Hii friends…back with the second part of tere mere darmiyaan…sorry haven’t proof read…
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“Please Miss…i want to hear from you…so that I can help you…”laksh pleads her to tell him what exactly happened on that day…
“what you want to hear…haan…i murdered Sanjay with my own hands…you got the answer na…just leave”ragini shouts like a mad girl…
“hey…how dare you”prison lady warden tries to attack her using the sticks…
Laksh holds it…”No mam…you don’t have rights to attack her…if I came to know about your actions then I will file a case against you guys…keep it in your mind…then proceed”laksh bursts in anger…
Laksh sees Ragini and he feels the pain behind her tears…
“I know you’re hiding something from me…but you don’t know that am a smart guy…soon I will find your lies and save you from this hell…”laksh sighs her that he is leaving…
Laksh leaves from there..he drives his car”I can feel her pain…something is there..she is not telling me the truth which shows that she is hiding something to save some other person…I have to observe her closely”laksh lost in his thoughts…
He loses his control by thinking her and about to hit the truck…but somehow manages…
“yeh…hello if you want to die then commit suicide…drunkard idiot…”truck driver scolds laksh…
“just shut up you…”laksh shouts in anger…
“what’s going on in my mind…I should find the truth soon…orelse she will be hanged…I have to do something to save her…”laksh lost in his thoughts…
He reached his home…
“surprise”Diya hugged him from behind…
“ouch…it’s hurting”laksh screams in pain…
“kya Hua…show me…”Diya is curious to know what happened…
“just leave it…i got injured…that’s it..and am not in a mood to spend time with you…please…you can understand na…”laksh avoids her…
She nods…
“why laksh behaved weird…this happened because of paapa…he only gave him ragini’s case…he went to see her today…now he is avoiding me…”Diya panics…
“arggh…she left finally…”laksh whispers…
Laksh lost in his thoughts”yesterday I went to Diya’s father for his approval…but Today I got irritated when she hugged me…i made a lie of injury…am sorry Diya…i lied…i don’t love you instead agreed due to your pressure…your father also know about this so only he gave me this case…but I want to save an innocent… Oh laksh stop getting confused…concentrate on your works…”laksh slaps his cheeks back and forth…
“tomorrow..I have to do two important works…one is to investigate ragini’s case and other to expose my truth to Diya…please god give me some strength…two girls making my life more worse than before…”laksh prays to god and welcomes his sleep…
It’s morning…laksh got ready and goes to the spot where Sanjay got murdered…
He got the special permission from his uncle who is the senior authority in New jersey government…
He starts his research…he turned entire house up and down…
He goes to the prison…the prison warden fears seeing him and opens the way for him…
“tum”Ragini shouts…
“Shshh relax…”laksh closed her mouth with his hands…
“what you think that I will go away just like that when you scold me uh…”laksh raises his eyebrows and smiles…
Ragini pushed his hands away and says”please sir…i don’t know you…but I don’t want anyone to hurt you…if she knows then you will be finished…i beg you sir please…go away…”
“So it’s a girl right…whom you’re trying to hide…”laksh smirks…
Ragini stammers…and sighs him to go and she cries…
“See…if you don’t say though…i will find the truth soon…and i got proofs too”laksh says by cupping her face…
She feels awkward..he take off his hands from her face…”am sorry…”laksh forwards an apology..
“what proofs you got”Ragini questioned him…
“why should I tell you..”laksh smirks again and walks towards the wall…
She holds his wrist and says”really you can free me ya”
“just trust me Ragini…i will prove your innocence…but you should also help me…tell me what exactly happened…”laksh holds her shoulders..
Ragini nods…
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Ragini came to New jersey for pursuing her master’s in electronics…she enjoyed her life there but missed her family the most…eventhough ragini’s family is so small but they were happy with it…
By crossing so much of hurdles Ragini came here to new jersey and she is doing part time works too…
Everything seems to be perfect in her life…at that time Maya enters in her life…the evil part of ragini’s life starts…
Maya is a rich,beautiful girl who wants her life to be perfect and she doesn’t want anything secondarily…
Ragini saved Maya from the accident which is planned to take a revenge…so Maya befriend with ragini…
Sanjay and Maya were childhood friend…maya introduced Sanjay to ragini…
Maya and Ragini became besties gradually…all went well but the problem starts when Maya comes to know about the truth…
Maya loves Sanjay deeply….one fine day Sanjay asks Maya to come to the coffee shop nearby…she gets excited and reached there before him…
“sorry sorry am late”Sanjay holds his ears…
“no problem…tell me what’s the matter”Maya chuckles…
“I want to tell you something you would never expect from me”Sanjay stammers..
She sighs to tell…
“but you shouldn’t take it wrong…i…i…i love you..will you be mine”Sanjay said in one breath…
Maya nods and forwarded her hand…
“thank you Maya…it’s good na…if I propose like this means Ragini will accept na…”Sanjay grinned…
Maya was shocked..she controlled her tears and says”Sanjay…i have some important work…see you later”
“bye”he hugged her…
Maya leaves from there to her farm house…she feels so weak to accept it…”Sanjay..why you did this to me”she shouts and wipes her tears…
“I won’t let you both live peacefully…Ragini I will show you the real Maya…”she smirks…
To be continued •••
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~Darshu
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