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Chapter-35
Jealous
A week had passed just like that it is Saturday morning. Omkara hadn’t got any chance to talk with Shivaay about liking Ishanya. He hadn’t met Ishanya this whole week but talked to her in messages and trying to understand his own feelings about her as he is having difficulty in accepting that he likes her. Shivaay and Rudra met her in office and pub respectively.
Shivaay had met her twice in office. Once she saw him having fight with tia and he talked his heart out about his relationship with tia to Ishanya. She did give him a couple of tips to mend his relation with tia, so far they hadn’t fight in this week. Last night Rudra and Ishanya met in pub and in talks they planned a night out in Oberoi’s farm house. Rudra decided to tell his brothers this morning and convince Shivaay for this.
Rudra entered the kitchen only to find it empty. “Looks like I came early in excitement.” He said to himself smiling at his excitement.
“What are you excited about?” Omkara asked entering the kitchen followed by Shivaay.
“O! Bhaiyya!” he exclaimed and went to hug him. The trio hugged.
“What’s the matter?” Shivaay asked.
“Bhaiyya, I am going to ask you something and you should agree, please, please.” He said.
“Is it about that new sports car? You’ve already ordered it, aren’t you?” Omkara asked Shivaay.
“O, this is not about it, this is something else.” Rudra replied.
“And we are asking you again and again, what is it?” Omkara said.
“Are you going to tell it or you need one more O’bros’ moment to tell?” Shivaay asked him.
“I am planning a small party in our farm house tonight, you two have to attend and we’ll stay there for the night and will return tomorrow.” He said explaining his plan to them.
“I am not coming. I have a lot of work to do.” Shivaay said.
“Bhaiyya, please.” Rudra whined.
“Even I don’t want to attend any party.” Omkara said.
“Then we have to cancel our plan!” Rudra said.
“We?” Omkara asked.
“Yeah, me and Ishanya.” Rudra replied.
“You’ve invited Ishanya?” Omkara asked.
“Invite? It’s us who planned for it.” He replied.
“You should have said that earlier. Ok, I’ll come.” Shivaay said surprising OmRu.
‘Just now he said he has so much work but agreed after hearing Ishanya will be there. What is this?’ Omkara thought to himself.
“Now, you too have to agree o.” he said to Omkara.
“Yeah, now I have to agree too.” He said looking at Shivaay with frown.
“Any way who else are invited?” Shivaay asked.
“Just us, Ishanaya, Nandita and vikram.” Rudra said.
“Who is vikram?” Omkara asked.
“Nandita’s boyfriend.” ShivRu said in unison.
“And Nandita is the same girl who came with you to Ishanya’s house, right?” Omkara said remembering her. Rudra just nodded and said, “ha.”
“I am thinking to invite somu and Annika didi too prinku would have company.” He said to them.
“Ok, but will prinku agree?” Omkara asked.
“She already did O, Ishanya specially called her and invited her.” Rudra said.
“When?” Shivaay asked. “Last night.” Rudra replied.
“Last night she talked with me too, but hadn’t mentioned anything, why?” Shivaay asked.
“The plan was made after talking to you only. Infact it’s her idea to make you take a break from work.” Rudra replied.
“Ooh!!”Shivaay exclaimed making Omkara think again about his equation with Ishanya. Omkara doesn’t know why but he doesn’t like to listen to their talks which are indicating how close Ishanya is to Shivaay. But he hadn’t said anything and continued to work and thought, ‘what is happening to me? Why am I feeling restless hearing that Ishanya talked with Shivaay last night? What is happening to me?’
Suddenly Shivaay phone rang, the call is from Ishanya. He received the call and said, “Hi Ishanya, good morning.” While walking aside from the cooking area.
Hearing Ishanya’s name Omkara stared at Shivaay all the while when he was talking. He observed how Shivaay laughed, blushed and always smiling while talking. He noticed that Shivaay called someone else after talking to Ishanya and said something briefly finishing the call.
“I’ve invited tia too, we have to pick her too.” Shivaay said to OmRu.
“What? Why have you invited lady baba? Tell her that plan cancelled.” Rudra whined.
“Ishanya ordered to invite her.” He said and Rudra sighed accepting it. Omkara looked at this with shock as the SSO is fulfilling someone’s orders. If it is someone else’s he would have teased him. But as it is Ishanya he couldn’t take this lightly or as a joke. He does not like this at all.
“What do you mean her too? Who else we have to pick?” Omkara asked.
“Ishanya, who else!!” Shivaay replied and Omkara looked at him frowning.
“O!! It’s burning!!!” Rudra yelled seeing the gloves burning and smoke was coming out of it. The trio distinguished the fire before it got huge but in this process Omkara’s hand burnt a bit.
Shivaay and Rudra panicked seeing it and did his first-aid. Shivaay ordered him to stay in his room and rest for sometime saying that they will make the break-fast not listening to any of his words even when he was saying that he is fine.
Omkara entered his room wandering that why his heart burning when it is his hand which got hurt. He was only thinking about Ishanya and Shivaay’s closeness. Unknown to himself, he is being jealous from his brother for Ishanya. But he couldn’t realize this and feeling restless whole time.
They all reached the farm house in the evening it was two hours journey throughout the journey Omkara has been observing Shivaay and Ishanya’s closeness. They thought to get fresh and then get ready for the party.
After getting fresh Ishanya came down stairs and saw that all girls except tia are sitting in the garden. She too went to them and sat on the bench beside Annika and Nandita, while Soumya and prinku are swaying in the swing.
“Where is tia?” Ishanya asked.
“She is with billuji.” Annika replied in her attitude.
“Who is billu?” Ishanya asked.
“You don’t know?” she asked in disbelief and when Ishanya nodded in no she said, “it is Mr. SSO. Dadiji calls him billu, so I too got used to call him billu. But you don’t call him that or tell him that I told you. Ok?”
“Ohk.” Ishanya agreed and asked, “Are you scared of him?”
“Scared, me, from billuji? Are, my chemeli too won’t be scared from him, why would I?” she replied.
“Now, who is chemeli?” Nandita asked.
“She is Annika’s sandal” prinku replied and Ishanya burst out laughing and the girls too joined her. Unknown to them Omkara stood at the entrance staring at Ishanya.
“You name your sandal?” Ishanya asked while laughing.
“Ha, she has a name for her bag too.” Soumya replied with a smile.
Shivaay came towards them with upset looking tia. Omkara too came towards them seeing Shivaay.
“So, girls. What’s you doing?” asked Shivaay.
“Just talking.” Soumya replied.
“I hope you are not bothering my friend.” Shivaay asked Annika.
“Now doesn’t start fight Mr. SSO. I don’t want to spoil my mood.” She replied Ishanya observed them fighting.
“Even I don’t want to” Shivaay said and asked, “would you like to see the top view of farm house, Ishanya?”
“Yeah, sure.” She said and they both went from there not noticing Omkara.
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18 Comments
AWESOME FANTASTIC INTERSTING PERFECT SUPERB??????
Dear Veera
ShiOmRu Talk Om Jealousy Mode??Ishanya Nanditha AniSouPri Talk ShivIka Nhok Jok??(Thank You For Add Anika Soumya Prinku In This Part)Again Om Jealousy Mode??It’s Awesome Part??????
Take Care And Stay Safe?
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Amazing episode
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As expected plot came in your story.Just awesome and Fabulously written Omkara’s jealousy that too of Shivaay.Omkara was observing Shivaay with Ishnya and with others so different shivaay with Ishanya.Lol…Anika and Ishanya i want girls bonding.
Thanks for the long comment. I am glad that you liked the part. The girls will bond in the further chapters.
Amazinggggggg update???????loved the jealous Om???update soon ?
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Amazing epi !
Dunno wht i should say for today’s epi. I can’t see om being jealous of shivay and feeling insecure of him ?. Bechara om couldn’t even meet her the whole week but at least he was able to chat with her. Uff… the jealousy spark which was there in om’s heart is slowly growin into a fire seeing him bond with ishanya. Omkara observing shivay’s face which lights up when he talks to ishanya… and when rudra said O jal gaya, perfect timing caz om was actually burning at tht moment ?… his hand also slightly burnt in the process par dard dil main ho raha tha.
Never knew shivay would be sooo free with ishanya… he is such a different person arnd her and he even shared his prblms with tia to her. And he is followin the advice ishanya gave to him. So all youngsters in the farmhouse… a nice place to get away frm all the tensions of work and collg and enjoy life and the nature and everyone’s company. Anika and ishanya’s banter ?…. ishanya got to see shivika’s cute small fight and she got to knw anika’s weird habit of naming her stuff. Om’s face at the end would be so sad.
Take care dear and love u ❤❤❤❤❤
Thanks for the long comment. I am glad that you appreciated the chapter even though you hadn’t liked om being jealous of shivaay. Don’t worry, nothing bad will happen between O’bros’. Yeah all the youngsters in the farmhouse you have to wait to know if they bond or some drama happens. You’ll get to know why shivaay is close to ishanya in the next chapters and girls bonding too. I will take care. you too take care. Love you too.
Awesome
Thank you
Amazing one di . Loved it completely . Do update soon.Waiting for next part.
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It is lovely dear.. Poor omkara..
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Fabulous update… Omkara’s jealosy mode on n that too of shivay… Wow party wo bhi farmhouse Pe.. Ishani’s first meeting…
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