Hi this is VHM signing in with a new FF ….The concept is given by our friend FFFAN1234 aka Dipti….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….I hope you will continue to shower your support as you have always shown for my earlier write ups …….
Please note I May not be regular in posting the episodes due to personal commitments…however I promise I will not keep you waiting for a long time too……..
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TAM : Thinking At that Moment / Thought At that Moment
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Om ‘’ Yes Rudra shivaay…this ornament was given by me to swethlana when she was in OM…how come the same one is being shown by the lady……….swethlana was behind our empire our property and so to keep her mouth shut I gave her this …’’
Anika turned towards Tej
Anika ‘’tej uncle please remember did jhanvi aunty wear this during the night of crime?’’
Tej ‘’i…i…donno…’’
Gauri ‘’Please do remember papaji…this is very important’’
Tej ‘’I will try to….yes she wore that on that day’’
Om ‘’what?’’
Tej ‘’YES…I remember very well’’
Om ‘’but how did it come back to mom?’’
Tej ‘’I …I donno…how will I know?’’
Anika ‘’relax ..we will ask Jhanvi aunty about it’’
Shivaay got a call from Khanna just then
Shivaay ‘’yes’’
Lawyer ‘’we have filed for bail but it seems difficult as proofs are against her…but we will try our level best’’
Shivaay ‘’I don’t know what you are going to do but I need my badi mom back and that too as early as possible’’
Shivaay disconnected the call
Gauri ‘’Anika bahujaii …I guess we must head back to Swethlana’s residence and try to find out something’’
Anika ‘’no…we must find that old lady…something seems wrong to me the way she looked in the video as if she has been manipulated to say so…so we must find her’’
Rudra ‘’yes bhabhi’’
Just then Khanna entered
Khanna ‘’Sir’’
Shivaay ‘’yes Khanna’’
Khanna ‘’Sir , swethlana ji is leaving for Mumbai …infact she is leaving for airport’’
Tej ‘’what?’’
Anika ‘’Rudra-Bhavya you both head towards Mumbai and search swethlana’s house, while Om-Tej uncle will stop Swethalana fron leaving Nainital’’
Shivaay ‘’ but why ?’’
Anika ‘’as per what Tej uncle has said Swethlana has burnt all the proofs during ghost drama …but as far as we know her.. she is not such a stupid player and she doesn’t give up so soon …so I think there is much more to this…and for that we must not leave any scenarios’’
Om ‘’yes…I am sure she must not have burnt everything …she will die but not do such stupidity’’
Shivaay ‘’how can you be so sure?’’
Om ‘’because I stayed with her and I know her very much’’
Shivaay ‘’fine…but I cannot risk Rudra and Bhavya’s life …I will go and search swethlana’s house’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay I think you should handle situation here…’’
Shivaay ‘’now …will you say me what I should do and what not…I am Shivaay Singh Oberoi and I do what I want to …not what you say’’
Anika ‘’ohh ya I forgot you are the great Tadibaaz…but how much ever great you might be …remember your brothers need you the most at this moment…other than this I have nothing to say’’
Shivaay ‘’why do you care so much for my brothers when you were the one who has alleged and tried to defame my brother in front of the media and entire world…you might have forgotten
but I will never’’
Anika just looked on, while tears welled up in her eyes….
Everyone else who were present felt bad with whatever they heard…
Tej ‘’shivaay this is not the time to fight…it’s time to resolve the crisis…and right now I feel Anika is right…you are needed the most here to support Om and Rudra as they are much closer to you than me’’
Shivaay ‘’okay…fine…’’ he took a pause and continued lowering his anger ‘’fine…I will stay back…only…only because you are saying bade papa ,not because of her’’ he spoke pointing his
index finger towards Anika
Anika wiped her tears and turned to go when Rudra came and hugged her
Rudra ‘’bhabhi…hadn’t you given the swear I would have said everything…all the truth…and today you wouldn’t have silently listened to all this’’
Anika shushed Rudra indicating him not to speak anything more …Shivaay who heard what Rudra said looked at Rudra and Om suspiciously
Shivaay ‘’wait…wait a minute…swear…what swear…and why are you taking her side’’
Om ‘’nothing…shall we come to the point’’
SHIVAAY TAM ‘’Why did Anika stop Rudra from saying anything…what swear did she give and what truth is Rudra talking about…why am I feeling strange …that Anika who tried to defame my brother is helping him today…handling all the situations…giving support..…am I missing some link…did she do all that 3 months before deliberately? If yes, why…if no…why is she helping us now? ‘’
Om ‘’shivaay…Shivaay ‘’
Shivaay ‘’hmm…haan’’
Om ‘’where are you lost?’’
Shivaay ‘’nowhere…nothing’’
Gauri ‘’Fine then let me decide…I and Anika bahujaii will leave for Mumbai to swethlana’s house….Tej uncle and Omkara ji would stop Swethlana from leaving to Mumbai…Bhavaya will go and meet Jhanvi maaji and try to find details about the ornament and incidents…Rudra bhayya and Shivaay bhayya would search for the old lady in the video…..is everyone okay with this?’’
Everyone nodded in agreement and started to move ahead when omkara turned towards Gauri
Om ‘’Gauri ..take care…swethlana is dangerous…’’
Anika smiled and replied ‘’Om don’t worry I will not let anything happen to your wife’’
Shivaay smiled with Anika’s words for a while and immediately changed his expressions to tadibaaz…
Shivaay ‘’you both can go in chopper and come back once you find anything there’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay I need some help ‘’
Shivaay ‘’what?’’
Anika explained Shivaay…Shivaay nodded and said ‘’You will get those before you reach swethlana’s house’’
Anika smiled and turned to pick her bag…….
Everyone left towards their respective places……
Tej and Omkara reached airport and waited for swethlana to arrive…
Tej ‘’do you think she will come here?’’
Om ‘’you must know her better as you have spent most of your lifetime with her than my mother’’
Tej ‘’I am just asking a simple question…why do always come to square one’’
Om ‘’because you always make mess out of everything and because I hate you’’
Tej ‘’look…this time I was genuine and I didn’t do anything…I don’t know how all this happened and who is behind it’’
Om ‘’ohh really mr.Oberoi…you don’t know who is behind it? You know it is swethlana who is behind this and yet you are not taking her name as culprit and I can see how genuine you are’’
While they were arguing…swethlana covered her face and passed before them smiling ….
Om and Tej had a view from corner of their eyes while having the arguments and felt it was Swethlana who passed by and ran towards the lady…both stopped a lady …tej coming infront and om standing at back……
Tej ‘’swethlana …no more drama and you just cannot go from here by creating havoc…not this time’’
Lady ‘’who are you and why are you stopping me?’’
Om ‘’ohh please swethlana …stop your drama’’
Lady ‘’swethlana…who swethlana?’’
Tej ‘’just take off your scarf out of your face then I will show you who swethlana is?’’
Lady took off the scarf and she wasn’t swethlana much to the shock of oberois……..
Om ‘’I am sorry …we were mistaken…we are really sorry’’
Lady ‘’that’s okay’’
By then Tej’s mobile rang
Tej ‘’hello’’
Swethlana ‘’good bye Tej…you will have to suffer for playing with me…sending Jhanvi to jail is my first step …now I will also send you to jail for all the crimes which you have never committed yet the proofs are against you…you started this game and I will end this game by destroying you, fulfilling my motive and running away with the share of Oberois…tough luck this time…you cannot catch me Tej’’
Tej ‘’swethlana…how dare you say all this to me…I will not leave you’’
Swethlana ‘’first catch me …later you can think of not leaving me..by the way I too wanted the same…I never wanted you to leave me…but you did that…and now bear the consequences…
Oberois or Oberois ke baap none can catch me…and one more thing inform your son, Omkara Singh Oberoi that he will also have to face consequences of messing up with me…well it’s my flight time and I must leave…see you in court very soon’’
Tej ‘’bl**dy hell…she is a Bi**h’’ he clasped his wrist and moved it in air in frustration
Om ‘’’what happened Mr.Oberoi…whose call was it?’’
Tej explained everything…now they were sure it was swethlana who murdered Naren.
Om ‘’we must inform Anika Bhabhi and Gauri that Swethlana is reaching Mumbai otherwise they will fall in trouble’’
Tej ‘’right…call them now’’
Om made a call to Anika and said everything……..
Anika was in thoughts and asked Om to relax while she and Gauri will handle the situation there……
They informed Shivaay also so that everyone is aware of everything and returned to their guest house waiting for Bhavya to give the information…….
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Shivaay and Rudra along with few men and Khanna went on to search the old lady who was in the video…..after a whole day search they found a clue about where the lady stayed and without wasting time…ShivRu reached the place and were horrified to see the scenario……
Rudra ‘’what will we do now Bhayya?’’
Shivaay ‘’Khanna …call the cops now’’
Khanna called the police……
Shivaay called Omkara and put Anika, Bhavya in conference call
Shivaay ‘’everyone put on the speaker option…’’
Everyone did the same’
Shivaay ‘’Listen the old lady whom we were searching is found but she will not be able to help us anymore’’
Om ‘’what? Why?’’
Shivaay ‘’someone has murdered the old lady too…she is no more’’
Om ‘’one more door closed’’
Gauri ‘’omkara ji…please don’t lose hope…we have reached Mumbai and reached swethlana’s home…I am sure we will get something from her house’’
Shivaay ‘’yes Om…we cannot lose hope…there will be something that will give a clear picture’’
Om ‘’I hope so’’
Bhavya ‘’I got some information from Jhanvi aunty that will help us’’
Anika ‘’we will have to end this call now…before that chantomind reaches here we have to search the place’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika …careful…and please don’t fall into trouble’’ he sounded concerned
Anika was silent for a while and so was Shivaay as his concern for Anika gave him a strange feeling
Anika ‘’will talk later’’ and disconnected the call
Gauri and Anika couldn’t open the main door so they went backside and tried to open the window…it was of no use …
Gauri ‘’Bahujaii…how will we get in now…if we break the window glass and go inside it will be risky’’
Anika ‘’don’t worry …I have made arrangements…just wait ,relax and come with me’’
Anika and Gauri went towards the gate and saw the key repairing person was waiting for them outside ….Anika spoke and enquired him and after confirming details allowed him to come with them…he opened the door and gave something to Anika and left from there …they both entered the house
Gauri ‘’bahujaii…when did you call that person?’’
Anika ‘’gauri …I asked Shivaay to arrange this person as it’s commonsense na that swethlana will lock the door and go…’’
Gauri ‘’you are smart Bahujaii..but what are those papers?’’
Anika smiled and said ‘’I will explain everything during return…shall we start the search now…we need those property papers and any other proofs against Swethlana before she reaches here’’
Gauri nodded and they both started searching every room and cup board…..
Finally they reached swethlana’s bed room and were about to search it when they heard the car sound…and foot steps……
Both looked at each other tensed and hid under the bed….
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When swethlana was about to open the door…the door got opened ….Swethlana frowned her eyebrows and looked at the person who opened it….
Gauri ‘’namasthe Swethlana ji’’
Swethlana ‘’tum? What are you doing in my house?’’
Gauri ‘’welcoming you…’’
Swethlana ‘’how dare you get into my house when I am not here?’’
Gauri ‘’where were you if you were not here’’
Swethlana ‘’naini…’’ she stopped and then continued ‘’why should I tell you? Wait let me call the police and get you arrested ‘’
Gauri ‘’go ahead…call the police…will you call or shall I dial the number and give you…come on…come on…go ahead..call the police’’
Swethlana TAM ‘’why is she so much confident…does she know the truth about me or is she trying to manipulate me…at this point calling the police is taking risk…and after whatever happened in Nainital I can’t take risk…but I must tackle her in some way and get into house…and above all I have to first know what is she upto’’
Swethlana ‘’Fine dial the number and give me’’
Gauri ‘’as you wish’’ and dialled police number and gave it to her
Swethlana was even more shocked…meanwhile Anika bent under the bed and found nothing…..she was about to get up when something striked her mind and bent again
Swethlana ‘’just stop your drama…’’ she disconnected the call
Gauri ‘’areey …you have disconnected the call…were you afraid that Police will get to know the truth about you or are you trying to act smart’’
Swethlana ‘’don’t try to play games with me…you very well know what happened to Jhanvi and Tej after they played games with me…your fate will also be the same…so I am warning you before hand …leave from here and save your life’’
Gauri ‘’Ayee…chirayya…sambhal ke…hamne tum jaise azgar ko bahut dekha hain…aur ham unko apni jagah dikhana bhi jaante hain’’
(Hey you..careful..i have seen many such snakes like you…and I very well know how to tackle them and show their place)
Swethlana ‘’look I am tired now will you get out of my house or shall I drag you and get you out’’
Gauri TAM ‘’Anika bahujaii…aapka kaam ho gaya ho tho jaldi ishara kar dijiye…iss chirayya ko jyada der rokhna mushkil hain’’
(Anika Bahujaii…if you have completed your work please give me some sign…it’s very difficult to stop this lady for a longer time)
Anika then messaged Gauri
Gauri looked at her mobile and then at Swethlana
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ALL CREDITS TO FFFAN1234 aka DIPTI for the concept !!!
So this was the Third part…please let me know how you felt after reading this by posting your opinion in the comment section…I will reply as soon as possible…….
51 Comments
superb…
name mistake..its sweety
Thank you so much Sweety…thanks a lot
Amazing Di! Itz giving the ri8 amount of thrills, family, relations,love and comedy at the same time….I cant wait for the next part…
You rock Di ??
Thank you so much Pui…thanks a lot…next episode i think it’s posted long back …i will be meeting you with my response there
Superb
Thanks bro…thanks a lot
It is really khidkitod. ….hope you bring pinky’s lie with a more khidkitod way…hope you will not dissapoint me.,My Swety VHM dear..aaka harika di….you will be my di as hatika di.but yiu are my pagal frnd as VHM…of course we are belong to PKJ…?????.sutlu ka track acchi chal rahi he..
Shivika ki intensity main tum kabhi kami nahi karti..hope iss bar bhi intensity level high hogi…
Hey Arpita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….haan mein Pinky keliye bahut dhamakedhaar wala script plan kar rahi hoon…leking kuch episodes baad aayega…hopefully i don’t disappoint you….yes your pagal friend VHM only….haan Dipti ko Shivika ki intensity level high chahiye…uski iccha saraankhon par aur tumhari bhi….love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Fantastic…plz update asap
Thank you so much Nandhini …thanks a lot…next episode i think you might have read by now
Sry it is harika not hatika..????..ye typing prblm meri jaan le kar rahegi….and hope word 3 or 4 baar…dekh rahi ho kitna high hopes he mera…..?????????…
Waiting for next update….DESPERATELY. ..??
koi baat nahi …autocorrect ki OMM bhi kabhi ham karlenge …kya kehthe ho…next episode ab tak tumne padh liya hoga …
wah hari…..superb epi…..u r great writer i must say dull of suspense&in detective mode…..svetlana still smart in yr epi too lets c who is smart the oberois or svet…please alert me when u upload the next epi…
Thank you so much Pushpa…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to say those lines…but all credits to Dipti for giving such a nice concept ….sent you the message with the link to next episode
Greatttt episode
Thank you so much Sairan …thanks a lot
Hi… How are you…?. Great going yaar,. Mystery, om’s vulnerability, Shivay’s confusion about rudra’s confession about his promise, anikas bonding with her devars and devranis shivay and Anika’s takkar ki ladaibaazi, Svetlana’s unending plans. You give us a amazing jugalbandi. Keep the amazing story coming. And I am waiting for it. Bye and take care….
Hi Katz…am fine dear…how are you? thanks a lot for those words dear…it means a lot and gives us a much needed boost to write something much better….next episode is already up in the portal and hope you have already read it….keep smiling and take care
Fantastic dii…. phenomenal….. loved it to d core…. shivaay got a clue or else I should say he thought that there was smthng dat he is missing thank God finally he thought of it… post nxt asap… n after reading dis chappy I m damn sure dat anika must have been a cop in her previous birth haha… post nxt soon dii… waiting for it…..
Hey Shreya…thanks a lot dear…thank you so much…ha ha ha ha…Anika being a cop in previous birth…lol..next episode i guess you might have read it by now…..love you loads …keep smiling and take care
Aww??….. di better do one thing join any CBI department ???….. tats the suitable place fr u ?…. Hw come u get these much ideas….. awsm epi di…. We’ll do one thing let my xams finish this chotu of urs will take u to a director ?
Hey Chotuu….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…all credits to Dipti for the concept…me and CBI…lol…yeah yeah take me to any director i will give a story…lol…thanks a lot dear…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Thnk got Shivaay Jiju finally got a clue?….. Di i hav no words left fr u ….. Bhabhi devar combo was lyk???…… Gauri didi & anika didi ? rocked ?….. Wanting Ani didi & jiju to unite
Thanks a lot dear…once again…their union will mark the end of this FF…so we will have to ait for everything to take it’s own time…but i promise i will not drag anything……
Superb update
Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot
Thrilling and awesomely adventurous
Thank you so much Satyendra Sharma….thanks a lot…
Dii…great going and emotions and suspense are on point.
Anika and shivay….they can start their fight at any point and anywhere.
Waiting fornext.
Hey Chotii…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yeah i like it that way to start their fight anywhere…it gives me a good feel…lol….love you loads sweety …keep smiling and take care…well i guess you might have by now read the next episode
Super awesome nd amazing…
Waiting for next as always…
Love nd best Wishes
Hey Tanz…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….next episode i guess by now you might have read it ….loads of love to you…keep smiling and take care
Superb episode di ! I am lovin this stry a lot… esp seeing anika’s detective side and omru’s constant support towards her.
Anika should work in some crime branch… saare criminals ki jald chutti kardegi ?. Shivay havin a prblm with anika ordering him and thinkin wht is she hiding… wht swear she gave to omru. Rudy consoling his anika bhabhi for his bhaiya’s harsh words. So finally everyone agreed upon gauri’s decision… Anika takin Shivay’s help beforehand only …. she is goin well prepared into tht chantomai’s den.
Shivru were finally able to find tht lady along with khanna’s help but she was already murdered by then. Om and tej could have stopped swetlana if they hadn’t fought… and swetlana used this chance and went to mumbai but not before warnin tej and om. Bhavya got some clues frm jhanvi. Aniri were finally able to get into the house and strted searching… am hopin anika found somethin. Gauri talkin with swetlana… tht would be fun to watch… swetlana feelin scared for a moment caz gauri was soo confident. Shivay caring for anika on the phone ?.
Can’t wait for ur next epi di… these crime thrillers are soo intresting…. and since u r writin it’s a treat to read it. How’s ur book comin along di ?. Take care di and lots of love to u and a hug ❤❤❤❤❤
Hey Maryam…thank you so much dear…i never get tired of saying that ..how much i love to read your episodic analysis and i eagerly wait for your opinion to be posted…it makes me feel so special ….thanks a lot dear…
My book is going good…one side writing this FF other side writing that book as i need to complete it by atleast next march….let’s see….
Loads of love to you …keep smiling and take care…next episode is already in the portal…i hope you might have read it by now
It is thrilling…
Thank you so much Nikki…thanks a lot….loads of love to you…keep smiling and take care
Harika didi,really how you are framing the scenes so good??????Really you have so much talents hidden..Never discontinue writing…You may not be regular..But continue writing ffs…Really loved this episode..The whole oberoi family except than pinky donkey are doing teamwork to catch svetlana red handed..Really their teamwork impresses me..Hate shivaay..Doesnt he have sense..He starts fighting with poor anika???But his concern for her ????He did whatever anika asked..Chopper,key designer etc…Didi i have one doubt..in your story rikara dont have any misunderstanding???Plsssss try to post next part soon…Thanks for sending me links didi by sparing your precious time..Keep sending whenever you update ??????Loved this part to the core?????????100%
Hey Logesh…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you to say so…yeah every now and then i will try to write something not because i am good at writing but because i love to write just our of passion…..Shivaay fights with Anika because his way of expressing love is by fighting with her…isn’t it so….Rikara have the same sort of relationship as in IB but during tough times they stay united to solve the problem first rather than fighting among themselves…next episode i guess you have read by now ….thanks a lot once again…keep smiling and take care
VHM di I have read ur previous ffs also each ffs of yours are really different, good, superb, unique and kidikkithod ones. This one is also I liked very much. Please continue writing like this. I would also like to mention that I loved all your previous works I read sorry I couldn’t comment on them back then.
Hey dear…thanks a lot for the awesome lines you wrote…thank you so much…no worries dear..i am so happy to know that you read my previous works and you liked them too….thank you so much…for this FF the credit goes to Dipti for the concept
VHM di I have read ur previous ffs also each ffs of yours are really different, good, superb, unique and kidikkithod ones. This one is also I liked very much. I would also like to mention that I loved all your previous works I read sorry I couldn’t comment on them back then.
Fabulous di….awesome update Loved it waiting for next part update soon di
Love you ??Take care and stay safe
Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot….next episode i guess you might have read by now …love you loads dear….keep smiling and take care
So brave and Intelligent OF is…And so are you Thank u dear for making my sometime wonderful..
Thank you so much Kajol…thanks a lot…ha ha ha ha…intelligent FF…all credits to Dipti for the concept…what to do..i am fed up of watching illogical logics in real IB sometimes so thought to write so….awee so sweet of you to say that last line…i am so happy …thanks again…keep smiling and take care
That was super khidkitod awesome. Loved it
Hey Dipti…all the appreciations, credit and awesome opinion that we are getting truly belongs to you as your are the backbone and master mind behind this FF…i am just a medium …so thanks a lot to you for bringing me in front once aagain and staying silent and modest being behind!!!! keep smiling and take care
Awesome episode…..I hate Shivaay (n love u ) for how he brings up the past time n again n hurts Anika…..at last usko shak toh hua ki shayad koi aur reason bhi ho sakta hai…..
Anika pichle janam Mein cop thi lagta hai…..cliffhanger again…..
thank you so much Nita…i ensure you will love the sso later the same way you are hating him now…haan SSO ko shak tho huan ab aur shak yakeen mein badle ga bhi….lol…Anika ka pichla janam …naya ff likhne keliye naam de diya….
Awesome di… Loved it to the core…
Annika care n affection for om n Rudy was mind blowing…..
Excited for the next part… Post it soon…