Laksh ansh were laughing cracking jokes together
Laksh laughing – hold on buddy I can’t laugh more …… ok now tell me where we should go now
Ansh squealing happily , ice cream
Laksh – ok toh chalo
They reached ice cream parlor in mall it was quite crowded and only few chairs are vacant they both started searching for spare place when there eyes caught two person there jaw dropped seeing them sitting there enjoying there ice cream
Laknsh ( laksh + ansh )in unison – what the hell
Both angrily walked towards them
Laksh angrily – what the hell is happening here ragini
Ragini turned her head to dev and started talking to as if not giving a damn to reply laksh while dev looked at both of them helplessly
Ansh sweetly – massi
Ragini angrily snapped at him ansh gulped seeing her and smiled sheepishly
Ansh – sorry
Ragini – for what ?
Ansh – ary you should be happy you are the first one after mama whom I am saying sorry
Now it’s time for ragini to get shock she looked at him with wide eyes while laksh dev suppressed there smile
Dev – come you both also join us
Ragini glared him
Dev puppy face – look na massi they are sorry
Ragini turned her face to Laknsh who immediately held there ears
Ragini making faces – ok
Ansh while sitting – waise why is your mood off
All frowned listening him he turned his face to dev who was looking down raglak also noticed dev they also questioned him
Dev sadly – miss mama
Ansh – bass itni si baat
He smiled naughtily
Raglak dev quickly – no not again please ( trio joined there hands )
Ansh showed them his tongue and took laksh phone he dialed Swara number
On third ring only she picked up his call
Swara – hello
Ansh crying (or you can say fake crying ?) – mama
Swara worried – what happened dear why are you crying
Ansh – mama I am lost please come na I was with lucky but I don’t know where he went leaving me alone (he winked at lucky while laksh looked at him with shock ?)
Swara – don’t cry just tell me where you are I am coming
Ansh sobbing – mama I am in ice cream shop in mall
Swara – I am coming you don’t cry
She cuts the call and instantly rush from hospital
Ansh kept the phone and looked at trio only to find them starting at him with ‘ O ‘ face ?
Ansh – what
Ragini in disbelief – from where you get this acting skill
Ansh leaned back on chair crossing his legs said proudly – you know born actor ( dramatically ) par tum Kya jano…..ye aaj kal ki ladkiya bhi na ( he shakes his head )
Ragini eyes popped out listening him
Dev laughed slowly keeping his hands in mouth but laksh can’t control so he burst out laughing
Laksh – hhhaaaaa……. dude you were too good
Ragini who was sitting in front of him stamps her heels in his foot under table
Laksh screamed in pain
Dev – what happened chachu
Ragini innocently – yes tell na what happened
Laksh looked at her ? still holding his leg crying in pain and she pretended as if she don’t know anything
Laksh fake smile – nothing
After 20 min Swara reached there she started searching ansh when her eyes caught him sitting busy playing on phone with out wasting a sec she reached him and engulfed him in her embrace without noticing others
Swara kissing his fore head – are you ok dear
Ansh nodded sweetly
Swara angrily – where is this lucky let him come I will not let him enter in house
Laksh coughed listening her while trio (ragini + devansh ) giggles
Swara confusingly looked at ragdev and then turned her face to laksh
Ragini punched her making her to scream loudly
Swara – what was that for
Ragini smiling wide – to get you out of dreamland
Swara gave question look to everyone but then something strikes her mind she looked at ansh angrily
Swara – you little devil
Ansh looked at her in horror and quickly his himself under table
Swara angrily – come out ansh
Ansh shouting ? – no never I still want to live till now I didn’t proposed my girlfriend also
Everyone mouth hung down listening him ?
Dev innocently – what is girlfriend ( poor child ? stuck between devils)
Laksh – you will get to know when you will become big
Swaragini hits him simultaneously on his shoulders
Swara – shut up laksh
Poor laksh sat there holding his shoulders with a pout ?
They all enjoyed there day shopping playing chitchatting laughing
Now it’s evening time to leave
Laksh – swara please you take kids with you me and ragini will come home late
Swara smiled and compiled – ok
Raglak left from there
Swara Dev ansh also left to hospital
Hospital
Swara cabin
She was sitting and reading some files Dev ansh were playing in garden with some staff members
There was a knock
Swara gazing at file – yes come in
Person came in and was starting her continuously
Swara unaware of his gaze asked him to take a seat in front
Person lovingly – jaan
Swara jerked up from her place and looked at person in shock
Swara in hurt voice – sanskar ( hehe…..you all might have guessed ?)
Sanskar smiled and was about to move close to her when swara stopped him showing her hand
Tears were rolling from her eyes
Sanskar panicking – swara please don’t cry let me explain
Swara in heavy voice – explain what sanskar
He was about to say something when the door jerked open and ansh came in running followed by dev …… Ansh Hugged Swara tightly
Ansh – mama see bhai is teasing me
Swara looked at them and quickly wiped her tears but it was too late both noticed her
Dev frowning – what happened mama
Swara nodded in no
Both moved there gaze from swara and noticed a unknown man standing there ( according to them )
Ansh stood in front of swara like protecting her and angrily said – how dare you make my mama cry
Sanskar was just witnessing the scene in front of him looking Swara with painful eyes …… Yes he was hurt very much ……. How can Swara hide such a big thing from him ……. He knew he did a mistake in past but he had the right being there father to know about them
Dev snapped him from his thoughts – who are you uncle?
He felt like someone stabbed him listening ‘ uncle ‘ from his own son and seeing her eyes in there eyes fir him and above that he is asking ‘ who am I ‘ what should he answer …..no he had nothing to say but instead to feel immense pain in his heart
Swara composing herself said – dev ansh you both go and wait in car I am coming
Both said together – but ….
Swara sternly – go…..I am coming
Both started to move but before going ansh turned and looked once again at sanskar
Ansh – don’t make her cry again…..saying this he held dev hand and left from there
Sanskar – swara they are our….
Swara intruppted in between – my …. My children
Sanskar stood there gazing her ….. His eyes turned red due to controlling his tears
Swara quickly turned and collected her things and hurriedly left from there
Sanskar – swara wait listen to me once …… But she was already gone
He stood there staring closed door
He got a call at that time
Sanskar – yes
Os – we are leaving for there dude
Sanskar – don’t it seems she is hurt very badly first I will convince her
He disconnects the call without waiting for other person to answer
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Guys the story will go the way it is planned it will not change by your continuous bashing and all ….. I am being very clear to the bashers who are sending personal messages that it won’t affect me nor the story …. You’re just wasting your time doing this ….. And I am not avi to near all your rubbish and don’t reply you ……
A big SORRY to all who felt bad by my words but I was quite frustrated reading the messages I got quite frequently these days to stop this ff so just … I hope you all will understand
27 Comments
Awsm…waiying for the nxt !! <3
Awsm….update soon
Awesome dear
Nyc one 🙂
You are really harsh and biased towards raglak and raglak fans before leap you give importance to both couple story but after leap your focus is shift only to one couple i don’t know weather i continue then only in the hope to get equal raglak track
you said you are not avi and you cannot be like her because i am enjoying the way she write the story and give importance to both couple before leap
Amazing post soon
Pls continue year……
It’s very interesting
so leaving ur ff bcoz we can’t see partiality towards the raglak so plzz changed it write swasan ff
Awesome dear
hmmmm he deserves punishment
awesome..continue soon..tc..
Awesome dear..
Omg dev is so innocent ??
Loved it…
Jus ignore bashers n write for dem who loves ur story
nice xx
Look my daring …… And if you don’t have to show ragini track why do you write this utter waste …. You know take my humble request stop posting this ff even you don’t get much comments so what’s the need to post …… Idiot swara fans
oh please, just go and read ur ragini ff’s, ur comment clearly shows who is an idiot.
Yes dear totally agree from you sumika she should stop this ff or change it name I also started reading thinking she will give equal imp to ragini but I hardly see her any scenes my time gets wasted reading it
Awesome…
Awesome dear waiting for next part update soon
Seriously sumika you are right she should stop this ff …… Disgusting ….. Our ragini is best and we don’t want this Kriya to prove it let her be with her dreamland of fake swara
Gosh, these bashers, pity on you, a writer has full liberty to choose who he/she wants to write on.
Mind blowing
superbbb missed raglak scenes
nice
Awesome..update next part soon
Awesome dear
nice…swasan met finally