Hi this is VHM signing in with a new FF ….The concept is given by our friend FFFAN1234 aka Dipti….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….I hope you will continue to shower your support as you have always shown for my earlier write ups …….
Please note I May not be regular in posting the episodes due to personal commitments…however I promise I will not keep you waiting for a long time too……..
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TAM : Thinking At that Moment / Thought At that Moment
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Anika returned to guest house teary eyed…Dadi called her while she entered but she was in her own thoughts and left from there without hearing Dadi…
Dadi frowned her eyebrows and spoke her thoughts loud
Dadi ‘’what happened to her? She never leave without replying me? Did billu and she fight again? God when will they get some sense’’
While Dadi was murmering OmRu came to her
Om ‘’what happened Dadi? Why are you talking to yourself? ‘’
Rudra ‘’O…not why are you talking to yourself..you must ask what are you talking to yourself’’
Om stared at Rudra as if nothing could happen of him
Dadi ‘’Anika was crying when she came back and she didn’t answer me when I called her too…something is wrong….’’
Om ‘’don’t worry dadi…we will talk to her ‘’
Dadi ‘’let me know what’s bothering her…she is a pure soul and she underwent much…now I don’t want her to face any more trouble…specially not because of anyone of us including Billu’’
Rudra ‘’yes Dadi…don’t worry..your most sensible Rudy is here ‘’
Dadi ‘’haaye mein marjawa…you have grown up Ru’’
Rudra ‘’Dadi…I have grown up long back…it’s just you didn’t observe’’
Dadi ‘’ok now you both go…I will also take rest’’
——–ANIKA’S ROOM
Om knocked Anika’s room…Anika wiped her tears
Om ‘’may I come in Bhabhi?’’
Anika ‘’why are you asking Om …you can come anytime ‘’ she said without looking at him , bending her head with a very low sad voice
Om ‘’bhabhi..what happened?’’
Anika ‘’what happened? Nothing happened…’’ she still didn’t face him
Om ‘’something happened Bhabhi…else you wouldn’t answer me without facing me…please Bhabhi tell me what happened?’’
Anika broke into tears….
Om ‘’bhabhi…why are you crying? Bhabhi please …you know we cannot see you like this… did anyone say anything? Did choti maa say..’’
Anika ‘’no..Om…pinky aunty has no fault in this’’ she responded before Om could complete his sentence…
Om ‘’then who has hurt you?’’
Anika ‘’Om …I said na none..leave it …’’
Om ‘’wait a minute…Shivaay…did Shivaay say something again?’’
Anika remained silent and turned her face…
Om ‘’I am sure it’s shivaay who has hurt you…yes…you went behind Shivaay and you came back crying …it’s obvious that he has hurt you…am I right’’
Anika remained mum…
Om held Anika’s hand and turned her face towards him …
Om ‘’bhabhi…you said we are best friends…we are family …and now when I am asking you what’s the matter you are sitting quiet…if we can share our problems with you …then don’t you
think you should share your problems with us…shouldn’t the relation be maintained from both ends? Don’t you consider me as your family anymore?’’
Anika ‘’no Om …it’s not like that..i just …I just ‘’
Om ‘’Then what Bhabhi…if you believe in our relation then speak out’’
Anika ‘’yes Om…I am hurt because of Shivaay…he said that he believes , I have moved on in the three months I stayed away from him…he thinks that I really wanted to marry and get rid of
him…how can he think of me like that…doesn’t he know whatever I did was to safeguard him? doesn’t he know I can never imagine anyone except him in my life? How could he say those
words to me? After knowing the truth of our separation, he said all these to me..how can he speak like that..’’
Om ‘’what? He said this? I can’t believe he said all that’’
Anika ‘’I had beared enough Om…I don’t have any more courage or patience left in me to bear anything else…specially when it is related to Shivaay….tomorrow we will be leaving for
Mumbai right…I have decided to go far away from him and live my life somewhere , where he will not be able to find me…and this time I will do this…I will have to do this ’’
she cried hiding her face in her palm……
Om ‘’Bhabhi…bhabhi…please relax…I will talk to Shivaay…I will talk to him and make him understand…please don’t cry bhabhi’’
Anika wiped her tears and spoke ‘’No Om …you will not do anything of that sort…this time Shivaay has to apologise for his words …and that too on his own…you will not make him
understand anything…did you get it you will not make him understand anything’’
Om ‘’fine Bhabhi…I will not make him understand anything…but promise me that you will not leave us and go anywhere…promise me bhabhi…please’’
Anika ‘’why are you making it difficult for me Om…what’s left here to stay back?’’
Om ‘’Bhabhi..Shivaay is not in a position to know and understand the importance of you in his life or may be he is doing all this deliberately…it can be anything’’
Anika ‘’deliberately? What do you mean?’’
Om ‘’I don’t know…but you can understand in what state of mind he is …his mom has plotted against him …he might have broken all relation with choti maa …but what he is speaking, what
he is doing is not in his hands now..may be in all this he might have said those words to you deliberately to vent out his anger…remember Bhabhi we vent out our anger only on those whom
we love the most…
Bhabhi… I am not taking Shivaay’s side …he is wrong…he is absolutely wrong in saying all those words to you…but your decision to leave him and go away is also equally wrong…going
away is not the solution …staying back and retorting against is the solution… ‘’
Anika looked at Om in surprise…….
Om ‘’Bhabhi…if he said those words to you…show him anger…show him you are annoyed…make him realise that you also have the right to get angry …make him realise that you also get
hurt …and finally make him understand that you are the only one in this entire world and in his entire life who can bear his tadi, his anger, his annoyance, his ego, his every emotion including
his LOVE….’’
Anika ‘’love…he doesn’t love me Om…’’
Om ‘’this is the problem with both of you Bhabhi…you show everything to each other except Love…don’t you love Shivaay? You need not tell me…but atleast answer to yourself…and if your answer is yes…then stay back…make him realise his feelings for you…because I am sure and I very well know he loves you…because I have seen his state in your absence…’’
Anika was in thoughts…..Om stayed silent for a while and when Anika didn’t speak anything…he turned to leave…
Anika ‘’Om…’’
Om turned back and saw her…
Anika ‘’thank you..’’ she smiled with tears…
Om smiled and came to her and wiped her tears…
Om ‘’bhabhi…I cannot see you in tears…you are my best friend…my partner…they say Bhabhi is a second mother …and I believe this line when I talk to you or see you….promise me Bhabhi you will stay back with us and never decide to leave’’
He said extending his hand…
Anika kept her hand on Om’s hand and spoke ‘’I promise Om …I will not leave you all till my last breath and this time I will not leave even if your tadibaaz bhagad billa brother ..shri shri shri 1008 Shivaay Singh Oberoi says, I will not leave…pinky promise’’
Om ‘’thank you Bhabhi…I promise I will always support you in making Shivaay realise …don’t think you are alone..i and Rudra will always support you’’
Anika hugged Om smiling happily with tears rolling out……Rudra entered then…
Rudra ‘’what’s happening? A hug without Rudy is not called a hug…don’t you know?’’
Anika smiled and said ‘’come…’’ extending her hand
Rudy joined the hug and they three shared a group hug…….
Rudy ‘’All okay…I mean everything fine with Bhabhi now?’’
Om ‘’yeah…everything fine’’
Rudy ‘’bhabhi…I knew O can handle so I didn’t come…but when he was not coming after so much time, I thought may be my expertise is needed’’
Om ‘’correct’’
Anika ‘’Om…don’t tease my devar…he is my partner in crime…’’
Rudy ‘’O …remember …bhabhi is always on my side …so be careful haan’’
Om ‘’Acchaaa….wait I will show you’’
Om ran behind Rudra to catch him and Rudra was not getting caught…they ran in the whole room…. and Anika was laughing seeing both of them….finally they got tired and Rudy hugged
Anika
Rudy ‘’bhabhi save me from this lambe baal wala prani…’’
Anika ‘’accha accha stop both of you…you should take rest now…it’s very late…and tomorrow we are going back to OM ‘’
Rudy ‘’ohh yaa…I am missing my room so much….my gym…my protein shake..my…’’
Om ‘’Shut up Rudra…come we will go to sleep’’
OmRu ‘’gud night bhabhi’’
Anika ‘’gud night’’
Anika smiled and OmRu left………on the way to their room , Rudra questioned Om what was the matter with Anika …Om explained what all happened…
Rudra ‘’O …you did good…I think in this matter we must support Anika Bhabhi…this time Shivaay bhayya is wrong’’
Om ‘’exactly…but whatever has to be done is to be done by Anika Bhabhi…we will just support her in her decision’’
Rudra ‘’correct…hope everything gets fine between them…do you think we must talk to Shivaay bhayya’’
Om ‘’yes…we will just talk but not make him realise…bhabhi has strictly warned me not to do so’’
Rudra ‘’okay’’
Om ‘’by the way you were to come with me to Bhabhi..where did you disappear?’’
Rudra ‘’Ohh…Mom called me for some work …so I went to her’’
Om ‘’ oh okay’’
Their talks continued and they left to their rooms to sleep……….
————-Shivaay’s room
Shivaay was smiling , sitting in his room ….
——-SMALL FLASHBACK STARTS
While Dadi was talking to OmRu, Shivaay entered just then but stopped himself before going infront of them….After Dadi said OmRu to talk to Anika and left from there Om walked towards Anika’s room…Jhanvi called Rudra then so he left towards Rudra’s room……Shivaay who saw them going to respective rooms followed Om …..when Om entered Anika’s room …Shivaay was curious to know what will Om speak to Anika …he stood behind the door and listened to their conversation…after sometime he saw Rudra walking towards Anika’s room …so he hid himself behind the opposite wall …when Rudra also entered Anika’s room he again listened to them…..while OmRu were saying good night , Shivaay walked to his room without being noticed……..
———–FLASHBACK ENDS
Shivaay TAM ‘’Thank you so much Om…you made my life easy…you did good speaking like that with Anika…I too wanted Anika to be rude and stubborn with me….i don’t want Anika to melt easily for me…I should try hard to gain her trust, affection and love back …so that I can value her worth in my future…so that she can believe that I will be the best husband for her’’
He slept while thinking about their future with a smile on his lips……
——-THE NEXT MORNING
Oberois finally started to Mumbai and reached OM……..they felt glad to be back home specially getting rid of their strongest enemy Swethlana/Reyhanna Malhotra….
Tia also left to her house promising them to meet often…she still had a word in her heart ‘’how can Pinky say that it was a lie’’ but she thought of not saying this to anyone as she knew happiness has just returned in everyone’s lives……..
Shivaay didn’t wish to go for office as he had his work to start with…..
Shivaay ‘’Anika…I am going to get the divorce papers ready…make sure when they reach you, you sign them…this time I will register it for sure’’
Anika ‘’why should I sign…I will think whether to sign them or not…get it’’
Shivaay ‘’what the wuck…don’t forget you are talking to Shivaay Singh Oberoi and you know very well he doesn’t listen to No’’
Anika ‘’I know I am talking to Shivaay Singh Oberoi and if you don’t like to listen to NO, then make a habit of listening to it very often …not often infact regularly…’’
Anika left from there Shivaay smiled…….
Gauri saw Shivaay smiling and came to him ….
Gauri ‘’bhayya…what are you doing? There is something cooking in your brain…what’s it?’’
Shivaay ‘’Ssshhhhh….’’ He dragged her and took her to his room and closed the door
Shivaay ‘’I want to correct my mistake Gauri… ..’’ he explained everything of what he did the previous night and what he wanted to do……
Gauri ‘’bhayya…you are such an amazing person…as Anika bahujaii is best for you, you are best for Anika bahujaii…if you need my help please don’t think just order me’’
Shivaay ‘’pinky promise’’
Gauri hugged Shivaay and left from there smiling……
Shivaay ‘’what should I do to gain her attention….come on Shivaay think…what should you do’’
‘’Ideaaaaaaaa’’ he screamed and dialled a number and spoke to him…..
———OM LIVING ROOM
Shivaay ‘’are the papers ready?’’
Lawyer ‘’yes sir…but’’
Dadi ‘’billu what are these papers for?’’
Shivaay ‘’divorce papers dadi…’’
Dadi ‘’billu …have you lost your brain or did you leave it in Nainital and came back…do you know what you are doing?’’
Shivaay ‘’Dadi…please…I don’t want to hear anything more…I already spoke to Anika about this’’
He turned towards lawyer and spoke
Shivaay ‘’you were saying BUT …continue’’
Lawyer ‘’Sir…to get the divorce done..you must stay together for atleast 6 months …and when I checked about the same …you are short of 6 months…and’’
Shivaay ‘’and what?’’
Lawyer ‘’new rule states that if husband wants divorce and wife is not willing to give then husband should convince wife by any means to make wife give divorce’’
(PLEASE NOTE: THIS RULE IS JUST FOR FUN QUOTIENT….THIS RULE IS WRITTEN/BROUGHT IN BY ME FOR THIS FF TO BRING IN THE FUN ELEMENT…NO OFFENSE TO ANY LAW REGARDING THE SAME)
Shivaay ‘’what do you mean ?’’
Lawyer ‘’Sorry sir…but this is latest rule and you too have recently fought a case so I think you will also know about it’’
Shivaay smiled winking at the lawyer…Gauri too smiled …Anika took a deep breath and came towards the lawyer
Anika was laughing while everyone else smiled …Shivaay controlled his smile….
Anika ‘’I like this new rule…I like it very much…’’
She moved towards Shivaay and came infront of him
Anika ‘’So basically you should become that…what do we say’’
Rudra ‘’jor ka jhukaam’’
Om ‘’Duffer…it’s not jor ka jhukam…it’s joru ka gulaam’’
Rudra ‘’I also meant the same’’
Anika ‘’haan wahi….so Tadibaaz bhagad billa Shivaay Singh Oberoi do you want divorce?’’
Shivaay ‘’off course I want..’’
Anika ‘’good…then do whatever I say..’’
She turned towards lawyer and spoke
Anika ‘’how many days should he become joru ka gulaam..lawyer ji’’
Lawyer supressing his smile ‘’2 months madam..’’
Anika ‘’you gave such a khidkitodh news…I will make sure your salary is increased’’
Lawyer ‘’thank you madam’’
Shivaay ‘’ok …enough enough…now you can leave’’ he said to the lawyer ..Lawyer smiled looking at Shivaay and Shivaay nodded his head……
PRECAP : What will Shivaay do and what will Anika make him do ?
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ALL CREDITS TO FFFAN1234 aka DIPTI for the concept !!!
So this was the eleventh part…please let me know how you felt after reading this by posting your opinion in the comment section…I will reply as soon as possible…….
60 Comments
awesome
Hey Charitha…thank you so much …thanks a lot
Its amazing…. now Both Tadibaaz Anika nd Bagadbilla are back….now they will become perfect Takkar ki Jodi…
Now the fun nd excitement will be there….
Happy Dusshehra di…
Love nd best wishes…
Hey Tanz…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yeah they will be back to show tadi to each other …but i am trying to make it different…hope i succeed….loads of love to you…keep smiling and take care …next episode very soon it will be in portal…..
Aha…rule adirindi.i liked it very much dii…haha.
Happy dussehra to u and ur family dii.
Hey Chotii…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….ha ha ha ha new rule…i am glad you liked the new rule…never expected that you guys will accept Shivaay to bend infront of Anika….thanks a lot once again…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Oooooo wow…what a khidkitod turning….i love it…aab aayega maja..waiting for next part desperately. ..?????..
Hey Arpita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…hope woh mazaa jo tum expect kar rahi ho woh mein laa sakoon….loads of love to you…keep smiling and take care…next episode jald hi tu mein dikhega…
Amazinggggg Di… uhh juzz nailed it…. post nxt asap…. n I loved dat joru ka gulam… juzz loved it to d core… updt soon…
Love uhh loads…
Hey Shreya…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…ha ha ha ha Joru ka ghulaam/jor ka jhukaam…lol…my favourite line too….next episode very soon in the portal….love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Lol joru ka gulam?????? amazing ?? update soon ?
Hey Chiki…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…ha ha ha ha…my favourite line too…keep smiling and take care…next update very soon in the portal
Jor ka jhukaam…lol.. on top of that… the law made by you is just fantastic …..you proved it akka that shivomru are true mind readers…..I knew while reading itself that shivaay would have listened to aniomru conversation and it happened…totally it was an outstandingly khidkitod update ….and happy dusshers
Hey Ashwini…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…ha ha ha joru ka ghulaam, my favourite line too….law i never expected you guys will like it…glad you liked it…you knew shivaay would have listened , then you know me quite well Ashwinee ..that’s so awesome….thanks a ton once again dear…love you loads…keep smiling and take care…next episode very soon in the portal….
Happy Dussehara to All!!!
This was a superb update. I am loving the Tadibaazi of both Billu and Billi and looking forward to their Takkarwali Ishqbaazi
Hey Dipti…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…this thanks is not for complimenting me …it’s for the opportunity you gave me to write your khidkitodh concept…i hope i am living upto your expectations….thanks a lot once again dear…keep smiling and take care
Awesome
Thank you so much Nisha…thanks a lot…keep smiling and take care
U r a superb writer ur every ff has a different charm
Keep posting
Post next update soon
Hey Veda…the first line you wrote has touched my heart so much…thank you so much for that amazing line…i am feeling so happy and elated right now….thanks a lot….i hope the upcoming episodes will also be liked by you….keep smiling and take care…next episode very soon in the portal….
Awesome akka post next one soon take care and happy dussehra akka
Hey Vishnu talli….thank you so much nanna….thanks a lot….next episode very soon in the portal…love you loads nanna…keep smiling and take care
Heyy Beautiful????
Fantastic epi….. Finally our Khidkitod jodi came to track…..
Amazingggg rule by u Beautiful???????
U made my bro Joru ka gulam…. I m excited to see this side of my bhaiya…… Eagerly waiting 4 next……
HAPPY DUSSHERA Beautiful….. May Maa Durga bless u and ur family always…..
For Akki??????????
Hey Gorgeous…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yeah they came onto track…ha ha ha rule i never expected that you guys will like it…but glad everyone liked it…ha ha ha your bro has himself chosen this path what to do….thank you for those wishes dear…kisses only to Akki not me? not fair gorgeous…love you loads…keep smiling and take care…next episode very soon in the portal…..
Aswwwwwmness ki dukaan, loved it too, sorry I couldn’t comment on last episodes but they were khidkithod
Hey Niku…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you for those amazing words…and please don’t say sorry dear…it’s okay i can understand the busy schedules so it’s perfectly fine…all these can wait and so can i….thanks a lot dear…love you loads…keep smiling and take care…next episode will be very soon in the portal
Amazing update
Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot
Amazing….waiting for the next part…Happy Dussehra to u too
Hey Annie…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode very soon in the portal dear….love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Hi harika, how r u doing . What a bang on episode as I am expected…. no one can match shivika’s takkar and no one can write like this other than you. You are one of a kind. You give takkar to the original story. The beauty of ishqbaaaz is the relationship and understanding between the characters (apart from pinky ). You portrayed them very beautifully. Hatsoff to that. When I read jhoru ka jhukam I laughed hysterically. Actually my kids were looking at me weirdly. Haa. Haa.
MISSION TAKKAR KI ISHQBAAAZI STARTS. Waiting for your next update dear. Bye and take care….
Hey Katz…i am doing good and how are you ?
Awee so sweet of you dear to give such amazing compliments….i donno what i write , how i write ….because i never read what i wrote once it is posted in the portal… but all your opinions make me understand in which way i am going….and today whatever you said made me feel so special and overwhelmed ….thank you so so so so so much….thanks a lot….
Joru ka ghulam/Jor ka jhukam my favourite line too…ha ha ha ha….it made me laugh too……
i am surprised to know you are married and have kids….that’s so sweet …give my love, hugs, kisses and best wishes to your little ones….
Yes takkar will start…next episode will be appearing very soon in the portal….keep smiling and take care…
Hawwww….Our bullying will become joru Ka ghulaam.So very interesting
Hey SatyendraSharma….thank you so much …thanks a lot….yeah he will become on his own will…but i am trying to do something different….keep smiling and take care…next episode will appear very soon in the portal….
Billu*
VHM, as usual, you excel. Seriously, you always leave us wanting more and more. The excitement of Ani and Billu is about to start..LoL
Thanks always and stay blessed!
Hey Yvonne…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you dear…all credits to Dipti for this ….yes their takkar will start….thanks a ton…keep smiling and take care…next episode very soon in the portal
This is a wonderful chapter di. But it would have been better if Shivaay had not known about their planning. please show some RiKara moments and waiting for Shivaay in Joru ka gulaam mode. Update soon.
Hey Aashi….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i too initially thought of not making Shivaay listen to AniOm words…but later i had changed the reason behind this you will know in upcoming episodes…hope you will like what i thought and implemented….Rikara moments i haven’t thought because the concept have been given by Dipti and the FF is based on Shivika…but i will try to include their moments which will be a part of flow….love you loads dear….keep smiling and take care………next episode very soon in the portal…….
Awesome fabulous di…om and anika conversation was amazing ???loved it to the core eagerly waiting for next part update soon di…Love you??Take care and stay safe
Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot….i am so happy to know you liked the conversation between Anika and om….so sweet of you dear…next episode will appear very soon in the portal…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Awesome di…. Loved it…. Mind blowing part…
Shivaay plan was amazing …. Excited for the next part …. Post it soon… Till then take care… Luv u lot
Hey Sissy…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you dear….i hope i live upto your excitement and expectations…but my way of wooing will be different….next episode will appear very soon in the portal…love you loads….keep smiling and take care
Lovely Update ❤
So tadibaaz billu & khidkitod Anika are back. SSO is gonna become ‘joru ka ghulam’~ I’m excited ?
Loved the AniOm convo. Ani & Omru are ideal bhabi-devar ?
Chotusa ShivRi scene was cute too!
Waiting to see AniOmRu torturing Shivaay ?
Lots of love ?
Hey Shivika….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….yes they will be back…ha ha ha…joru ka ghulam…i never expected you guys will like this way …..yeah i too want to see Ani-Om-Ru bond in real IB, since it is not going to happen i am including it in my ff…lol….Anika will torture or get tortured you will have to wait and read….next episode will appear very soon in the portal….love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Amazing Update. Totally loved reading it!
AniOmRu are just adorable. Loved the intense OmAni convo ?
Can’t wait to see Shivaay as JORU KA GHULAM ?
Update Soonish 🙂
Hey Aparna…thank you so much…thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you dear to let me know you liked reading it….ha ha ah Shivaay Joru ka ghulaam…ha ha ha ha….next episode very soon in the portal…keep smiling and take care
Hari tht new rule in divorce is great…nice tadibaaz and bagadbilla style..missed it so much….well anika sure will not sign the papers if she sign shivaye wont file it…..both r madly in love..ok next epi dear….
Hey Pushpa…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…that’s true Aniak will not sign it and Shivaay will not file it….they are both madly in love..they will now give takkar and trouble each other…..keep smiling and take care..by the way love you too….next episode very soon in the portal……..
he ha joru ka jhukam very funny awesome love you shivika amazing episode keep writing dear
Hey Shabhnam…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…ha ha ha joru ka ghulaam…lol…my favourite line too….thanks a lot once again dear…keep smiling and take care….next episode will appear very soon in the portal….
Amazing episode di !!! Now the real stry between shivika begins… the tashan wali ishqbaazi ?.
Dadi worried abt shivika and omru consoling her. Rudy’s as usual banter ?.
Om goin to anika and consolin her and makin her share her prblms with him. He was angry tht shivay is still not able to understand anika till now. But he tried to make anika understand tht shivay isn’t in a state to understand anything and gives her promise to stay back. He tells her to show her right on him… her anger… her narazgi. He finally managed to convince her into stayin back and givin prpr takkar to shivay. Rudy comin in and completin the hug… they are always incomplete without him ?. Omru’s tom and jerry fight brough a smile on anika’s face. They decided to be the support of their bhabhi in this matter. Love their bond with each other. Wish this understandin om could be seen in ishqbaaz as well… nowadays he reaches a conclusion without even thinkin prply.
Shivay was happy tht om made anika do wht he wants her to do and is happy tht he has such great brothers. Shivay orderin anika to sign the divorce papers and anika in her tadibaaz attitude answers him in NO and shivay smiles seeing tht. Gauri findin shivay’s behaviour fishy and confrontin him… shivay tells her tht he is doin all this to earn anika’s love and understand her value in his life. Aftr aniomru these two are the best… shivri, they look so cute together. Shivay has got a plan on his mind.
Lawyer tells the two rules for gettin divorce… awesome rule u made up di ??. Everybody laughin tht now shivay will become joru ka ghulam for two mnths but he is ready to become for lifetime ?…. tht song is playin in my head right now and am imaginin the stuff shivay would have to do ??. Lawyer and shivay havin a hard time controllin their laughter ?.
Can’t wait for this track to strt ?. Am so happy tht my comment matters to u a lot… and I’ll try to comment sooner next time ?. Take care di and love u loads ❤❤❤❤❤.
Hey Maryam, thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….yes dear every opinion of every reader matter to me and your opinion is something i always wait for …your khidkitodh analysis makes me understand which scenes or dialogues are liked and which are not effective…thanks a lot for all the help you have been doing to make me improve my writings….
New law …ha ha ha ha….never expected you all will like this rule…..thanks a lot once again….love you loads…keep smiling and take care…next episode will appear very soon in the portal
Harika didi….I cant say Asusual its an awesome episode…Because,This episode is beyond that…I say 11th episode is the bestest??????????????Love my omkara to the coreee??????He is saying shayaris,Always leans his shoulder to console every oberois,Eventhough he is younger than shivika he is matured??????Anika,om and rudra’s relation is the best devar-bhabi relation…?????Next best devar-bhabi is Gauri-rudra??????Love shivri bonding to the core…Please give more scenes to enjoy Shivri bonding too????????I love this new rule didi????????????Sorryyyyyyyyyyy for late comment…Loved this to the coreeeeeeeee of my heart…Precap looks very very interesting??????Hereafter thisTeri meri love story is going to make us all laugh….I am eagerly waiting…??????????Take care didi…
Hey Logesh…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so you felt this episode is the bestest, awee so sweet of you…i know you love Omkara and Gauri and when i wrote the episode you came to my mind…new rule ha ha ha ha ha…never expected you will like this…will the story make you laugh, make you emotional or make your head spin i donno…but i will try to make it interesting and worth a read is all i can say….next episode will appear very soon in the portal….keep smiling and take care…….
Harika didi..Dont worry….i will never get angry on any of my readers…Because each and every reader has the right to criticize and point out the loopholes…?????i agree with you didi…This is very very short episode…Even i cant able to accept it as an episode ????Always your criticisms will be constructive???????I promise next one will be long update ?????Tqqqqqqq soooo much for those caring words…?????sorry for disappointing you?????I am really loving Teri meri love story to the core didi??????????Keep rocking????
Hey Logesh…ohh ya i read this response from you on your ff episode 1…thanks dear for understanding and not getting angry….i am glad you appreciate constructive criticism…please don’t say sorry , it is not needed and i was not expecting any apology from you…i just wanted that if it’s an episode there must be a minimum length which satisfies the readers wait..and trust me all i said was what i felt ….i always loved your work and i will always love it …no matter what…looking forward to the next episode from you ….all the best …keep smiling and take care
It is awesome dii… Excited for the next update