Thank u some much ria,sam,sayeeda,dreamer romaisha,sadaf for ur comments.it really means a lot to me.and one more thing i really dont much about the rituals so the episodes go according my way so pls dont get confused.ok now to my episode.
Episode 2
Next day(mehandi function)
In the taneja ansion.Leela is running here n there 4 the preparations.n mahi comes down
L-is twinkle ready i have make all the arrangmets the boy s side r going to come.
M-that go and ask ur kumbakarn daughter.
L-u mean,oh my god what i am going do with this girl.ok i will go and wake her up u.u see if these things ready.
M-ok maa
At twinkle room
L- puttar wake it s time they r going to come get ready fast.
Tw-maa 5 more min
L-(angrily)now u r going ro get up or i will cancel the wedding.
Tw quickly jumps out the bed.
Tw-ok maa.and she runs to the bathroom.
By the time grooms side arrive
L-shas ri kal ji.
Manohar n usha sasri kal ji
L-aap ayiye
They enter the house.and kunjs eyes r looking for someone.mahi comes there
M-i know whom u r looking for.iwill take u to that person if u promise me something
K(eagerly)-ok ok now take me to that person
M-pukka then u wont change ur word na?
K-sure pukka now take me.
M-ok ok wait
And they sneak into twinkle s room
At twinkle s room
Kunj enters the room and mahi is guarding the room outside.
Kunj i s in throom and tw comes out in her bathrobe.she dint know kunj there in the room and was abt to open her bathrobe to change.n suddenly kunj sees and says stop n closes his eyes.tw is shocked.she closes fer bathrobe n turns back to see over there.
T-tum yaha?
K-ha mein and now can i open my eyes.
Tw(thinks)so nice he closed his eyes and told me stop if anybody else was there they would have taken advantage.thank u babaji for bringing in my life.
K-excuse me
Tw comes out of her thoughts.
Tw-(showing her back to kunj)ok now open ur eyes.
Kunj opens eyes.n is mesmerised to see her.
Suddenly leela knocks the door and kunk goes n hides in the wardrobe.rw opens the door
L-puttar u r still not ready go and get ready i will take the dress from the wardrobe.
Tw is shocked n leela moves rowards the wardrobe.the screen stops in leela proceeding towards the wardrobe and twinkle s tensed face
So how the epi pls comment
13 Comments
It was awesome..
Very short
Sorry for keeping it short next episode will be much longer.actually my internet was very thats why i tried my best to make long but it was so irritating.so i left the idea
aww very nice ?????
continue soon
Amazing epi dear loved it
Good one… Ctd soon
Really nyc dear. . But plz try to make it a longer one! !
It was nice but try writing longer episode.
Awesome pls cont and update faster
Cool one ..
Nice
Short one but nice….waiting for the next one…
Hmmm short but amazing ?