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TEI–a diff story (Intro & epi 1)

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guyz,,this is my 1st ever ff. So I need ur support & plzz do cmnt whether u lyk it or not…..

characters r as usual..well in my ff twinj Wl b meeting each other in an online page of tu just lyk many of us do….

scene 1

ohh,,today’s epi was awesome.. d pair looks so cute & mr.sm1 do u mind being my frnd???-TWINKLE cmnted on a written update of tu

scene 2

well..I’m an expert in making frnds…so I don’t mind befriending u– Mr.sm1 replied to twinkle’s cmnt.

(while replying to twinkle’s cmnt Mr.sm1 thought to himself—
oh god!!these girls r just mad after me…now sm twinkle wants to b my frnd..babaji,,how did u make me so handsome.. but anyways I can’t make anybody sad after all I’m d great KUNJ SARNA..:) )

on d other side twinkle was hesitant to post that befriending cmnt but she just couldn’t help her desire to know about dat Mr.sm1 as he seemed an interesting soul to her…

[today there will b no precap as I need to know if u lyk it or not]

plzz tell me whether I should update or not,,as I’m not a good writer I need ur support badly…. so plz share ur views & suggestions…..

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84 Comments

  1. Araadhya on

    Hey Tara……. I knw itz too much for u to guess I won’t tell it until someone is sure who really am I…..!!! I may or may not be rakshita and I may or may not be smc….!!!

    • tara on

      u knw y m telling this prapti?? coz when i was chatting wid rakshita ..her answer made me feel so..even she was playing the prank wid me…

    • Araadhya on

      Guys how u can be so rude wid me and that girl rakshita……..I m araadhya …..my name is araadhya Patel……!!! And I m in class 10 studying in Vadodara….!!!

    • tara on

      no we are not all gujratis…we belong to diff states wid diff lang…i am a bengalee…
      u can also join us…abhi..

  6. Araadhya on

    Sooty if I was rude wid anyone …..Tara I m sorry…are unsure that I m rakshita…then u r right…..hey gals this time I was trying to just lighten up ur mood…as its board time Nd its very tensening matter for all students…..so plzzz don’t mind….and this time I was able engage u for one day…not bad right???? Ohk…..now I m rakshita Nd I m not a Gujarati ……though I reside in Gujarat……..Nd thnx abhi we all r frndz so we chat here!!!

  7. prapti on

    sry Araadhya if u r hurt but we didn’t mean to hurt u…plzz batado yaar kya hum tumhe jaante hai or is this a prank??

  8. Rakshita on

    Prapti read the cmmt again araadhya has written….it has all your answers…….nd I purposely wrote that you were rude do that you believe that araadhya nd rakshita r not same……i jst wants def to make everybody feel relax bfore boa er ds see o that they don’t panic….???

  10. prapti on

    yeah. saw it…yaar rakshita,, u’ve taken a hard job to relaxing everyone….& ruchi there’s no time limit of having fun..u r always wlcm here

  14. prapti on

    tnx shanaya…btw it’s gr8 u know…sob bhasha shekha hoye jabe mone hochche?…I know many of u didn’t get it but don’t worry,.I said that m feeling lyk I’ll learn all languages here

    • tara on

      haha,,amar toh mone hochche je eta kono jatio bhasar class cholche…online comments ar dara..prapti eta sottie akta onno golpo…jekhane somosto bhasar lok nijer bhasay tader montobbo rakkche…
      okay how many of u understood what i said?? rakshita wbu??

    • Rakshita on

      a try: u want to say that” i think that some class of different religious languages is going on through comments……prapti u r telling truth…sorry after that i m not able to…..u go ahead and tell!!!

  15. prapti on

    yupp,,r mojar byaper holo j sobai onno bhasha bojhar try korche..ei review er byaper ta na thakle aro bhalo hoto,tahole sathe sathe cmnts post hoye jeto