thank u all for ur lovely cmnts bcz without ur support it becomes too hard to write…OK now I’ll stop my pakpak & continue d story but plzz leave a comment–
so here it goes–
scene 1
taneja house—
maa meri maa,,pyaari maaaa..mamma( twinkle sings hugging leela from back)
L: kya baat hai…meri beti aaj itni jaldi kaise uth gayi???
T: ohho…aap phir bhul gayi,,,,it’s last Sunday of this month..so I’ll go to Happy Hut( an orphanage ),remember??
L: oh yes!! I forgot…ok,go beta..bye
T: bye maa…
sarna house—
oh God!!! aaj Sunday hai aur aaj subah hi mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai,,now what to do?? it’s only 8 am so even twinkle must be sleeping so I won’t be able to chat also…
(kunj was saying to himself as he woke up early & he decided to go for jogging)
scene 2
twinkle reached d orphanage & decided to distribute d gifts she brought for children first as there was a football match b/w girls & boys of d orphanage… so she collected all things & happily entered there-
but there she saw children crying & d authorities seemed tensed too
T: what happened? why r u crying,kids? tell me naa…
A Kid: didi,u know..golu is missing, we can’t find him anywhere…
T: what?? did u call police or not-
just then d missing kid comes running & hugs twinkle from behind & said that he lost way while chasing a kite & a Bhaiya helped him…twinkle was too happy & she went to d boy to say tnx
T: excuse me?
D guy turned & both he & twinkle were surprised cz d guy was kunj-
K & T: tum??
K: what r u doing here?
T: u give ans of dis question cz I come here often & I never saw u…hey,,r u following me?
K : oh plzz..i came to leave that kid as he lost way
T: listen,don’t lie.. OK?
K: why would I lie? ask him if u want..& I don’t follow girls but they follow me lyk u…
T: huhh!! in ur dreams..
All Kids Together : stoppp it!!! didi comes here often & Bhaiya is d one who helped so stop quarrelling…
( d authorities came & took them for d football match..twinj will b playing against each other as they requested kunj to play for boys team)
scene 3
d match—
d situation is that both d teams r at d same score so a tiebreaker is called..kunj is d keeper of boys team & twinkle is of girls team…
the boys team scored 3 goals out of five shoots..now it was girls’ turn-
but d girls team couldn’t score d first two goals as kunj saved them…but they did score 2 goals, so d score was now 3-2 & d last shootout for girls was left…so twinkle thought smthing–
d last player had gone to shoot & kunj smirked at twinkle as he was sure that his team was going to win but just then twinkle untied her hair & winked naughtily at him…and of course d goal was scored as kunj was lost in her thoughts & her beauty…so both teams were declared winner but again d fight of twinj started–
K: u cheater!!
T: how dare u!!
K: I said d truth..u winked at me & that’s why we lost…
T: ye meri aankhe hai,meri marzi… & even if I winked why did u stare at me??
K: umm…woh toh boh–
stop itt & go home…d match is over- children cut them off again..
both of them returned home…
scene 4
tu page—
T: hlw..how r u doing?
K: I’m good but ek pagal ladki se pala pada hai
T: really?? even I had a fight wid a crazy boy..
K: oh,u can fight also?? I didn’t know abt this talent of urs
T: u fought also,ri8?? but I don’t think u can fight..u seem to be sweet..d girl must be really crazy-
K: neither u seem to be rude & fight queen..so I guess we just banged wid 2 wrong & mad persons today..
T: hmm..me too…I’m so sleepy,yaar
K: ya,u take rest..even I will..
T: hmm..kal baat karenge,,byee
here d sixth epi ends…
PRECAP–fun moments & drama as well
guys,I’m really sorry if this epi was boring.. u can throw whatever u want on me…plzz cmnt & feel free to criticize it even…
28 Comments
Hey..it’s amazing dear..I love you so much and this story..incredible and amazing..brilliant..superb..great..epic..can you check out new story by bella “music sheet” hope you will like it..bye love you
tnx for cmnting aruhi but could u post d link of music sheet?
it is really very nice …. wonderful idea just love ur ff
continue soon
thank u srija..it means a lot..
Awesome prapti …….
Nice…..keep writing……
tnx rashi
tnx a lot rashi
Awesome episode
tnx harshi..plz keep reading
awesome episode again…..
thank u..thank u
What is the reaction afta they know each other ?
Uff, can’t wait.
even I can’t wait to write,,, star..thank u 4 cmnting for d first tym
Omg eagerly waiting for them to know each other omgggg…. cant waitt…. plzz upload the episode awesome episode… ???
thank u sweetie..u r amazing too
Prapti dear l luv ur ff yr… Amazing… nxt epi Asap plz… ??
tnx ruchi…muahh?
Yaa nice episode plz update next episode waiting for next episode
thank u ammu…
Loed it!!! can’t wait for nxt epi….
plz upload the nxt epi fast!!!
hmm..I’ll try..& thank u
U r awesome prapti! !!!!!
eagerly waiting for ur next episode
u think so cz u r amazing… luv ?
oops m late…sorry prapti…actually m telly sorry to almost everyone that m unable to comment..bt i hope u will understand my situation…nd one more thing if u dont see my comment don’t think that i haven’t read it..i always read ur ff…i just love the concept…”the diff story”
nd yes this spi was fatafati..haha..
u don’t know tara how happy I am to read ur cmnt..& of course I understand as my boards r gonna start soon also…all d best & thank u
thnks and same to u…
I think if real tei aisa hota toh trp toh chappad phaad detiB-)
Awesome