The fate of our story… Avniel OS

As per reports Niel comes to know that he killed more than 100 people and Niel gives him the capital punishment..

Niel:mister..you took more than 100 innocent lives..so you must now give your life for doing such crime.

The man laughs..

Man:i know i can’t escape..but my brother won’t leave you if i die. He is a mastermind..so you can’t show your police power to him.

Niel: that I’ll deal with him..now go to your place peacefully.

Niel hangs the guy and the guy dies and the news reaches to his brother and his brother gets angry and his brother is said to be the same guy who was mastermind boss for those criminals..

Vidyut:how dare that inspector? First he caught all my guys and now he killed my brother..i know he is the same inspector. I will take revenge..he doesn’t know about me..soon he will know about this dangerous vidyut.

Vidyut calls his other men’s and..

Vidyut:you guys go and find about the inspector in Juhu. Collect all his details regarding him and also his family..

His goons:yes..sir.

They leave while vidyut smiles evilly..

Few days later Avni is seen walking on road and suddenly some goons surround her shocking her..

Avni:hey..who the hell are you all?

Goon 1: we are your boyfriends..

Avni gets angry..

Avni:what nonsense?

Goon 2: we mean that make us your boyfriends..we will make you happy each day by each one of us.

Avni slaps the goon and..

Avni:how cheap? Don’t try to act smart..then I’ll thrash you.

Goon 3: don’t talk as if you are heroine..you don’t know about us..

They were about to touch her but suddenly Niel comes and holds that goons hand..

Niel: how dare you misbehave with a girl?

Goon 2: ohh..so hero came to save heroine..what a filmy scene!. But that won’t work here mister..if you want to save her then first deal with us.

They were about to hit Niel but Niel fights with them and thrashes them..

Niel: even theft can be forgiven but not misbehaviour with girls..see what I’ll do.

Niel calls dd and asks him to bring jeep and he ties the goons and comes to Avni..

Niel:miss..you can go now. But be safe always..

Avni: why iam having fate to face you always? I get irritated seeing you..you always behave like hero. But don’t became hero next time..

Niel smiles while the dd and constables comes there and salutes seeing Niel..

DD and constables: yes sir..

Niel:arrest these guys and put them behind bars. Once i come to station I’ll deal with them..

Constables:yes sir..

The constables arrests those goons and goes while Avni gets shocked knowing that Niel is a police and that too inspector..

Avni in mind: he..he is inspector..and what did i do? I talked too much..what would he thought? And in that guys case..i called him as thief but still he was polite because it was my good fate orelse he would have bashed me.

Niel comes to Avni and sees her shocked..

Niel:excuse me miss..why are you looking like as if you saw star at the bright sky?

Avni: nothing.. actually you was looking like normal man..i never thought you as inspector..that’s why i got shocked.

Niel: i don’t wear uniforms mostly to catch the culprits easily..

Avni:ohh..smart. anyways..iam sorry for my behavior..i talked too much sir..if i had known that you are inspector then..then i wouldn’t have talked like that..

Niel smiles and..

Niel:no.. don’t apologise. If that’s your character..then don’t change it. You shouldn’t change yourself based on people’s identity. Even i don’t change it..iam an inspector but that doesn’t mean i show off and show my power to everyone to gain respect and attention..i just be a normal human being. Even you be like that..even if you see prime minister before you.

Avni smiles..

Avni:i understand..thank you sir.

Niel goes while Avni smiles seeing him..

Avni in mind: he is nice..and different too. Iam a stupid to think bad about him..now i understand why he saved that guy that day..

The next day Avni and riya are going to home from their college and Avni spots Niel and stops riya..

Riya:Avni.. what happened? Why did you stop me?

Avni:look there..(pointing towards Niel)

Riya:why did you stop seeing your irritating guy? Ignore him and come..

Avni:no..he is not irritating guy anymore..i misunderstood him. He is an inspector..and..

She tells everything while riya gets shocked..

Riya:stupid.. because of you we would have landed in jail if it was some other strict officer.

Avni:thank god..he is such a nice and kind inspector. He is so different and nice..

Riya:till yesterday..you was scolding him and today you are praising him too much..

Avni: because he made me realise it..

Riya:fine..then continue praising him tomorrow. Now come lets go home..time is up..

Riya forcibly takes her and Niel stops a guy who was driving the bike and Avni too stops seeing that and she stops riya too..

Riya:now what? Why did you stop me?

Avni:wait..he stopped some guy.. we’ll see what he is doing..

Riya:are you mad? He is not your husband to check on him always..

Avni:shut up and stand quiet..

They both watch him silently from distance..

Niel:why are you driving without helmet? Don’t you know the rules?

Bike rider:sir iam sorry..i will pay fine and next time i will wear the helmet sir.

Niel: iam not catching you for my benefit. I helded you for your life safety only. I don’t need fine as it’s not going to save your life by giving me money. You just leave your bike here and go and buy helmet nearby and come and take your bike..

Guy:but sir..

Niel:see..if it was someone then they would have collected fine and left you but iam not like that as i know that it’s not a punishment for your mistake. The punishment should be in such a way that the rider must realise the value of wearing helmet..if you want your safety then go and buy orelse jut leave from here.

The guy gets suprised and he goes and buys helmet and comes..

Guy:thank you sir for making me realise..i will wear helmet from now on..

Niel smiles and the guy leaves while Avni gets impressed seeing it..
Avni:he is soooooo nice and such a gem..

Riya:then go and marry him..

Avni stares riya..

Avni:why are you talking like insane?

Riya: then what? You are wasting my time too here..if you want you keep on seeing him then why are you making me also stand here?

Avni:ok..fine..come lets go..

Avni and riya goes while Avni keeps on watching Niel seeing back while going and smiles..

PARALLEL SCENE:

Vidyut’s goons somehow collects the info about Niel and his family and comes.

Goons:sir..here is the information about him and photo too. I collected his family’s photos too..

Vidyut:good…you guys did good job. Now i will see that inspector.

Vidyut laughs evilly..

Some days passed while Avni did same admiring job whenever she ees Niel and one day she sees him with a small boy nd gets suprised..

Avni:hey riya..today he brought some kid..

Riya frowns..

Riya: what’s bothering you if he brought a kid? you are admiring him everyday. I guess you are in love with him..

Avni: Don’t talk rubbish..

Riya:then what? You are admiring a stranger too much..then what is this called? You admire them only when you feel something special or love them.. that’s what you are doing..

Avni: no..this is not love..it’s a mutual respect for him as he is so good..

Riya:you are fool..even i respect him but iam not doing crazy like you. If not Today..one day you will understand that you love him. Now iam going home..you keep staring him..bye.

Riya goes while Avni keeps on staring him and suddenly she notices Niel going somewhere leaving that boy alone..

Avni in mind:where is sir going leaving that kid alone?

Vidyut’s car comes that way and his goons points the boy and..

Goon 1:sir.. that kid is inspector Niel’s brother. I mean his sister’s son..

Vidyut smirks seeing that boy..

Vidyut:then now see..how i start my revenge..

Vidyut speeds his car towards that boy..

Vidyut: inspector Niel will face the first loss like me..

Suddenly Avni notices a car speeding towards the boy and gets shocked..

Avni in mind:ohh no.. that car is coming speed..i should save that boy somehow..

Avni runs and pulls him towards her while the car passesby and they both fall down..

Vidyut gets shocked and angry and hits his hand on steering..

Vidyut:shit..i missed the lottery because of that girl. I’ll never leave next time..one of the person has to die from that inspector’s family..

He drives away angrily while avni makes the boy stand up and the boy cries..

Avni:beta..shhh.. nothing happened to you..

Boy: mamu..mamu..

Avni:ohh.. that inspector is your mamu?

Boy:he is Neil mamu..my mother’s brother.

Avni:ohh..don’t cry.. he will come.

Boy:he is making late. He left me telling me to stand here and went..

Avni:where did he go?

Boy:to buy chocolates for me.. everyday he used to take me outing and today he took to some games and when we were returning he promised to buy chocolates for me nd that’s why he went.

Avni:ohh..such a sweet mamu..

Boy:yes..he is so sweet and good mamu unlike my dad..

Avni:so what’s your name?

Boy: Shiv..

Avni:that’s nice name..can we be friends?

She extends her hand and shiv shakes hands with her and both of them talk and chat nicely and shiv starts to enjoy with Avni..

Shiv:you are so beautiful and fun filled sister..i like you so much..

Avni smiles while Niel comes and sees them and gets suprised..

Niel:you here?

Avni:officer.. can’t you be careful with kid and i was passing by here and i saw a car speeding towards him and i saved him somehow..will you leave a kid like this?

Niel gets shocked..

Niel:but i made him stand in a corner only which is safety..shiv..did you walk on road?

Shiv:no mamu..i was standing in the same place where you asked me to stand only.

Niel gets shocked..

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