TEJVI & ISHKARA : JOURNEY THROUGH THEIR LIVES
[PART-15] {By Renima Ishqie}
Scene-25 [@Hospital….continuation from last part]
Jhanvi : No Tej….you are not alone….{emotional}
Tej : Maa…..
Dadi : Tej…….puthar how it happened ?
Shivaay : Dadi….please…bade paapa is not able to talk much….Well ….Inspector said me that a worker of the prison who used to serve food for prisoners shot bade paapa…..Police has taken action against him and they brought bade paapa @ right time to hospital…..
Tej : Shivaay….
Shivaay : Please don’t take stress bade paapa…..
Jhanvi : Tej….{emotional}
Tej : Jhanvi….I …am really sorry…..{Tej slowly fold his hands…..and burst into tears……}
Jhanvi {placed her hands on his hands }: Tej…..I can understand…..
Tej : Omkara…..I want to see…..him…..
Jhanvi : Shivaay…..where is omkara ?
Shivaay : I will go and see….{he leaves the room}
{On the other hand Omkara and Ishana were tensed….shivaay tries to convince omkara….}
Shivaay : Please…om….just go and meet him…
Omkara : I don’t want to see his face…..
Shivaay : Please….
Ishana : Shivaay…you go inside….I will bring him…..
Shivaay : Thanks….{shivaay leaves}
Omkara : Ishana….am not coming….it is final……
Ishana : Omkara…he is your paapa….
Omkara : Ishana…..it is not easy to forgive the bitterness…..
Ishana : I know….In fact I hate that face….But for your mom……Please……go and meet him….
{Anika, Naresh and Mona arrives there as Rudra called them….}
Anika : Ishana…how is uncle ?
Ishana : He is feeling better….
Anika : That’s great…..
Ishana : Anika….actually Mr.Tej want to meet Omkara…and Omkara is saying…..
Omkara : Ishana…I already said that I don’t want to see his face…..It is final…[anger]
Anika : Omkara…..please……in this situation…if he really want to see you…then I think you should …..
Omkara : Not possible….
Naresh : But beta….I think you should go…..
Omkara : Uncle…..
Naresh : When Mrs. Oberoi can return my right wh
ich I deserve….when she can handle family and business in her own hold….when she can become a successful woman…..and when she can forgive Mr. Tej her husband….inspite of what he did to her….then you are her son….Omkara…..am not asking to forgive your paapa….but you will not lose any thing by meeting him……Else you can decide…..
{Omkara……was not able to take a decision….Ishana slowly touched his hands and both share an eyelock}
Ishana : Omkara…Am with you….lets go….{she holded his hand and said him to come with her to room…..Omkara was confused…..But when he stared @ her eyes he felt she was very bold and matured …..He was unable to say “No” and he just walked with her ….}
Scene-26 [@ Room]
{Tej, Priyanka, Jhanvi, Dadi, Rudra,Shivaay…every one were surprised to see Omkara and Ishana}
Tej : Omkara…….{emotional}
Omkara : I am just here for my mom only…..
Tej : Omkara…..please forgive me…..[he fold his two hands….] beta…..I know…..I have committed so many sins…..but…..now I am …..[He is unable to complete his words…since he was not able to control his breath…]
Jhanvi : Tej….Tej……{she puts her hand on his chest}
Dadi : Tej….puthar…..Doctor ?
Rudra : I will call him…..{he rushes outside and came back with doctor soon….Doctor checks Tej….and says that due to stress it happened…..fortunately he has overgone the threat……}
Jhanvi : Thank God !!
{ Omkara sat beside him…..He touched his forehead and he was literally crying ……A drop of tear fell on Tej’s forehead….Tej stared @ Omkara…..But Omkara all of a sudden stood up }
Omkara : Mom….i have seen him….and am leaving now
{He is about to leave the room with Ishana….But she stopped Omkara…]
Ishana : Omkara…he is your paapa…..
Omkara : Ishana…what about you ?
{Ishana is unable to answer his question……}
Jhanvi : Omkara….Ishana…..Thanks for coming…..
Ishana : Aunty….
Dadi : Jhanvi puthar…..@ your heart…you still love Tej…that’s why you are ready to say him that he is alone…And though I send tej out ….he is my son and I can’t see my son in pain……May be am selfish….but…
{Dadi burst into tears}
Omkara : Dadi may be you are right…..But for me it is not possible…….
Ishana : To be honest it is not possible for me also….
Shivaay : All are not perfect…..And bade paapa……I mean he is the part of our family……
Rudra : Right….bhaiya….
Priyanka : Am also with you bhaiya…
Pinky : Jethaniji need jethji’s support and love then I don’t have any problems….
Tej : Every one is able to change their colour according to situation……But the one who is an expert of colours may not change the colour of truth @ any cost……Am proud of my son……Omkara…..
{Omkara and Tej emotionally stares @ each other….Anika, Naresh and Mona also arrives there…..}
Tej : Naresh…..I am sorry….
Naresh : Mr. Tej……it is not so easy to forget and forgive….as you put my whole life became miserable because of you……but your wife has rectified your mistakes….i wish you will not lose her in this turn of life……
{Jhanvi and Tej share an emotional eyelock}
Tej : Jhanvi……will you give me another chance ?
Jhanvi : Tej….{she hold his hand and shakes her head with smile}
Tej : Trust me…Jhanvi I will not let you down…..
Jhanvi : My journey is incomplete without you Tej….
Tej : Am also incomplete with out you Jhanvi…..
{Both of them smile and stare each other with wet eyes}
Pinky : Oh My Mata !! No barriers for romances…..
{Every one laughs….}
Anika : Uncle….welcome back….
Priyanka : Am sorry paapa…..{she press her ears}…..actually what ever I said because….
Tej : I know beta…..in fact am really feeling so shame that I threatened my daughter…..Sorry beta….
Rudra : Paapa…..am also sorry…..
Jhanvi : Mr. Mehta, Ishana…. I don’t know what to say now….but if possible…..
Naresh : We will try Mrs. Oberoi……
Ishana : Time can change every thing and we will try….
Tejvi : Thank you
{Ishana, Omkara, Naresh and Mona leaves the room}
PRECAP : ISHKARA—LOVE & PROMISE
17 Comments
Loved it. Waiting for the love part
Thanks akshaya
Guys…there is a small mistake …..dadi want to say Tej is not alone…but i typed in rush and you will find the dialogue as Tej is alone…..Sorry for the inconvenience….
Loved it di fantastic the best part is ishana convince om so nicely and he couldn’t say anything.
Thanx di for this lovely ff
Have a nice day
Thanks dear
Those who didn’t like this part please express your view….so that i can identify my misatkes…..please
Episode was very nice Renima..I must say the way u capture the emotions of all the characters is really good… I’m sorry that u got hurt with my joke on Ishkara, I did it just for fun….Even I love Ishkara a lot…How’s ur leg now???btw I’ve also written an FF on Ishqbaaz, plz read it and commhttps://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-8-years-later-shivika-ishkara-rumya-ff-luna-promos/ent whether u liked it or not and be honest plz.
Episode was very nice Renima..I must say the way u capture the emotions of all the characters is really good… I’m sorry that u got hurt with my joke on Ishkara, I did it just for fun….Even I love Ishkara a lot…How’s ur leg now???btw I’ve also written an FF on Ishqbaaz, plz read it and comment whether u liked it or not and plz be honest.https://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-8-years-later-shivika-ishkara-rumya-ff-luna-promos/
Luna dear i have commented on your ff dear ishqie …..really very nice promos……ishqie and i liked it yaar….. really i want to see your creativity ……..and no need of sorry dear….actually now am really tensed with some personal issues and tensions and work pressure also had increased,….and leg pain….as am not able to take leave ….pain has bit increased……and upto diwali tensions will go on…….dear……and i have submitted the last part…..so tu will post it by tonight……
NICE PART REALLY WORTH READING
Thanks ishqie ….well i have submitted last part tu will post it by tonight
Fab di
tejvi unite so nicely
please don’t take much stress
Oh disha thanks…and i have posted last part ishqie…..about stress…..well dear…….upto diwali……it will move on…..and dear i can handle….don’t worry……and pls comment on last part…..
Actually the idea of bringing tejvi to limelight was just brilliant. They do make a great onscreen pair. I liked this one.
Thanks dear maria…well you are really creative….i liked your ff and thanks for commenting on my ff
Welcome & thank you …your support means a lot Renima…
Really a very emotional episode.sorry di for not commenting all these days I mentioned the reason in my ff. And di this episode made me so emotional that I got teary eyed. Me getting tears is like shivaay singh oberoi getting tears. But you made it possible with this lovely episode. And I am going to read your next episodes also now.