Zindagi ne li hai teri saason mein panah
Teri ishq ne di hai jeene ki wajah
Manjoor hai teri di hui har sajah
Teri sukoon ke liye ho jaaun mein fanaah
Prologue
Arse ho gaye teri murti banate banate
Arse ho gaye tujhse kuch maange hue
Aaj maang rahu mein apne liye
Uski saason ko lautane dey use zindagi dey
Looking at the statue of ganeshji, omkara said the above words. It’s true that he stopped asking anything from god long back and just started making his statues instead.
But today he is asking the god to grant a wish that too for his own happiness. Yes, SHE is his happiness, his life.
He couldn’t understand the meaning of her being in his life all these days
Today when he realized her importance, She is being snatched away by the same god who hasn’t listened to his pleas before.
And today he is asking the god with some hope that he may fulfill his wish. As he was the one who sent her in his life. His ray of light in the darkness he developed from all these years.
He was insecure, and upset from past few days because of the growing friendship between her and his brother. He was angry, disappointed he don’t know why!!
But he does know now and he doesn’t have any jealousy or insecurity now. All he want is her life back, even if she doesn’t be in his life.
Closing his eyes, he remembered the most beautiful moment of his life. The moment when he realized that he love her.
Her tingling bangles, her flowing hair, her radiant smile, her mysterious eyes everything of her until all that had been snatched by that incident.
Taking a deep breath he opened his eyes. Prepared to see the most dreadful sight of his life. Her being electurated. Seeing her lay lifeless a tear slid from his eye. He watched painfully, as the doctors are trying to make her heart beat.
And finally his prayer had been heard. She started to breath, her heart is beating. She is back to life.
He took a step back with a small smile still tears in his eyes. He had seen the same looks in his brothers’ face too. The O’bros’ exchanged relived looks and saw her getting back to life.
15 Comments
Awesome start…. All the best
Thank you
Awesome, very intersting. Post da 1st part soon. Nd can u plz give da CS?
Thank you. Will post it soon.
Fantastic start Veera.
Lo kar lo baat aap bhi IshKara fan ho.
Kal night me kuch chat nahi ki aap se.
Can’t wait for the next.
Hi fenil. Yes, i am also omkara’s fan. 🙂
A very interesting start….waiting for the first part…all the best
Thank you. will post it soon.
AWESOME EXCITED INTERSTING SUPERB ??????
Dear Veera
Your Writing Skills Is Intersting ???I Really Enjoy The Prologue Part?Omkara’s Life Beautiful Moment Beautifuly Write It ??? Overall It’s A Very Intersting Prologue ?????
Keep It Up?
Take Care And Stay Safe?
The Shayari Is Very Heart Touching???????
Thank you so much. 🙂
Is dis Ishkara FF?? I’m confused bcz I saw madirakshi’s pic
No, this is not Ishkara ff. This is a story of Omkara with the character I created “Ishanya”
Great Start…. loved it… waiting for the next update… plz post soon…
Thank you. Well, i already posted 1st chapter, but it is taking time to publish.