Hey everyone! Here’s the first shot on the confession ff. I changed the plotline a little. So in the story below, all the dilpreet drama didn’t happen and Gauri hasn’t returned to her mom either. She has been missing for the last 3 months. Which means no one knows what happened to her after she parted ways with Om.
STORY…
It has been 3 months since she had left him. Omkara had gone back to being angrykara. Or rather, sadkara. He tried searching for her everywhere but couldn’t find her. She had not even told her mom about her whereabouts. Om tried contacting all her friends and everyone she knew but nobody knew where she had gone. Even the great Shivaay Singh Oberoi tried getting information about her whereabouts but it was like she didn’t even exist, there was no trace of her!
It’s not like he didn’t think about going back to taking drugs to find some peace but then he didn’t want to disappoint Gauri anymore than he already did. So he fought the urge to give in. And living in this pain and guilt was his punishment. Om had even gone back into depression but with the help of his brothers, he stood up and decided to not give up finding her. He knew he had to keep trying and he had to make things right with her. This time Omkara had to win Gauri. He just hoped she was safe wherever she was.
As they say, one doesn’t know the value of something until they loose it. This was what Omkara had to understand now.
At night in Om’s room
Om is crying, talking to a picture of Gauri
Om: Day 96 of trying to find you. Gauri I know I’m an idiot and a fool for letting you go, for DOUBTING you but please, please show me some sign of where you are. I swear this time I’ll make sure to make everything right. Just give me one chance. I’ll give you answers to all your questions, about what you mean to me, about our relation, everything. I swear Gauri, just one chance is all I need.
Hamari adhuri kahani plays….
Paas aaye
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
(Om remembers Gauri and their close moments)
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..
(He remembers their first meeting and their marriage when he saved her)
Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan..
(He remembers how she did a makeover for him to get inspired, her playing with the colors and how he painted her)
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan..
(He cried thinking of how he doubted on her and hurt her with his words that day. And how she tore the card she brought for him him and threw the pieces away. Om thinks of her words “you’ll never see me again” and how she walked away leaving him in his knees reading the message from the torn pieces ‘i love you’)
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani
(By this point he breaks down and remembers their meeting in bareilly in reverse)
Khushbuon se teri yunhi takra gaye
Chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye
(He remembers their close moments and how she always helped him but he always misunderstood her)
Jannatein agar yahin
Tu dikhe kyon nahin
Chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan..
Intezaar tera sadiyon se kar raha
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yahaan..
(He thinks of his state without her, filled with guilt since the last three months. How he replayed everything a million times in his head. How he wished he could rather kill himself than hurt her with his words.)
Humari adhoori kahani
Humari adhoori kahani
Humari adhoori kahani
Humari adhoori kahani
(He thinks of how each time Gauri went away, she would come back knowing that he needed her. But this time she didn’t)
Pyaas ka yeh safar khatam ho jayega
Kuch adhura sa jo tha poora ho jayega
(He imagines meeting her and begging for her forgiveness. And promising her that he’d never be this stupid again) (NOT A FLASHBACK)
Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mil gaye do jahaan
Har taraf hai milan ka samaa
(He thinks of their moments during shivika wedding preparations, how she got in the dangal fight instead of him, and how they tried to bring shivika closer)
Doliya hain saji, khushbuein har kahin
Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan..
(He thinks about how he wished Gauri was present during shivika wedding, but she had gone without even telling him)
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani
(Omkara cries uncontrollably)
Song ends…
Om: Jab jab man kiya
Ghum ki iss samunder mein doobney ki
Teri yaadon ne mujhe pookare
Tera hasta chehra
Teri pyaari awaaz
Mujhe keech lathi hain
Teri or
(Tranlation:
Whenever I felt like drowning in this sea of pain, your memories called my name. Your smile, your sweet voice pulled me towards you.)
Omkara: I’ll find you Gauri, I’ll make it up to you. I promise.
Scene shifts to shivika’s room
Anika: Shivaay, can I talk to you?
Shivaay: Haan bolo Anika (yes, tell me Anika)
Shivaay was stating at his phone and Anika gets angry.
Anika: Shivaay!!! I’m trying to talk to you but no, you are busy in your phone only, why didn’t you marry that phone then? Why did you marry me?
Shivaay: (keep phone aside) Anika, Anika I’m sorry. I was just checking if there were any updates of finding Gauri….
Anika: Did you find anything (Anika asks hopefully)
Shivaay : no…
Hurt was visible in his voice. Gauri was like a sister to him, no she was his sister. He felt terrible that he couldn’t do anything about all this. He didn’t even know if she was safe and away from danger. He had promised to protect her when she tied him Rakhi but he couldn’t even stand up for her…he wasn’t even there when Om made all those allegations against her. He felt like he had failed as a brother.
Anika understood what Shivaay was thinking and so she tried to console him. Even she missed her devrani and her bubbly nature, Gauri was like a sister to her as well. She just hoped that they could find her soon, without her the house felt too gloomy.
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The next day Omkara left for Gurgaon for some buisiness work. He was secretly hoping he could find a trace of Gauri somewhere there. For some reason his heart said she would be there. He had given up listening to his heart, but she made him listen to it, after all, his heart always said she was right, but he kept listening to his brain, he heart always wanted to be hers but his brain always reminded him everyone betraying him. But now, his heart was hers, and there was no changing it, she had filled life in his lifeless world, he was the canvas and she was the paint, without her he was just an empty painting.
The journey to Gurgaon was a quite one, it reminded Om of his journey with Gauri when they went to take the idol. How she played bhajan songs and how she ordered way too much when the got down to have food. A smile made its way on his lips. He remembers how Gauri had accidently pepper sprayed his eyes and how she gave him directions when he had to fights goons.
On reaching Gurgaon, he got out of his car to look around and inform his family that he had reached safely. He looked around for network (guys, this is a village area) but was not able to connect to call. He tried again and again but he couldn’t and then his phone switched off due to low charge, so he hit with his leg on the wheel in anger.
“Dammit” he cursed.
A voice: Oye jaathadhari uncle! Why are you hurting that poor car? Was it its fault that it brought you till here?
Without realising what the voice just said om turns around. He finds a small boy of around 10years
Om: Heyyyyy uncle kisko bola? (Whom did you call uncle?)
And then it dawned upon him what the boy had just called him…
His first meeting with Gauri played in his mind.. “Jaathadhari hippie”
Omkara(whispers): Gauri…
The boy: ab uncle ko uncle nahi tho main bro bulao? ( if I won’t call an uncle as an uncle then should I call you bro?)
Saying this the boy starts laughing.
Omkara feels a wave of hope and relief. He smiles looking at the boy, thinking that he must have met Gauri. The boys thought om was weird.
Om: yeh jaathadhari koun hain?(who is this jaathadhari)
Boy: jaathadhari is a name of sankar ji.
Om (in mind): jathadhari, sankar ji … Gauri….please I just hope it’s you…I just hope he knows you.
Om: Who told you that?
Boy: Didi
Om: Which didi?
Boy: Oye chirote, main kyun bolun? (Oye boy, who should I tell you?)
Saying this, the boy looks to the other side.
Omkara’s face lits up hearing chirote!!! This was definitely his Gauri! He felt like dancing around but before that he had to find out where she lived. He let out a broad smile which made the boy think that this man was definitely weird.
Omkara: Mera pyaara chirote(my lovely boy), I’ll but you icecream, will you tell me about your didi in return?
Boy: Haaawww!! Youre trying to bribe an innocent and good boy like me!? You’re so mean!
Omkara: Nooo I’m not bribing you, I’m just asking you. Please tell me.
Om puts his hands up in defence.
Boy: Why should I tell you about my didi? Why do you want to know about her? Are you some kidnapper? Or the bad guy who troubles others? What if you want to hurt her?
The boy eyes him suspiciously.
Omkara: beta, I’m asking you who is she, please tell me, it’s important.
Boy: She lives near my house
Omkara: Please tell me how does she look
The boy again eyes his suspiciously
He goes to the tea shop near by and buys two icecreams.
Om: here is your icecream. Now tell me
The boy hesitates a little bit then decided to say
Boy: she’s very cute, has big big eyes and a small nose, she’s small in height too but has long hair. She’s very beautiful like an angel. We all love her a lot…all the children of my colony loves her!
Om smiles and thinks of Gauri walking around giggling, her hair swaying. He thinks of how she would widen her eyes in surprise..Only if his phone was on , he could’ve showed the boy her pic and ask him but that was not possible now.
Omkara: acha beta, what’s her name?
The boy stays still listening to the question and smiles sheepishly before making a thinking face.
Boy: uncle..
Om: call me bhaiya
Boy: (looks at om from up to down) ok bhaiya….I’m not sure I know her name…wait let me think….we all call her chiraiya didi….but what did she tell me that day…
Boy(in mind): it was something related to goddess Durga I think
Omkara (in mind): weird how he doesn’t know her name but claims to love her. But this definitely has to be her! Chiraiya, chirote, jaathadhari….
Boy(excitedly): I remember!!!!! Her name is Parvati!!
Omkara gets shocked: Parvati?
Boy: ya, Parvati
So who is this Parvati?
Will Omkara ever get to meet his Gauri?
And if he does, will she forgive him?
So here’s the first chapter. I hope you guys liked it. Please let me know what you think in the comments.