are busy .. everyone has there own life na buddy..sometimes even i get late to comment coz of the works..so i completely understand you..and will wait for your next part..so never be sorry OK buddy…Love you..Take care..Buddy..
superb……… ✌✌ pls update soon?
It is nice one… Make shivaay show his power to charlie
Hey Sadia.. how are you my friend? happy you commented.. next one will soon be posted… keep loving..
Hey Nikki… Thank you for commenting dear.. Charlie will have to face the wrath of Shivaay.. just wait a little more…
Hey moon, wait wait wait, is your name sanjana? Sanjay se toh yahi similar laga?
Achha baba no longer comments??
Am loving this ff, and haan the end has scared me abit?
Hai Nandu…. yayy.. I totally guessed that you would say that name but so sorry that isn’t my name… well, a hint goes… My name starts with ‘S’ and ends with ‘A’… let that be… I myself will disclose my name to you… Keep loving dear… Don’t worry.. the ending will be a happy one..