Tashan-E-Ishq: The Author Recognition Competation
I Was Wrong
A big mansion is shown is night…but the strange thing is that the mansion is on fire…there was fire l around on the house….many people were gathered there…in order to extinguish the fire…there was hustle and bustle all around.. Suddenly…a girl came running…and saw the mansions condition…her eyes full of teary…and whole body in a defeated posture….
She walked towards the watchman….
G:kaka ye sab kya hai….ma papa Mahi bhai ..sab kahan hai….
Wm: beti ….( crying) bade sab Malkin chote sab r n.n.no more…..and Mahi …beti is still inside….
The girl was shocked with the revelation…she sit down on floor with a thud..
G: ma papa bhai…….( crying so very badly) plz Aap sab wapis aajao…look I also came back…and Mahi……( she remembers that she still no where to be found).. Mm ..mhai…I I have to find her at any cost….
After some time some people were able to fetch Mahi outside she was in a vulnerable condition…with wounds…
The girl went near her..Mahi is on stretcher…
G: bacha dekh ur sis came now plz font leave..me ..na.
Ma: ttwww..innn…kle di…..
(So the girl is tw).
Tw: Mahi ye sab kisne kiya…hai tell me the name…
Ma: di….ye……sssab…..kuch…..kkkk..sarna ne karwaya hai….
And by saying this she was taken into ambulance….
Now tw was determined to take revenge from k sarna her only mission and target in her life from now onwards is to take revenge from k sarna….
Tw went towards..the watchmen…
Tw: kaka…AGR koi bhi aapse mere bare main pooche to key dijiye ga ki..main kabhi wapis hi nhi ai…
Wm: per beta…..
Tw: plz kaka…
Wm: theek hai beta ..apna khaya rkhana,.
Tw leaves from there…
After some weeks….
Tw is seen entering a campus …with books in her hand….wearing a white shrit ..and green skrit…looking simple yet elegant……
She was walking when she bumped into someone…
All the books fall down from her hands…
The other person and tw bent down to pick them up…
The other person was staring tw while tw …was engrossed in collecting her books…
Person: I am sorry…
Tw: its ok…
…….now tw collects her books and started to leave….
Person: hey by the way …aao chahen to mujhe apna nam bta sakti hain…
Tw: my name is tw………tia kapoor…
Person: hmm nice name….by the way I am ..kunj..s……..kunj for u…
Tw: nice to meet u kunj…..
Both went to their classes….
After few days twinj became very calose to each other…they used to share everything with each other…their..day in college…kunj used to help her a lot as she was new…he also drops her in her hostel…at nights…twinj shared a very special bond…in these few months…
Whole college was aware of their friendship….whenever kunj was in trouble tw helps him and when she was in trouble he helps her…both enjoyed each others company a lot…they were also a member of. A small friends group…both had started to Luke each other and they both knew it but they didn’t express it even after knowing …becoz both of them believes that actions says loud than words….
And after some months both were sure that they r madly and deeply in love with each other….
It was the time of annual..day …
Performances were going on in the college…tw was busy in arrangements…she was wearing a long..baby pink colour gown…looking so preety…
Suddenly she was pulled back by someone…
Tw: kunj wt r doing let me go..I have to take a look at the preparations…..
Ku: shhhhhh….tia…nothing is more imp..then my talk…
Tw: say fast kunj….
She was looking at back…she didn’t noticed that kunj was on his knees…..she turned back and found nobody…
Tw(confused) kunj kunj where r y…
Wait wt r u doing here….
Ku: when the first time I met..u …I was a awestruck by ur beauty…but later I found out that…u r more beautiful by ur heart also…the way u care for others think for others always touches my heart…u r ruler of my heart tia….a
I LOVE U TIA…….
I really really love donno u love me or not but I love u and wt ever will be ur decision that will be ur wish my command..and…I kn…….
Tw was awestruck as she never expected this …she was happy shocked..excited..and wt not thousand of butterflies were flying in her stomach…her eyes were shining with..joy and happiness…..she wanted to say a a lot…but her .throat was not in mood to support her..somehow she managed to say ..
Tw: kku…unj….
Ku: tia jaldi bolo…my knees r paining…
Tw: oh sorry…..
She also bends down to match his level….
Ti;:I love u too kunj from the moment our friendship started u were always there for me…thanx so very much kunj…for being the joy of my life…
Kunj smiles…and they both hug each other tightly…
Suddenly their was an announcement …
Dear students its time for declaring of results…
Tw: CHLO kunj let’s leave…
Ku: yes CHLO….
One by one everyone got their certificates…now it was kunj turn….
Announcer : so here comes Mr kunj SARNA…..AA…………
This was all for tw…she felt her whole world crashing down she now wanted the announcer to say that it was not sarna ..she didn’t wanted to believe that the person who just proposed her few moments ago…who is herove is the murderer of her parents…
She feels betrayed and cheated……
Tw:in mind: u cheated me kunj ….u cheated me but I am also tw kunj…now u just wait and watch…kunj sarna how will I make ur life hell…
She smirks within tears….
Kunj came down from stage….kunj hug her but she didn’t respond and faky smiled at him…..
Days passed by she used to maintain distance from hiM…..
Kunj had convinced his parents for his marriage with tw…
Twinj was married now….
Tw was in twinj room sitting on the bed with covered face…from veil…
Just then our handsome hunk..came in the room…
( twinj stay alone in mumabi ina big fat)
He marched towards her…he Owly sits beside her and takes her hands in his hands..
He was shocked as tw jerked her hand away…
Ku: wt happens tia everything alright…
Tw gets up from bed ..
Tw: now everything is correct…Mr kunj sarna…
Ku: tia wt happened why r u suddenly behaving so strangely…
Tw: first of all stop calling me tia …
Ku: so wt should I call u…han tell me..
Tw: twinkle taneja…..
Ku: twinkle taneja….wait wait u r same tw taneja…
Tw: yes I am the same tw taneja jiske ghr pe tumne Ag LGA di jiski wajah se maine aapne papa ma or bhai ko kho diya…
Ku:wt ( shocked ) u r not my tia…u r someone else…she can’t lie to me…
Tw: huh a u r taking abt lies…let me remind u Mr ..k sarna u r the one who did all this…..
So u better leave the room right…now…
Ku: ti..tw wait first listen to me…
Tw: for ur kind info…all the property and shares of ur name r now transferred to my name…so u r just my slave now…
And I am not cruel Like u ur family with is still the same…
She pushes kunj out of the room ……
Kunj was banging the door…begging tw to open the door but tw was stubborn on her decision ..on it…..
Kunj sits beside the wall and cries there…
Ku: how will I explain u I can’t bear u hatred..towards me…but I also can’t tell u the truth…
And he cries…..
Next morning kunj woke up and saw the door still closed…
He gets up and went to other room and get freshen up ….he come on the dining area…food was prepared by maid…
Time was 9:30 and still tw was not up…
This make kunj more tensed…he took some food in the plate and went towards tw room….he knocks t
At the door ……
Ku: ti………….twinkle darwaza khol…
After knocking abt almost 3-4 times she opened the door …
Tw: kya hai….
Ku: tw its quite late have something I am leaving for office….
Tw: main zinda rahun ya mar jaun….isse tumhhe kya han….and call me Aap ok not tum as I am the share holder right now…got it…
Ku quietly nods.
Ku: tw plz have this and I am leaving….
And he leaves a lone tear escapes his eyes….he quickly wipes it and went to office….
Tw in her room…teary eyed ….
Tw: kash tumne wo sab na kiya hota…then everything would have been perfect….
Stop ur brain tw he is a criminal….that’s it….
She have her food,got freshen up and went to hospital as Mahi is in coma….
The whole kunj was upset that wtever he was thinking abt his married life..have turned opp.to it….
The day ends with his sad face. ….
He went to home get changed and noticed that tw had taken up the food..he sighs ..he takes little food in his plate…quietly eat and went to guest room thinking that now onwards everything everyday would be like this…and soon he drifted to sleep
Next morning……
Kunj was early get up and was in his gym which have few basic gym equipments he was full of sweat .and was wearing a grey vest with black trousers….
He had kept his protein shake on the dinning area…
Tw came downstairs….
Firstly to didn’t find him later find him in the gym …she was shocked and awestruck by scene in front of her…
Her husband with a full toned body is gyming….she was admiring him but soon stops…and quietly went downstairs..without kunj notice…
She reaches downstairs…and saw his protein shake …..an idea struck her mind…she brings chilli powder and started to add..few sprinkles of chilli but accidentally …she mixies very much amount..of chilli .
Tw:(tensed)yr I am to just mixing thoda sa as kunj can’t bear..more chilli but ..this is too much I think I should not give him this……….
Nhi I will give him..coz wtever he did .was surely unbearable this is just a bit of it….
After gud ½hour kunj came in full sweat…and quickly drinks….his..protein shake..but soon his nerves..and eyes started to become red….he threw the shaker away …..
Kunj was shocked with the sudden taste of chilli he quickly went towards the kitchen…
He was searching for water or something sweet ..to calm down his nerves …he was finding like a mad…..tears were comes out from his….big red eyes…
He got some water…and quickly drinks it …
He leaned against the fridge…and sit down…he was panting….and crying as he was having pain in his stomach also….
Just then tw comes to take something and saw kunj in that state and feels extremely guilty…she quickly went toward him ..
Tw: kunj kunj ( cupping his face) …look at me..kunj…
Ku: tw main Mr jaunga…its so…painful…
Tw was teary eyed watching him like.that…
Tw: kunj calm down plz…have drink water…
Ku: yes ……………..but it doesn’t make effect.
Tw was now tensed becoz. ..it not gud for his health it is compulsory to drift his mind without any further delay …she grabbed his lips in her lips….
( both are still sitting).
Tw take her one hand and started to tap his forehead lightly ….and one hand grasping…his left side of his face….
Kunj had grabbed her waist protectively….as he was under the chilli effect…..tw was kissing him to erase his pain..and so was kunj he was also slowly vanishing from the chilli thoughts..
After gud 1-2 mins…kunj was quite fine…but twinj were still kissing…soon kunj opens his eyes he saw tw kissing him..with closed eyes….
He felt happy but soon realised that it was wrong…he quietly…parted away…and said….
This is wrong….and went from their….
Tw was shocked that why on earth she kissed him..but her heart was saying that she can see him in pain…
Tw can also feel chilli…in her mouth…and thought how much kunj had been suffered…..
Now days passed like this only…sometimes tw was too soft and sometimes too harsh…
She always taunt him..or insult him….on silly reasons….she was somewhere feeling like she was doing wrong..but always …the feeling of revenge overpowered her ….she insults him..by misjudging his relation with his cousin without any clarification….or insulting him…on the taneja house incident….in the initial days of this kunj was hopeful that he will change her but now he had loosed all his hopes..he was sad..but can’t do anything……
It was their first anniversary….
Kunj came towards tw and handed her some documents…
Tw: wt is this…
Ku:,divorce .papers I have signed them and so should u….and don’t worry..all my shares..and property..will be transferred to ur name ..which is left with me…ur share on sarna empire is 45%and don’t need anything and waise bhi its one year now I hope now u r satisfied .by completing ur revenge …main Barbad ho chuka hun…so its better to leave this.relationship….I am leaving…for. US as a multinational company has appointed me..so tw have a gud life ahead may u found the right man in ur life soon…take care….
And by saying this he leaves with teary eyes….
Tw was al shocked she was unable to digest the fact that he and she r over….
Suddenly she gets a call.
Tw attended the call and soon rushed out of the house…
Kunj packed his bags and leaves for airport….
Tw came in the hospital and went towards Mahi room….
Mahi was out from coma…
Tw(teary eyed) Mahi ..u r all right…
Mahi: yes di…..but wait this vermilion and manglasutra…it means u r married…
Tw: yes Mahi I am married to kunj sarna….
Tw was expecting Mahi to burst on her for marrying kunj..but instead she hugged her….
Mah: thanx so very much di..by marrying kunj u have done the best thing….
Tw : Mahi wt r u saying he k sarna our destroyer I a married him to take revenge…and she tells him all abt the past one year…
Mah: di wt have u don e….he is innocent …
This was all for tw one thing struck her mind was kunj…
She quickly…went to meet him…
Kunj was sitting on waiting area…
Tw came and dragged him.towards the car and drived to a hill spot…the whole car ride kunj was asking questions….
Twinj reached their…
Both came out tw went towards kunj..and slapped him on his cheek..
Ku: ( irritated) bas tw enough…now ..bahut hoggya…manna maine galat kiya but now when I am leaving ..u have prob with this also….
Tw: yhi to prob hai…
U r not k sarna …then u take his blame on ur name….
Ku : main hi kr Sarna…hun…
Tw: just shut up kunj say the blo*dy truth…
Ku: tw I am not k sarna my big bro karan is k sarna….he had rivalry form taneja so he set fire to just threat them but when ur family died…he was shock and slipped to. Depression ….and I didn’t wanted u to realize him abt that incident so I said that I am k sarna….but now tw it also didn’t make any affect coz u don’t love me and wts the needed to stay in this relationship…
Tw : r u mad from one past year u were quite han…ek bar to bola hota….
And kya pyar. Nhi krti maine kabhi bhi tumse kha ki I don’t love u directly nhi na ……
I LOVE U KUNJ….and plz forgive me..
Iku: I love u too tw…
They both hug and kiss ….each other and ready to start their new life…
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Hello, everyone. So, here was my One Shot. How was it? Drop down your comments below as I’d be waiting to know your views about it. Keep guessing me and do go through all the other updates being updated for this competition and guess those authors too. Kruti and Ria would be updating you all with the author names and their respective stories soon after the competition ends.
Best regards,
Ria, Kruti and the author
14 Comments
Wow . Mind blowing . Loved it . E to Sayeeda api ki writing se kuch kuch match karta hain . But dont know who is th author
awesome amazing fabulous emotional epi….
Awesome amazing fabulous os t I dnt know whose dis
Awesome
Fantabulous.
I srsly don’t know who has written this masterpiece….
I luvd it????
Woah…So this is something beyond imagination…Amazing is not the word to describe this master piece…Good job! I guess….Adya….Just a guess 😉 Let’s see who is it 🙂
Loved it 🙂
I am sorry I cannot guess who the writer is coz all of you write so well and this OS was superb Loved it 🙂 I feel it’s Kruti Don’t know just a guess 🙂
RanaBulbul? Maybe…I felt so. Good work.
ohhhh god spr dpr
loved it 2 eternity soooooooo beutiful
loved it….
love u sis….. 😀
i thnk mayb its monica..
gr8 work loved it..
Fathi… Kruti… I hope I’m correct please Allah make me correct… Os was marvelous… Fathi amazing
Awesome ❤️❤️
Wow amazing os.. really loved it.. but sorry m unable to guess this author!
it may be kruthi… but it was awesome…
Lovely…. Awesome….