The fate of our story… Avniel OS

Niel:that means..it’s driver’s mistake. He maybe either drunk or planned to do accident..i will catch that person.

Avni:why? Do you have any enemies?

Niel:no..but i feel that someone is targeting me..iam a officer so my police mind is telling it.

Avni:wow..you are sharp inspector… anyways..be careful.

Niel:yeah..ok..shiv come lets go..

Shiv:mamu..can you take me to this sister’s house daily?

Avni and Niel gets suprised..

Niel:why meri pyaar shiv?

Shiv:i like enjoying with her..till you came i enjoyed with her nicely. She is so sweet and funny..i want to enjoy with her daily. So please take her to daily..

Avni smiles..

Avni:you are welcome shiv. Iam bored alone in home..so please bring him daily inspector. If you permit..I’ll teach his school homeworks too..

Niel: that’s nice of you..but..it won’t be a trouble for your family?

Avni:no..no..i just now told that iam alone. I don’t have family..so..

Niel gets shocked and sad..

Niel:oh..iam sorry..

Avni:it’s okay.. what’s your decision?

Niel:I’ll bring him for sure.. especially for you..

Avni:why especially for me?

Niel:so that you won’t be lonely..

Avni smiles..

Avni:that’s so sweet of you..can you be my friend?

She extends her hand while Niel smiles and shakes her hands with her..

Niel:yeah..we will be friends..

Avni:then we will meet tomorrow. Bring shiv to my house tomorrow..here is the adress..

Niel gets address from her..

Niel:thanks…i will surely bring him tomorrow.

Shiv and Niel waves bye to Avni and Avni too waves them back and they leave to their respective house..

The next day at evening Niel brings shiv to avni’s house and Avni gets happy seeing them..

Avni:hi inspector..hello shiv..come in..

Shiv:hello sister..

He hugs her..

Avni spends time with shiv while Niel admires them and smiles..

Niel: actually.. what’s your name? I really forgot to ask..

Avni:Avni..

Niel:sweet name like you. So soon you attracted shiv..usuall he won’t mingle with everyone but he started to spend time with you.. that’s great.

Avni smiles and later she provides kachoris to shiv and then she gives to Niel..

Avni:i made this.. please tell me how is it?

Niel eats and makes a weird face..

Niel:i feel like falling down in dizziness after eating this..

Avni gets upset while Niel laughs at her..

Niel: don’t get upset..i told that i will fall down in dizziness as it is so superbb which i have never ate..

Avni smiles and:thank you..

Niel:keep smiling like this..you look good and cheerful only with your smile.

Avni:yeah..by the way did you find about yesterday’s incident? I mean about the person who was about to hit shiv?

Niel: the enquiry is still going on..but i will find out soon..

Avni: ohh..ok..

Suddenly a lady enters with a food plate..

Lady:Avni..

Avni hears her voice and makes a face..

Avni:ohh noo..iam gone.

Niel:why? Did you do anything wrong with her?

Lady comes there and sees Niel and shiv and gets suprised..

Lady:who are they Avni?

Avni:woh neela maa..he is my friend Niel and that boy is shiv..his sister’s son.

Niel:hello aunty..

Neela:hello..by the way nice meet you..

Niel:even iam glad to meet you aunty. But avni told that she don’t have family?

Neela:iam her neighbour..iam like her maa too..

Niel:ohh..

Neela:fine..now Avni and come and eat your lunch..i have prepared for you..

Avni:err..neela maa..iam not hungry..

Neela: it’s your usual excuse for skipping lunch but iam not going to leave you today..

Niel:aunty..now only you are giving her lunch?

Neela:she skips lunch in College beta. I know that and that’s why i bring her food at evening daily but she somehow fools me..

Neil: don’t worry aunty..now see how I’ll make her eat..

Niel takes food plate from neela and goes towards Avni while Avni screams..

Avni: inspector..no..no..please..

Niel:iam your friend. I can’t let my friend suffer..

Avni:iam not suffering..i will suffer only if i eat..

Niel: don’t try to escape..i will not leave from here until i Make you eat food..

Avni runs while Niel chases her..

Avni:you are behaving like mother..

Niel:you are behaving worse than a kid..

Avni hits her leg on a stick and she was about to fall but Niel comes and holds her and both meets with an eyelock..

Niel smiles and takes a piece of chapati and forcibly inserts into her mouth when she opens her mouth to argue..

Niel:first piece of food is given..i will manage the rest too..

Niel somehow forcibly feeds Avni making her irritated while neela and shiv enjoys their funny moment..

Neela: iam proud of you son..you somehow managed my work.

Avni gets angry..

Avni:neela maa..how dare you call him your son? See..how he forced me..

Neela: that’s required for you my dear..

Niel laughs..

Niel: hereafter i will come here at this time and will do this job..

Avni:you..

Avni pours the water on him shocking him..

Avni:how dare you..now go to station wet..you deserve it.

Niel:iam a police. I’ll give punishment to all culprits. Now you will also get punished as you are my culprit..

He too takes water and chases avni while Avni shouts..

Avni:no..no..

Neela and shiv laughs at them..

Shiv:wow..i always enjoy seeing Tom and Jerry in TV but today iam enjoying Tom and Jerry fight in real..

Neela:you are right beta..

Finally he catches her in his arms and pours water on her..

Niel:haha..my revenge got over.

Niel leaves Avni and tries to go while Avni gets angry..

Avni:you..i wont leave you inspector..

Avni goes and pushes Niel while Niel holds avni’s hands and both of them falls and they meet with an eyelock..

Suddenly shiv comes there which makes them come out of eyelock..

Shiv:mamu.. today you became superhero.. i thought i can watch Tom and Jerry only in TV but you made to see for real..bravo!!

Avni and Niel gets embarassed and they get up immediately and looks each other..

Avni:it’s because of you..

Niel:no you..

Avni:no you..

Neela comes and stops them..

Neela: you are fighting too much..enough. you can keep reserve your fight for tomorrow..now do something else..

Neil and Avni looks at each other and suddenly Niel realises the time and..

Neil:woh..i don’t know how i forget the time? Now i need to go for my duty and leave shiv too in home. I’ll be back tomorrow..

Neela:sure beta..

Neil comes to Avni and..

Neil:iam sorry Avni. I just irritated you for your good only. If you eat regularly then you will be fit and fine.. that’s why. But iam really so sorry for irritating you too much..

Avni smiles..

Avni:it’s okay..

Niel:ok i will meet you tomorrow bye..

Avni:bye..

Shiv hugs avni and..

Shiv: bye sister..

Avni:bye dear..

Niel and shiv leaves and in same way Niel Avni and shiv spend time together every evenings and Avni started to like Niel and one day she was sleeping..

Avni was sitting sadly..

Niel comes and hugs her from behind..

Niel:why my love is sad?

Avni: because my love is not spending time with me nowadays..
Niel:idiot..who told your love is not spending time with you? Today i dint go to station for my duty as i have planned to spend time with my love..

Avni: really?

Niel:yes..

Avni gets happy and kisses his cheek..

Avni:thank you so much..

Niel kisses her back suprising her..

Niel:thank you so much for this kiss..

They both laugh and spend time together romantically..

Suddenly neela pours water on Avni waking Avni from dream..

Avni:ouuchhh..

Neela:what ouch? Wake up..it’s time for your college right? Nowadays you are sleeping more..i should come from my home to wake you up nowadays..

Avni:neela maa..

Neela:go and get ready and come..i will prepare breakfast for you..

Neela goes while Avni winks her eyes and smiles..

Avni in mind: i love Niel..i dream him everyday nowadays that’s why i couldn’t get up from this beautiful dreams. But it’s getting late..i should propose him somehow before it gets too late.

She gets ready and eats breakfast and goes towards college and sees a couple dancing in nearby place and she imagines her dance with Niel..

Mmm…mmm…mmmm…
Mmmm…mmm…mmm

Female : Ondra renda aasaigal
Ellaam sollavae orr naal podhumaa
Male : Sollu

Female : Ondra renda aasaigal
Ellaam sollavae orr naal podhumaa
Anbae…iravai ketkalaam…
Vidiyal thaandiyum…
Iravae neeluma

Female : En kanavil…aaa..haaa
Naan kanda…aahaaa..
Naalidhudhaan…
Kalaaba kaadhalaa
Paarvaigalaal…aa..haaa..
Palakadhaigal …aaa…haaa..
Pesidalaam…
Kalaaba kaadhalaa

Female : Ondra renda aasaigal
Ellaam sollavae orr naal podhumaa
Anbae…iravai ketkalaam…
Vidiyal thaandiyum…
Iravae neelumaa

Female : Pengalai nimirndhu paarthida
Un iniya ganniyam pidikudhae
Kangalai nera paathudhaan
Nee pesum thoranai pidikudhae

Female : Dhooraththil nee vandhaalae
En manasil…mazhaiyadikkum
Migapidiththa…paadal ondrai
Udhadugalum…munumunukkum…

Female : Mandhagaasam sindhum
Undhan mugham
Maranam varaiyil en nenjil thangum
Unadhu kangalil yenadhu kanavinai
Kaanapogiren…

Female : Ondra renda aasaigal
Ellaam sollavae orr naal podhumaa
Anbae…iravai ketkalaam…ketkalaam…
Vidiyal thaandiyum…
Iravae neelumaa

Chorus : ……………………………

Female : Sandhiyaa kaala megangal
Un vaanil oorvalam pogudhae
Paarkaiyil yeno nenjilae
Un nadayin sayalae thonudhae

Female : Nadhigalilae…neeraadum…
Sooriyanai… naan kanden
Vervaigalin thulivazhiya
Nee varuvaai…yena nindren

Female : Unnaal en nenjil aanin manam
Naanum sondham endra ennam tharum
Maghizhchchi meerudhae…
Vaanai thaandudhae saaga thondrudhae
Thondrudhae

Female : Anbae…iravai ketkalaam…
Iravai ketkalaam…
Vidiyal thaandiyum…
Iravae neelumaa
Iravae neelumaa

Female : En kanavil…aaa..haaa
Naan kanda…aahaaa..
Naalidhudhaan…
Kalaaba kaadhalaa
Paarvaigalaal…aa..haaa..
Palakadhaigal …aaa…haaa..
Pesidalaam…
Kalaaba kaadhalaa

Suddenly riya shakes her making her coming out of her day dream..
Riya:stupid..where are you lost? Nowadays..you are in other world..come lets go fast..it’s already 5 minutes late because of you.

Avni in mind:i started to day dream also..i will propose him today atself so that my heart gets peace.

She goes to college with riya and later at evening Avni calls Niel to a lonely spot..

Avni in mind: i hope Niel too loves me..

Niel comes to the spot and gets suprised seeing the decorations and comes to Avni..

Niel:what happened? Why did you called me suddenly here?

Avni:i want to tell you something important..

Niel:yeah..go ahead..

Suddenly Avni kneels down before him and shows a flower before him and proposes him..

Avni:i..i love you inspector Niel. I don’t know when and how my heart fell for you..but i have fallen head over heels with you. I deeam you every day and nights..i think about you each and every time..i love you so much Niel.

Niel gets shocked and suprised at her sudden proposal and gets sad suddenly..

Niel in mind: i fell for you on our first meet atself but our fate is not getting togetherness Avni. Iam a police..i can’t guarantee you for safety and my life too..and that’s why iam controlling my feelings. Iam really sorry for hurting you Avni..

Niel: actually..Avni..iam sorry for..for hurting you..but infact i don’t love you. I..i just consider you as friends that’s it. Iam really sorry..

Avni gets sad and gets up..

Avni:it’s okay..i understand. I can’t force you to love me as love is a natural feeling that occurs in heart. But we will be friends always..

She gives a fake smile and forwards hand while Niel too shakes hands with her by fake smile..

Niel:yeah..we will be.

They both feel very broken inside and they leave from there and cries standing alone..

Later they wipe their tears after crying their heart out and they go back..and after some days vidyut and his goons and were traveling in car..

Vidyut:shit..iam not getting a chance to kill anyone from that inspector Niel’s family..

Suddenly vidyut spots Niel and gets suprised..

Vidyut:wow..now i got lottery. Inspector Niel is standing here..i will just kill him now. I wont get this lottery chance again..

Vidyut picks his gun and he masks his face and goes out from car and he stands little nearby and aims the gun at Niel..

Avni who was walking that side sees vidyut pointing gun towards Niel and gets shocked..

Avni:who is that idiot trying to kill Niel? I should save him..

Avni shouts:nieelllll…move..

Niel gets shocked hearing her voice and looks her while vidyut shoots and Avni runs and pushes him and gets shot and falls..

Vidyut immediately gets inside the car and starts driving while Niel gets shocked and sees that car but he immediately rushes to Avni leaving that guy..

Niel:Avni..Avni..are you fine? Nothing will happen you..so don’t worry..iam there to save you.

The blood flows more and Niel immediately ties his handkerchief on her shoulder where vidyut shot while Avni cries in pain..

Avni cries: Niel..i..i got injured in place of you. He..he tried to shoot you..so i saved you. That guy will be nearby only.. before he escapes go and save him..

Niel gets teary and holds her..

Niel:no..i don’t care about that person. I just care about you..i call ambulance now..

Avni:no..if you leave him now like that day then he will do something like this again. This time you and shiv got saved but we can’t predict the safety always..so leave me and go and catch him atleast for your family’s safety..

Niel cries seeing her in pain..

Niel:no..i can’t leave you in this condition..

Avni:even if i die..there is no difference. I have no one in this world..so even if i die..it won’t affect anyone. And also i will be peace leaving from this world as iam fed up of living alone..so please go..

Niel cries more hearing it and gets angry and holds her face tightly..

Niel:how dare you tell like that?who told you that there is no one for you? Iam there for you and i will always there for you..i love you so much Avni. That day i just denied as i thought your safety as iam police..but infact i have fallen in love on our first meeting atself. I love you so much Avni..you shouldn’t leave me and go.. orelse i will also die..

He cries while Avni too cries and suddenly she gets unconscious shocking Niel and he shouts..

Niel:avniiiii..

He dials to ambulance immediately and later they rush to hospital and he admits her..

Niel: doctor.. doctor.. please save her soon..

Doctor:relax mr. Niel. We will examine and let you know..so please wait outside..

Doctor takes Avni in through stretchers while Niel cries and waits outside..

Niel:godd.. please save my Avni..she is such a gem. If you do injustice then I’ll also die doing injustice to people..

Suddenly he remembers car’s number and he dials DD..

DD:Hello sir..

Niel:DD..i will tell you a car number..you just trace that car and find about that owner..

DD:Sure sir..

Niel tells the number and DD notes it down and then he cuts the call while Niel gets angry thinking about that person..

Niel angrily:i wont leave you alive you idiot..i know you only tried to kill shiv that day but i couldn’t catch you but now i wont leave you..

After sometime doctor comes out and Niel immediately goes to him..

Niel: doctor.. doctor..how is Avni?

Doctor:iam sorry mr.niel..her condition is critical. The bullet have reached deeply..so injuries are deep. We have to keep her in CCU for next 12 hours..we will tell you if she gets normal. Till that you can’t see her..

Doctor goes while Niel cries hard thinking about their moments..

Suddenly his phone rings and he attends..

Niel:hello DD..

DD:sir i have found that person sir..i have messaged you about him and his whereabouts.

Niel:thank you DD..

Niel checks the messages and gets shocked..

Niel: so vidyut is that person who tried to kill shiv and me. And he is the mastermind too..i will catch him now.

Niel immediately goes and drives the car towards the area given by DD and he reaches there and gets inside a dark factory and shouts..

Niel:you idiot..fool vidyut..come out..

Vidyut gets shocked but he comes as he can’t go anywhere..

Vidyut: inspector Niel..

Niel immediately goes and holds his collar..

Niel:i know you tried to harm my shiv and now you tried to kill me too..

Vidyut pushes his hands away and smirks..

Vidyut:yes..i only did it. It’s because i want to take revenge as you killed my brother and captured my men’s..

Niel: because they did wrong and especially your brother did many crimes. Now i got your information too..you have killed more than 100 people..sk you will also be going to your brother now..

Vidyut:i will be dead only if you catch me..

Vidyut signs his men to kill Niel while his men comes to beat Niel but Niel thrashes everyone and locks them up..

Niel: don’t under estimate me vidyut..you can’t escape from me..

Vidyut picks his gun and aims at Niel..

Vidyut:you too don’t underestimate me inspector..

Suddenly vidyut gets shot and he falls down dead shocking Niel..

Niel:i dint shoot..then how?

Voice:mr. Niel khanna..i only shot..

Niel turns to see senior officer and gets shocked and suprised..

Niel: sir you?

Officer: actually your constant DD submitted the crines of vidyut to me. And when i verified..we got permission to kill him directly. So when I enquired about you to DD to inform this news..he told about you going to meet vidyut alone. So i came here to help you as you were alone..

Niel:thank you so much sir. If you dint come..he would had escaped..

Officer pats Niel..

Officer: now too you dint care about your life. You should have thanked me for saving your life but you are thanking that i dint let him escape.. anyways good job man..keep it up..

Niel:sure sir..

Suddenly Niel gets call and he attends it and gets happy and cuts the call..

Neil:sir.. actually..i..

Officer:if you have any works..you can go mr. Niel. I will take care of disposing his body..

Niel:ok..thank you sir..

Niel immediately runs to hospital and meets the doctor..

Niel: doctor..shall i meet Avni now?

Doctor:it’s really a miracle that she came out from critical stage within some hours.. now you can meet her.

Niel immediately goes inside and sits near Avni while Avni slowly opens her eyes and sees Niel and smiles..

Avni:thank you for saving me..

Niel:you are smiling giving me a heart attack. Please don’t tell those idiot words again and don’t risk your life next time..i can’t bear seeing you in this state..

Avni:i swear i wont tell those words but i won’t swear for risking life. If your life is in danger then i will go any extent to save you..Niel gets teary and looks her emotionally..

Niel:why?

Avni: because i love you so much..

Niel smiles and they both join their forehead..

The days passed and Avni becomes fit and fine and one day Niel calls Avni..

Niel:hello Avni.. come to xyz park immediately..

Avni:but why?

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