Hello everyone my name is simran(simi) i wrote this story as i was inspired by other writers nd i am bored from the present track
Dhruv : a smuglr
Kosi devi (kd): dhruv’s mother
Bihaan : main lead male
Thapki:main lead female
Shradha : thapki’s freind
Here we go,
Thapki was not in her senses when she woke up all she saw was darkness suddenly a door opened nd she saw her mother nd father coming in with some goons she was scared.
Krishnakanth(kk): she is my daughter thapki
One of the goons came near her nd touched her face to remoove the mask nd she felt uncomfortable.
Goon: yes she is the one my bhai was talking about.
The goon huged kk nd gave him 25 lakhs.
Goon: make the girl ready now she is ours.
Thapki was hell shocked dat her father sold her she became a living corpse nd then they left her with her mother poonam.
Poonam: come i will make u ready afterall most rich man of agra dhruv bhai the smglr is going to marry u come on sweet heart u r vry lucky dat u got such caring parents.
Thapki stared her mother with disgust and pain.
Thapki: no m the most unlucky girl on this planet who doest not have any body to confide in, m the most unlucky daughter whose parents sold her , m the most unlucky lover whose beloved cheated her nd now m going to be most unlucky wife who is going to marry a smuglr moreover i will be just apart of his blo*dy buisness. Nd u say m lucky? if this is lucky then i wish god never ever make anyone lucky nd she broke down.
Poonam lost her temper and slapped her for arguing.she made her ready. Thapki wore a salwar kameez nd poonam wrapped her in dupatta in such a way that her wounds on arm nd neck are not visible.
In pandey nivaas
Dhruv is shown he was beating a man ruthlessly then only shyam his servent comes nd says something in his ears dhruv was overjoyed nd jumped in excitement upon hearing the news dat love of her life thapki is coming. He ordered his servents to decorate pn like a newly wed bride.he starts shouting ma maaaa then kosi devi his mother arrived they both hugged each other.
Dhruv(d): maa thapki i found her she is coming yesss??
Kd: oh really m soo much happy for u my son but i guess u vry well know y am happy nd she smirks.
D:ofc mother thapki is not only my love but my victory over dat blo*dy bihaan he laughs devilishly? 12 yrs back i ruined evrything in his life …..he hears hooting of his servents nd fellow goons nd sees a btfl small fig who was forcefully being dragged towards him by his men he hugged her so tightly dat she almost choked nd he whispered in her ears ilu so much my baby doll my thapki but thapki was feeling disgusted in his arms coz that poor girl never allowed any man to touch her after him (lover) her beloved but that cryel guy decieved her ? she pushed dhruv away with fury nd all her might nd started wheeping she spitted on his face nd ran towards her room.
In room
Thapki closed the door behind her nd she broke down lying on the floor.
Thapki shouted: i hate this house it is like a hell for me y am i forced to stay here again dat with that blo*dy smglr who ruined evrythng in my life 12 yrs back. She shouts every place of this house makes me remember u? y u left me? I loved u so much y god y he did that injustice to me? Y i can not be loved by anyone i long for love every sec nd she sleeps on floor sobbing.
That poor girl is unaware of wat destiny has decided for her maybe her stay in this house once again fills her life with clrs….
Precap: a man enters pn thapki is hell shocked on seeing him nd so the other ppl especially dhruv nd kd the man said: swagat nhi karoge hmara(wont u welcom me…)
So wat do u thinks wat happened 12 yrs back? Y thapki hates dhruv? Who is this man? Who is bihaan nd wat connection does he have with thapki nd dhruv? Will thapki ever meet his lover? So for all the answers keep reading nd do tell me shud i continue….☺
27 Comments
I DONT UNDERSTAND THE STORY BECAUSE PROBABLY OF THE EARLY STAGES AND IS TOO SHORT…PLEASE CONTINOUS,I’LL READY IT
Ty for ur comment yes u will understand it in next parts
Hi i love that it seems intresting keep it up dear
Ty fatima dear?? thnku for comnting
Hell simi di,
how r u?
nice attempt
eagrly wating 4 next episodes..
thnks 4 writing ff..
simi di one request 4 my side plz don’t stop writing in mid..
didi please try to update soon…
take care
Ty kudrat sweety? Yup i will keep updting but m in 12 nd med so updates wont b regular nd keep reading m f9 how r u?
Kip…ei tup..
Ty darl??
Hi simi darl it was a nice start and iam curious to know the story..keep writting dr..
Ty navami keep reding dear?
Hi simi darl..i like the begning so curious to know the story…keep writting dr…..
Hello navmi di,
how r u?
do u recognise me
I’m ur lil sister… Kudrat!!!
di I love u sosoooo… much
di I miss u very badly..
kel saam ko gher chele jao ge na…
My swt hrt kudrat…how can i forget u my dr…missing u too my dr….lv u soo much…..i will leave to hostel tommorow
nice one
waiting
I think he is bihu
Ty anubhuti dear nd i will try to update soon?
Dhruv must have done something to separate Thapki and Bihaan…Bihaan was Thapki’s love…..And yes the precap man will be our beloved Bihaan Pandey ‘Swagat nahi karoge hamara?” Only Bihaan can speak like this………Take care dear..Update soon
Di my story is lil bit diff. Wait for next epi. To know who will be the man ty for reading di i will try to update soon?
Nice .keep writing.
Ty dear keep reading?
hello simi .intersting story i liked it .i also don’t like current track .keep writing good luck for ur new story .
Ty for ur cmnt manish ki deewani?? keep reading dear i will update it soon btw i guess u r a huge fan of mani sir?
Hi simi it was amazing dear.u made Dhruv a series gentle man a smuglur nice a new story man would be Bihaan n he might have come to save thapki.nice.continue dear it will be fun to read ur upcoming .n do,read n comment on my ff to dear.thank u.tc
Tysm juveria yes i like ur ff vm so i will read it nd i will update it as soon as i will get time dear ty for ur cmnt???
hi simi.. amazing start dear… waiting for nxt parts in which u ll unfold the story and finish suspense… keep writing buddy… stay blessed
Tysm alm.abi? u will get to read next part today or tmrw keep reading dear nd thnks for cmnt?
It is very nice story line.only bihaan meri bhai can do that entrying I think so bihaan and thapki loved before 12 years bihaan was dhruv’s enemy .so for taking revenge he started to love thapki and brought misunderstanding between them. Waiting for next episode
Tysm varsha for ur cmnt nd keep reading sweety?? to knw the story will update soon