Hello frnds..I’m shubhra n here with story ‘Tere sang Yara’Hope u enjoy it….
Scene 1
The screen shows Beautiful garden with beautiful flowers…Green trees everything is parfect & Beautiful..where a beautiful girl is shown who’s Holding red rose in her hand,she’s wearing pink goun with red & Orange flower printed on it..Her hairs r curly at the bottom she’s simply beautiful..looking like fairy..
A guy comes there whose wearing white shirt,white blazer & Jeans his having parfect eyebrows, charming smile,deep brown eyes…
seeing the boy…Girl smiles..
Boy-Swara I love u..
(Yes the beautiful girl is our swara)
Swara-I love u too sanskar…..
They both smiles n have cute eyelock….
Suddenly lots of white smoke appear n now sanskar can’t see swara..He’s trying to find her but she’s nowhere…He’s shouting his name”Swara”…But she didn’t appear him…..
Suddenly sanskar wakes up with big jerk from his bed..n realized its dream…
He’s looking around n saw swaras photo covered with Garland..
He gets furious n shouts” Ramu kaka”
Ramu kaka come
Sanskar(Angrily)-How many times I told u don’t cover swara picture with garland..she’s not dead..Saying this He removes garland…Ramu kaka says Sorry sir n left from there..
Sanskar cares swaras pic n says-‘Where r u jaan? since 10 months u have left me..I am searching u everywhere.. Where r u?
[So frnds swara is sanskar wife n his soul but people says she died in accident 10 months ago..But sanskar says She’s not dead,she comes back to him..he’s waiting for her]
Sanskar(with swaras pic in his hand)-Plzz come soon jaan I’m waiting,Don’t u love me???
scene2
A girl is shown
Girl(with tears in her eyes)-I really love u!!
Boy(Angrily)-Oh shut up Ragini.I just ask u to do simple work..but ur good for nothing.
Ragini-Im really sorry Laksh.
(Yes the girl Ragini &The boy is laksh)
laksh-Now ready for ur punishment.
Ragini(with fear)-No laksh I..
laksh push her on floor N start beating her with his belt.
Ragini is screaming in pain..she’s pleading laksh to stop
but laksh is such a devil he beats her like animal…..
[so frnds ragini n laksh is husband wife,Ragini loves laksh BT laksh is such a devil…Who just uses his wife to satisfied his needs,his bossy nature hurts ragini a lot]
So frnds this is 1st epi of Tere sang yaara..The story revolves around sanskar n his love swara.will sanskar find swara?will raglaks relation improved?For finding answers stay tune.
Precap-Flashback from swasans life,Their 1st meeting,Raglak present scenes
47 Comments
Nice
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Amazing
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Great start. Poor Ragini and Sanskar, they’re both going through such traumatic times. Can’t wait to read more ?
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awesome
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nyc…….wanna beat the hell out of Laksh………poor Sanky…….do update soon……
Thank u l’ll update soon
Nice
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God My Favourite singers best Song title Tere Sang Yaara…I love this Song N love your story too…Plz don’t change the pairs…They should Be SwaSan N RagLak only…Waiting for further Episodes…
thank u..that’s my fev song too..n pairs r swasan,raglak only
raglak concept is new next part soon
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Oh god devil laksh hate u hate u!!!how could u ???how u dared to beat my ragsss!! Ahh!!my pooor rags feelng so sad for her… 🙁 hope laksh sooon change!!feelng pity for sanky…hope swara is alive n sanky finds her soon…superb story dr..amazng amazng amamzggg …very awesome ff..keep rockng n stay blessed dr 😉 😉 ;)…
Thank u Fairy
Interesting
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Interesting
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Swasan pls
thanks & Its swasan
thanks & Its swasan & Raglak
interesting
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Nice
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awesome pls change lucky soon sad for ragoo and sanky
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Fab love the concept can’t wait for more so update soon xx
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Awesome start dear..laksh is such a beast….arghhh..hate him
Thank u!!!
Than u
superbbb dear…feeling bad for ragini…tkcr dear…
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Awesome dear but please don’t make Ragsan
Thank u. I won’t make it ragsan
pairs r swasan & Raglak only
Awsm dr….
Thank u SN Y
Intrstng shubhra…
Exctd for swasan story ??…
Shubhra plz try to chnge cover pic of ur ff from nxt episode coz it luk lyks its raginiz story… i was also going to avoid it bt thought to give it a try n found its swasan story si dats y
thank u Arshaanya..But dear I havnt give tu any pic,They uploaded it…stay tuned
fantastic dear.waiting to read.
Super interesting