Tere Sang Yaara…With you, O beloved Part1
I am frustrated with the present track of the show Beyhadh where Arjun is hating maya and insulting her love,So this SS of mine is to make Arjun understand Maya’s value.This will have only 5 parts.
Thanks to Sydell who made a banner very fast for this SS.
Arjun cupped Saanjh’s face:Dusky..I am sorry.I did a big mistake by ignoring your love for Maya.I got punishment for what I did.Please forgive me.
Saanjh was stunned:Duffer..what are you saying?
Arjun:Maya has become my life a hell.That house is a hell Dusky.Please save me from there.
Saanjh:Duffer…
Arjun:Now I realize that more than Maya I need you.
Saanjh became emotional:Duffer…
Arj:Do you still love me?
Saanjh nodded tearfully:Yes duffer,I will always love you..I can never stop loving you.
Arj:Me too Dusky.
Saanjh was surprised:Hey duffer…are you saying the truth that you too love me?
Arj:Life with Maya taught me your value.Will you accept me Saanjh?
Saanjh:I lost you once.I don’t want to lose you again.I need you my duffer.
She embraced him.
They did’nt know that Maya was watching them.She was heartbroken.She walked towards them and pulled Arjun away from Saanjh.
Maya roared:Arjun…how can you do this to me?How can you give my place to Saanjh?
Arjun:Because I hate you Maya.You are not my wife anymore.
Maya’s heart was bleeding:No Arjun…please don’t say like that.Don’t leave..I beg you.
Maya held his hand.Arjun removed her hand off him forcefully and held her closer to him harshly.
Arj:I told you just leave my life.
She pushed her.
She was about to fall down.Suddenly strong arms held her.She lifted up her face and looked up to that face.He looked at her emotionally.
tere sang yaara
khushrang bahara
She was surprised.
Maya :Saras!
Saras:When I am here I will not let you fall down Maya.
tu raat deewani
main zard sitaara
Maya wept:I have already fallen down when I lost Arjun’s love.
He felt sad for Maya.
Saras looked at Arjun.
Saras:Arjun…how can you do this to Maya?Once you only left Saanjh for Maya.Now when Maya is with you ,you are leaving her for Saanjh?
Arjun:Because I realized late that I chose a wrong person.Maya was my biggest mistake.
Maya cried bitterly.
Saras:How can you talk like this Arjun?And Saanjh…how can you be with Arjun knowing that Arjun is Maya’s husband?
Saanjh:I never tried to come between Arjun and Maya.But now I realized that their relationship no more exists.Arjun does’nt love Maya anymore.He needs me.I have always been with Arjun whenever he needed me.Now since he needs me I am with him.I did’nt do any mistake.
Saras:Their relationship is not over yet Saanjh.Their relationship will get over only if Maya ends their relationship as a relationship is built by both husband and wife.
Arjun:Saras…are you my friend or Maya’s?You are talking as if you know my wife more than me?
Saras:Sometimes a relationship is not a must to understand a person.Though you are Maya’s husband you failed miserably to understand her.
Arjun:I understood her in the right sense.She is a witch who tied me to her life.I am not even allowed to breath.Even in car she kept CCTV.
Saras:I understand that Maya crossed her limit by doing that.But have you ever thought why Maya did it?Behind her you flirted with other girls.So she became suspicious.That’s why she kept CCTV everywhere.Otherwise she would have let you free.She got tensed whether she will lose you.So she controlled you.
Arjun was embarrassed:But it was harmless flirting.Just for fun i did it.It was just a joke.
Saanjh:Saras..you are talking as if Arjun is the biggest flirt in this world.You know him since childhood.He was always like this.
Saras:I never said that Saras is a dirty flirt.I agree that he did’nt have any bad intention.He did it just for fun.But even if it’s for fun which wife will tolerate this?Can I ask you something?Suppose it was Maya who flirted with her office staffs for fun would you have taken it lightly?
Arjun was silent.
Saras:I know..you would’nt have.So Maya is not completely wrong.
Arjun:Maya separated me from my mother and my dearest friend Saanjh.Can you ignore that?
Saras:Maya was wrong.I agree.But what did your people do to Maya?Was Vandana aunty right?Though Maya tried to be a good daughter in law she always insulted her and taunted her because of her horoscope.If the horoscope was not good is it Maya’s fault?Maya suffered a lot.When Vandana aunty crossed the limit only Maya did that mistake.And Saanjh..you should have kept a distance with Arjun after their marriage.But you also forgot that.It forced Maya to separate you from Arjun.
Arjun:Enough.She did all this because she is mad.She hid from me that she has mental illness.
Maya was crying.
Maya:Arjun…I agree.It was my mistake.But that day in front of the temple I had tried to tell you my past.But you stopped me.
Arjun:Whatever excuse you give I can’t tolerate your mental problem anymore.
Maya was in tears.
Saras:Arjun…you promised Maya that in whatever circumstance you will always stand with her.Then what happened now?After knowing about her mental illness you are leaving her?
Arjun:Some times promises have to be broken just to save ourselves.Now I want to save myself from this vamp.
Saras:How can you talk like this Arjun?Maya is in this state as she always lacked love in her life.Instead of curing her with your love you are leaving her?
Arjun said in a sarcastic tone:If you have that much pity for Maya you cure her with your love.
Maya and Saras were stunned.
Saras:How can you be so cheap Arjun?
Arj:Circumstance made me talk like this.This moment I’m breaking all ties with Maya and leaving.
Maya was shocked:No Arjun..no…please don’t do that.I request you.We will forget everything and start a new life.I will forget whatever you share with Saanjh now.I promise..i will never remind you of that.But please don’t leave me.
Saras:Maya who always ordered and scared people are begging before someone for the first time.Because she loves you like crazy.Understand her love Arjun.She did all crazy things only because of her love for you.
Arjun:However you beg Maya..I am leaving.I am going back to my family with Saanjh.
Maya:Arjun..no…
Maya held his hand tight:I will not leave you.
Arjun removed her hand off his and pushed her.She fell on Saras’ chest.She cried watching Arjun going away with Saanjh.Saras caressed her painfully.
O karam khudaya hai
tujhe mujhse milaya hai
tujhpe marke hi to
mujhe jeena aaya hai
Arjun was welcomed by Vandana happily and emotionally.Arjun hugged her:I am sorry Maa.
Vandana:Don’t say sorry Arjun.Forget everything.
I am happy that finally you realized that I was not at fault.I am happy that you realized that Saanjh is the best person for you.
Arjun and Saanjh blushed while Prem Suman Shubh were happy for their daughter/sister Saanjh.
Saras took Maya home.Maya was depressed.
Saras took first aid box and put ointment on Maya’s wounds.
O tere sang yaara…
khushrang bahara
tu raat deewani
main zard sitaara
Saras:Maya..is it hurting you?
Maya:No physical pain hurts me.But losing Arjun hurts me like hell.
Saras felt sad for her.
Saras:Maya..be strong.He does’nt deserve your love.
Maya:But I love only him Saras.I can’t leave Arjun like that.
Her eyes became red.Saras was confused what Maya is going to do next.
Saras:Maya…don’t hurt yourself while trying to win Arjun back.
Maya gave him a pale smile:For Maya getting hurt does’nt matter at all after all it’s for getting my Arjun.
Saras thought:How much does she love Arjun!But what is she getting back from Arjun?
Maya:Saras..
Saras looked at her.
Maya:Thanks a lot.No one else has understood me like you.Thanks for supporting me.
O tere sang yaara
khushrang bahara
Saras smiled.
Maya:Everybody says that I am so complicated that it’s not easy to understand me.But you understood me easily.
main tera ho jaaun
jo tu karde ishara
Saras smiled:Understanding you is not difficult Maya.Looking deeply into your heart anyone can understand you.That’s how I understood you.
kaheen kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
teri khushboo se Takraaun main
Maya:Then why no one understood me?Why not even Arjun understood me?
Saras:Because instead of looking into your heart he looked at your face.
Maya was painfully silent.
Maya:I looked at his heart.Then why I failed to understand him?
Saras:Because your eyes got blind because of your obsessed love for Arjun.So you failed to look at his eyes which had the real feelings for you.
Maya was upset.
Maya smiled painfully:Though you are Arjun’s friend you stood by my side.Only a few people can do this.
har raat jo aata hai mujhe
wo khwaab tu…
Saras cupped her face in his hands:Because I could feel your pain Maya.The pain which was seen in your eyes…even in smile your pain was visible…it touched my heart.
tera mera milna dastoor hai
tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Maya’s eyes shone because of tears.
Saras wiped her tears.
main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
mehtaab tu…(Rustom).
At night…
Maya was haunted by Arjun ditching her.Suddenly her phone rang.She attended the call.
She:I will come now.
Maya went to meet that person.Seeing him she hugged him.
Arya and Jenam fans note that this SS will have 2 endings.In one climax Arya will unite and in the other climax Saras Maya will be the end game.
Please post this on Beyhad and Saraswatichandra pages.
18 Comments
Lovely….. I would love the part in which Maya and Saras are together as no man on the earth is as perfect and caring as Saras . He is the most lotyal and truthful , he will know Maya’s feeling even b4 she can act upon her feelings and thus taking her care at its best .
Adding to that all Saras is not highly ambitious rather he knows how to get all his dreams come true by working hard .
Samaya should be the ending .
Lovely plot .
Keep it up…. Jasminerahul
Thanks a lot 4 supporting Saras Maya pair.It means a lot
I believe that gautam rode nd jennifer make the cutest couple and moreover the characters that saras has are perfect what maya needs….
Maya wants love nd no one can love better than saras….saras doesnt wants maya’s wealth he can create on his own…he is nt flirty so that maya can feel insecure….
I am also a Jenam fan.Happy to see a Jenam fan like you
wow it is really fab i really liked it
that mad arjun must realize his mistake
he will nit get the best wife other than maya..
he is going to fall in helll
i hante that idiot and his gang of mads
ohh sry for maya!!she must realize that arjun is not really loving her
she must escape from this beast…
Thanks 4 d support.Arjun has to realize his mistake
yes he to realize at first must convert into a man from a beast
Great yaaar i mean i loved it plzz write the next part soon i just loved it
U r really best this is the best os i read still now
thank you so much.I am very happy
I will choose saras as ending game, i loved jennifer and gautam chemistry, arjun does not deserve maya, let him regret now atleast.
Thanku so much 4 supporting Saras Maya.Even I loved Jenam’s chemistry
It’s just my thought and I’m posting it.. Plse don’t feel offended…. I neither think Saanjh would accept arjun’s proposal if he were to propose her nor Arjun’s would propose her. Maya is just obsessed with Arjun’s. It’s not her limitless love but her limitless obsession towards him. If she had really loved him, she would have not separated frm him something which was a part of his life. The part that I loved were SaMud scenes. Would love to have them back. But it’s nice…
It’s ok if you feel so.I am not hurt as u have the right to express ur opinion.But Saajun union is only a part of this story.Not real.I’m happy that u loved Jenam scenes
It’s awesome. I love this one. It’s far far better than the serial. Arjun should realize the value of Maya. He should understand her love. Can’t wait to read about Arjun’s love for Maya. Arya is my favorite couple. Please post the next part soon. Waiting eagerly.
thanku very much
My pleasure! When u r gonna post
the next part?
so this is a fs on maya’s POV . i really liked it a lot . even i dont like arjun hating maya in the show . arjun went to his home and left maya alone , really sad but saras became her support , loved saras and maya together , i would like any ending , because i am liking this saras-maya pair a lot too . would love to see saya and sajun together
thanku so much.next part is also updated