TEJVI & ISHKARA : JOURNEY THROUGH THEIR LIVES
{PART 10} [By Renima Ishqie]
Scene- 16 {@ Tej’s guest house
{Ishana and omkara arrives there……But they find the guest house has been locked….From the securities they came to know that Tej and Swethlana had gone to meet some body and they can’t say the name as Tej has asked them to keep it as confidential……}
Ishana : Omkara……Mr. Tej Singh Oberoi…..
{Ishana gets a phone call from Mona…She feel tensed……@ Phone – Ishana : Mona…….what happened? Paapa….
Mona : Di relax…….paapa is feeling better now…..And he want to see you…..Come fast….
Ishana : Thank God! Mona am coming…… }
Omkara : Ishana……any thing serious ?
Ishana : Nothing…..Paapa want to see me….
Omkara : Great ! Then lets go……
Scene-17 [@ Hospital]
Ishana : Paapa….
Naresh : Ishana… ……{smiles and stares @ om in confusion} Beta…..
Ishana : Paapa…this is Omkara….
Omkara : Hello Uncle…..
Naresh : Omkara……Are you Omkara singh oberoi……{anger}
Omkara : Yes Uncle….
Naresh : Ishana…tell him to leave right now…..I don’t want to see his face…..His face resembles his father……Tej Singh Oberoi….
Ishana : Paapa…..Please…He is not like him….
Naresh : May be….but he is the son of a killer….a culprit…..
Ishana : Paapa…..
Omkara : Am sorry……{Omkara gets emotional and leaves the room in rush….ishana tries to stop him by calling Omkara…..But he didn’t listen to her……}
Ishana : Paapa…..He is not like his father { cries and follows Omkara}
{On the way,Anika stops Omkara}
Anika : Omkara….
Omkara : Anika I am…..
Ishana : Omkara…..am sorry…..{cries}
Omkara : Ishana…..your tears……Am responsible for your tears….{ very emotional}
Ishana : Omkara….please….don’t say like that…..
Omkara : Am the son of a killer……Your father is right…..Ishana……When we met for the first time @ temple I saw your tears….That day……I just felt that the idol made by me has increased your sorrows….And I felt by making that idol….I have committed a mistake knowingly or unknowningly…And …..now…….Really I am responsible for your tears…..{Burst into tears}
Ishana : No….Omkara….Please…..{ishaana tries to hold his hands….But Omkara leaves the spot in hurry… }I couldn’t see Omkara in pain…..
Anika : Ishana… go and convince him….
Ishana : But paapa…..
Anika : I will take care of him…..
Ishana : Thank you Anika {She runs behind Omkara}
{Anika goes inside}
@ Hospital Room
Anika : Uncleji…..
Naresh : Anika Beta…..Am alright…..Thank you so much for….
Anika : Uncle….Omkara….
Naresh : Don’t tell about him…..And I don’t know why my daughter bring him here…..
Anika : Uncleji…..Sorry to interfere in your personal matters…..But uncleji….if Omkara is also a criminal like his father…Then Ishana would not have bring him here…….I know Omkara very well…he is really very good@ heart…..
Naresh : May be…But his face …..his identity as Tej’s son……
Mona : Paapa….I don’t think he is like his father….In fact when di was with him I felt di more confident and strong…..
Anika : I saw a concern in Ishana’s eyes for Omkara……
Naresh : If you both think that he is a nice person…Then….but I need some time….
Mona : Paapa…..That means you are ready to forgive
Omkara bhaiya….
Naresh : Mm……
Anika : That’s great….Thank you uncle ji….
[On the other hand Omkara was walking so fast and Ishana was running behind him…..Suddenly he stopped and turned when he saw Ishana has fall on the road….Omkara rushed fast to her and holded her hands and seated her in a mile stone of the road…]
Omkara : Ishana….are you ok ? {He found a scratch on her elbow and gets tensed}….Ishana…..
Ishana : Omkar
a..don’t worry….It is just a scratch only……{She covered it with her dupatta…..Omkara stares her emotionally }…..Omkara…..paapa……
Omkara: Ishana….Am really sorry…..
Ishana :Omkara….paapa….said it because…..
Omkara : He witnessed bitter days in his life because of Mr. Oberoi…..I just hate him…..Ishana…..Ishana……this surname….Oberoi…..when I asks to myself…..this name will show me the stains of blood…….tears…..You know……I felt he had done injustice to Mom and our family only….But now……. When your paapa said that am the son of a killer……I know…. that one day the whole world will offer me this new identity….Omkara….Son of a Killer…..{Very emotional}
Ishana : Enough Omkara…..I know you as Omkara…an artist …
Not as the son of Tej Singh Oberoi…..And for me it matters a lot…
Omkara : But Ishana…..how can you say like that?
Ishana : I can see your heart in your eyes…..
Omkara :{Ishkara emotional eyelock} What ? Then can you tell me what my heart says ?
Ishana : Your heart says your truth…..I mean….. in the battle of life you only stand for truth …..And your identity is your honesty…..Omkara…..i can’t see tears in your eyes……Do you know…..Omkara…..when a person cries……his tears will say what he feels in heart….And I know you are in pain…..But as you asked me do I trust you ?? And my answer is always…….the same…..I trust you Omkara…….And……
Omkara : Ishana……You can trust me…But what about your paapa…..And….
Ishana : Time will change every one ….And when my paapa will be able to find your truth ……am sure he will trust you….Omkara believe in your heart and it will show you what you are…..And what the whole world says …..I don’t care…as I know my Omkara….well…..
Omkara : My ……
Ishkara : I mean I know you well…..{They stares each other}
Omkara : Ishana…..”my”…..you know…..when a person tells my will show how much he is conscious ….And am glad that I have become that “my” for you……
Ishana : Am with you, Omkara……{they hold each other’s hand and smiles}
Scene- 18 {Oberoi Mansion}
{Its morning and every one expect omkara were assembled @ the hall….Dadi hand overs some paper to Shivaay}
Dadi : Billu, hold these papers……{She hand overs a file to shivaay } rudra, billu,prinku,jhanvi, pinky….Right now we all are going to Guest house…..
Rudra : But dadi……
Dadi : {waves her hand and in much serious manner} We are going right now……Its final……
{Every one leaves oberoi mansion……Jhanvi and Pinky stares each other in much tension}
Scene-17 {@ Guest House}
{Tej is surprised to see his whole family }
Dadi : Billu….just give the papers to tej…..{shivaay hand overs the file}….Tej…read it……
Tej : Mom…..what is this ??
Swethlana {reaches}: Tej….what’s going on here ??
Tej : Even….I don’t know Swethlana…….But I think every one are here to create a new drama only……
Swethlana : Tej…..these papers…
Tej : Shivaay give it to me and Maa asked me to read it…..Swethlana just go through it …..Am fed up…..
Swethlana : {after reading them } tej…..you are finished….
Tej : What ??
Swethlana : The whole property of Oberois …..I mean your mom has written the whole property in the name of Jhanvi
Tej : What ??{shocked}
Dadi : Billu….i think tej didn’t get what she said…..Take the papers from him and read it louder……
{Shivaay take the papers from Tej}” I Kalyani Singh Oberoi has decided to register the whole property and land in the name of Jhanvi Singh Oberoi and I officially declare that the family business of Oberoi Industries will be handled by Jhanvi Singh Oberoi and will be assisted by Pinky Singh Oberoi and Shivaay Singh oberoi respectively”…..
Tej : But how it can be possible ?? Jhanvi is daughter in law
Dadi : I have decided to announce Jhanvi as my daughter…..
And tej….you just read the last part….
Tej { takes the papers from shivaay in hurry} : What my paapa had stated my mother has the full right and authority to write the will @ any one’s name.
Swethlana : That means…you will not get even a penny ??
{Swethlana removes the ring in anger and throws it}
{ Tej in much anger tries to slap Jhanvi….Pinky stops him…..}
Pinky : Jethji….you don’t have the right to do this……Jethaniji is my boss….
Jhanvi : Pinky…Tell him to leave this guest house right now….
Tej : What ? why I should leave ? this is my guest house…
Jhanvi : You are wrong Tej…this was your guest house…..But now….{She looks @ Pinky}
Pinky :This is Jethaniji’s house…..And now you don’t have any rights to stay here…..Oh My Mata!
Swethlana : Oh god ! Ridiculous…..
PRECAP : Jhanvi’s Beginning of A New Journey …….
23 Comments
Wow it is simply superb , first i got emotional with ishkara track and their heart melting scenes and then it is completely a power packed scene of dadi, totally jhanvi’s property, that was scene is the scene of the day. It was lovely , just we find a few great writers like you and all the ishqbaaz ff family. And di please read and comment on my ff
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-ff-sat-episode-14/
Sat sorrry for not commenting on ur ffs….dear u just msg me …upto diwali i have very hectic work schedule…And to read a good ff of karan johar matters a lot…..So without reading and looking in a glance and commenting is really not fair…..so just msg me the links and after diwali i will comment on ur ffs…Thanks
Very much did And the
Thank you chetna
U just rocked
What a superb episode
I really that it can be a part of track of real serial.
U are really an amazing writer
U displayed all contents whether emotional or suspense very nicely like a very good professional writter
eagerly waiting for the next episode
Thanks namratha
Simple n awesome
Thank you dear…your dp is nice
Actually I thought to have Tom n Jerry pic than my real pic….btw thnc
I really don’t have any words for your ff. It was like good, awesome, superb, fabulous. Loved the convo btw ishkara. And wow dadi did a fabulous job.
Thanks jazz
Wowie awesome
Thank you dear
Nice
Thank you antara
Superb reni…….first part was so emotional….. Loved ishkara convo very much…..last part….. dadi rocks….right decision by dadi…….pinky dialogue was super when tej tries to slap jhanvi……waiting for next……
Thanks rosu
NB : SCENE 19 @ GUEST HOUSE….I typed it as scene 17…..Sorry for the inconvenience
I am reading this since part 9 and began to love it
Thanks ishana
Awesome episode Ishkara scene so emotional and when ishana fall
.Whole property in jhanvi ‘s name its so unique
Thanks disha
Those who didn’t like this part, please express your views ……so that i can find out the mistakes