Hi frnds…hw r u all…Actually am lil disappointed bcz of very less cmmnts on my ff….May b my ff is not so good ..
But a big thanks to all those who have commented …thank u so much for u love nd support….. And thanks to all silent readers also…..
I once again requests u all to share ur opinions, suggestions nd review through ur comments…. Bcz my only satisfaction And inspiration is ur comments….
So nw lets take the story forward::
Recap: Anika nd shivaay have a new feeling towards eachother..
Om worried bcz of some past incident..
Anika back to oberoi mansion.
Part 3
Shivaay move towards anika…both of them lost in eachothers eyes……omru smiles seeing this….
Shiv:Anika…. ( but cut by)
Shivaayy babyy………i’m here….
They saw tia coming…..she comes btw shivaay nd anika….she hugs shivaay he hugs her back …while looking at anika….
Anika feels disturbed bt she doesn’t shows that…..
Rudra to om: khabab mein haddi…?Om y this lady baba always came in btw anika didi nd bhaiyya….i wish to throw her out of this universe( mocking her style)
Om: you r right….I hope shivaay will realise that he don’t love tia…and hear to his inner voice….
Tia: shivaay baby …i have to talk to u something serious….lets go to ur room
Shivaay: ok…he goes with tia…nd looks back at anika……
Anika sees this and turn her face ….she go inside ….
Shivaay’s room:
Shivvay: tell me …what’s d matter….any problem….
Tia: baby ,we r engaged nd r going to marry……but everytime something Happens and u cancels or postpones..
But now i wish to get married as soon as possible before a new problem….not only me the universe wish the same.
Shiv: but tia …marriage…all of a sudden….it is so early…
Tia: Early!!!! Oh god shivaay u feel its early…baby u promised me that u will marry me when ur dad,nd badepapa will comeout of the jail…
We have already postponed it many times ..not again…I need an ans…my mom is so worried about my wedding….. I can’t give her more stress…..
Shiv: try to understand the situ……cut by tia: u understand my situation baby.
Shiv..(thinks for a min) Okay ….I think u right….we should get married…. I will ask dadi nd badepapa to fix a date..”
shadhi”………
Shivay and tia turns nd see anika at the door…….shivay looks at her…she is really shocked…..he felt little bad…
Tia: oh god anika…don’t u have ny manners….how can u enter someone’s room without even knocking…. U were standing here to listen our talks….how cheap……
Anika: I just came here to call billuji
I have no interest in ur talks…..i accidentally heard abt mrg….
Tia; oh really…..U
Shivaay cutting tia: stop it tia….she is doing her job…she must have came for something imp….Anika tell me what’s the matter
Anika: dadi called u ….she asked me to bring u to her room….that’s y i came…
Shiv: okay lets go….tia i vl see u later
Tia: ok baby…bye am leaving now….she glares anika and leaves….
Anika nd shivaay walks through
corridor…….. Unusual Silence is there……
Soumya nd rudr @ college
Bell rang:::
Soumya: Rudr…..come lets go to the class…otherwise we vl b late….come
Rudr: u go somu….this boring lectures suits u…not me….
Somu: Rudr…don’t say me that u r again going to bunk ….
Rudr: yes somu darling….today am going on a blind date ….
Soumya: what….again….a new girl….u know nah wat happened last time…
Rudr: bade bade deshon mein aise chote chote baath hothe rahthe hain…..( imitating srk)
Soumya: U wont change….nothing can be done with u…duffer oberoi( tumhara kuch nahi ho saktha)….
@ a cafeteria…
Om is sitting there ….sipping coffee…He thinks something
Its the same cafe that played an imp role in his life…its the same place which changed his life..
Flash back*****
Cafe oasis
A waiter boy was taking coffee to a table…..a girl was rushing inside..checking her phone…..she collide With the cafe boy….coffee slips from his hand nd falls accidentally on a young man sitting over there..on his hand …….
He jump up as it was too hot…..he says
Ahhhhhh( loudly)
Cafe boy nd girl panics…..all looks on,…
Manger rush towards the scene…
Manger to c.b : what r u doing idiot?? R u blind…where r u looking while doing ur duty….U….( cutted by the girl) Its not his Fault….actually i didn’t see him nd i bumped to him….sorry..
Manager : no mam …this idiot don’t knw how to work….. (.towards the man– )Am really sorry sir ….ohh no ur hand got burned… I will get first aid
Man: its ok…
Manager: No sir its not….(to boy): what r u looking at .{boy lowers his gaze}..i will…he raised his hand…..but suddenly that girl nd man Hold his hand and say( together) ; what r u doing???
Girl; I told u nahh its not his mistake….
Man: I told u am fine …..now please leave him…
Manager: ok sir am extremely sorry on his behalf….i will get first aid ….(angrily to boy )
Clean all this immediately..
Manager goes from there
Cafe boy: Sorry sir….by mistake it falls on u….sorry
Man smiles pats his shoulder nd says…: its ok …don’t worry…it happens some times …take care….what’s ur name?
C.b: jeeven,sir…
Man: u can go jeevan…..nd plz bring me some ice cubes nd a glass of water.
Jeevan goes….girl while observing all this sits near him…….she is so surprised that he handled everything so calmly nd nicely…
Girl: hi…..actually bcz of me all this happened… I am really very sorry ….nd thank u so much for saving jeevan from manager……
Man : Its okay…nxt time don’t rush in while looking on phn…he smiled ……girl bit her tongue…… Nd said sorry …
Jeevan brings ice cubes nd first aid…..girl takes it and say i will help u mr…….” Omkara” ….( yes u guessed ryt)
Om says….Hi i am omkara…..he smiles ….
Girl: Hello…..I’m Ishana….nice to meet u….. I vl help u…
Om: No am fine….. I vl do..
Ishana.: plzz…otherwise i vl think that u have not forgiven me…plzz..
Om smiles n nodes yes…
Ishana smiles broadly…. She tooks the ice cubes nd a kept it in a cloth nd Slightly placed over the scald in his left hand…. She then applies the cream ….
All this while om was lost in her….he is amazed….he drinks water while seeing her
Ishaana: Omkara ji….its done…how r u feeling now…
Om coughs hearing ” omkara ji”……
Ishana hits his head…while handing him tissue paper she asks: R u okay?
Om: yeah am fine……Thank u so much…
And don’t call me that….it sound bit strange… U can call me om…
Ishana smiles nd say: actually u r so calm even after such a thing …u don’t get angry……at me nd jeevan….thank u om….
Om: its ok.. ishana no need of thanks..and…( his phone rings…he attends)
Om: ok then …i have to leave now….hope We vl meet again..
Ishana: okay…cu..(.they shakehands)…… Om leaves….ishana looks on….
Flashback ends#####
Jeevan comes to om
He sees him and says…. Gd morning sir…..
Om: smilingly) gd mrng jeevan….hw r u??
Jeevan: am fine sir, whenever i see u here i feel so happy nd sad….
Om giv him a faint smile….
Jeevan: It has been two years since that didi ……..bt u still came here …..whenever i see u i remember her….she was so sweet nd kind….but god has his own plans….he takes good people with him early……
.Om gets disturbed…… He pays …nd Leaves ……his eyes is full of tears…….he get into the car nd drive to somewhere
Om reaches a lake side …its beautiful place….there is small garden nd small bamboo house …..with a board
*Lovers corner..*….there is a tree that bend to the lake………
Om comes to the tree nd touches it lovingly….. There is a big heart carved On the tree….it has written om nd ishana on it…………..
He breakdown into tears……..
He screams loudly……..
Ishaaanaaaaaaaa……
…….
Somewhere else:::
A beautifully arranged room …..with lots of photoframes…..and a big teddy…..
A girl wakes up from her bed……..( face not shown.) ……..
Precap: shivaay says i have decided to get married to tia after diwali……
All r shocked…… Anika looks hurt…..
A girl is coming out of airport……
Acp Randhwa at oberoi mansion…..
So guys thats part 3……i hope its not that bad…….sorry for less shivika scenes..actually i wana show all three broz love story…..so this chap like this…..confused ???
Wait for next…..
Plzz plzzz comment……so that i would get to knw your suggestions nd opinions…….
With lots of love
Aarya…
12 Comments
Nice Dr waiting for next episode
Nice
Nice.
nice storyline….do continue
Nice story that girl is ishana n?????
nice
Thank u frnds…??..nd trust me u vl love this story….? There is a lot suspence waiting for u guys…???..nd chetna u vl come to knw abt ishana in next 2-3 chaps….let’s see who is that girl…..?
Nice one aarya 🙂
Hope shivay realize his love soon
Wiw its awesome..its just fab…on’s part was really nice..he shouting ishanaaa is really heart touching..nice one…
Thank u so much for ur valuable comment….???actually i was very sad….bcz of very less comments….. I think all r busy…..tu should have kept that like nd dislike button so that atleast i knw whether to continue or drop it…..
Yaar ofcoursenu should continue..ur a fab writier and this is true..not just to boost u up…but these words r coming atraight from my heart..genuinely ur a good writer yaar…u know what i never lie sk think of it. .amd please dont make the same mistake i did…leaving in the middle…..☺☺
Its just awsmmmmm