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ID- AarushiiSoni
Book name:Noori
Let’s start:
Thudddddd!!!!
‘Mummaa’, Riva shouted!
‘Ha dear, I am here only my baby, calm down, nothing will happen to us! ‘ Riddhima spoke petrified!
‘But that gun shot, Papa is safe na?’, Riva spoke panting heavily.
‘Wait and hope for the best!’, Riddhima tried to make Riva calm, but she is in a panic state!
A deserted place, covered with mud, seems like a border of some country. Mud is red with blood of various people.
Yes, a terror attack!!!
Terrorists are moving here and there. A sort of people smuggling!
One Terrorist(to a civilian): Hey you, don’t try to act oversmart or else I will drain my gun right this instant!!
Person: Let my family go, please, do whatever you want to do with me,et my wife and child go I beg you!!(folding hands crying bitterly)
Terrorist: Fine, I will let them go.
Saying so he ordered them to leave in two minutes. The woman was crying holding 1 year old baby who was crying even more profusely than her mother!
‘How can I leave my husband and go!!’, she shouted.
‘Fine, I’ll let you husband to go along with you’, he said.
Three of them run to save their lives!
One
Two
Three
And Boom!!
Three of them were lying lifeless on the road!!
‘He said to leave, now he and his family left the world! NOW LISTEN, anyone who’ll dare to act smart, will join them’, he shouted.
‘Mumma, we shouldn’t have go to shopping today,’ Riva said while crying silently due to terror everywhere!
‘Even I feel so,’ Said Riddhima and her eyes depicted two hours before scene.
……..
Riva: Mumma see, it’s a beautiful top, I really want this, please!!!
Riddhima: I agree it’s beautiful, but too revealing child, you are a grown up now, so wear accordingly!
Riddhima was not orthodox types, but was scared for her only baby, Riva. The news of kidnapping, smuggling, rape cases always freak her to the core. She always wants to protect her, a mother she is!
Riva: Papa, enough of shopping now I am hungry (make a cute face)
Vansh: Come then, today we’ll eat what Riva will, her hi-fi top class dishes!!(three of them chuckled)
Vansh, who was a mafia before Riva came, became a cat-like after her birth!
He was so possessive of her, no one can dare to harm Vansh RaiSinghania’s daughter!
The trio was enjoying in the cafe when suddenly gun shots were heard. Vansh immediately pulled out his gun and took his lifelines behind his back.
Riva(terrified): Papa what’s happening?!!
Vansh: Don’t know beta, be with me!!
But before they could sense or hear anything, they fainted due to a gas.
……..
Riddhima remembered how mercilessly the terrorists were pulling all the civilians like they are a toy!!
‘Papa!!!’ Riva screamed when he saw Vansh coming towards them, but in a very worst manner, limping, hairs messed, shirt torn from various places!!
‘Hey you girl, shut up or I’ll permanently zip your mouth!!’, shouted the black mask wearing man!
Riddhima and Riva immediately looked down!
‘Riddhima, Riva, you both are fine na, something happened, they did?, Vansh asked in a shushed voice, concerned!
‘No, they didn’t but they are killing many poeple who are opposing them! What if the next number is ours?’, said Riddhima crying!
‘No, nothing will happen I am with you both!, Vansh said.
‘Just think practically Vansh, please!
Riva, baby, if I wont be able to come with you both na, take care of yourself as well of you father!
And Vansh, although it’ll be difficult, but try to be both mom and dad for Riva, till her growing years, promise me vansh!!!!, said a crying Riddhima who was not in her senses and blurting utmost nonsense!
‘Mumma, how can you even say so?!!I need both of you!!
You better dont say such next time or I won’t ever talk to you!
Will go together, either to God or home!’, said Riva.
‘She is right, let’s fight till we can!’, Vansh said.
‘But still, one promise doesn’t make any problem!!, She shouted in her intimidating tone.
‘Fine! I promise I’ll take YOU and Vanya safe from here, happy??!, said Vansh irritating.
Suddenly she saw some group of terrorists coming rigt there to them, she stirred panicking!
‘Van…vansh they are com..coming here onl..y..!’, Riddhima was hiccuping due to fear.
‘Sshhh, Sweetheart, calm down!’ said Vansh, but he was himself scared.
Suddenly one of them pulled Riva by her hairs and threw her on the floor, kept his gun on a distance to her heart, and…
BANG!!!
Riddhima couldn’t saw the terrorist pointing his gun towards her lado, so she came in front of his gun and Riva, and the bullet passed through her chest!!
‘Mummaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!,’Riva shouted, panting heavily, crying, blubbering!!
‘Riddhimaaaaaa!!!!!!’, Vansh also shouted in pain!!!
‘I told you to stop shouting, but you didn’t listen, now face you doom!!!’,shreiked a terrorist.
But he was looking different from others. Not having that type of fright like other, difficulty in holding gun, not able to shout like a pro gunman!
Vansh knows everything about such people, hence in understood in a second!
There was only one bomber beside Vanya amd Vansh.
Vanya was crying heavily and was not in her senses after seeing her mother shot in front of her!!
It was not easy at all!
‘Vanu, listen, I know it isn’t easy, but see, I got a way to get out!!,’ said Vansh tryiny to be brave and not to cry, but who can do this after seeing his wife’s dead body?!
‘Wh..at?,’ Vanya said hiccuping.
Vansh pointed towards that terrorist. He picked up a gun, slowly went towards him while he was showing his back towards Vansh. Vansh hited the gun on his head brutally so that he lose his senses for sometime.
After 5 minutes,
‘I’ll start directly. I know you are Indian and they have made you like this by blackmailing about your family!! You won’t like if any Indian won’t go from here. Join with me, we will kill these terrorists! Hardly 5-6!!!, Vansh said.
‘Shut up!! I will never betray them or else they will…,’He zipped his mouth after realising what he was going to say.
‘And if you won’t tell us way, I’ll zip yours and your family mouth permanently!!!, Vansh said holding a gun in his bariton voice. No matter how Vansh is suffered and injured, he knows to protect people around him!
‘I WON’T TELL!! That’s it!’ said the terrorist.
‘How dare you!!!’ said a Vanya coming towards them. She had black belt in karate, so time to show!
‘You want another daughter to cry like me for his mother?? Don’t you have any shame?!! Can’t you understand our pain!!!’ said Vanya and started slapping, kicking and punching him in short showing her mastering skills!!
‘Sir..ahh..tell ..th..is.. girl..to le……Ave..aahhh’, he was groaning in pain but as though Vanya has a utter feeling to kill this man rigt away!!
‘Okay I’ll tell,’ and with this Vanya too stopped.
He told them a route which was beneath the border and they can go to their homes safely.
‘Why to kill them, you two go na, let others die,’ terrorist said casually.
‘Again you..,’ Vanya was about to raise her hand when Vansh stopped her.
‘Listen, we all are same, if anyone will die, I will always be in guilt to not save them. And it’s our prior duty to save our citizens. So zip your mouth and let’s kill them all.’ Vansh said holding a gun and the trio maches towards the black persons!
Thud
Thud
Thud
Thud
Within two minutes, all the terrorists were no where to be seen, oops sorry, they were seen lying on the ground with blood oozing out from their forehead.
Vansh Vanya and that terrorist kill them in a given time otherwise they would also have died.
Vansh picked Riddhima’s body for cremation amd they safely took everyone from where the terrorist cum helper told and were at that home finally!!
They did all the work necessary for cremation and finally Riddhima’s soul was at peace.
‘Mumma, see, you saved me, and I saved other daughters from crying, getting alone and..’Vanya said looking at a star but couldn’t continue due to her non stop tears
‘You are not alone, we are together. Your mother is also with us. She’ll never leave us until we let her!
She saved you, because she is a mother, and a mother can never see her child in danger!!’ said Vansh with tears in his eyes.
‘Will miss you, momma,’
‘Will miss you, sweetheart,’
Na chhodna akeli
Akeli akeli…
Maa ban ja na tu meri
Tu meri tu meri…
Yayy, done!
How was it? Tell you views please! Sorry if not nice 🙂!
Till then,
Take Care
Stay Safe
Bye!
47 Comments
Cute story 😊
Thanks dear ❤️😊❤️
Arreyy Dil ko Chhoo liya yaarrr❤❤❤. Especially the word you used ‘Laado’ ❤ My father also calls me by this name 😘. But Riddhima Died 😢! ! ! This was indeed something different 👏👏.
Awww thank u so much!! Even my mom… ❤️❤️❤️
Awesome
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Wonderful✨😍. Loved it 😘. It was emotional and something different. Heart touching OS.
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Wow…Aaru you nailed it yaar!!💖
It was so heart touching, I almost cried at the moment when Riddhima took the bullet🤧🤧
She’s a mother after all! Beautifully written and expressed!❤
Loved it….write more dear, looking forward for your next
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Definitely I’ll write more
Amazing one.
I liked it so much.
Awesome.
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🤧 Riddhima’s motherhood is too pure
Loved it 💙
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Amazing! A mother can even become a tigress to save her child.
Oh wow! So finally you started writing on wattpad too! Finally!
But right now I’m signed out of from wattpad, so I’ll check it out next month.
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Oh yeah, I know it! Otherwise u wouldn’t have missed my announcement..
All the best foe ur exams..
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Loved it 💫
I read it again! ✌🏻
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The way
Riddhima came to save her
Vansh was trying to be strong
Last stanza
I
Just can not say.
❤️❤️❤️❤️thank you dear
You show everythinh so neatly
The terrorists
I can burn their souls alive
The bravery
the love of mother
Everything is just
Perfect .
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Loved it…it was too emotional to digest even…
I have always hated sad endings or the death of the lead pairs but still this story was heart warming. Hope to read many more such stories coming from you.
Sorry for this late comment
Awww.. thank you for this!
It really means a lot❤️❤️
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No problem.. 😌