Hii guys… This is Shyra back with another chap…. Hope you all will like it…. Actually I want to ask you am I able to write as per your expectations… Or not….pls do tell me I really want to know…. Silent readers this time I want answers from all of you too…. Pls guys tell me..and don’t forget to tell me how was it…. Next update will be on 3 Aug Thurs… Will wait for your replies….
Happy reading!
Rocky- aur phir tune msg Kab bhej anika ko…
Rudra- don’t worry bhaiya Maine send press kiya tha…
Om- oh God rudy send press kiya tha par msg main Kya address likha tha?
Rudra – wohi Jo chubby ne Bola…. Ohh no!
He shouts…..
Rocky- rudy don’t you dare if you are going to say that you send them to wrong place…. And he glares rudy…
Rudy- I m sorry bhaiya…..
Om- are you mad rudra? You can’t even do a single work properly…. No actually it’s our fault that we expected something from you duffer…
Malika- but rudra where did you send them?
Rudra-sorry dii… I didn’t do it intentionally….
Gauri- rudraji Atleast tell us…. Where have they gone for their date….
Rudra- dii actually…. I don’t remember the place exactly… Wait let me ask chubby…. And he calls chubby but his phone was switched off….. Dii sorry actually his phone is switched off….
Rocky-wait let me ask shivay where is he now? And he calls shivay….
Shivay picks up the call..
Rocky-shivay where are you?
Shivay- rocky I m going to meet anika…
Rocky- but where shivay just tell me….
Shivay- OK show me that pendant….
Rocky- pendant? Shivay what are you saying?
Shivay-no no not you rocky I m in a jewelry shop…
Rocky- shivay mere bhai tu bas mujhe woh msg forward Kar…..
Shivay- msg? But why?
Rocky-shivay just do as I m saying Pls….
Shivay- OK… And he forwards him the msg…
Rocky gets the msg and he gets shocked…
Rocky- oh shit…shivay aur…..
Malika- ( she takes the phone and along with her gauomya also reads the msg) rudy what have you done?
Gauri- but dii hates these types of places…
Malika- what? Anika also?soumya nods…
Om- rudra yeh tune Kya kiya yaha bhej diya tune shivay ko…..
Rocky- you flopped our plan rudy….
Rudra- but bhaiya it’s Rudy’s party… Itni buri jagah bhi nahi hogi…
Rocky shows him the msg…
Rocky- hmm… Yeh buri jagah nahi Hai par yeh date ke liye bhi nahi hai….
Rudra- oh my Mata! Bhaiya night club jaa rahe hai……. Oh God!
Rocky- we can’t even plan a date for them.. Shivay doesn’t like these types of places… I hope kahi phir koi misunderstanding na ho Jaye….
Malika- don’t worry Rocky….
Gauri- Malika dii is right… And Waise bhi Jo hota Hai Achche ke liye hota Hai so don’t worry…
Rocky – hope so!
Outside night club
Shivay was perfectly dressed up in his black three piece suit…. He was looking at others who were dressed up in party wears…
Shivay looks at himself. From top to bottom…
Shivay’s pov
Oh it took me 1 hour to decide what to wear… But now it seems like I have came to another planet instead of date…. I have never attended such parties… No shivay everything has its first time…. And he enters the club…. It was crowded with many people…. People were busy in dancing….. Drinking…. Flirting… Shivay was just walking and his eyes were searching someone so he didn’t paid any attention to the crowd….. Suddenly a girl came having a glass of alcohol in her hand and bumped into shivay….. She was about to fall but shivay catched hold of her soon.
. And saved her from falling……
Shivay- aap Thik toh hai…. Aapko lagi toh nahi… I’m sorry…. I was finding someone…..
The girl gets impressed by him…
And starts getting close to shivay…..
Girl-( moving her hand on shivay’s face) aap..
Wow that’s nice… By the way mujhe lagi toh hai…. Woh bhi dil par….
Shivay- I m sorry…. And excuse me…
Girl- hmm where are you going? Would. You like to have a drink with me?… And I think you won’t mind company of a hot and beautiful girl Like me….
Shivay- ( removes her hand from his face) sorry but I have to go….. And he leaves…
He goes to a corner and stands….
Shivay’s pov
Ohh God what type of girl she is? And where is anika? Pls got get anika fast otherwise don’t know how will I stay here?
Outside the club
Anika comes and was dressed up in a long skirt and one side off shoulder top…. Her hairs were left free on one shoulder… She was having a clutch in her hand…. And the most beautiful chand bracelet given by her shivay….
Anika’s pov
Shivay NE mujhe itni tuchi jagah kyun bula ya hai…. Itna ajeeb lag raha hai… Anika Kya Soch rahi hai shivay se milna hai na bas…. Ab Chupchap andar Chal….and she enters the club…..
Here shivay was just standing in the corner..
Waiter comes to him with…..
Waiter- sir drink?
Shivay- no thanks? Actually I want water…. Can I get? The waiter looks at him as if he has asked for his kidney….
Waiter- sir are you joking? Yaha bar main log paani peene nahi aate hai…..
Shivay- Bar?….
Waiter- yes sir….
Shivay – OK…. The waiter leaves… Shivay was feeling very uncomfortable…. He tries to call anika but call doesn’t connects..
Suddenly somebody comes from behind and hugs him…. Shivay thinks her to be anika but later feels uneasy….
He turns and finds the same girl who was flirting with me before some time.
Shivay- what were you doing?
Girl- I was hugging you handsome… And she again starts coming close to him…. Shivay tries to move her away from him…
Shivay – listen you are drunk….. I think you are taking me wrong…. But she doesn’t listens to him and keeps touchinh him and….
Girl- you are so handsome….. Your eyes… I just love it…. Your cheeks…. Your lips… And tries to kiss him….but someone pulls her and with a jersey she falls on the floor….
Shivay- anika….
Anika- shivay… Wait let me talk to her…
Girl- hey how dare you to slap ragini Khanna dammit….
Anika slaps him hard…. Ragini glares her in anger….
Anika- let’s go shivay and she holds shivay’s hand and starts leaving…..
Ragini- Ohh God who allowed these type of people to enter here…. Apni Galti par kisi ko bhi Kuch bhi bol Kar chale jayenge Kya.. Anika stops listening her….
Shivay – I m sorry anika… I didn’t know…
Anika- shivay it’s not your fault and Kiska fault hai usse main abhi Batati hoon…
Ragini- let me tell you whose fault it was…..
And Ragini’s boyfriend comes…..
Siddharth- what happen Ragini’s? And why are you shouting?
Ragini- see Siddharth this cheap boy was trying to get close to me….. And his girlfriend slapped me….
Anika- just shut up…. And cheap kise Bola tumne…. Don’t you dare to utter a single word… It will not take me time to give you another slap… And what were you saying my boyfriend was trying to get close to you…
Have you seen yourself in mirror? My shivay doesn’t even look at girls like you… And close hona toh door ki baat Hai…. And let me tell you the one who was trying to get close was you miss ragini….. And yeh sab Maine khud dekha Hai….
Here anika was busy in argument and our shivay was feeling guilty for spoiling his date….
Anika – this time I m leaving you…. Otherwise tum Jaisi ladkiyon se toh main apni chameli se baat karti hoon… And anika turns…….
Anika- shivay…. But she doesn’t find the him anywhere…..she comes out of the club…. And shouts shivay’s name…. But she doesn’t get any response… She starts moving when she notice someone sitting in the garden… And she knows who was it….. She goes to him and sit beside him on the bench….. To be continued..
Precap: shivika moments… shivay wants to change himself….. Shivika engagement……
Pls do tell me your reviews about this ff….
15 Comments
Superb
U write really nicely… it was an amazing epi !!!
I am srsly laughin so much right now… wht a twist u gave, tht girl was ragini and anika gave her a tight slap and she fell on the ground ????, ragini is at her rightful place… anika ne usse apni sahi jagah dikah di… i would have loved to see anika hitting her with her chameli also??..best part of today’s epi.
Bechara shivay… he was sooo uncomfortable over there, aisa laga ke koi uski izzat loot raha hai. They both were dressed so nicely ??? esp anika.
Rudy tune toh inki pehli date ko ek chota sa adventure bana diya. Can’t wait for ur next epi to see shivika ??.
And u write really great… have faith in urself… u write way above my expectations ?
Take care and love u ???❤❤❤❤
damn awesome.
Awesome………i am a silent reader but I am reading your ff from starting but never commented
Awesome…..waiting for next
Awesome…
It is awesome dear.. You are doing well dear…
Awesome episode yaar… Plzz do post the next update ASAP.. Loved it to the coreeeee
Superb
AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERSTING SUPERB??????
awesome chappy di…
love you
post on Time..(I know that you always does the same ..very punctual)
TAKE CARE di
lots of love
Sairish
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Awesome epi…. U nailed it dr…..
Superb update
Good one dear… amazing..
Ammazinggg
Such a hilarios epi???
U r wonderful writer..
Loved the whole part???