TEJVI & ISHKARA-JOURNEY THROUGH THEIR LIVES-
[PART-4]
[By Renima Ishqie]
Scene-6 {continuation of part-3}
Ishana : Omkara….{she called him twice…but omkara didn’t noticed it…..After some time omkara gained his lost mind and turned to Ishana}
Omkara : Ishana…..Am sorry…..I was thinking about….. I mean….I just want to say if it is convenient then we can start work from tomorrow itself…..
Ishana : No problem…..Omkara…..
Omkara : Then can we meet @ Art hub…..it is…..
Ishana : Oberoi…..{she said it accidentally and stared @ Omkara…..Omkara gets confused}…I mean…..The art hub…. Don’t worry….I will be there by tomorrow evening…..
Omkara : Are you sure ?
Ishana : Yes….{Omkara observes her gestures…..as he felt she
is in trouble…}
Omkara : Then see you @ The Art Hub…..Ishana….Bye…..
Ishana : Bye…..Omkara {Both of them just smile @ each other…..As soon as Omkara left the spot….Ishana started thinking “How should I go there ?……My paapa…..paapa…
She was about to cry…But before that…she recalled her dad’s words…”just pretend that nothing has happened”…..And she decided in mind “ Yes…nothing has happened….I will go”…. She again started dancing with much confidence and boldness……}
Scene-7 {oberoi mansion}
Jhanvi : Maa ji am really sorry….Actually yesterday I was out of control and I…….
Dadi : Puttar….its ok….
Jhanvi : Maa ji…..I really want to quit drinking….But I think I can’t……As Tej….{she cries and dadi holds her hands}
Dadi : Jhanvi, am sorry….I feel guilty as Tej……..my son….. how….can he ??…..This is not the culture which I give to my son…….Unfortunately……he…..puttar…..{dadi also gets emotional}
Omkara : Dadi……Mr. Oberoi never tried to realize his family….he has never considered mom’s emotions…..He never tried to understand what mom feels for him…..He has not taken any thing seriously……And I just….
Jhanvi : Omkara…..behave yourself……Please….
Omkara : I can’t see your tears….Mom….
Jhanvi : Its better if we will not talk about it……I need some….
Dadi : Jhanvi puttar….Not now……
Jhanvi : A day without drinks….now I really can’t compromise with it……Sorry…..{she stood from the chair and goes inside…Omkara also goes to his room……}
Scene-7 {Omkara @ his room}
{Omkara search for the brushes…suddenly he find that his brushes are misplaced and he find a cover there……He opened it and he found that it was placed by Swethlana…..@ the cover he saw a pic of tej with swethlana……Omkara get shocked……As @ the pic Tej was wearing a ring on Swethlana’s hands…..Omkara gets tensed……and left the room in hurry}
Omkara : Mom…Mom….{“Yes, Omkara”….Omkara was in full of anger to find Swethlana calling his name….}
Swethlana {Looking@ Hands of Omkara and smiles}: So…you got it…..well…..{she raised her hands and show the middle finger before Omkara…..Jhanvi reaches there and shocked to see swethlana…..}Jhanvi…..try to convince Omkara……
Omkara :{with much frustration}How dare you…..{he pressed her hands tightly}
Swethlana : Chill, Omkara…..This is the engagement ring…… And you have no right to behave so rude with your Mom….{she releases her hands from his hold}……Jhanvi please….
Jhanvi : Swethlana…..Already you have spoiled my husband…. Now….What you want ? Please leave Omkara……
Swethlana : Me…..Spoiled your husband….Come on….Jhanvi…
Tej is with me….because…certainly you have not given him space……And…it is not my mistake……
{Shivaay and Rudra reaches there…..The Three brothers stand together and three of them are in much anger}
Shivaay {Burst his anger}: How dare you talk like that? You have insulted my Badi Maa and I will not tolerate you in my house….Just Get out….Otherwise I will call the police…….
{“You are not supposed to do that Shivaay”….Three brothers turn back and get shocked to see Tej with this statement}
Tej : Swethlana is my secretary…Above all she is my fiancee….
Dadi : Tej…..what are you saying ? what about Jhanvi ?
Tej : Well I don’t think Jhanvi has any objection with this….
Dadi : Jhanvi….what is this ? I don’t understand any thing…..
Jhanvi : Even I didn’t get Tej…..
Swethlana : Jhanvi….i think you consumed drinks too much….
That’s why you have forgot things….{she shows her ring to her}
Jhanvi {recollected whatever happened yesterday}: Its my ring…And from now Its Swethlana’s ring…..
{Every body gets shocked…..}
Tej : Have you all heard what Jhanvi said? So it is clear now….
{ Dadi slaps Tej} Dadi : I feel shame to say you are my son….
Tej….Just get out…..I don’t want to see your face…..
Jhanvi: Maaji….Don’t blame Tej….It happened because of me
Dadi : No….Puttar…Stop blaming yourself……
Tej : I did it because Jhanvi asked me to do so…..
Dadi : I didn’t get you….Tej…..
Swethlana : Well…I have the answer…..Just have a look on it…{she show the video recordings on her phone….In which Jhanvi removes her ring and requests Tej to wore the ring on Swethlana’s hands… Every one feels sad for Jhanvi……}
Tej : Maa….Yesterday when you scolded me I said” Jhanvi is mad….She herself is responsible for this….When she was out of control ……I told her….Jhanvi….stop drinking…But she forced me to put ring on Swethlana’s finger……
Jhanvi : Maa ji, Tej is right……Am responsible for spoiling my life …Well said……Tej…..{She gets emotional and goes inside}
Swethlana : Tej……I have to discuss….
Tej : I will meet you @ Guest House….
Swethlana : Ok….Tej….{she leaves and Tej also goes to his room }
[Dadi, Rudra, Shivaay ….. are shocked…..]
Dadi : Billu….Omkara….
Shivaay : {suddenly notes that omkara is not there}
Rudra,where is Om??
Rudra : Bhaiya….Om…..
Shivaay :Lets go….{They rushes to Omkara’s room}
PRECAP : Anika throws water on Tia…..
Guys….Hardly just now I got a half an hour break and I myself engaged with posting this part as the last one was too short and many of you didn’t get what it actually want to convey…..And just now I got a break and it was quite unexpected …. which really means a lot to write next part….And just I posted next part here…But that doesn’t mean that I will be able to update tomorrow also…..And guys don’t matter when I will be able to post other parts. But next parts will be really emotional, suspicious and….guess…what..
Ishqies…..Hope you enjoyed this part ……Please Comment on it…..
22 Comments
Renima di always beyond the heights and knowledge..
Always wait for your loads doesn’t matter how long I have to wait…
Poor janvi ….. And omkara
Thanks a lot bshama
It was so good ? but poor janvi and also om I am sure he’ll be upset ?. Waiting for the next episode as it will be mix of many things
Thanks jazz
Poor janvi and om…
Even though it’s too emotional u never get down the suspense from ur story….
These two days I think I cried alot…
Thanks…..U cried..priya…..oh! what happened dear……
It’s all of emotional things happening around the things which I see di..
This one made me cry ?.
.felt so sad for Jhanvi ?…..
ur awesome di ..and ur writing skills superb
..I think Omkara tried to suicide ..maybe idk .
..eagerly waiting for the next one ….
Thanks….and shaza u also cried…..i feel sad that u people cried because of my ff
Its really awesome just now only I read 2 and 3part also just fab
Poor jhanvi and on
stupid tej how could he do this
Thanks disha…..Tej…why did it….read next part…
Even it is emotional d…om janvi…??shewtlana i’ll kill her…post next when u’ll free….lv u d…
Thanks Abiha
Really a very emotional epi I really felt a lot. And your ff takes me to the peaks of feelings and we will wait for the next epi but please update ASAP.????
Sat dear…thanks 4 commenting…and miss karan johar i have commented on ur 11episode
Lov it
Jst lovdd it
Thanks kayena
Renima di…you always rockssss…amazing epi…in this more than Ishkara I really loved Tej and Janvi’s part…it’s so emotional…eagerly waiting for the next part…
Oh1 Yazhu am glad that u like tejvi…Thanks
Hey Renima!!!!! how r u sweetie??? sad to hear about ur swelling on feet. Take care dear!!! ur ff is really nice. U wanted me to critically analyse it, okay fine, I’ll try. Tejvi part was really good and Shwetlana being the fiance of Tej was shocking. I think Ishkara and Tejvi story is somehow related and the suspense related to Ishana is good. I hope Ishana is not conning Om like in the show and there’s something else in the store
Thanks dear luna for your valuable opinion….i really need it so that i can improve next part