Hey guys , this my first ff and I m big fan of thahaan. So please do comment.
My ff starts with thapki get to know the truth
Thapki : so it was maa. Who was with bihaan that night but why she did that?? I want to know entire truth. There is one person who can tell me.
(after some time)
Dadi see Thapki is going somewhere.
Dadi : thapki beta, where are u going ??
Thapki : dadi ma, I am just going to meet my friend. May I ?
Dadi: yes my child, enjoy.
Thapki leave.
AT PAAN’S HOUSE
Paan: just coming
(paan open the door)
Paan get shocked seeing thapki infront of the door.
Paan: bhabi , aap yaha?!! Is everything ok?
Thapki: no paan bhaiya , everything is not ok.
Paan: what happened to my bhihaan bhai??
Thapki : nothing , he is okay. Everyone is okay in panday nivas. Can I come in?
Paan : yes,yes bhabi sorry.
Thapki : paan bhaiya, I know that on my weeding night , the person who was with bihaan is no one else but maa.
Paan (in shocked voice) : bhabi , how do u know this?
Thapki : it is not more important thing. Important thing is why did bhihaan and maa do this ? you are only person who can tell me.
Paan : but bhabi …..
Thapki : please paan bhaiya, I m requesting you.
Now paan find him helpless , so he told the entire truth to thapki.
How vasundhara did all this and bihaan is innocent.
Thapki (in mind): maa, why did u do this??? U are the one who ruin my life, my happiness, my everything.
Thapki starts crying.
Paan: bhabi, please don’t cry.
He give glass of water to thapki.
Thapki : paan bhaiya , please don’t tell anyone that u tell me the truth not even bihaan.
Paan : okay . I will not tell anyone.
Thapki leaves from paan’s house.
While walking on road thapki recall all her sweet moments with bihaan. And also his respect towards maa. Teares
Episode end.
Precap : not decided .
(heeyy guys ,plz tell me your reviews , if I do any kind of mistake in writing . plz plz do comment. )
Thanks for reading. Thanks to those ff writers who motivate me.
15 Comments
nice…………..plz continue with long epi
thanks dear.
Awesome episode. Waiting eagerly for nxt episode.???
thank u ….. try to upload as soon as possiable
Amazing start Hun, keep up the great work. Please do read my ff called destiny vs love and comment some ideas.
And good luck on your next episode~Nusz
thank u , i love ur writing. waiting for that new entry.
Nice ……. Waiting for next episode….!
thanks nisi. 🙂
Very nice…good luck. ..plz make it lengthy. ..
nice start but it was quite short…you could elongate the truth revelation part , also add some emotion too…waits for the next episode
nice start. ?
Kaash asli wala show mein bhi aisa hi huya hota………. Nce episode……. Lve it
welcome friend……..iam really enjoyed it.keep going.
Superb yaarrr………….
continue …….
Well done.Plz make it little bit long if possible.