Hii guys I am shyra back with chapter 3 of my ff , I hope you all will like and please dont forget to tell me how was it. One request is that please read the authors note at the end so let’s start..
Happy reading!!
Anika ( shouting ):hey Mr. Don’t want to live where are you lost now? Am I giving a lecture to you ?
Shivay ( comes back to his senses ) :yes! What happen and Why are you shouting?
Anika: I am shouting?? I was trying to get you back.
Shivay :sorry! I was thinking something.
Anika ( joking ) :so you were thinking about your your girlfriend haaan!!
Shivay: hey I told you na that I don’t have any girlfriend then why are you saying it again and again?
Anika :okkkkk i was just joking.
Shivay :fine .
Anika: no girlfriend , no result tension then why are doing suicide Mr. Don’t want to live.
Shivay :that I can’t tell you so please go from here.
Anika: OK as you wish. She goes from there and shivay also turns to the river side but… Was again stopped by someone, or should I say the same one.
Anika: hey Mr. Dont want to live listen .
Shivay :you are still here , see I told…
Anika :wait wait I remember what you told me , actually I just need a help from you then I will go from here pakka.
Shivay: help? What??
Anika :actually meri champa ne mujhe dhokha de diya…..
Shivay: wait wait who is champa ???
Anika are champa, you dont know champa …..
Shivay :how will I know..
Anika :ohh yes how will you know but don’t worry I will tell you look at there she is my champa ( pointing towards her scooty )
Shivay :where ?? There is no girl there..
Anika: girl?? Which girl?
Shivay: champaaa..
Anika: hey Mr. Don’t want to live champa is my scooty not a girl.
Shivay :what??? Scooty is champa , you have given name to your scooty.
Anika :yes.. Do you have any problem with it
Shivay :no.. Why would I have any problem.
Anika : kitna bolte ho tum ..
Shivay :ohh main bolta hoon..
Anika: toh main bolti hu , ok leave it actually my champa got punctured and my chintoo also died.
Shivay :chintoo? Now who is chintoo?
Anika 😮 bete ki !! Now you don’t even know about chintoo, actually chintoo is my phone and its battery is very low , now as I am late I need to call my mom , will you give me your phone so…
Shivay: ya sure you can take it. ( shivay gives her the phone , anika looks at the picture of janvi and omru)
Anika ( smiles ): your family is very nice Mr. Don’t want to live.
Shivay ( smiling ): yes , its true I have got the best family but I don’t deserve them.. A thin layer of water covers his blue eyes.
Anika ( smiling ) :you are wrong Mr.don’t want to live, you deserve them that’s why you have them in your life.
Ok let me call my mom I will be back in few mins and she went little far from him, meanwhile she was talking on phone shivay was just looking at her lovingly , even he doesn’t know the reason behind this.
Shivay ( thinks ): she is so different , she is not like others I know that she is trying to stop me from doing suicide but why she is doing so?? And she is even talking like her , like her she has also kept names of her things , no shivay yeh woh nahi ho sakti you are thinking too much you know na what she did with you , you should forget about her but what if yeh wahi ho , should I ask her? After sometime anika cuts the call and comes back.
Anika: thanks ( she gives back his phone to him) .
Shivay: who are you??
Anika: ( she becomes nervous but tries to compose herself ) whatttt?? What do you mean by who are you?
Shivay: I think I know you…
Anika ( thinks ) :no anika no ,just be confident , ise pata nahi chalna chahiye ki tu koun hai tu bas uski help kar aur nikal ,waise bhi USne tujhe kabhi dekha nahi hai .
Shivay: hey I asked you something.
Anika ( stammers ): no… No.. How will youuu.. Knowww… Me.. .
Shivay :why are you stammering?
Anika ( tries to act normal ): no I am not stammering , I think I should live now, you can go and do your suicide .
( she leaves from there )
Shivay ( thinks ): why she was so nervous …leave it shivay why are you thinking about her just because you loved her it doesn’t mean she will come back to you and don’t forget She left you 3 years ago for the same reason that you are nerd.suddenly somebody or the same person called him again..
Anika ( she was standing far from him ) :hey Mr. Don’t want to live what are you thinking now just do suicide fast as you only have 5 mins and saying this she left from there.
Shivay: why was she shouting? I only have 5 mins , what does she mean by that?? Shivay leave all this now as it doesn’t matter ….he again turned to river side to jump but again was stopped as someone pulled his hand towards himself.
Person 1: shivay what are you doing? Have you gone mad ?
Person 2 🙁 crying ) how dare you bhaiyya to think that you will leave us.
Shivay: omru , you both here ..
Om ( angry ): haan hum , and don’t take our name as you don’t care about us..
Rudra :om is right bhaiyya you don’t love us..
Shivay :its not like that omru I love you both more then anything.
And they trio hugged each other tightly.
Om ( breaking the hug ): tune socha bhi kaise ke tu humme chodkar chale jayega…
Rudra: o kyunki bhaiyya ko pata chal gaya hai ki hum unke real brother nahi hai na isliye woh Hume chodkar jaa rahe hai..
Shivay: shut up don’t say that again and kisne kana tum mere bhai nahi ho…you both are my life..
Om: now shivay let’s go back home mom is waiting for you..and what all happened in the morning pls forget it.
Shivay :om i really dont care about it i was upset because mom beared so much for me jabki main unka beta nahi hu she gave me so much love and i cant even make her feel proud of me.
Om: its not like that shivay you know one thing that you are the best son.
Shivay :and you know that you both are the best brothers.
Rudra :ok ab yeh rona dhona band kare and lets go back home
Shivay :wait om how did you know that you I am here..
Rudra :phone wali didi ne bataya..
Shivay:phone wali didi?? To be continued
Precap: anika crying.. Precap : shivay : om the girl whom I met today was
Gauri: what happen dii why are crying?? Just like her…
Anika: I met him… Om: koun shivay?
Gauri( concerned ) : koun dii?? Or shivay : my unknown love….
Anika( crying ) : shivayyyyy…. Om ( hesitantly: but shivay tune toh usse …
Gauri( shocked ): dii woh college main Jo… Shivay( weeping ):kabhi dekha bhi nahi..
Anika nods in positive.
Authors note : ok tell me whose side flashback or story will you all like to know first , whether shivay or anika, actually I want to keep the other’s flashback a suspense for sometime so please don’t forget to answer and I will select the flashback with majority of demand so pls let me know soon and last chapter’s precap I cancelled it sorry…till then goodbye
32 Comments
yes post flashback
awesome episode
update soon & regularly
I just love it !!
Awesome
Nice epi
please post in english yaar…awesome episode dude…
Loved it…..I want first shivay flashback
Waiting for next part
Just love it…..and both their falshbacks simultaneously……I know it’s too.much to ask but do.post na….
Awesome di . Pls show Anika ‘animal flash back. Post next update soon
Anika’s flashback
wowww…..plzz post next part soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Mr,dont want to live,.-.
Ammazing,…
I m loving ur ff,…
Shivi,a’s flashback,….
Pist sooon..
Hi shyra my name is kritikka ..
I am a regular reader of your ff and love them a lot!! ? off to u !!
Nice one dear.. Wants Anika fb first…
Superb I’m loving it???
Heyyy its awesome.
Do update soon. I want to hear Shivaay’s story first.
The way you are creating suspense is amazing. Post soon?
Amazing update
A biggggg thanks to all of you. I can’t do promise but I will try my best to update soon and as you all made me confused regarding which flashback to show first, so I will show both the flashbacks simultaneously ( thanks for this idea arthi ) but suspense toh phir bhi rahega.
Amazing twist, plzz do post the next update ASAP
AMAZING CUTE FUNNY?INTERSTING NICE SUPERB???
I want shivika flash back.but please flash back big math banana thoda short karna.
Shivaay ka flashback mazedaar Lagta hai..?..par dii….kya mujhe flashback padhne ko milega at least????kyunki aap jo itnaa time lekar post karte ho….aur suspense ko bonus bana diya aapne permanent…????lekin Kisi ka bhi FB ho, hume story ka toh pata chalega naa….???
Don’t worry you will surely get to know the story very soon and about regular posts i will try my best to post soon , even I don’t like to post late that’s why whenever I get late to post I try give to you all longer chapters. Hope you will understand dear..
i dont know hindi write in english pls
Super update…waiting 4 the flashback
tu toh badi chantomind nikli 😉 😉
loved it !!!!!!
kya turn mara h mtlb ekdum jhakaas…. bole toh… ek no.
😉 😉
post asap…..
tc……
Omg pooja or should I call you anika part 2 your language is awesome , I just loved it and thanks for commenting.
I am confused na.. Can you tell both the flash backs simultaneously ?
Actually precap doesn’t get posted correctly that’s why you are confused don’t worry I will clear your all confusion in upcoming episodes.
Post flash back soon…. Nd this one was SUPERB dr….
Greattt…Chintoo…hahayiu did naamkaran of mobile too
Amazing..loved itt??
Awesome…
I want shivaay’s part first.
“Mr.don’t want to live”was nice one
Amazing….
Hii everyone…its a nyc ff…just loved it…
I think Annika’s part will be better as she knows shivaye….but shivaye doesn’t know her …..