Bihaan stood there smirking offensively which kindled dhruv ‘s rage . Dhruv clenched his fists in anger and glared bihaan frenziedly.
Bihaan : oh god! atmosphere is getting hotter someone ‘s getting hot under the collar.
He chuckled sarcastically fueling dhruv ‘s fury.
Dhruv spoke through clenched teeths.
Dhruv : listen , what do u think of urself ? Now stop aggravating me nd just leave….
Bihaan : voooho man , chill !! I mean…just see urself u r buning in anger rt now….
Dhruv was now somewhat irked by his provoking and fearless talks nd he just wanted to kick him out of pn asap. Dhruv growled at bihaan as he grew impatient.
Dhruv : u r getting on my nerves man , i gave u a handsome amt of money just leave .
He pointed towards the main door but his shouting fell on a deaf ear . Dhruv fumed seeing his ignorant behaviour.
Bihaan glanced at cheque blankly but to dhruv ‘s surprise bihaan broke into laughter.
Bihaan : srsly ? ?? u think that throwing this ‘ 20 lakhs ‘(emphasising particularly on amount) on me wud gain u something.
Bihaan’s facial expressions soon turned to staid ones from heedless ones and he torn apart cheque into fragments and then throwed them up in air and all the bits rained on dhruv and fell , scattered on ground.
Bihaan : what do u think? by giving me this money u will send me off nd i ” Ramandeep singh ” will heartedly accept ur blo*dy offer nd wud b a menial at ur service. Srsly did that thought popped up in ur trashy head ? Vese i feel like clapping rt now or give ur payable intellectualism a standing ovation. I mean seriously u r a complete genious man..
Remeber few hrs ago i gave 5 lakhs to that nurse for such a small work to stop u all so, i thought ur outstanding brain might have figured out that i m damned rich but u just spilled water on my hopes.
Dhruv : oh so u want mo…
B4 dhruv cud continue bihaan hushed him.
Bihaan : listen to me first man. Ji mai hun ki dassa tvanu k mai kinna raees ha vse chlo das hi denda ha agar mai chava na te tvada pandey nivaas (snapping his fingers) ais trh chutkiya vich khareed lava….(now what shud i tell u how much rich i m ohk let me tell u if i want then i can buy this pandey nivas in seconds)
Dhruv ‘s jaw dropped to ground nd he was hell shocked so was others.
Dhruv ( himself ) : i guess he’s trying to fool me no i can not trust him.
Witnessing dhruv tensed just gave contentment to bihaan nd a smirk escaped from his lips.
Dhruv : ohk , if u r rich then y r u working with sahir as his slave ?
Bihaan : it isnt ur bzns that y m i working with him but still to assure u that i m wealthy i can only tell u that we r partners. Right sahir ?
Bihaan shot a burning glare at sahir threatning him to agree. Sahir nodded leaving dhruv nd everyone astounded.
Dhruv in a split second suddenly held bihaan at gunpoint bihaan being a “typical b for bihaan pandey ” wasnt affected by his move rather he gripped dhruv ‘s tanned wrist firmly trying to dig his trimmed nails in his flesh. Dhruv was bombshelled with his fearless gesture and his hand in which he held revolver quaked vigourously . Bihaan’s lips curved a bit.
Bihaan roared in a ear piercing, almost lifetaking voice .
Bihaan : shoooootttt…
His voice only encouraged shivering of dhruv ‘s hand and dhruv was trying to put up with the sitaution that- what’s happening y his hand isnt Obeying him ?
Bihaan now witnessing a aghast dhruv finally made up his mind to make his move & turned his head
180 ° s facing staircase with a joy spreaded on his visage he called out a beautiful name ,
Bihaan : Thapkiiiii….tum
Her name left everyone astounded and they tunred their heads towards staircase in nanoseconds while bihaan in a fraction of sec twisted dhruv ‘s arm and took hold of weapon. Bihaan positioned gun at his tmpl leaving everyone thunderstriked by his action especially dhruv.
Bihaan : oh god !! What ‘s this dhruv ur destiny cheated on u ch…ch…ch (made a sound in order to sympathise with him but sarcastically ) u shud b more cautious while handeling these toys.
Bihaan chuckled with his cute dimples hidden behind his false beard.
Bihaan : i feel pity for ur filthy head.
He now made his hold on gun a lil bit stronger while dhruv groaned as mouth of gun pressed hard against his forehead.
Bihaan recalled all the past incidents when this man affronted and dishonored thapki numerous times he wud have gifted him death then & there but, he stopped not bcz he was scared but for the sake of thapki . Although , he had known her since few days but he figured out that girl like thapki wud never approve of killing someone even, a person like dhruv. So , he controlled himself. There was a fire burning inside him which was clearly visible in his eyes which turned coal red from white as his blood boiled.
Bihaan : u shud always b vigilant enough see in a fraction of sec what happened and my hands wud not shake in pressing this trgr at all, trust me.
Bihaan suddenly put his gun down and placed his hands on dhruv ‘s shldrs.
Bihaan : listen, dhruv m not here to kill anyone. It wud b btr if u do ur work nd let me do mine till the time thapki dsnt gets f9 i wont leave.
Dhruv : what is she to u ?
Dhruv ‘s this question ringed a bell inside bihaan. Bihaan paused for a moment thinking for an answer and then being honest he answered.
Bihaan : idk….
Nurse entered the scene.
Nurse : sir , s…she is…
Bihaan (panicking) : what happened ? Is she alright ?
Nurse : sir u plz come…
Bihaan rushed to thapki ‘s room and a shaking thapki welcomed him. Thapki was loosing her life nd her flimsy body bounced up and down showing her lungs struggling to catch breath.
Bihaan ‘s hrt skipped a beat to see her in this condition. His brain was going numb and his hrt refused to pump blood. Bihaan with a torpid body approched thapki and somehow managed to speak.
Bihaan : d..d..did u called doc ?
Nurse : yes sir he’s on the way….
Bihaan : r u nuts… i m..mean u shud do something till the time he comes i percieve u are a nurse.. do something.
While bihaan was yelling on her doc arrived and hurried towards thapki pushing bihaan aside. He injected some medicinal drug inside her & asked nurse and bihaan to rub her palms and feets but all went in vain.
Doc : now only god can save her…or if she gains consciousness..
Bihaan ‘s whole world turned upside down he felt that everything shattered. A white pallor dispersed on his face while his lacrimal gland started doing its work nd secreted saline fluid and dampened his bearded cheeks nd caused a burning sensation on his face as it evaporated , heating up his face.
All other animals of pandey zoo reached up to have a look but , b4 they cud enter bihaan slammed wooden door on their faces leaving them astonished and tensed. Bihaan with shivering hands holded thapki ‘s lifeless hand while her body was still shaking. Bihaan gulped down his saliva to moisten his dry throat a bit and then managed to speak.
Bihaan : t…thapki ik u r listening plz wake up thapki….plz u can not leave me like this thapki plz…. stop being stiff-necked and wake up.
Bihaan pleaded her to open her eyes but they were still shut.

Bihaan : thapki see if u will not open ur eyes then i wont talk to u is that c..clear ? Acha dekho tusi agar ais trh kroge na te mai tvade bihaan nu shikayat kar danga fer o v tvade nal ldega..(f9 if u will do like this then i will complaint to ur bihaan & then he will fight with u)
Aree thapki i once again misinterpreted ur and bihaan ‘s relation come on at least fight with me… umm , so u will not talk to me ohk then i will beat bihaan… ik he is ur frnd come on now open ur eyes… stop me..
Fine u will not wake up ohk, i will… i will spoil ur room and then u only will clean it so think m counting till 3 ohk , 1…2..3..
Bihaan was trying to provoke her, trying to talk to her. He knew that he was spewing spilth but , he was loosing his head seeing her like that. He was now drowning in slough of despond . His eyes were even not ready to obey his command and they too poured their pain out , his legs infact refused to help him and they trembled convulsively forcing bihaan to his knees and finally a helpless soul broke down and howled. ? he in btwn his weeps uttered only one name filled with passion and emotions as if his life depended on that one name – THAPKI..

Thapki was heeding everything yet was acting to b deaf . Thapki didnt wanted to wake up, she didnt wanted to again face that brute or be the part of this cruel earth so she decided to die. But, bihaan ‘s breaking voice pierced her hrt and forced her to think. She was now in a world where only her innervoices were present devoid of all the cruality. A tornado was going on inside that little soul.
Thapki’s inner voices :
Soul : hey, thapki m ur soul. what r u doing u can not be defeated so easily. Thapki fight we cnt loose nd can u leave bihaan? . He will be broken when he will learn about ur death. Uk that vry well what u mean to her ?
Mind : hey , thapki m ur brain dnt u think by doing this u will put urself once again in grave danger , in hands of a monster. Y to opt for difficult option when u cud always opt for simpler one. Sometimes its imp to think about urself nd bihaan he is nobody to us.
Hrt : hey , m ur hrt . Thapki plz help me i can not bear this pain any more dhruv is an atrocious man. Thapki whenever he beats u i….i i just break. Thapki plz show some merci on me i cnt tollerate any further torture by him uk that vry well how much i suffered bcz of him. Now ,i m tired i dnt wanna live nd ik u too r tired. Lets leave thapki….
Death : hey , i dnt need to give any introduction . I came to take u lets leave. I will save u from this inhumane world . I came here to embrace u and keep u with me forever where no one will touch u. U will be secure in my brawny arms. Come thapki time is rushing.
Death forwaded his hand to thapki and thapki was about to grab it b4 another voice interupted her.
Life : stop being coward , u cnt die like this and let him win . U can not do injustice to urself nd its not only an injustice to me but to every girl who is quarry of domestic violance we need to fight back. When i beat u down dare to fight back girl. U cnt just give up. Its better to die fighting rather than die giving up.
Thapki : i m sorry i cnt…i i jjust cnt m too ffragile to do that…m nnot worth fighting to anyone. I i m jjust uuseless nobody lloves me i want to do something for me now…i wwanna die.
Thapki grabs the hand of death and pleaded death to engulf her to take her in its world . She wanted a deep sleep to carry her in its arms .
Thapki ‘s body stopped shaking while her palms and feet freezed. Bihaan sat their frozen now it was his time to react.
Bihaan : thapkiiiiiiiii noooo u can not do this u can not leave me i will save u is that clear.
He pats her cheeks harshly.
Bihaan : wake up god damn it, thapkiiiiiiiiii noooo u cnt do this wake up thapkiiiiiiii…..
Death was taking thapki forever into another world away from bihaan but to its and thapki’s surprise someone held thapki ‘s hand tightly. Thapki turned around frightened and was welcomed by a furious bihaan giving her death glares.
Thapki’s pov
Bihaan : till i m alive u can not leave me . Come with me . I wont let u die.
Thapki tried to free her hand but bihaan being adamant didnt freed her wrist rather held it more firmly.
Thapki : let mme go bihaan i i ccnt live i nneed to go.
Bihaan : gajab !! Do u think that this b for bihaan will let u go so easily. U have to come back for me i wont let u leave me alone here crying for u , for what r u punishing me ? No i cnt thapki u have to come.
Thapki shoved bihaan away with all her might and took her leave.
Present time ,
Doc : she is dyng.
Bihaan : noooooo thapkiiiiii nooo thapkiiiii.
He rushed towards the small temple present in her room and joined his hands praying for his life , his thapki.

Bihaan : thapkii no p..plz dnt do this u cnt be so cruel to me.
Thapki’s pov
Thapki cud clearly hear his screaming and tried her best to ignore. Her name from his mouth felt heavenly but his painful voice broke her hrt. Her hrt who himself chose death was now being attracted to the man shouting suppressing her , brain and death.
Hrt : thapki we shud fight back. I guess i wanna live.
Thapki : but , we ccnt i i cant m ssry.
Bihaan ‘s each scream teared her apart nd forced her to change her decision she took her each step with a heavy hrt. She kept her hands on her ears to ignore him but all in vain.
Bihaan : thapkiii thapkiii thapkiii thapkiiiii…. u cnt leave me…
Thapki ‘s hrt was now being wild and he did what he wanted to ,he dragged thapki forcefuly towards bihaan. Thapki was now not left with any choice but to live and she , her brain was conquered while her hrt , soul , bihaan and life rejoiced.
Present time ,
Suddenly , thapki snuffed hard grasping bihaan ‘s attention and leaving doc & his comapnion startled.
Bihaan rushd to her. He gently caressed thapki ‘s hair while a small curve escaped his lips as he was overwhelmed with joy.
Bihaan (with teary eyes) : doctor , she is alive…
Bihaan with all his love called her out.
Bihaan : thapki wake up.
Bihaan kissed her forehead . As soon his lips brushed against her forehead thapki felt a shiver ran down her spine and butterflies in her stomach.
She slowly opened her eyelids , but blinking as intense & bright lights made their way in her eyes. As soon as thapki ‘s gaze fell on raman standing in front of her she felt her hrt sinking in dissapointment. She expected bihaan to b there but he was not . For a min she stared him blankly but suddenly felt a stinging pain on her forearm when sleep again took over her . Bihaan panicked as she again shut her eyelids.
Bihaan : doctorrrr y..y she again closed her eyes.
Doctor : bcz i injected sleeping drug in her coz she need some sound sleep. Congrats mr bihaan u won. Its no less than a miracle.
Bihaan hugged doctor as he was on cloud 9 rt now.
Doctor took his leave while nurse was still there to take care of thapki. As door opened all pn memebers barged in disturbing bihaan..
Bihaan : oh !! see who is here all the clowns together…lol XD
Bihaan just wanted to laugh and smile.
Sahir ignored his provoking remark.
Sahir : howz tha….
He was abt to speak but something stopped him may b his conscience. Piu , sahir , dhruv or kosi no body of them had courage to ask bihaan about thapki ‘s condition bcz they all felt that some or the other way they r responsible for her this state particulalrly dhruv who was completely at fault. But shradha had guts to ask him coz she ‘s the only one who never hurted her.
Shradha (politely) : how ‘s she raman ?
Bihaan was not at all angry at her coz he knew vry well she ‘s the one who never hurted his life and he replied her sounding as much polite as he cud.
Bihaan : she is out of danger doc have given her sleeping med so that she cud have some rest.
Shradha sighed in releif and then flashed her all the 32 bright teeths out and then hugged bihaan.
Bihaan felt awkward and then detached her lil bit rudely and gazed her weirdly.
Bihaan : stay in ur limits miss…
Shradha : i just wanted to thank u nd there ‘s no big deal in it.
She huffed and then positioned herself beside sleeping beauty,thapki
Others left.
Hall room ,
Bihaan was distributing sweet boxes to all the servants . He wanted to spread happiness in all pn and then as he felt exhausted he sat on bouncy sofa , and allowed sleep to take controll over him.
Bihaan was sleeping with a contentment diffused on his face as he was knackered and his energy was washed out by the incidents which took place. Sahir driven by brotherly love took a check on him in case if he needs anything after all bihaan was everything to him and covered him with blanket while bihaan snuggled in it comfortably with a cute smile lingering on his face. Sahir ‘s lips too carved a smile seeing him happy while he placed a cution underneath his bony head. Everyone, was bizy with their works nd happy about thapki except one person who was combusting in flame of contrition – piu. She was sitting in a murky store room cursing herself for doing this too thapki whom she considered her sis. Piu switched on lights hastily as she felt sensation of worming things around her. As she lit the room piu ‘s fig welcomed her gazing her through mirror. Seeing herself in mirror just made her feel disgusted , her face made her hark back to thapki ‘s condition and that thought made her flesh creep and in a nanosec. she took hold of iron rod resting on ground and throwed it on mirror breaking it into pieces.
Piu was growing insane and crazy in remoarse. she sobbed loudly and her sobs filled the room. Sahir hrd someone crying when he was passing by the room. He came to room and a frightened piu , sitting hugging her legs close to her chest welcomed him.
Sahir panicked seeing her like that and hurried towards her. He sat down on his knees making his level equal to her and placed his palm on her shldr he spoke softly in a comforting and consoling voice.
Sahir : piu….r u alright ? Thapki is alright now no need to worry .
Piu lifted her face up to catch a glimpse of the face comforting her. Sahir was shocked to see her face completely damped with tears and her eyes swollen and dark circles clearly visible under her eyes which were sign of her sleepless night.
Sahir cupped her face and wiped her face but still tears left its traces on her milky skin.
Sahir : hey shhh !! Piuuuuuuu what happened tell me , did someone said something to u ? Did anyone do something ? Did..
Sahir was cut in btwn and bewildered by piu ‘s sudden move of enclasping him in a hug . She wanted to seek some protection , care in someone’s arms and to her surprise that arms were of the person whom she hated yet most comforting arms those were.
Her eyes refused to obey her and floded as a fresh set of tears was ready to roll down her cheeks and bedewed sahir ‘s dry shirt. Sahir cudnt resist and he too reciprocated while his hands caressed her hair gently. Sahir broke the unwanted silence in the room.
Sahir : what happened ?
Piu : m s…sry t..thapki b..bhabhi is in t..this condition b..bcz of me.
Sahir thought that she is affected to see her like that that’s y she is blaming herself.
Sahir detached himself from her when piu ‘s bleeding palm attracted him. Sahir took out his hankercheif and tied it around her bleeding palm and then they both gazed in each other ‘s eyes.
Sahir (cupping her face) : shhh.. u think too much… its not ur mistake in fact its nobody’s sometims situations are bad that ‘s it…ohk now compose urself bcz we need to take care of thapki.
Sahir stood up followed by piu. He smiled at her and caressed her cheek assuring her that everything will become f9 and then turned to leave when piu again started ,stoping sahir at door itself.
Piu : i…i k..knew that thapki bhabhi was being beaten by dhruv bhai…
Sahir ‘s facial expression in a sec turned to shocked ones with agony and anger mixed in it. He turned back to face her and approched her.
Sahir placed his hands on her shldr this time squeezing them roughly.
Piu moaned.
Piu : u…u r hurting me….
Sahir : what did u say rt now
He spoke with his eyes blazing in anger.
Piu was scared by his look and wasnt able to utter anything.
Sahir squeezed her shldr harshly.
Sahir (shouting) : speakk…..
Piu : i…i went to dhruv ‘s bhai room yesterday night to tell him t..that thapki bhabhi was hugging some man on terrace but not finding h..him in his room i went to thapki bhabhi ‘s room thinking that h..he might b t..there but , when i reached in corridor i hrd her loud groans nd then i rushed to her room to have a look , b..but what i s..saw left me hell shocked dhruv bhai was beating her . The room was dark but the moonlight escaping through window made everything visible. Thapki bhabhi’s feets were full of blood cause glass pieces were pierced in it.
Fb ,
Dhruv slapped thapki due to which blood oozed out from the corner of her lips. He then took hold of her hair and with her hair only he pulled her up to stand on her bleeding feets while she moaned and then pushed her in the direction of wardrobe where her head hit against it and blood made its way out . Thapki ‘s eyes now were tired of crying a painful sleep was engulfing her but b4 she shut her eyes dhruv throwed a glass full of water on her face and then slapped her and sat beside her twisting her already wounded arm.
Dhruv : what the hell do u think u r ? U r going to be mrs dhruv pandey and romancing with that blo*dy slave raman.
Thapki : w..whats my f..fault i..if he c..comes clo..se to me….
Dhruv twisting her another arm now..
Dhruv : stop arguing sweethrt…uk na i cnt bear anyone touching u i just hate it….if u want to b touched tell me i will do that…
Thapki : chiii chii , s..shut up !! Its n…n..not my fault if he touched m..me i didnt i…invited him & h..he was j..j..just helping in t..treating my wound w..which was given by u. Nd i…if u h..have guts t..then fight with him. When he c…comes in f..front of u ur body shivers w..with fear…
Thapki ‘s words just oiled already burning volacano in him more. Dhruv was now equivalent to beast…
Dhruv : thapkiiiiiiiiii how dare u ? ??
He pulled her by her arm and then tossed her head against wall making her vision more blurred.
Dhruv cupped her face.
Dhruv : d..dnt do this baby y r u forcing me to punish u so indurately . I will leave u at once just say i…love..u to me.
Thapki widening her swolllen eyes in disgust.
Thapki : listen t..t..then btfl 3 words…i…i..i w…will n..never..
Dhruv ‘s out burst was now almost at its destination.
Dhruv slapped her again this time 100 times harder than b4 leaving thapki’s cheek vibrating in pain.
Dhruv grabbed her waist and pulled her closer .
Dhruv :u dnt like my touch na u like that raman ‘s and sahir’s touch watch me now.
He tore her sleeves apart exposing her milky shoulders and leaving thapki bolt out of the blue. She was about to cover her shoulders when he tore her suit from her waste making her waist visible.
Thapki tried hard to escape from his grip and then she felt anger arousing in her and that resulted in a perfect spit on dhruv ‘s face. He tore another peice of her clothing at her this action and laughed devilishly and in front of her wiped his face with that piece only and throwed on thapki ‘s face.
Thapki felt loathed. She screamed.
Thapki : l..leave meeeee……u bast*rd l..eave me…ahhhhhhh go aaaaawayyyyyy….goooo
Seeing all this a loud moan escaped from piu ‘s lips and dhruv turned around but b4 he cud see her she hid behind a wall. Dhruv didnt wanted anybody to see all this and he throwed thapki ‘s languid body on hard floor and left.
Present time ,
Piu broke down completely as she finished narrating sufferings of thapki. Sahir was astounded and his hrt melted in pain thinking abt thapki. He yelled on piu.
Sahir : how cud u do this ? Nd y u did this ? U knew..u knew ab…out her condition still u didnt tell anyone y piu tell me y….
Piu : bcz i wanted her to suffer.
Sahir : whattttt?
Piu : i guess what i did was right at that time acc to me . Thapki bhabhi slapped me in front of everyone during ring ceremony so what i did was right.
Sahir held her shldrs firmly and shaked her violantly.
Sahir : shut up ! U witch , how cud u do this, stoop so low ? To take ur revenge u almost killed her. Today bcz of u everything is shattered. Thapki is shattered , my & raman’s relation is shattered . This whole pn is shattered . Ohk congo man , u won nd she lost . Happy ? piu u r a pathetic girl. Have u ever wondered from what is that girl going through ?
Piu : b..but i didnt mean to hurt her i just wanted my revenge…that’s it nd now m feeling guilty.
Sahir was about to slap her but he controlled himself .
Sahir : m not like u ,cheap. Nd u r not guilty u r just repenting so that u can live peacefuly that’s it miss selfish. Nd stop shedding ur crocodile tears it wont affect me.
Sahir left. Piu sat there thinking about sahir ‘s words.
Sahir : what did u do piu ? U ruined everything…. if bihaan bhai gets to knw about it he will brake down no i cnt let him knw the truth about piu i will take all the blame.
Thapki’s room,
Everyone was present there as doc told them that thapki will wake any moment. Thapki opened her eyes allowing light to enter. Everyone smiled at her. As soon as her gaze fell on bihaan she started screaming.
Thapki : noooo….go leave me….goooooo leave me. G…ggggooooo noooooooo
Bihaan ran to thapki. He cupped her face.
Bihaan : calm down thapki shhh calm down.
Thapki jerked him away leaving bihaan shocked.
Thapki : d..dnt touch me…i hhate u….
I hhate u…
As all these things were going on police arrived.
Inspector : mr raman we r here.
Bihaan ‘s gaze fell on police and he composed himself.
Bihaan : u may record her statement.
Ins. : thapki g dnt worry u may tell us that what happened with u ? Y u commited suicide ? Did anyone forced u ?
Thapki : y..yes…
Ins : who ?
Thapki : R..ramndeep singh….
Her ans brought a earthquake for everyone. Raman didnt knew how to react coz his mind was numb trying to cope with situation b4 he cud say nything police handcuffed him.
Inspeactor : u r under arrest.
They took a broken and bewildeted bihaan away with them.
Hello everyone so sry for a late update, ik this chap is not good. So sry for that. But soon everything will b sorted.But somehow i managed to write it with the help of my frnd as m not able to type for such a long duration so she typed half of it for me. I had an accident yesterday in which my hand and leg got hurt. M not well right now guyyyz. So i just narrated this part to her i havnt red it also till now. I wud try to update soon bcz m free , on bed rest for 4 to 5 days so will surely try to update.
Love u all ?????
If u liked it do hit star nd loved it then comment too.
An – sankar will not b added in story as most of the rdrs refused. So as i said wud go with majority so m not adding her.
16 Comments
Off poor Bihaan I hope everything is fine yet.
Tysm garima darl ?? dnt wry everythung will b f9
Nice but too much pain i want to see happy thahaan and funny thahaan .
But good job and i hope u feel better !!
Tysm deary nd yes u will surely get happy thahaan dnt wry m glad u like it sweety nd ty for ur wishes ??
Hello simi di,
di kya kiiaaa aapne…
ab kese ho aap..
phle s kuch better lag rha h..
di plzzz apna dhyen rka kroooo…
ese bimaar par jaoge to kese kaam chlega, aap ko aage pdna h ki nahi…
di please apna dhyen rkooo.. Nd plz don’t worry about updates..
we will manage.. Ab bhai jaan h to jhaan h !!!
so promise me..
Yep kudrat jaan h to jahaan h nd yes surely pdna h u r a true sweethrt nd rt now all i m thinking abt is my health so dnt wry m taking good care of myself lu babe ?? ur wishes will make me f9 soon ??
Ok I forgot this one,,,yayyyyyyyy sankar is not in the story..thank goodness.i am really happy..n the last part tho..I was really confused reading it..its out of getting scared I think..she was tortured by the bull as he came closer to her so yes she doesn’t want him to be close to her again as she don’t want dhruv to torture her again..I guess..dhruv would be at cloud nine now??..but hope sahir does something to get him out of the jail..n yes over all loved ittt.n love u tooo tooo toooo tc n stay healthy
Yep as all the rdrs wished not to add her nd dnt wry everhthing will b sorted dnt wry no one can separate thahaan ?? nd yep sahir will surely help him nd dhruv he is a brat ughhh…
Vese rt now ur story is something for ehich i m craving but i m wtng as health is the first priority.
U too tc nd dnt forget ilu ilu ilu ??
Sorry di m poora cmt nahi ker paae..
Aap bangla Saheb gae the kya..
Di aaj ka episode suchi btaoo aap n bhothnat ki or vo dik rhi thi..
Her scene superb tha..
Apna dhyan rekna or jaldi next post ker dena plzzzzz
Love u lot
Take care.. !!
Ty deary ilu ? yep i went to bangla saheb ? will surely try to update soon girl dnt wry nd ur wishes means alot to me
oh sad epi….poor bihu….but i knw everything will b fine soon…..ur story is very uniqe keep writting ….update asap….t.c…l.u…
Yep it was sad and everything will b sorted definitely ?? ty nd it means alot to me that u find it unique ? ty bae ?
Nd ilu 2 ?
Nice part but the fully pain. and waiting for next part
Ty rifa babe ?? yep it was painful will surely update soon
Waiting for ff dear pls update it asap pls?
Aww tysm bihaan_love well ur wait will b over bcz i have submitted article ??