Hi this is VHM signing in with a new FF ….The concept is given by our friend FFFAN1234 aka Dipti….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….I hope you will continue to shower your support as you have always shown for my earlier write ups …….
Please note I May not be regular in posting the episodes due to personal commitments…however I promise I will not keep you waiting for a long time too……..
———————————
TAM : Thinking At that Moment / Thought At that Moment
————————————
Swethlana wasted no time and left from there….she started towards Airport, after sometime she called the man to know whether everything was according to what they planned…the man responded that it was done as she wanted …as he was at Gun point by Khanna ……Gauri and Bhavya disguised themselves and followed Swethlana by taking the same flight…however they were not aware of Anika being injured.
All three reached Mumbai and Gauri – Bhavya continued following Swethlana…Swethlana went to Her home picked her luggage and straight away drove to Oberoi Mansion…which shocked Gauri-Bhavya to infinity…
They called Shivaay but he didn’t pick the call…later they called Tej,Om and Rudra they too didn’t pick the call…at last they informed Khanna to let all the three brothers know about Swethlana’s whereabouts…….
They decided to follow Swethlana and keep a watch on what she is upto in OM……..
————–
Anika was rushed to hospital while Shivaay-Om-Rudra were crying miserably…knowing the situation Tej too rushed to the hospital …Khanna arrived and was in dilemma to say about the news of Swethlana’s entry in Oberoi Manion or not at that point of time…..that’s when he saw Tej coming…so Khanna informed Tej ….Tej asked him to leave, agreeing to inform ShivOmRu at appropriate time…Tej called Gauri and Bhavya and informed about Anika’s condition…they were also shocked and didn’t understand how to move further and whom to take care of first : Swethlana / Jhanvi /Anika
—————
Om Ru came to Shivaay and sat beside him……Shivaay hugged both his brothers and cried silently…
Shivaay ‘’nothing will happen to Anika..nothing will happen…she will be back with her khidkitodh smile …it’s just a minor…minor surgery…she will be alright..she will be alright’’ his hands
tightened on his brothers shoulders and his eyes were wetting their shirts
Rudra ‘’bhayya…please relax…we know and are sure Anika Bhabhi will be fine…very soon she will be doing her michmichi acts’’
Om ‘’yes Shivaay…relax…have trust …she is fighter…Anika Bhabhi is fighter’’
Shivaay broke the hug and with tears nodded his head…..The doctor came out and informed them that she was out of danger and the bullet was taken out but she needs to take rest…….she will be shifted to Special ward very soon…
Shivaay rushed to the ICU and sat beside Anika…….Anika was unconscious …Shivaay held her hand and was brushing her hair…..
Shivaat TAM ‘’I can fight with you…hate you…be angry on you…I can even live just by knowing that you are safe ..but I cannot live without you ….i just cannot live without you…..are you listening Anika…I cannot live without you…wake up soon Anika…we still have to fight against Swethlana…this mission has not ended yet…Badi maa is still in Jail…I promised OmRu that I will bring back badi maa clean out of all the mess…if you are not with me how will I fulfil my promise…wake up Anika and get back into action….for God sake open your eyes and see me once….for me see me once …’’
Tears were rolling down his eyes while he was in thoughts …after sometime Anika opened her eyes and looked at him…he left her hand and stood up…..
Shivaay ‘’are you fine Anika?’’
Anika nodded in yes…
Shivaay ‘’take rest…doctor asked you to take rest…Om or Rudra will be with you…i…I need to leave’’ he turned to go
Anika was into tears and held his hand
Anika ‘’aap nahi rukenge mere liye’’
(Will you not stay by my side)
Shivaay ‘’mein…mein woh..woh ‘’
(Me..i..i..that)
Anika ‘’mujhe pata hain aapko koi fark nahi padega ki mein zinda rahoon na rahoon…par mujhe laga ki shayad aap rukh jaate’’
(I know it doesn’t matter to you if I am alive or dead…but I wish if you could just stay back)
Shivaay was angered to listen her words and pulled his hand away and without looking at Anika said ‘’haan tum theek keh rahi ho…mujhe kyun fark padega’’
(Yeah you are right…why will it matter to me?)
he wiped his tears silently and left from there…Anika too cried silently……
OmRu came and sat after Shivaay left …Rudra wiped Anika’s tears …Shivaay stood at the door without being seen silently trying to listen the conversation…….
Rudra ‘’bhabhi…Shivaay bhayya was beside you till now…I don’t understand when you woke up why did he leave..you know what his tears didn’t stop till he saw you opening your eyes…he is strange’’
Om ‘’yes Rudra…not only Shivaay but both Shivaay and Anika Bhabhi are strange…they love each other but they will not let each other know about the same…waise Bhabhi…what was the need for you to come in between and take the bullet…what would have I answered if something had happened to you?’’
Anika ‘’Om…how can I ever let anything happen to you…you both are my family…my best friends…you both are the life of Shivaay…and life of Shivaay is more precious to me …I will not step back anytime if I had to save you giving my life…’’
Rudra ‘’thank you Bhabhi…for coming into our life …for making it beautiful…trust me Bhabhi…Shivaay bhayya can never get any better life partner than you…please Bhabhi tell him the truth and make everything proper…please bhabhi’’ he cried hugging Anika
Anika ‘’I already said both of you….i will give my life but will not see any of you hurt…Shivaay will never be able to digest this truth and will break down….and you both will not let Shivaay know this…otherwise whatever I did 3 months back will be wasted’’
Om ‘’fine Bhabhi we will not reveal anything to Shivaay…but promise us that you will always stay with us ….’’
Anika ‘’Om..i will be with you all ..but if Shivaay sends me out I will accept his decision to leave…’’
They three had a group hug……..
Shivaay who listened to the conversation understood then that whatever Anika did 3 months back was drama and it is something linked to him…some truth that will break him…he wanted to confront Anika at that point but he knew she will never reveal it…so he determined to get to the truth……
————-OM, Mumbai
Dadi ‘’Swethlana you here? How dare you come here?’’
Swethlana ‘’Mrs.Kalyani Oberoi..i mean maaji please……you are elder and I don’t want you to take more pressure and get heart attack…’’ she took papers from her bag and showed it to her
Dadi ‘’what are these?’’
Swethlana ‘’oberoi property papers on the name of me…I am owner of portion of the oberoi empire and now I am gonna stay here…and none of you can stop me doing so…look Omkara has himself signed on these’’
Pinky ‘’OMM …you are so shameless…we threw you out but you come back like a boomerang’’
Swethlana ‘’mind your words Pinky…else I too know how to tackle you…’’
Pinky ‘’what will you do?’’
Swethlana ‘’except Shivaay everyone knows your truth and everyone is silent because of Shivaay…but I don’t need to do that …so a word against me ..i will speak the truth about you to
Shivaay…I am sure you know what will happen if that happens’’
Pinky was shocked…….Dadi looked on…….
Gauri and Bhavya were observing everything and left from there ……thinking of what needs to be done further……as they couldn’t enter OM at that point of time giving away a new suspicion to Swethlana………they decided to talk to ShivOmRu ……..
———— Nainital
Shivaay took permission from doctor to shift Anika to their guest house and doctor too agreed …Anika, Tej, Shivaay, Om, Rudra came back home…they informed Gauri and Bhavya about
Anika doing good…….
Anika after reaching guest house asked the progress and then Tej revealed that Swethlana has moved to Oberoi Mansion……..
Anika ‘’kya?’’
Tej ‘’yes Anika Swethlana has moved to Oberoi Mansion with the right of being portion of property owner of oberois’’
Anika ‘’but uncle those papers are invalid’’
Tej ‘’yes…the bond paper is original but those papers are invalid as Omkara has changed his signature and we can prove that easily..’’
Shivaay ‘’but why did she go to OM?’’
Om ‘’exactly why OM?’’
Anika ‘’Omkara relax…first we have to bring Jhanvi aunty out of jail…the man who tried to kill you…has he confessed everything? ‘’
Shivaay ‘’he confessed that he killed Naren…but still badi mom will not be completely out of mess as video proof and ornament proof are against her…if the man in the court says that because on the saying of badi mom he has committed crime then we will lose the case…’’
Anika ‘’when is the first trial?’’
Shivaay ‘’in a week’’
Anika ‘’ in this week time we need to get every truth of Swethlana out and for that you all must leave for Mumbai’’
Rudra ‘’but what about Mom?’’
Anika ‘’I said you all…I will be here…’’
Om ‘’but you alone?’’
Anika ‘’swethlana thinks I am dead and her man has escaped let her be in that illusion…you all should go to Mumbai and try to find the truth’’
Shivaay ‘’I will stay with Anika here…because if I too come there swethlana might think that I didn’t break down and her suspicion would raise’’
Anika looked at Shivaay…Shivaay reciprocated the looks…
Anika ‘’meanwhile we will try to find about the ornament ‘’
OmRu smiled and said ‘’okay’’
Anika ‘’tej uncle …please remember if Swethlana has something very important against her in OM?’’
Shivaay ‘’brilliant…yes bade papa please remember…why will swethlana go to OM otherwise she can do anything with that property…but why OM?’’
Tej ‘’Swethlana has proofs against me …I don’t know where they are now…and I have been trying to get those proofs from her from very long….my staying and hanging out with swethlana is only for those proofs…’’
Om ‘’what proofs?’’
Tej ‘’Proofs of those crimes which I have never committed …but I was framed ‘’
Om ‘’means ?’’
Tej ‘’Few Oberoi industry workers were killed in our chemical factory blast years ago…I have given instructions to Ashok kapoor, the manager and in-charge of chemical factory to evacuate the entire factory before blasting it….but it was not done as being instructed and few people were left inside deliberately…an hour before the blast a call was received on my telephone to confirm about the blast…I shouted them to blast the factory as instructed…this portion of my speech was captured in a video by someone…..later when the factory was blasted few people died and there was a case…from then on swethlana had been blackmailing me and making me dance on her finger tips saying that the video proof is with her…at that time i shut the case bribing the police …but her blackmailing has never stopped …’’
Anika ‘’but uncle I didn’t find those proofs in her house’’
Shivaay ‘’bade papa the matter is not so simple as what you said…if swethlana had the proofs with her then why will she go to Oberoi mansion…there is something more to it…and I know what needs to be done to find it’’
Tej ‘’what?’’
Shivaay ‘’I want to reopen this case…’’
Tej ‘’What? ‘’
Shivaay ‘’yes bade papa …I want to re-open this case’’
Tej ‘’do you understand what you are saying? Re-opening the case will drag the Oberois once again into a new mess ..and it will be additional headache along with the current case of murder…you can’t do this Shivaay…you are a businessman too…don’t forget’’
Om ‘’I knew Mr.Oberoi , you keep business before everything..nothing matters to you other than power, money and name…even now you are being like this…after so much happened…can’t believe it..it’s just disgusting’’
Shivaay ‘’om relax…Bade papa has a point…we have to do everything separately…I will ask Bhavya to take up this case and investigate on her own terms…this should solve every problem’’
Anika ‘’but Bhavya is required to help Jhanvi aunty at this point’’
Shivaay ‘’don’t worry….oberoi’s name is enough to take care of Badi mom till she reaches and faces her first trial’’
While all this conversation was going on Rudra was silent…very silent and was in thoughts…Anika saw him being in thoughts and called him….
Anika ‘’rudra’’
Rudra ‘’haa bhabhi’’ he jerked with her voice
Anika ‘’what are you thinking?’’
Rudra ‘’woh Bhabhi…I was just thinking how did swethlana reach so early from Mumbai…I know I brushed off Shivaay bhayya’s thoughts yesterday..but , our men in Mumbai were keeping track of her and they were sure that she didn’t leave the house at all….then how was she in Nainital only after few minutes of your call to her’’
Shivaay ‘’exactly …that was what was concerning me and how did she know where we were when you met…off course she said she kept an eye on us…but how..if she was in Mumbai how can she keep an eye of us…and listen to what we planned to do….’’
Anika ‘’she is swethlana she can do anything…why are we wasting time on how she reached here so soon…I don’t care…but what she must not know is I am Alive and safe….now I think we should set back to our plan…OmRu and Tej uncle please head towards Mumbai and try to find out the reason behind Swethlana’s entry there’’
OmRu ‘’fine Bhabhi…we will meet soon’’
They hugged Anika and then Shivaay and asked both of them top take care and keep them informed about the happenings and left from there……
Anika was in bed and was trying to slide down to sleep properly…Shivaay observed her and moved towards her……..
Anika ‘’Shivaay …I can handle myself’’
Shivaay ‘’okay’’
He left from there…Anika was making attempts bit was not succeeding……she gave up and remained in an typical position of not able to sit properly or not able to sleep..writhing in pain…..Shivaay came to her …lifted her in his arms and made her sleep properly…..while Shivaay was doing all this Anika just looked at him silently…..he turned to go when
Anika ‘’I could have managed’’
Shivaay ‘’I know how well you manage’’
Anika ‘’ohh you are taunting me?’’
Shivaay ‘’ohh you understood finally that I was taunting you…congratulations’’
Anika ‘’what was the need to help me…you know I don’t like to take help from anyone’’
Shivaay ‘’yes ..you don’t like to take help from anyone…but I am not anyone…I am your hus’’ he stopped and looked at her without completing the sentence
Anika too looked at him in surprise
Anika ‘’what were you trying to say…that you are my hus…husband..am I right?’’
Shivaay ‘’woh…woh…it just slipped out of my tongue’’
Anika ‘’slipped out of your tongue …I am sure it did slip out of your tongue…but be careful Shivaay this time when you file our divorce in court this slipping of your tongue will cost you hefty’’
Shivaay’s BP raised with her words and he gave a grave look and left from there…..Anika smiled and slept……….Shivaay came back after sometime to check whether she was comfortable or not ….Anika was sleeping peacefully…he pulled a chair and sat on it holding Anika’s hand ….a numerous number of thoughts ran in his mind while he was looking at her…but every thought paved only to one destination that HIS LIFE EVEOLVES ROUND ANIKA & HOW MUCH EVER HE TRIES TO GO AWAY OR IGNORE HER, HE COMES BACK TO HER…..slowly a smile crept on his face and he kissed her forehead caringly……Anika tried to change her position in sleep …he comforted her and few hours after he left from there so as to not get caught by his lady and most importantly to avoid her teasing………Anika had a broad smile on her lips after Shivaay left……
————
OmRu, Tej met Gauri and Bhavya and all five reached OM together……..Swethlana welcomes them while Dadi, Pinky and Shakthi looked on……
Swethlana walks towards Gauri and says
Swethlana ‘’what did you say , you will come back to permanently kick me out of our lives and this is promise of Gauri Omkara Singh Oberoi…right…see now I came back into your lives permanently and you cannot do anything now’’
Gauri ‘’really…I cannot do anything …do you think so….i think dreaming is good….but day dreaming…pcchhhh…day dreaming is very bad….by the way ..you have welcomed us…so let us step in also…and I hope our step into OM will mark a step to your exit from our lives’’
She smirked and everyone else looked at her in disgusted way and entered….
Pinky ‘’OMM , Shivaay …Where is Shivaay’’
Om ‘’Shivaay is in Nainital’’
Dadi ‘’but why in Nainital and where is Anika?’’
OmRu looked at Gauri and Bhavya and bent their heads down…..
Dadi ‘’why are you not speaking ? where is Anika?’’
Tej ‘’Maa…the thing is…Anika….Anika is no more…someone shot her..’’
Dadi ‘’whaat?’’
Pinky ‘’Chalo..accha hain…itne bure khabron mein ek khush kahabar tho mili’’
(Finally…atleast we got a good news amid all the bad news)
Dadi ‘’chup kar Pinky…kaisi insaan ho tum…kisi ke maut par khushi mana rahi ho…aur kitna girogi tum…aree uss bacchi ne tumahara kya bigada hain jo tum itna kuch keh rahi ho? Ye mat bhoolna ki uski wapasi ke baad hi tumhara beta fir se purana wala Shivaay bana hain’’
(Shut up Pinky…what sort of a person are you..you are celebrating over someone’s death…how much more will you fall low..what did that poor gal do to you that you are saying all this nonsense…don’t forget only after her return you got your son back to what he was earlier…)
Pinky ‘’mummy ji…jab koi peeda khatham ho jaati haina khushi manate hain dukhi nahi hote…aur Anika se bada peeda aur kya ho sakti hain hamari zindagi mein…mein tho uss insan ko gale lagana chahthi hoon jisne ye kaam kiya hain..badi lambi umar ho uski’’
(Mummy ji..when something that hurts is been get rid off we celebrate, we should n’t feel sad…Anika is one such in our lives…I want to thank that person who did this good work…let that person live long)
Rudra was agitated and said ‘’Chotii maa…do you see that person’’ he pointed towards Swethlana and continued ‘’thank her …because she is the one who got Anika Bhabhi killed’’
Pinky, Dadi, Shakthi ‘’whaat?’’
Pinky ‘’OMM…is it true swethlana ? you did it?’’
Om ‘’choti mom, Anika Bhabhi got shot before our eyes and Swethlana was the one who let this happen..i am wondering who has fallen to a much lower level…you or swethlana?’’
Tej ‘’Om relax…we should go back to our rooms rather than dealing with these two as they are insane’’
Dadi ”but Billu”
Tej ”mom..he will take sometime time to come out of this situation and happenings…it’s not easy for him to come out of that huge shock … He may not be related to Anika now..must his connection with Anika is way deeper than we can see and understand….we asked him to come back…but he denied as he wants some time alone for himself..we too didn’t insist because in a way he is correct and if needed he can help Jhanvi too”
Dadi ”may be you are right…we must leave Billu for sometime alone…may be this is correct thing to do at this point of time”
Pinky TAM ”OMM…I wish Shivaay comes back to normalcy soon…and i must thank swethlana for getting a hurdle out of my way…now Shivaay will stay as my son forever and that too without any need of doing anything further…thank God”
Swethlana ‘’what do you think ? you can fool me so easily…I know Anika is alive and Shivaay is taking care of Anika…if you think I am so foolish then you are the bigger fools…’’
Everyone was shocked to listen to her
Tej ‘’how do you know?’’
Swethlana smiled and said ‘’because I am swethlana remember this…I can be in Mumbai and in Nainital at the same time…how can this be possible you can never decode….and by the way how do I know Anika is alive I will tell you…I saw the bullet hitting Anika just above her heart so in no way she can die and then if Anika was dead really…Shivaay would have never left me to live, he would have killed me by now…no matter what…this is enough for me to know that Anika is alive…so try some other tricks to let me down’’
Swethlana smirked evily and left towards her room……later everyone still surprised and shocked left towards their rooms…..OmRu informed Shivaay about Swethlana’s words…….
Everyone started to put their efforts to find the truth and gathered the proofs…….Shivaay took extreme care of Anika and Anika soon recovered …Shivaay used to meet Jhanvi too…….the week passed by…finally 6 days passed and the next day it was the time for Jhanvi’s first trail in Nainital Court…..
Dadi ‘’we need to go to court tomorrow…I hope everything goes in favour of Jhanvi’’
Swethlana smiled
Tej ‘’it will mom…’’
Om ‘’swethlana ..are you not coming to Nainital tomorrow…after all you are the main culprit’’
Swethlana ‘’me..main culprit? How will you prove’’
Rudra smiled
Rudra ‘’You know the famous saying…every criminal leaves something before he escapes…you are no exception…’’
Swethlana ‘’what do you mean?’’
Gauri ‘’you will get to know very soon…but I think you must come to Nainital…what will you do here all alone? Someone must be there for you to play your dirty tricks’’
Swethlana ‘’no thank you’’
Bhavya entered OM just then…….
Bhavya ‘’you know what we cannot leave you all alone in this mansion…so we thought to take you along with us…but since you are not listening I have something that will make you listen
and come with us…’’
Swethlana ‘’nothing can make me bend infront of anyone…may be you don’t know me well’’
Bhavya handed over an envelope to Swethlana …..Swethlana opened it and read and was shocked……..
—————–
ALL CREDITS TO FFFAN1234 aka DIPTI for the concept !!!
So this was the Fifth part…please let me know how you felt after reading this by posting your opinion in the comment section…I will reply as soon as possible…….
54 Comments
Awesome and mind blowing.. waiting for the next update eagerly
Thank you so much Nisha …thanks a lot
Heyy Beautiful!!!!!
A humble request from my side if possible then kill this pinky ponky at d end of the ff….. I m totally feed up with her?????
BTW epi was Fabulous….
Pasinalana as always Chantumai BT not then Oberois…..
Finally Shivaay know about Anika’s Sacrifice…. And care for her….
Again at Cliff hanger…..
I think u forgot to add precap…..
Excited 4 next….
Same thoughts here Di…. Hope Pinky Ponkey dies y to wait till the end of ff I want her kill the very next episode ???
Want to kill Next epi only….. Lol dr….?????
Hey gorgeous…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…pnky and Swethlana’s OMM will happen…i promise that….
MInd blowing episode di !!! These mystery ff’s always give me so much curiousity to knw wht’s gonna happen next ?.
Gauya stunned to see swetlana in oberoi mansion but they couldn’t do anything at tht moment except spying on her. Shivay tryin to assure himself tht anika would be fine while tryin to assure his brothers…. omru supported him and cried along with him. Thankfully anika is fine now… shivay’s thoughts seeing her unconscious in the icu ????…. his eagerness to see her awake and look into her eyes… tht heartbreakin pain when they each wanted the other to stay close but instead said smthn else. Omru came and pacified their loving bhabhi and reprimanded her for takin such a step and her reason melted their hearts ?… atleast shivay heard their convo and came to knw how much anika loves his brothers and him as well and whtever she did 3 mnths ago was a pretense.
Anika is back to the guest house and they strt their plannin again… smart move anika of letting swetlana be happy in her illusion. Nice stry abt tej’s deeds long time back which wasn’t his fault actually but swetlana used it for her selfish motives. Shivay is gettin smarter stayin with anika ?. Om feeling disgusted upon tej tht he is still caring abt business rather thn gettin his mother out. Shivay re opens the case and hands it over to bhavya… smthn intresting will surely come out of it. Rudy’s thoughts are totally valid and anika is makin a big mistake by not considering it since it could be the missing link of this case. Shivika alone in the guest house ??…. and all the others back in OM.
Anika tryin to sleep but can’t due to the operation and being the tadibaaz and ziddi person she refused for shivay’s help… their small talks which have so much pain reflectin in thm are just soo on point ??… shivay made her lie down comfortably and went off and came back aftr she slept to be next to her for sometime… he kissed her forehead ??… was waitin for one such scene. Shivay visited his badi mom as well and took care of anika. The gang is back in OM… gauri’s reply to swetlana is always a treat to read abt. Pinky is just so disgusting… she is feelin the happiest person on the world since her biggest thorn of the road is dead and she would have hugged and kissed swetlana’s hands if possible as well ??. Oberois planned to keep swetlana in her illusions but she gave them a 1000 volt ka jhatka when she said tht she knws anika is alive and shivay is with her…. it’s true if anika had died shivay would have killed swetlana by now… she is way too smart but this time she’s crossed he path with the youngsters and when they are united and together none can defeat them. Looks like bhavya gave a 440 volt ka jhatka to swetlana and she also has to go with oberois to the court hearing.
Take care di and love u ❤❤❤❤❤.
Thank you so much Maryam…thanks a lot…your opinion is amazing as always….love you lads …keep smiling and take care
Awesome fabulous mind blowing part di.eagerly waiting for next part update soon di
Love you ??Take care and stay safe di
Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Accha he..bahut accha he..khidkitod. .bass ye sutlu drama khtam kardo…iski chantomai giri se na mera ankh bahar aane lagi he.. do something of this sutlu…
Waiting for next update.
Thank you so much Arpita..this drama will end soon with a dhamaka..aise kise rulaoongi tumhe…thanks a lot…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
I am so tired of Sultana..when will she go away? Hoping soon. Great story VHM.
Thank you so much Yvone …thanks a lot…yes she will go away very soon and with a dhamaka…
This is suerb. Loved the cliff hanger. Hope Svetlana’s all plans flop.
Thank you so much Dipti…all credits to you…thanks a lot for the opportunity
amazing di….. juzz fantastic…. loved it….. shivaay is taking extreme care of anika finally he got some sense in his brain….. n yeah I think uhh should start writing books on mystery stories as no one can beat uhh in it…. have never read nicer mystery stories than dat of urs…. n yeah uhh again ended at cliffhanger ugggghhhh… n post next as soon as possible can’t wait for the next one to read…. update soon…
take care…
luv uhh di…
Thank you so much Shreya…thanks a lot…i am so glad to know you liked the Ff…writing book yes i am indeed writing a mystery book…hope it gets completed soon….love you loads dear..keep smiling and take care
Amazing episode…very nice…the mystery continues nd it will continue in ur ff….???
Swetlana is way more intelligent than oberois but as rudy say there will be some mistake…
Waiting for next…
Hoping for best…
Thank you so much Tanz…thanks a lot…mystery will end very soon…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Awsm Di…..sry I can’t comment n previous epi as I was a bit busy… Omggggg Di I hv already read twice still wanna read again…..tat pinky Ponkey …..?????? Hw could she ever do tat ….. Donno wht does this Svetlana thinking so ?….. Haan hw could she be n both places…..
Great going awesome update
Waiting for next
Thank you so much chaithu…thanks a lot
Convo btwn didi-jiju was painful…. I nearly cried (Ur sista is too much senti)…. Thnkgod jiju came to know abt Ani didi’s sacrifice…. Wanting both of them together…. I hope tat chantomai sulatana get rid off….. Congo Bhavya at least u got something abt tat sultana ( don’t ever think I started liking u…. I hate u to the core…. Just bcoz u r in my didi’s team u get appreciation)….. Hari di I think u should publish any book ?? if it so then don’t forget it to rcmd it to Ur sissy…..
Hey Ajee…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to highlight those points….book i am writing when will it get published if it will happen or not i donno…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Diii…super….ela asalu …intha baaga ela raastaru..how i say!!!
Hey chotii… thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…concept meeda adhara padi untundi rayatam..so all credits to Dipti….love you loads dear… keep smiling and take care
It is awesome dii… Can’t wait for the next update….
Hey Nikki…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Aflatoon
Anika jaan buch ke Billu ko gussa dila rahi hain
ragini is there
Hey Bro…thank you so much…thanks a lot…Ragini isn’t there…thank God for that na…keep smiling and take care
Hi harika how are you… day by day my curiosity getting increased by your gripping story. Why am I feeling that Svetlana is playing double role in your story. IS that true?. Finally Shivay understand that Anika did everything under some pressure. Oh my mata, pinky is too much. Pls do omm to her. Haha. Bye dear. As always waiting for the next part…..
Hey Katz…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you…you are right …pinky and Swethlana’s OMM planned in a dhamakedaar way…hope you will like it…it’s upcoming…i am super fine dear..how are you…keep smiling and take care
bdiya
Dhanyawad Pritika…bahut and dhanyawaad…keep smiling and take care
Awesome akka ala unnavu??? Pls… Post next one soon pls…
Thank you so much talli…thanks a lot…nenu bagane unna …nuvvu elaunnavu .
Amazing Update as usual.Loved it ❤
Shivika convo was cute as well as full of taadi. These 2 ppl can never change ?
Omru are truly sweet-hearts ?
If you can plzz finish Pinky along with Swetlana, can’t tolerate her anymore ?
Waiting for the nxt!
Lots of love ?
Thank you so much Shivika…thanks alot…your request my command…will do Swethlana’s OMM with a dhamakedaar twist involving Pinky…loads of love to you…keep smiling and take care
Amazing Update. Totally loved reading it.
So Shivaay finally knows the partial truth….
Swetlana is really chantomai. I hope u end Pinky too along with her ?
Loved the shivika conversation ?
Waiting for the next 🙂
Thank you so much Aparna..
Thanks a lot…
Your order my command…planned OMM of both …keep smiling and take care
Amazing update
Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot
Loved it to the core didi…how cheap is pinky????????celebrating anikas death….I have never seen such a cheapdi…no difference between her and svetlana…whats in that emvelope???How svetlana reached oberoi mansion so soon???lot of questions running in my mind …..plsssss update soon didi????????????
Thank you so much Logesh…thanks a lot…yess both are cheadi’s and very soon i planned OMM of them…keep smiling and take care
U were awesome di.U write so well…So impeccable.Loadzz of love to u and dipti di❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Hey SatyendraSharma…thank you so much for those amazing words for us…thanks a lot…i am glad you are liking this Ff…all credits to Dipti…loads of love to you…keep smiling and take care
Sorry Di Late comment
It took me three installments to read this ?
Loved AniRuOm bonding , Shivika romantic tadi and care , for a change Rudra was acting intelligent, Gauri’s answer to that Botox Lomdi and Bhavya’s attitude…
Moreover, the gripping storyline and ur suspense is taking the life out of me….
Plz update asap….Loadz of luv??
Hey Pui…my baby sister…thanks a lot dear…thank you so muchhhh…i am going to end the mystery very soon…some more time and the story will change it’s path….love you loads dear dear…keep smiling and take care
Har baar cliffhanger…..how can u do that to us everytime……
But awesome episode….and u were right ( your reply on Ch4) I have kindda started loving shivaay again…..
Shwetlana…..how does she come to know everything……
Pinky…I dont want to say anything about her….when a good character falls down such low, it hurts more….
Hey Nita….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…Shivaay character how i wanted to be in real IB iam trying to portray the same in this Ff…all credits to Dipti for the concept….cliffhanger part lol ? …donno how it happens everytime without my knowledge…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Happy birthday di…. Luv u lot… Stay blessed… Always be happy with akki n jiju…..
It was awesome mind blowing part….
Ff s like a triller movie… Lovely it to the core…. excited for the next part… post it soon
Hey Sissy….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…for the birthday wishes and for the amazing opinion you posted…blessed to have you in my life…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Fantastic di love it, do update this story in Watty as well please???